Alright, It's time we update this thing.
Is there an Episode 15 out there? I have yet to see one.
No one's been able to come up with a good one yet. It's hard to get any of the big moments in without fucking around with the positioning of the guys.
We definitely need Takarada and giant Gamagoori in the background at least, but where would you fit hand holding or the standoff?
It's hard to pick a good focus out of 15.
The showdown was obviously the main focus of the episode, but the Takarada fight needs to go in for the doshfags.
If nobody has one, I'll get started on making my own.
I'm making one for 16 at the moment
Alright. I'm going to update the version of episode 14 I made (the one in the OP) and then see if I can tackle episode 15.
I'll make my own version of 16 if I feel like it later.
Believe in me who believes in you, I know one of you will make something good.
Bumping with a random past version.
I think for this to pick back up, we'll have to go back and improve on the shittier ones. Then we can move forward.
Which would you consider the shittier ones?
Here's a question: How are we supposed to fit 24 episodes on this?
By making it larger.
I've already had to resize it once.
Alot of the others are good concepts that need to be polished up and improved such as 5,10,12,14
Trust me, if I had the know how, I'd do it myself, unfortunately I'm a retard when it comes to this sort of thing.
I'd never seen that one for ep 14 before. I'm partial to the one with Takarada, but fuck it was good to see Meat Armor getting some props.
Man, I have always een these. I remember when ttgl it was my first time seeing it. Anyone got the reference pictures?
I actually just finished polishing 13 and 14 a bit. Tell me what you think.
For reference, I made Episodes 4, 5, 9, 11, 14, 13 (the ones on this chart)
Some anon in a KLK thread earlier today said he was gonna work on 15 & 16 this weekend.
Hope he delivers.
I've also got transparencies of the original shots with the background remove if anybody wants them.
That was me (OP)
Last one is terrible and inconsistent.
I appreciate your efforts, but I think both are going to need to be redone completely.
What do you guys think of this Episode 14?
And what do you think should go into Episode 13?
It's easy to go over the top with these - some authentic crappiness is worthwhile. The depth you've added in polishing is solid, but in 14 especially it's starting to lose some of the raw reaction feeling.
Call it cheesy, but I was kind of going for that when I made it.
Episode 14 was inherently lacking a focus, so I split things up to deal with it. Guess it didn't turn out as well as it could have. It got some decent positive reaction when I first dropped it in a thread though.
It's not bad per se, but considering how important Takarads was in comparison to the rest, he should have been there. Also not enough money.
I guess Takarada just didn't have as much of an impact on me as everyone else.
It's not cheesy at all, it's just that in my opinion it doesn't have a single focal point with everyone looking all over the place, and regardless of the episode itself these reaction summaries need to be simplified.
I would take everything you have there (apart from maybe giving the meat armor to one of the guys), and put them back in their seats with a blood splatter and dosh explosion background.
That way it looks like they're reacting to the big clash moment as well as the emone destruction.
that 14 is better my man. I think Ryuuko on a motorcycle should be worked in somehow though. Maybe have her in the background?
As for 13 Idk. Maybe just have one of the guys have her eyepatch or something of the sort.
Huh, I like the sound of that.
Give me some time, I'll throw it together.
I'm trying to resist the urge to through in Harry Enfield though
Change of plan. The images I used were resized too much and would have looked like shit had I tried this.
I couldn't justify redoing them when an objectively superior Episode 14 exists, so I just added Ryuko's BMX stunt from the latter part of the episode.
Did I mention I'm a lazy sack of shit?
Don't worry 14 looks greatAnd I'm not just saying that because you did the exact thing I suggested.
I have no idea how you'd do this, but
>Ragyo raping one guy
>one replaced with xenomorph mako
>one of them's naked
>the last guy is Giorgio A. Tsoukalo.
>Ragyo raping one guy
Lets keep it simple. This should be the main centerpiece of 16. Background change as usual. But nothing past that. It'll be classic.
Resizing the chart right now so it can fit all 24 episodes.
I swear, if I ever meet the faggot who made Episode 9 I'll kill him. His is much larger than the rest, and it's throwing off the spacing of all the other Episodes.
9 is shit anyways. We can add that to the redo list.
Btw, I'm not intending to make you do all the work. We'll take the improvements made in this thread after its over and start another one at a different time to continue what needs to be done to bring the weak spots up to par.
Just give up, the other chart is loads better
I've got a shit ton of time tonight, so I set some aside to work on this.
What other chart?
That 14 is good but the other 6 is better considering Monkey won in the end
Alright awesome. I'll keep providing feedback... I wish more people where in this thread.
i was working on this in a drunken stupor last just to get the ball rolling. feel free to copy idea and remake
I think both sixes suck.
Good start. It needs more of an impression of Ragyo being directly behind the guys and the arm needs to be cleaned up. Along with possible another arm coming over the dude's right sholder.
Its hard to say what to do for 15 with the new uniforms and nudist beach there is a lot to work with but Ryuuok's burning finger should probably be included.
I agree maybe something like all the guys having bamboo swords and blindfolds with Ryuuko's head sticking out of the ground?
It should also either be set in Aikurou's pool-classroom, or Raygou's Life Fiber sanctuary.
Oh, and Satsuki's O-face.
Sounds a little too cluttered. I think a lot of these turned out bad because they were trying to focus on too much. I think one having blindfolds and a bamboo sword with the picture of Ryuuko getting crushed into the ground legs up set as the background with the rest of the guys appearing normal, would be the way to go personally./
The aliens guy is a great touch and should stay in.
Things that have to be included.
>something to do with the bath
most people would say Sats making her o-face should be in there, but maybe the guys are getting the chakra massage.
Honestly, this is kind of okay as it is, though I would add two of the guys being nude
Alright lets see. The one that Ragyo is currently molesting should have the blush. Touch up Ragyo(probably just redo that part of it with a better picture of her and an additional arm over the guys shoulder.) and then the bath is the background. Ragyo giving off a glow could go either way imo. But the Sats O face thing would be too hard to fit in.
What do you guys think?
Red = Needs replacement/major overhaul
Yellow = Needs retouching/refinement
I though 5 was fine simple edits of the couch guys are better then a bunch of extra shit anyway.
I feel the same but with 10 instead of 5
The whole bath thing caused a big reaction but it was not really the point of the episode should focus more on the aliens aspect or nudist beach
Eps. 05 is fine
For 10 need a bit retouch, I barely recognize Ryuko with that color
This chart is meant to be a collection of reactions. So the aspect that made the biggest impact on discussion should be what is featured.
Agree overall. However, for 13 I think that the puppet should be replaced with the regular guy only with Nui's eyepatch and a grin shopped on.
gama's dick of punishment needs no replacement
I wasn't planning on adding a ton of extra shit, just a background shot of the Academy.
The original background sticks out a little too much, especially when one considers that Episode 5 is the only one to use it besides Episode 1.
I'll probably touch up Ryuko's colors a bit in Episode 10
Any seconds to this? That's a pretty easy change for me to make.
Except for the fact that it's coming out of Gaijin 1's chest.
What's wrong with 6? Aside from the fact the Senketsu patches should be black, not green.
>I wasn't planning on adding a ton of extra shit, just a background shot of the Academy.
Oh yeah that's good idea
Cause Monkey wrecks her in the end and has the crazy scene about seeing space and shit
I don't really know, it's been getting a lot of hate in this thread.
Personally I'm ok with it, but this chart isn't just about what I want.
You're doing kamui's work, son
That would be pretty good the whole ruse thing was the big shock not really the puppets.
Because Monkey wrecking Ryuuko at the end has more impact, elicited more response, and was in general more interesting.
Bumping with support, I'm sure you guys can deliver.
5, 6 and 10 are just fine.
Currently updating 13. Should I splice in the arms or just leave it as is?
use this episode 6
Much better. Expresses everything that episode was about.
First guy arms up with nui eye patch
Satisfies both Monkeyhaters and Monkeyfags.
Yeah arms up and nui patch on first guy sounds great.
Kind cluttered being on both sides would need to be cleaned up maybe make a different guy naked or something
yeah, this 6 is much better, displays all the important points
It's a good thing Gaijin One wasn't wearing a floral print that day.
You're a hero anon
You're doing the lord's work anon.
Now hurry up and finish it already.
13 Edit done.
Pieces of Sekentsu are a very easy way to cover up fuckups.
Well done, anon.
Next on the list?
5 is my favorite
10 is fine
Only 9 needs retouching
5 is getting a decent background, then 15 is getting done.
You still here?
>5 is getting a decent background
Two words: spiked urinals.
Sorry anon, but that highlight on the floor made Gaijin Four's foot look like a piece of shit.
EP 16 should be Kuso Miso Technique - Ragyo and Satsuki edition
All of them should be naked
Ep 9 needs more Iron Man.
I'll get around to that anon, I'm doing episode 15 currently.
Oh, it's looking much cleaner now.
Needs satsuki molestation somehow.
one of the couch guys getting molested pretty much gets the point across
love this song
The whole soundtrack is fantastic.
could anyone make one of these for samurai Flamenco?
it's been just long enough since this happened to me that I actually laughed again
Eh that would be too much work at this point.
well... maybe someday
HELP ME /A/
THIS NEW OP
ITS TOO HYPE