Lots of updates from the QC session.
man i cant wait till we move on from spamming F/SN so that it gets banned here to this
But there's still missing punctuation.
>there are still people who defend the shitty xeno scum even after this chapter
She's still the best. She fights with all her heart to try and win Asahi, unlike Youko who just wants to relive her mom and dad's romance.
>cheating and being dishonorable is now considered fighting with all your heart
Shovel, sleep induction device, what's the difference?
She wasn't even waiting on the roof. He wouldn't have reached her anyway.
Every. Fucking. Time.
Soooo, amnesia arc?
Missing page 14
Look at the relative heights. If Asahi would stand and take it like a man, he'd probably have had his skull split by the hard wooden shaft of the shovel because apparently Alien can't aim for shit and is swinging the blade down like two feet behind his head.
I hope it never does that.
Are there like no volume raws for this series or something? Because this topazing is really out of hand.
Is dumpire kill?
It is all about alium now.
Everyone knows the only way to kill a vampire is to steal their left sock, cut off their head, and stick a lemon in their mouth.
No anon, that is how baby vampires are made.
no, no amnesia, she just has a bump on her head. Alium gives her the shovel while apologizing profusely and begging Dumpire to hit her in return.
Isn't the chapter after the next the one where she friendzones Asahi?
Next chapter. After accidentally bonking Dumpire, Alium gets her head together and encourages him to confess. Dumpire interrupts him.
Status quo wins again.
She's cute but she's dumb.
Just like everyone else. Wisest one is childhood friends and that was her ruin.
but thats wrong you fuck face
>knows she cant win that fight
>only committing sabotage
>knows she's in the wrong but does so anyways
>no proof of shiragami wanting to relive her mom and dad's romance
Childhood friend is a huge tsundere baka bitch though.
Nah, Childhood friend was more bwaka than alium.
What is the order of them, dumbest to least dumb?
Does anyone know how I'm supposed to get in touch with underdog if I want to help them out?
>There will never be incest doujinshi of her and Asahi
But she's for being cute and riding on your shoulders.
I want Asahi to make a bargain with the principal.
The good news is I'm back now, so I'll be looking extra hard at the next chapters.
There's no way. You just gotta lurk /a/ and help out with their QC when they ask.
It'd be better if you just acquired Volume raws of v1, and asked /a/ to anonymously contribute to making them less shit.
That is good news. I hope you can help keep tenses straight throughout sentences.
Yeah, that's been a problem. I try to catch it all but shit happens. As long as it isn't complete garbage, it's still better than no translation at all.
Would Underdog have a problem with someone redoing volume 1 with better scans and a different translation?
nigga, give me an email. I'm a southerner and I remember you guys wanting a guy awhile back that could proof read the dumpire's accent.
All your life has been spent in pursuit of doujinshi relics.
The possibilities for Grandumber x Asahi doujinshi are beyond your wildest aspirations. You want to fap to it as well as I.
Uh... go for it? I don't think we have a problem with people doing that sort of thing. I'm still semi-new to the group though, so it'd be better to ask Kobe. Though I can't imagine we're going to get anal because someone else decided they also wanted to translate a series we work on. We are pretty laid back.
Uh... best thing to do would be to hang out in the IRC. When I QC stuff, I sometimes voice questions and ask "Does this sound right?"
Shit, I don't know how to use that and I'm too drunk to even begin to learn it right now.
ive been wondering, where or who exactly made that small a uniform
How about this.
Since we've had good luck with the whole "/a/ does QC" and I only have two eyes, whenever I go about QCing a Dumbpire chapter, I'll do it in a thread.
That work for everyone?
please do it on week days though I work on the weekend and would miss them.
I want Asahi to make some more descendants for the principal.
Can't guarantee that. I'll do it whenever I get a new script to me, so I can get it to you as fast as I possibly can.
The way Sidonia threads do it, Tanikaze posts a Pastebin of his Jap-Eng translation, QC-er and Proofreader jump on it and make sure the translation is accurate and keeps the same tone as the original Japanese script, and then it gets typeset.
She made it.
She's kind of talented.
>Cook with the feelings of someone precious to you in mind
>Cook so well that demon wants the alien dongle every day
>Asahi can't even blush when she confesses to him or kisses to him
She's fucking wasted on him.
Well, I can't really guarantee anyone else's involvement but my own. It's basically me on a whim saying "Why don't I 4chan up this shit". But yeah...
The QC-er and PF-er are anonymous in Sidonia threads, and there's usually at least two of them double-checking each other's work.
>Cook so well that demon wants the alien dongle every day
>Still beat yourself up because it isn't good enough
This may sound strange but outside of the guy who puts it all together at the end I don't really interact with any of the other members on the dumbpire team. I'm kinda the lowest rung on the ladder.
But enough about the process. I'll post a thread when it's time for the next chapter.
>Constantly stabs her friend in the back
>Constantly attacks and assaults the person she claims to be in love with
>Acts like a bipolar cunt
She's fucking worst girl.
So which shit girl do you like?
I bet it is orange. It's orange, isn't it?
Why is this series so enjoyable?
Because all of the girls are cute + dumb.
>Asahi can't even blush
he did though, first for the hug, then after the kiss.
Did he? I don't remember it.
Except alien and sensei, who aren't dumb and aren't cute.
I guess we'll have to agree to disagree.
I'm desperate to talk about how much I love the series but am too boring to provoke discourse and too straight to samefag.
Why is Alium so best?
Alienfags kill another thread.
This series has the best blushes.
What is going on here?
>Asahi vents to his friend Alium that he wants to confess to Dumpire, but he just can't seem to do it.
>Alium wants her friends to be happy, and so decides she needs to help.
>Comes up with the BRILLIANT plan of having him practice confessing... to her
Why couldn't she have been likle that all the time in the LN anf anime?
Her suit runs out of batteries so it ends up looking like she's hugging him. The first two pages of that chapter are a magnificent fake out though.
Also, only a few more translated chapters to hit the true insanity.
Picture very related.
Why is Akari such a bitch?
For one, the series is both a parody and celebration of VN/animu archetypes and themes. Having a shitty, unlikable modern tsundere is a part of that, which then grows and is reconstructed back into a classic tsundere by the end.
Something that you miss in the animu however due to seeing it as an outside observer, is that Kyousuke is an unreliable narrator. It is something that becomes increasingly apparent as the series continues, the most obvious point of it early on is that he is a tsundere bitch himself. Many of his descriptions of events and people and such are thus filtered through that lens.
>Alium has him keep practicing over and over, blushing more and more
>Asahi starts to get a little uncomfortable
>Alium convinces him to say it just once more to her, to make sure he has it right
> Just as he says that he loves her, Dumpire walks up
I really should get to readingh the LN, but lets keep this a dumpire/jitsu wa thread and not bring in the Oreimo crowd.
I guarantee the thread would die if that happened.
RIP in rip, Bakawaiis ;_;7
Why does the Alien always refer to everyone by their full name?
dem facial expressions
I wanna take her hat.
>Her hat and smile: Gone
So, how long till he realizes he gay?
top panel is quite possibly the single best panel in the manga.
For the record, as far as he knows he is kissing a cute girl.
Is this some kind of NTR manga?
That means it doesn't count
Great artwork where the characters don't suffer from foreheads and have wonderfully expressive faces.
Watching a cute /k/ommando girl struggle to understand the one trait that makes humans special love and fight for her desires is heartwarming.
Dumbpire is nice comic relief.
Time travel shenanigans mean everything is still unsettled, despite the MC declaring his love for vampire fangs.
Any idea when? I love helping QC things.
>Gets a little uncomfortable
This guy's a bigger faggot than the MC of Gachinko Bitch Club.
>400 posts of absolute rage
It has been from chapter 1. Remember?
He gets a little suspicious of why Alium is having him "confess" to her over and over in different ways.
He's just a faggot when it comes to saying "I luv u" to the vampire.
The guy can man up in most other ways, almost to the point you forget he's constantly called a sissy.
>Runs around trying to keep Shiragami's secret from Orange and Shirou
>Trying to grab the burgers for everyone's sake
>Explicitly said "no" to Orange's confession
>Tries to stay generally level-headed
The problem is, he fails miserably on the most important part. Even if it's divine intervention for the sake of drama.
>Explicitly said "no" to Orange's confession
Which was pretty impressive, I'll give him that,
I didn't mean "faggot" in the generic "what a beta" sort of way. I meant literal. He gets paid all this attention by Alium, and does so many things with her, like going on dates, but while he can blush for Orange and for Vampire, not one reaction to Alium.
Why do you keep saying that. I already told you he was blushing.
This isn't Onii-sama we're talking about. He's a regular teenage boy, he's not made of stone. When pretty girls get very close to him, he blushes.
Maybe he's a racist.
Orange is human, Dumpire is half, so is Wereslut.
Alium is full alien though.
Why is she grabbing him like that, are they grappling?
So why doesn't he do this to Alien?
She goes for a suplex after that. Many powerbombs and nelsons ensue.
He probably thinks that there is no need.
After all, screw-head has rejected him already. That means they are just friends now, right?
Maybe he loves her?
Is that what they call it these days?
He did confess to her before.
>Implying Vampire stole Asahi from Alium
No he didn't, she turned him down before he could.
> no Youko
As far as I can tell, he doesn't know Alium loves him. The last time he said anything to her, she turned him down. She's just as bad at expressing her love as he is. Yes, the glasses made her say it once, but she quickly explained that away.
Wasn't it left unexplained?
Take a look at this one.
It says right there that she immediately denied it. It'd be kinda weird if he said "Sorry, I don't love you" to someone who said they didn't mean what they said.
Okay, but it does also say that the entire circumstances aren't explained because it's just too weird. So it was basically just glossed over, but Asahi has no development beyond "I was happy about it?"
She's so dumb that there would be no difference.
>Actually gets amnesia
>Realizes that Alium loves Asahi
>Tries to get them to date, for real this time
>Feels nothing but a faint lingering sadness when they embrace
It's the only ending that would make sense.
What if Asahi gets amnesia?
> shoujou-drama shit
amnesia is a really boring route... i mean i cant remember the last time i see one ans say "oh hey that IS interesting"
never cause it is the worst route.
>DURRR LOOK I HAVE AMNESIA WHORE ARE YOU?
>DURRR LOOK AT THIS SPECIAL MOMENT THAT REMINDS YOU OF THE FIRST TIME WE MET
>DURR MY MEMORIES BACK
You guys are in luck.
I may have a new chapter to QC shortly.
Beelzebub with Hilda memory loss was great.
Okie dokie, I've been given the okay. I'm gonna start up a new thread once I get settled. Who's up for some Dumbpire QC?
Well we're nowhere neaer the post limit, but okay.
I wanted to feel important.