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If this useless little shit says "Onii-Sama" one more time, I'll break my Kindle.
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Nii-sama
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Do it, you pretentious faggot.
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>>101849381
Do it. Put your Kindle out of it's misery.
Because of you, it is unpure, and dirty. It will never again know happiness, after being tainted with that horribleness that is---

Owait, wrong series.
But still do it.
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>>101849381
How far are you? Have you already read the flashback, where she's not yet the over-dependent annyoing fuck and is instead the greatest bitch on the planet?
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I did not mind that. I was more annoyed with the author telling the reader how perfect she looks and how everyone could not help but react to her beauty every other passage.

So it is basically fact that Japan is a pedo nation right? She is 15 right?
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>>101849905
I'm on chapter 3 and I already can't take it.

>>101850130
It's not just that, but this whole "Onii-Sama" thing represents everything wrong with her.
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>>101850130
Yamato Nadeshiko, dipshit. And 15 is too old.
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>>101850130
Can't have that perfect self-insert without gushing about how great the girls are around the MC with every chance he gets.
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>>101849381
>Broken kindle intensifies.
Post pictures OP
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>>101850130
Magical or not, they're still in high school.

She's probably about 17.
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>>101850130
>So it is basically fact that Japan is a pedo nation right? She is 15 right?
Normalfags can go.
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>>101850199
Pretty sure they JUST entered high-school, so 15 sounds about right.
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>>101850199
They are first years, and she is born in April, so pretty much the youngest possible age.
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It really wouldn't be that terrible if it wasn't for the MC and his little sister.
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>>101849381
By now you should have broken it already.
Pic please.
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Miyuki is a pure and loyal to her onii-sama. It's just normal sibling love. There's nothing wrong with that.
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>>101850264
>>101850194
I just stopped reading until tomorrow, clearly Mahouka is something that needs to be taken in very, very small doses.
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>>101850286
If by pure and loyal you mean guilt-driven as fuck, then yes.
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>>101850244
Well, yeah. But that's like saying Africa wouldn't be that terrible without all the niggers.
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>>101850299
Or not at all given how much you seem to fucking hate it.
Will you at least break the kindle tomorrow if sleeping on it proves fruitless?
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>>101850299
I thought that too, after getting half-way through the second book.

Too much "Well yeah, I can doo all this awesome stuff... But I'm not that special."
"Oooh, but no one can beat Onii-sama!!!"
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>>101849381
There is absolutely no reason to read this, unless you like her calling him oniisama. Embrace your homosexuality and move on, OP.
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>>101850345
I just might.
And it's not all bad, I think it could be enjoyable if it wasn't for Tatsuya "I am so special that I can't work with the stock equipment available at school, but I also am a super ninja and I'm really super skilled with my own personalized magic thing" Shiba and Miyuki "My Onii-Sama is so special that he can't work with the stock equipment available at school, but he is am a super ninja and I'm really super skilled with his own personalized magic thing" Shiba
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Leo x Erika OTP

I would also post a not so daily reminder that Miyuki has won her onii-sama, but I somehow lost the kiss picture. Anyone got it?
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>>101850437
Oh, you will be delighted to read the meaning behind the Shiba name and I'm not talking about doge memes, fuck those things
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>>101850435
To be fair, Student Council President and Glasses Girl are clearly better than Imouto.
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Does this get good, /a/? I've only read like the first-or-so chapter of volume 1 so far.

I'd stick it out purely because the overall premise is sort of interesting, and I like the magi-babble, but god, does the dialogue in this make me want to vomit.
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>>101850482
But you're objectively wrong.
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>>101850437
Well good luck I guess. Can't fault your determination even if I could question your reasoning.
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>>101850548
No. The MC ruins any enjoyment you could have with the setting.
Does anyone have the list of abilities the MC uses?
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>>101850548
If you hate yourself, or you're like me, and your computer broke down and only have a shitty phone to read something and think "Well, how bad can it really be?", then go ahead and read it.

PS. More than you are capable of thinking.
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>e-reader
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>>101850582
>ability list
Man that shit was hefty
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>>101850582
>Regrowth - Allows complete recovery of any form of damage/injury. It is not a form of recovery magic; instead, by reverse-reading the records of the Eidos, copying the past information of the target and directly overwriting it, he is able to make the injury "not have existed in the first place".
>Decomposition - Decomposes material into atoms. Has been used by Tatsuya to unarm hundreds of soldiers from their guns at once.
>Material Burst - Decomposes substances into pure energy following E=MC², almost like an atomic bomb. Actually produces more energy than an atomic bomb, as energy is not lost to collisions between electrons and positrons like in annihilation reactions.
>Elite martial artist by world standard. His physical ninja skills are so impressive people thinks they are spells, when they're just his natural parameters.
>Elite class strategist by world standards
>Incredible speed at releasing magic, elite of the elite by world standards. Can essentially eliminate the buffer time completely
>Nearly unlimited magic supply
>Eyes analyze magic, allows him to cancel spells.
>The worlds greatest magic technology engineer
>His crippling flaws are that he's merely "average" in looks and suffers from weakened emotions, making him the cool badass stoic character. He also is bad at baby tier spells, making people discriminate against him.
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>>101850621
>crippling flaws
>Stoic
>Not handsome
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>>101850130
>15
>pedo

Kill yourself, seriously.
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>>101850621
>Material Burst - Decomposes substances into pure energy following E=MC², almost like an atomic bomb. Actually produces more energy than an atomic bomb
Every time.
Daily reminder that people will actually like and defend this shit when the anime comes out.
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>>101850621
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It's sad that this and SAO S2 won't be airing at the same time. The massive shitstorm that crops up at the same time would be GLORIOUS.
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>>101850770
To be fair, GGO is at least somewhat enjoyable.
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>>101850437
>My Onii-Sama is so special that he can't work with the stock equipment available at school
But that's wrong. He can make a normal CAD into a superweapon if he wants to. Are we reading the same LN here?
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The people saying this is shit will be the first ones to download the episode.
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>>101850621
>>101850670
>His crippling flaws are that he's merely "average" in looks
Actually most of the females say he actually looks handsome, just not as perfectly as his pubescent sister.
He is also a ninja so he has a really /fit/ body.
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>>101850709
>>101850770

I find it amusing that Dengeki pretty much forced SAO's author to give some words about this book to promote it, when it was being published, and he couldn't say anything good about it, other than, "He wrote a lot in only a couple years"
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>>101850602
Hilariously enough, I only tried it in the first place because there was a black out and I had nothing else to do but fiddle with my phone.

Well, I guess I'll give it a chance and at least finish the first book.
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>>101850793
I've read 3 chapters of it so far and he's incompetent at doing the school tasks while he wipes the floor with one of the best fighters of the school, using magic.
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>>101850821
Is there an article to this? Cause I'd love to read it.
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>>101850891
http://www.baka-tsuki.org/project/index.php?title=Mahouka_Koukou_no_Rettousei:Volume_1_The_Late_Great_Favorite
It came with the first volume. Honestly, he only talks about the web-novel's popularity, and the fact that other web novels are being adapted into Light Novels and such. I feel he was avoiding actually talking about the story itself.
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>>101850768
Is that suit filled with helium?
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>>101850972
>And, although so far I regrettably had been writing in formal language, the prime example of the deviation's charm in "Mahouka" is, if you want to be loved by Miyuki-san more than her Onii-sama, I believe that you have to take Tatsuya-kun's position as the strongest first! For Tatsuya-kun who got magnificent illustration from Mr. Ishida Kana and became more excellent and brilliant than ever, I think Miyuki-san will surely show us even more rampage if that ever happens and continuing publication would not be fun anymore.

What the fuck is this paragraph?
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>>101851079
That would be Kawahara saying "Miyuki wants Onii-sama's dick," and "The illustrator did a great job on her,"

Also, rereading this, makes me realize how awkward this translation is. That translator needs to be slapped.
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>>101851079
It seems these two Authors have a lot in common.
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>>101851185
>implying that most, if not all, LN authors write shit to help them wank to their fantasies
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>>101850972
Well, they happen to share a publisher.

Not like he can shit talk a series under the same company.
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>>101851293
>implying Reki Kawahara has standards
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>>101851181
There's a good reason why I don't read Baka Tsuki translations. They are too literal that so much of their translations feel wonky. It's hard to read.

Well, I can at least commend them for dedicating their time to doing these translations. I just wish they took a few liberties to make it flow.
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>>101851376
He's just jealous, because two people can play that game and by game I mean writing Light Novels. And by Light Novels, I mean shit.
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>>101851478
I wish more people did LN translations
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>>101851478
That's the least of their problems. There are so many simple mistakes, from typos to wrong tense all of the sudden.
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>>101851478
>>101851478
Not to mention the translators seem to not even care if their literal translation would give the wrong idea of what's going on in a scene.

Its like translator thinks translation 1101100 into oneonezerooneonezerozero is perfectly acceptable.
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Will we ever see an overpowered protagonist done right again?
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>>101849381
I seriously hope that they'll screw the anime in such a way as to give the MC opponents that would match him and make him get into situations that are really difficult.

Sadly that is a dream...
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>>101851915
Never again. From now onwards, overpowered equates to Gary Stu.
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>>101851376
He has and his are higher than the ones of the guy who writes Mahouka
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>>101851922
>and make him get into situations that are really difficult
Like his first class exercise which he only barely passes?
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>>101852148
Like this, but with his life and that of his sister and friends at stake.

And many more...
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>>101851922
Maybe a filler episode, where there'll be some Spiritual Being or Ancient Magic going wild. Since mere human (or modified human) can't compete, they'll have to get some godly being to fight him because Tatsuya is like a demigod himself.
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>>101852210
>Hostile god who hates Tatsuya
>"Tatsuya, unless you pass this exam with 100% your sister will die"
I'd love to watch it.
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>>101852245
That would actually lower his Gary Stu levels and show people that he's not OP. Talented? Yes. But powerful enough to go against a being that would level entire cities? He'd probably lose, but he'd amuse said being with his powers and capabilities.
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>>101852340
>But powerful enough to go against a being that would level entire cities? He'd probably lose,
>level entire cities
>compared to being able to destroy anything from a house to the entire planet
>he'd probably lose
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>>101852340
This >>101850621
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>>101852385
Gahhhh. He'd definitively lose, but he'd amuse said being. What the hell was I thinking? Must be something in the coffee.

Bonus if said being is a yandere loli.
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>>101852455
What if he'd go against a reality warper and a telepath?
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>>101852516
Plot armour
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>>101852321
Count me in.

All those sleepless nights of constant training...
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>>101852549
Reality Warping disables instantly plot armour.
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>>101852665
No.
The plot, the narrative casualty is beyond the fictional reality.
It would take the Thought Robot to do something about it, even your precious Demonbane can't beat a properly plot armored character.
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>>101852472
You seem to have misunderstood me. You're saying he'd lose to a being that could level cities. I'm saying you're talking about a guy who could destroy the entire planet.

He can only lose if he's restricted somehow. At his full power it's impossible for him to lose because he's basically God. He IS Op. He's a complete Gary Stu.
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>>101852741
Power does not make a character a gary stu.
Saitama is obscenely powerful and yet he's clearly not one.
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>>101849905

wow what part is that?
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>>101852741
Also, woudln't "just short of God" make his description even worse?
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>>101852777
Saitama totally is, but he's the star of a comedy manga. The whole point is that he's a parody of dumb shit like Tatsuya.
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>>101852736
Awww fudge.
>>101852741
Dammit. I should have written then something like Reality Destroying, but then I'd go into extremities.

How to de-Gary Stu-ify such characters to make them still powerful, but not invincible?
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>>101852809
Don't remember, but judging from the title, probably volume 8.
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>>101852841
>Saitama totally is, but he's the star of a comedy manga
He isn't because his manga is comedy.
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>>101852847
>How to de-Gary Stu-ify such characters to make them still powerful, but not invincible?

Not possible, it's already too late. The most you can do is damage control, but bad fan fiction will stay bad fan fiction.
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>>101852970
So he'll stay like this...unless another Gary Stu will pose a threat to him?

Unless he'll be in a situation that will show him that he's not that OP.

I really hope that they'll tone down his character in the anime, but I'm asking too much.
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>>101853047
Fuck it, they'll follow the source word by word, only trimming the fat. Don't hope, hate!
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>>101853077
Well, the manga and the LN are wasted potential. The world presented is interesting, but it got ruined with the MC...a pity. There in fact mangas that have interesting settings, but are constantly ruined with Mary/Gary Stus.
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>>101853047
Gary Stus are not necessarily without weakness.
But if your weakness is God, then you might as well call it "no weakness".
Get what I am talking about?
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>>101853047
Not happening as plot armour will come in to save the day.
In the later novels another strategic class magician came in and the only reason she lost is because she fell in love with him.
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>>101853157
Sorry, I'm hoping too much.
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>>101853211
UNBELIEVABLE!!
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>>101853144
Sometimes it's not just Mary/Gary Sues/Stus. Sometimes it's horrid writing.

Infinite Stratos, man. I can think up a gritty war drama from its premise. We got a shitty harem instead.
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Hey, at least i could somewhat stomach Tatsuya's bullshit unlike Kirito. Kawahara was trying too hard
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>>101850621
>Material Burst - Decomposes substances into pure energy following E=MC², almost like an atomic bomb. Actually produces more energy than an atomic bomb
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>>101853258
Welcome. To the world of Light Novels,
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>>101853292
Yeah, that too...unless there will be a genre shift later and instead of a harem, we'll get a war drama.

>>101853320
We need a Mary/Gary Stu hunter. BIG TIME.
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>>101853340
LOVE is what we need. With love anything will be possible
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>>101853508
That too. But a character that lowers another one's Sue/Stu factor would always be welcomed.
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>>101853303
Still takes 8 novels to actually explain why Tatsuya became so OP.
At least they actually bother to give a half decent reason.
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>>101849381
>volume 3
>still reading it
Why am I doing that to myself?
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>>101853340
We have one in every corner of the world.

No, what we need is for everyone stop sucking the Gary Stus' dick.
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>>101853684
Because deep inside, you LOVE it. You are tsundere for Mahouka. At the same time, you are also a masochist.

A masochistic tsundere. Hey, that's my fetish!
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There's nothing wrong with overpowered protags if they actually are treated as overpowered by the characters in the universe.
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>>101853726
There's something wrong with the character if they have no other personality or depth beyond the fact that they're overpowered.
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Fuck I still don't get how the Flying Magic works and why the other students can manage to get it work a few hours after seeing Miyuki use it.
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>>101853828
But that is the cause of this story. About a man without personality and emotion.
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>>101853724
I guess it makes sense then...
Or maybe, even if it's fantiction tier, it feels good to self-insert into Gary Stu from times to times.
Less frustrating than all those losers made for Japanese people to feel better.
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>>101853828
Tatsuya isn't meant to have personality beyond loving his sister. Is actually part of the plot believe it or not.
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>>101850190
I do not want to self insert into the MC here though, I want him to self insert into me.
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>not self-inserting as Miyuki
You all are doing it wrong.
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>>101853724
I do love it.
I love almost everything about Mahouka, except for the 2 bland and annoying main characters.
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>>101853930
Also he doesn't actually give a shit if his friends are killed as long as it won't negatively affects his imouto.
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So, is there a reason she loves her Onii-sama so much?
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>>101850621
>Material Burst - Decomposes substances into pure energy following E=MC², almost like an atomic bomb. Actually produces more energy than an atomic bomb, as energy is not lost to collisions between electrons and positrons like in annihilation reactions.

Even Raildex is more realistic
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>>101854123
Yes, Is explained in volume 8.
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>>101854123
He saved her from something. And that resulted in his lack of personality.
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>>101854123
She owes her life to him.
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>>101854153
raildex is also fucking crap, so no one cares.
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>>101854178
Not exactly.
He did save her by using his regrowth thing, but his lack of personality comes from being experimented on because he couldn't use normal magic.
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How does should MC look to really be average guy as author says?
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>>101854153
Raildex doesn't need to be realistic.
It's literally make-believe magic on the Science side and "this thing sort of is like the other thing so it just works" on the magic side.
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>>101854178
>>101854165
Oh lordy
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>>101854262
yeah but is funny how a shit like raildex with his bad writting is way more realistic than this piece of shit.
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>>101854268
Dang. I forgot that part.
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>>101854269
he is a walking atomic bomb
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So this gonna be the next SAO or the next Raildex?
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>>101854327
Not like anyone is fucking faggot enough to expect realistic stuff from this kind of media, right?
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>>101854430
A combination of the two.
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>>101854430
It's basically both at the same time.
It has the great worldbuilding of Raildex and the irredeemably shitty main character of SAO.
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>>101854503
At least he's not that much of a moralfag.
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>>101854490
I-im wating
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>>101854566
post memory loss Touma is not a moralfag.
He outright admits that his speeches are just a weapon during the British Halloween arc and that he doesn't believe in the things he says.
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>>101854566
He's quite critical about various stuff. And he doesn't fear to break shit. That's a marginal redeeming quality. MARGINAL.
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>>101850972
>from the editor in charge of the story, Mr. M
Miki? Why hide his name?
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>>101854805
Because Kamachi doesn't forgive cheating.
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>>101854367
Speaking of that, I realized that one of my first characters I've created has powers similar to Tatsuya's.

Atomic Reconstruction.

He can control atoms. Adding to that, when put under damage, he'd subconsciously heal the damage by mending the molecules on his body back together, becoming a sort of regeneration factor.

It sounds like an awesome power on paper, but it becomes completely impractical in his hands.

In order to use it properly, he needs a nanoscopic understanding of atoms. Too bad he's an idiot who can't even remember what's the first letter on the periodic table. So he can't even piece together a drop of water.

He's also not immune to his own explosions. Though he'd survive, it'll hurt like shit.

One mistake, and he'd have split an atom and blow up an entire country, like he did upon discovery of his powers.

Held captive on account of genocide, he was slapped with the title, 'The Walking Nuke'.

Man, I still haven't written this story. Some day, some day...
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Shizuka, her otouto and crossdressing cousin are best girls.
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>>101854971
Hurry move in Japan, it'll print money. Just don't forget to add shitty main girl and harem.
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>>101855059
T-That's the plan.

Well... He doesn't get a harem. He gets a love interest though. A pure, Yamato Nadeshiko-type character. She has telepathic powers!

Since she's a little smarter than him, she can imprint thoughts into him to give him better control of his powers! This and that happens and they're in love!

...

Except it's a deconstruction of the power of love.

See, the main girl is actually the villain of the story, she just doesn't know it. At some point, she had to remain hidden so she hid her memories and imprinted fake ones into herself, making her believe she's someone else.

Her ploy in imprinting into herself is to hook up with the lead, since she knew of his atomic abilities after he accidentally destroyed his country.

The climax of the story is her fake memories disappearing after the trigger she set in her brain flipped, to which she uses his feelings for her to convince him to face the world as her loyal knight.

So he ends up having to choose, the woman he loves or the world that locked him up and tortured him.

The choice was too obvious and... Stuff happens.
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>>101855290
His love interest needs to be his sister.
Oh and it needs to be set in a high school.
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>>101855373
Nah, that's the other lead! The other lead is a guy who's engaged to his childhood friend. He also has a stepsister who he moved in with just a year ago. Since they've just known each other, sexual tensions are nigh, Also in his harem is a mysterious immortal woman and... Well, the last supposed member is a sociopathic chaos fetishist but no one knows what's going on in her head.

Heads will roll and crazy bitch will be canon love interest.
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>>101855290
>Since she's a little smarter than him, she can imprint thoughts into him to give him better control of his powers!
I actually really like this part unironically.

>>101855373
>His love interest needs to be his sister.
Wow, fuck you.
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>>101855496
>Wow, fuck you.
We're trying to make your idea print money here.
don't you see how well Mahouka is selling?
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>>101855290
>she can imprint thoughts into him to give him better control of his powers
Obviously she's doing it via kiss, right?
Still you need to add a love rival, shitty twintail tsundere. Along with story she finds the true about main girl and tells MC but he doesn't believe it, and main girl herself doesn't anything everything. Later sealed memories returns temporarily and main girl fucks up with tsundere's mind.
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>>101855557
>doesn't anything everything
*doesn't understand anything, fuck
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>>101855496
I know right? It gives them a very team-based dynamic.

>>101855526
B-But...! Sometimes, in order to make a masterpiece, you just gotta starve!
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>>101855557
No... I was thinking her telepathy works as long as there's physical contact, so a quick tag is more than enough to get the job done.

...

Oh lord, it has to be a lewd kiss if I want it to sell, doesn't it?
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>>101850621
>Material Burst - Decomposes substances into pure energy following E=MC², almost like an atomic bomb. Actually produces more energy than an atomic bomb,

Every fucking time
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>>101855557
Oh, and soldiering on, if I had shitty tsundere be a rival, I'd also go ahead and have him despise her for being a bitch. I mean, c'mon, if you're being locked up, adding a tsundere who goes BAKA and slaps you is salt on the wound!
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>>101855665
Simple touch for short duration and weakened telepathic link. Kissu for full power of love.
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>>101855711
>I'd also go ahead and have him despise her for being a bitch
No, she needs to be a love interest.
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>>101849381
>Miyuki
>useless little shit
>useless
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Somebody needs to be posting choice excerpts of this shit. The powers summary is promising, but there's nothing like an excerpt to laugh over.
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>>101855729
>>101855731
You guys are what I'd expect if I try selling the idea to LN editors...

Well, to be honest, if I ever try to head over there and write an LN, I don't really want to conform to what sells and just write something I like.

I guess, the goal is to show those baka nippons that us baka gaijins can do their shit better than they can!

Except I'd starve to death because I won't be making any money.
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>>101855859
>he doesn't want to make money
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>>101855965
Starving Artists!

I mean, being renowned writing something I'd consider slop is even worse than starving to death!
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>>101856023
>I mean, being renowned writing something I'd consider slop is even worse than starving to death!
Just release the garbage under a pen name and use your real name for the quality content.
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>>101856077
That works.
"Me And My Girlfriend Cannot Get Married Because We're Related, But We Still Love Each Other Very Much" by S. S. Sakamori

"(insert title here)" by (redacted)

One's art, the other's a cash grab.

...

Is that what professional writer's do nowadays?
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>>101855859
Then make an all milf harem.
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Actually, thinking back to what you guys were saying, what kind of shitty LN premise would sell best anyway? Jot down your premise with a stupidly long title, since LNs love stupidly long titles.
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>>101856077
This too. NGNL is written by a BR named Thialgo and his pen name is Yamakawa Yuu or something like that.
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>>101856320
Milfs are delicious, you cunt! You even get their daughters as bonus!
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>>101856340
My Little Sister Is A Vampire And My Childhood Friend Is A Werewolf But They Don't Know That!
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>>101856340
Something basic but with top tier waifu designs.

>My imouto is a villain and I'm a Sentai mascot character!?
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>>101856320
I wonder if a milf harem would sell at all in nipponland.
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>>101856340
My Little Sister's Restraining Order Won't Stop My Love
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>>101855771
Too much info dump/technobabble to make it funny.
Here is him using Material burst.
"Material Burst, prepare to fire."
Along with Kazama's voice, Tatsuya hefted "Third Eye".
Zhènhai Naval Port.
The Great Asian Alliance fleet gathered on the other side of Geojedo Base.
On the central battleship, a flag fluttered in the wind on what must be the flagship.
He took aim at that flag.
Using the 3-D image from the satellite as a clue, he began to seek out the information body.
The weight of the battle flag was approximately 1 kg.
"Preparations complete."
He softly whispered.
Within the utter stillness of the room, that was more than enough.
"Material Burst, activate."
"Material Burst, activating."
Repeating Kazama's order, Tatsuya pulled the trigger on Third Eye.
From within Tsushima Base, across the strait, directly into Zhènhai Naval Port.
Tatsuya's magic transformed 1 kg of matter directly into energy.
In accordance with Einstein's Formula, the heat energy equated to approximately 20,000,000 tons of TNT.
The screen darkened.
The excess light caused the safety features on the satellites to kick in.
Which was why they could not see the claws of hell tearing through the earth.
On board the flagship moored at Zhènhai Naval Port, the sun suddenly appeared.
This heat defied any other means of conveyance, not that anyone lived to pass this on to future generations.
High temperatures that ran off the charts evaporated the metal hull into metallic steam.
The rapidly swelling air surpassed mach speed.
Amid the gushing infrared rays, shock waves, and metallic steam, the naval and port facilities vanished.
Anything within the vicinity, be they man or object, was evaporated.
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>>101857340

>In accordance with Einstein's Formula, the heat energy equated to approximately 20,000,000 tons of TNT.
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>>101849381
>useless
I think she is relatively useful in comparison to all the other friends of tatsuya who are totally unrelated to most of the enemies but are still willing to get mixed in the troubles just to get in MC's way
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>>101856608
Well...Happy Lesson had like 3 seasons.
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>>101857932
I liked Panzer dude.
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>>101856340
The most important thing is to have girls that fit people's taste, like an otaku tsundere girl, yandere polite girl, stuff like that. Not only that, but they don't need to grow as a character, they just have to keep to a certain archetype and participate in harem hijinks. As long as they don't do anything offensive, people will love it.
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>>101857932
His friends exist to give him weak points, which means jack-shit since he's Jesus.



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