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Hey guys, I've never done much anime artwork, I was wondering what could I improve in this picture?

***Keep in mind it's just a sketch
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How much practice did it to take to make such smooth lines?
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>>102118186
I don't like how big and glittery the eyes are.
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>>102118228
/ic/ is cancerous, no one actually critiques anything. I figured people that enjoy anime such as myself would be a better group to ask
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Not kawaii enough, also
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>>102118318
Thank you for the critique
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>>102118403
By the way, on the other hand, I have a coat fetish, so you should keep drawing that. And long, thick hair too.
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Why don't you try putting the eye reflection ball thing in the bottom left and top right like in typical anime fashion?
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>>102118311
No practice at all, it's a setting in Paint Tool Sai, :)
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It's good but I think you should add an eyepatch
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I like it quite a bit. I do agree with >>102118318 regarding how glittery the eyes look. She looks like she's tired or something or like she has seen some shit.
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>>102118271
This.
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>>102118469
Wow I totally forgot about that, thank you very much!
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You seem fine enough at this; try doing more complex things.
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>>102118561
Thank you, I do more complex and real drawings, I've just been trying some new art styles lately.



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