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Gentlemen, how do we fix Mirai Nikki?
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You don't, the OVA already did the job.
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Don't watch it.
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Have Yuki not dress like such a fag.
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don't kill off the good characters in five seconds
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You throw out all of the stupid shit that came after they switched schools. Also, scrap Yuki's character completely, or change it so that he's not so much of a fucking retard/pussy.
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>>101548138

This.

>>101548190

Also this.
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All that time travel transdimensional shit is gone
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>>101548073
make yuno villain
have yuki die first ep
there is no mc
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>>101548327
How about he stop acting like such a fag, too?
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stop watching it
it was shit anyway
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change to rotoscoped art style
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All you yukihatefags don't seem to realise that they made him like that on purpose...If he wasn't such a beta, Yuno wouldn't be able to manipulate him and the story wouldn't work.
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Not including comedy parts and make it more serious in tone.
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MC not such a beta pussy
Villains don't have retarded character design
More pointless rape scenes
No time travel or gods bullshit
Villain battles less retarded
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>>101549610
yes and that makes him more likable. not.
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>>101549656
I liked the black guy and the blind girl's designs.
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Appreciate it for what it was and abandon the idea of fixing it, not because it was perfect, but because the fixes people propose would render the story unrecognizable.

It's a game of killing each other arranged by a deus ex machina. It's not supposed to make too much sense.
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>>101549706
Don't remember the black guy but the blind girl was alright. The design of the little kid and the chibi orphanage lady was unbearably stupid though.
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>>101549691
He's NOT likable. That's the whole point. In this type of anime you're not supposed to be on anyone's side, you're supposed to be along for the ride. Just like how Death Note would've "never happened" if Light was a pussy and didn't use the notebook, Mirai Nikki would've "never happened" if Yuki was an alpha and got the fuck out of there instead of sticking with Yuno.

Remember, these character's aren't real people. Most people here forget that. They're specifically designed to fit their role in the story. Complaining about characters in this type of anime doesn't make any sense.
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>>101549714
This. Not every anime has to be 11/10. While it had some flaws in its execution, Mirai Nikki DID have some good ideas, and was pretty decent overall.
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Take out all the retarded DBZ fighting at the end
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>>101548073
Less focus on Yuno, more focus on 9, keep 12 alive longer.
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Give the story some actual fucking coherence.

It feels like the plot was hacked out in thirds.

1st third
>Uh, there's this kid, and he's in a magical war, and his girlfriend is a yandere. It'll sell thousands please don't drop me publisher.

2nd third
>Shit. This is getting popular. Why the fuck did I kill off half of the diary holders in the first volumes? And Yukki's character doesn't make any sense. I need drama. Let's kill some more people and kidnap Yukki for no reason.

Final third
>Shit, I'm down to like, 4 diary holders and I have no idea how to end this. Let's throw in a Kaworu clone to make the plot seem deep and mysterious while I half-ass an ending out of the last few chapters.
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>>101549849
Someone who gets it... thanks. It would not make the story "better", it would change the story completely. Nice to see there are still some people on /a/ with critical thinking skills.
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>>101549849
Yuki can still be a beta bitch who gets manipulated easily, doesn't mean we should have to see him cry and moan every episode.
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>>101550080
Sometimes I feel like I'm the only one left.
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replace wacky zany characters with new ones, all the dimension/time traveling shit never happens

all pic related does not exist
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>>101550032
The writer clearly had no idea where he wanted to go with the story and was just winging it as he went along. I remember that one episode where we learn the blind girl got gangraped, then a few minutes later we have that comedy scene with the eyeball-mask guy.
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>>101549849
Although I hate Mirai Nikki, what this guy said was smart. Listen to him.

If you took anyone's side in this damn show you're fucking retarded, the point was that they were all lunatics.

>>101550206
The blank diary trick was interesting for one episode, but then white haired literal-fag was as much of a brick as the others.
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>>101548073
Simple really. Make yuki a girl.
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Remove Yukki's shitty friends except Akise.
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>>101550320
>>101550365
>white haired literal-fag
Oh, and his character itself was an ass-pull. The whole "son of DeM" shit was retarded.
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Make it a free-for-all instead of a boss rush.
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>>101548073
Give all of them different kind of bombs and servants, make yuki a girl.
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>>101549656

>No time travel or gods bullshit

Where the fuck does the cellphones come from then? The entire point of the show is fighting for godhood which could have been interesting if not for the MC and Yuno.
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Get rid of that stupid phone bullshit goddamn what a fucking weak piece of writing there. Create a macguffin thing. Don't use cell phones. Eden of the East at least had special cell phones to make up for the shittiness of a cell phone as a plot mechanism. Mirai Nikki doesn't even care.

As for the animation quality, which was horrid as well as the direction, why not have whoever did the OP animation direct the show? It's literally the only part that is visually interesting.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=okapFtXWcqI

>>101548138
This.

>>101548190
This too
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Make Yuki less of an insufferable cunt
Make Yuno have much less focus on the overall story, hell, make Yuki self sufficient then have her advance the plot the way she did near the end instead of having her be there the whole time.
give this guy more than just 10 minutes of screentime before he gets offed
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We fix it by letting Yuno tender love Yuki until she is sated.
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>>101549494
>no mc
How would you even pull that off?
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You would need to streamline it and rearrange the order of some events, give it better direction, better dialogue, better writing. Really the only things worth keeping are Yuki, Yuno and the ending. It could probably be done, though.
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the idiots are saying IT WOULD CHANGE THE STORY like the story was well written in the first place. get real guys a new story is the best way to fix it . the author didnt know what to do with yuki . you can see this by noticing how every time his character develops it regresses instantly in the next episode.
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>>101552862

I think they mean that in general none of the guys are supposed to be sympathetic. So the people yelling to change all the characters so that they are sympathetic are missing the point. Yuki could have been better though.

Be like saying LOTGH has too much politics so if they where to get rid of it all the show would be better.
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The main problem I had with the series was the tone.

The anime is full of absurdities and extreme situations, that you assume that it's supposed to be taken as a joke, and the anime goes with it when they want to.

But then the anime tries to take itself too seriously, and too abruptly. Making you just feel confused and giving up at trying to get into the anime.

One thing that stuck out to me was how ridiculously the MC's dad parachuted out. Like it was a joke. And then how serious everything was after that.

The speed of the plot is also part of the problem too. I remember the MC being kidnapped away by Yuno very suddenly without really any lead up.

It just feels random and chaotic, and at the end the most you could really do to make sense out of it was to just treat it as a badly done comedy.

However, Mirai Nikki does kind of highlight the problem with a lot of anime in general. The polarity some anime have with humor and stuff, and then trying to take itself way too seriously.
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>>101553211

>ridiculously the MC's dad parachuted out.

I've read the manga never watched the anime and that scene had me on the floor. That was just great. Dat causal jog. Dat manly jump.
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Change the ending
And make it more like the manga (not so many storyline gaps and more details) I don't think Mirai Nikki is as bad as people make it out to be like it was overall decent
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>>101553597
Correct me if I'm wrong (didn't read the manga), but didn't the manga have more plotholes than the anime? Like, supposedly the scene where Yuno tries to gas Yuki's friends actually involved her pouring concrete on them or something stupid like that.
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>>101554221

Been forever since I read it but I think she had one of the those concrete car things pouring it in a 5 by 5 room or something.



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