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So fuck it, i haven't seen one with originality for ages, so Servant Thread ?

Make your own, post ideas, draw pictures all are welcome.

Lancer - Androcles

Str - D
End - C
Mana - B
Agi - B+
Luck - A

Skills

Pain resistance - B
(at this rank androcles will still feel the full brunt of the pain, but will allow him to negate 90% of all mental and Physical interference caused by it)
Magic resistance - D
Animal Dialouge - B
Reinforcement - D
(Androcles is capable of slightly boosting the stats of people he considers to be his friends)

Noble Phantasms

The Thorn (Lions Paw) - B
The legendary thorn which androcles pulled from the lions paw. A weapon with the concept of pain.Whenever the thorn strikes an object it will release a wave in its immediate vicinity that causes immense pain in all that it reaches,however this wave can instead be focused on the object it strikes, causing the pain to resonate along it.Such pain will inficlt a degree of mental interference on a foe, decreasing there fighting skills.

The Thorn (Splinter) - B
BY pointing the Thorn at an enemy androcles can detach a part of the thorn and cause it explode, fragmenting towards the target. Each of these fragments is still capable of emitting pain a wave (albeit much smaller and less potent) when they strike an object. Using this ability will cause the thorn to shrink and will decrease its power by one rank.

The Lion (Gao Gao) - C+
Androcles eternal companion, This noble Phantasm can only be activated against an opponent who is vastly superior to androcles in fighting skill.During such a battle the Lion will manifest from behind androcles back and will assist androcles throughout the battle. For some reason the lion takes the form of a young blonde girl in a lion costume.
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ssassin - Ricther Belmont

Str - D
End - C
Mana - C+
Agi - A
Luck - B

Skills

Projectile (Daggers) - B
Martial Arts - C+++ (modifiers activate upon the use of martial arts for evasion purposes)
Presence Concealment - C

NPs

Vampire Killer - C++ (Anti Unit)
The legendary whip passed down to the belmont family,this whip will inflict double damage against anything with a 'monster' attribute, against vampiric enemies, in addition to the double damage effect, the whip will inflict constant damage so long as it is in contact with the enemy.

Sub Weapon (Tools of the Trade) - D (E - A (Anti Unit))

A series of weapons contained within a bag carried by richter, the weapons range from a set of 5 daggers, two throwing axes, to a vial of holy water which bursts into a blue flame upon contact with an enemy, and cross imbued with powerful holy magics that acts as a boomerang. The actual noble Phantasm itself is the bag which contains the sub weapons (each a noble phantasm in its own right) as it is capable of retreving(and refilling) each of richters subweapons no matter the distance.

Item Crush - E - A (Anti Army)

A special property of the sub weapons, when using the sub weapons as a broken phantasm, rather than their power increasing a rank, their properties will instead change from anti unit, to anti army.The holy water will break and rain from the skies, the cross will briefly grow large and emit a massive holy light.Once an item has been used in this manner it will be destroyed and rendered unusable by ricther (even with the effects of tools of the trade)
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Archer - Hawk Eye Gough

Str - B (A+++)
End - B
Mana - D
Agi - D
Luck - D


Skills

Clarvoyance - A++
(Goughs legendary eyes allow him to see across great distances in great detail, by focusing upon his target he could read the smallest tell , the slightest movement. As a by product he could accurately predict when an enemy would move and were they would move to, when they would strike, this led some to believe that gough had the ability of precognition. As this skill comes from goughs eyes, he can only read targets who are within his vision.

Item construction - C++
Gough was famous for creating objects when inspiration took to him,like rocks that could speak once they touched the ground. However his most famous creation was his dragonslayer arrows,each arrow would take an entire tree to create. once completed by gough these arrows become a rank D noble phantasm with a anti dragon property, however due to their massive size they can also be wielded as spears.

Monstrous Strength - A++
Gough , a giant, is summoned in the size of a regular human. In this form his strength is severly diminished. However Gough can temporarily return to his true form and true strength,

Independant action - D
NP

Prideful eyes - B
Goughs Helmet which famously sealed his eyesight.
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In effect this seals goughs eye sight but increases the power of the rest of his senses by an equal amount.Whislt his eyes are always sealed Gough can seal additional senses in order to increase the remaining ones, however once sealed they cannot be unsealed. In combination with Goughs clarvoyance this is a powerful ability indeed.

Dragonslayer Greatbow - E
A simple weapon, a bow made by Gough for Gough in order to accomidate his massive strength. The bowstring on this weapon will never snap due to tension no matter how far it is pulled. This means that the force of the projectiles emitted will be limited only by the users strength.
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Lancer - Longinus

Str - C
End - C
Mana - A
Agi - B
Luck - E

Skills

Saint - C
gives longinus a minor degree of automatic Hp recovery.
Magic Resistance - C

Noble Phantasms

Lancea Longini (Waters of Life)- A (B) Anti Unit (Rank up due to the infamy)

Longinus's cursed lance, In addition to a regular wound ,this lance leaves behind a cursed image of a wound from which mana (In the form of a clear liquid) will continuously flow.The amount of mana lost is proportional to the size of the wound and also the amount of prauna currently in the victims body, due to this servants under this effect will tend to fight under their full stength in order to reduce the prauna loss. As the image is a 'curse' rather than a wound it cannot be cured via healing magic rather it must be dispelled by a sufficiently great magus,however as the image is is both converting and leaking prauna and due to the rank of the Lance the cost of dispelling this effect is high indeed.

Lancea Longini (Blood of Life) - A++ Support

Contained at the butt of the Lance is a small vial containing a small amount of the blood of christ which was collected after it flowed from Christs body down the Lancea Longini. By smearing this blood on his wounds he can heal even the fatal wounds, however only a small amount is contained within the vial and it cannot be replenished.

Nemesis (That fucking cat) - B Anti Unit.

This is the divine lion which was sent to torment Longinus every night. Every night this NP will activate regardless of Longinus's will and the divine lion will be summoned, However due to longinus ascention to Sainthood he will be instead protected by the beast rather than tormented by it. His degree in sainthood allows him minor control over the Lions actions, however his orders can be overwritten by = Anyone with a higher rank in Saint , Any Christian figure with a rank in divinity . Wounds inflicted by the lion will fade (Along with the lion itself) after the sun rises.
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>>100982092
I'd like to see a servant bio for the rest of the knights
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There are no words to describe how little you know of the series in question. All of you.
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>>100983115
think you can do better?
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Berserker - Artorias of the abyss

The legendary hero who fought back against the Abyss, and freed oolacile from it's grip at the cost of his own life. However a different legend says that Artorias failed in his quest and was corrupted into a nest for the abyss itself, and that the deeds of the artorias of legend was actually acomplished by a sole nameless knight.

Str - B+
End - A
Mana - B
Agi - A+
Luck - D

Skills
Mad Cry - C
Eternal Arms Mastership - C (Allows the use of certain signature moves even under mental interference)
Eye of the mind (True) - B
Iron will - B - Negates mental interference of all kinds below this rank
Madness enchantment - A

NP

Greatsword of Artorias - C (A)
Originally a holy blade capable of emitting a small blast of magical energy with each strike, however due to the corruption this effect has been lost.

Abyssl Corruption - A++

Whilst manifest Artorias continuiously emits a viscous liquid from his body. This liquid acts as a poison to both human and Servants alike (Artorias is immune due the degree of his corruption). Humans who come into contact with this liquid will slowly mutate into abominations that will attack all who have not been affected by the corruption. Servants in contact with this liquid will suffer a stat loss and will take constant damage the longer they are in contact with this liquid. The larger the quantity the more powerful the effect.
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>>100983115
Personally the only (Major) flaw i can find in the above is the fact that Gough doesn't have magic resistance.Stats seem a bit off for an archer.

Oh and im a bit miffed about the saber lion reference in Androcles one.
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>>100983257
>Madness Enchantment
>Eye of Mind(T)
True is not active during ME. Change that to at least False.
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>>100983388
Bleh, i always get those things mixed up
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These threads are boring without joke entries. Seriously done, but comedic choice of characters and skill.

Maybe I'll write one or two if I decide I'm as pathetic as the other people in this thread posting servants.
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>>100981162

Why B Mana when he never used Magecraft?

Lancers with A Luck. Pfft.

Where's reinforcement in his legend? That just sounds like Rank C Charisma as far as motivating allies and stuff.

NPs are more than just rank and description. Range, Max targets, type, etc.

So does he just sort of wield the thorn like a knife, or throw it, or what? Why is it a conceptual weapon? There are other things that need saying but there are other parts to discuss.

If the lion's a Heroic Spirit in its own right, NP would need to be EX. If it's just a Phantasmal Beast, you can keep it at C+ but it'd be a pretty low rank beast. Also Saber Lion why.

>>100981550

Ineligible, but that's obvious.

What kind of martial arts?

When did he use Presence Concealment (also how does he qualify for the class)?

Double modifier on vampire killer is a probable no.

Second NP wouldn't usually be okay, but he's ineligible so it doesn't really matter. Worth noting though that each weapon isn't a Noble Phantasm in its own right, it'd be a Mystic Code on the same damage scale as an NP, same as with the Gate of Babylon.

Item Crush isn't an NP.

>>100982092

Strength yeah no.

Clairvoyance rank is way too high for what it does. Also, where's the modifier? What does it do?

Double modifier on IC not needed.

Monstrous Strength rank doesn't correspond to how strong he gets, it's how long he can stay in that state. Further, Monstrous Strength is always a rank-up to STR, not multiplying it by 5 like this. Also, his rank wouldn't even be that high, he's not more monstrous than medusa.

Prideful eyes is pointless because Clairvoyance is misunderstood.

The bow's fine, but it's basically just a normal bow when you consider how Servants work.

>>100982696

Mana A is dragon factor. So yeah.

Saint's effect is picked out of a few different options randomly upon summoning, you can't choose which one in advance.

Infamy doesn't make an NP stronger.

Cont.
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Caster - Queen Medb

Str - E
End - D
Mana - B++
Agi - C
Luck - A

Skills

Disengage - A (Can escape battle easily so long as her body is not severely crippled)
Curse magic - B+
Golden rule - B
Territory Creation - A++ (can create and maintain several workshops at once, In medbs case she does not create workshops, rather she marks the area as being under her ownership (Max 500m radius each)


Np

Medbs criteria - E

Medbs master will lose all fear, meaness and Jealously, whilst she is summoned.

Stoats Neck - A

After an encounter medb deems herself to have 'lost' provided she in her marked area, medb can rename one thing inside that marked area. In the case of a noble phantasm, any non passive abilitys cannot be used until the wielder can discover its new name. This effect will occur only in the area marked by medb, and whilst leaving the area will revert the change, unpon re-entering the marked area the new name will once more take effect. (Multiple areas and effects can be active at once)


Tain Bo Cuailnge - A++

The target of this ability will have all of its treasures stolen by an etheral army, which will be then mixed with all of Medbs. Then the treasures will be be Split between them, with Medb always gaining the majority.
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>>100982696

No such thing as a support NP. It'd be anti-unit.

Is the lion a Divine Beast?

>>100983257

Stats maybe okay for staging ground, but sure as hell not outside.

Eotm(T) negated during ME.

Madness enchantment? You mean enhancement?

Is Mad Cry supposed to be like Franken's or what?

NP's just a curse. Not A++ level.

Etc etc.
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Santa Claus's reindeer are presumably holy beast rank on par with Medusa's pegasus, thus making Rider Santa's sleigh NP about eight times stronger than Bellerophon. Considering that Bellerophon is an A+ rank NP, this would put the sleigh at a solid EX, most likely above Ea.
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>>100983740

Where's disengage in the legend?

What does the modifier on Curse Magic do?

Territory Creation doesn't work that way. A.

Mana B+ at max.

Does Stoat's Neck change the image, or the actual essence in the Throne? What's the justification?

TBC is "what" on face. God the vague. God the what.
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>>100983920
Summoning multiples of beasts equivalent to the pegasus is the same in rank as just summoning the pegasus. Strength of the mystery doesn't change. Not to mention the myriad problems with that.

Even if it did, 150*8 = 1200. Ea's is 4000. So no.
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Assassin - Sherlock Holmes

Str - D
End - C
Mana - B+
Agi - C+
Luck - D

Skills

Presence concealment - D
Uncrowned arms Mastership - C
Independant action - A
Holmesian deduction - A - can deduce the identitys of servants from the slightest of clues.


NPS

The Final Problem - C+
This noble phantasm allows holmes to fake his own death if a battle is going unfavorably. This ability can only be used once against each individual enemy, as a second attempt will be met with scrutiny.

221B Baker Street - B
Allows holmes to instantly identify one servant (Usable once only), However this effect can only be used if it was 'possible' to deduce the targest identity from the clues already available.

Scotland Yard - A
Only usable on a servant who's true identity has been deduced by sherlock.Once a target has been marked (only one mark may be active at anytime), a constant flow of disembodied policemen will be summoned to hunt down and attack the servant.These police men will only spawn when the marked servant is in the sight of either a human or Holmes himself.
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>>100984197

Mana and AGI have no justification in the legend.

Doesn't qualify for Assassin.

UCM why.

Holmesian Deduction is broken. You can give him thought acceleration or something, but that's it.

Baker street is meh.

Scotland Yard will kill him in like 3 seconds because he's summoning a bunch of wraiths and should have E rank MAN.

Generic comments that apply to all your predecessors.
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>>100984104

Blargh. Sorry, Bellerophon is 100 not 150. 100*8 = 800. So still no.
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So what exactly counts for something too become a servant? What are the minimum requirements?
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>>100983718
I made this Andro

>A luck
E luck is not an iron rule, its just a joke the fandom likes to make.
>Reinforcement
I was going for a power of friendship kind of affair with this one (as everyone was all wowed by it), but i thought a skill called power of friendship would be tacky as fuck so i just went with something like what shakesphere has (which is enchant i realise now).
>Nps range targets type
I forgot to add those in, i'll do a revise at some stage

>Wield it like a knife
Nah the general idea was that it was a giant ass lion and so it was a big ass thorn. Androcles uses it like a lance, and when he uses splinter the thing shrinks till its a short spear then a sword knife etc.Conceptual wise the most we hear about it in the legend is that it causes a lion a massive amount a pain. As i'd already gone with a giant lion, i figured that i'd need to add somthing about the thorn to make it capable of hurting the lion.

>Phantasmal Beast
Yeah i didn't want it to be somthing super-powered or shit, i just wanted somthing to give androcles a chance against other folks seeming as he's not exactly famed for his fighting skills.

>Saber Lion
Homestly, because I could

I also wrote artorias and i'll get to that in a min
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>>100984650

Got to be a human. Part-humans are fine, but no full gods/full beasts/etc.

Hero, no anti-heroes unless the grail's corrupted.

Pre-1900s legend wise. (Yes, EMIYA, but Counter Guardian and a few other shenanigans)

Has to actually qualify for a class.

Also keep in mind stats are based off of feats in the legend. Where they're summoned determines how close they are to the legend. For instance, in Greece Hercules would be closer to the legend of "that guy who held up the sky" than in Japan. A strong magus also gets them closer to the state they were in during their legend, but the only way they can be "stronger" than they were in their legend is if they first become equal by being summoned in their home and having a great Master, and then getting Mad Enhancement or something.
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Assassin - Waldo
Str - D
End - D
Mana - C++
Agi - C
Luck - A

Skills

Presence concealment - E - EX
Instinct - C

NP

Weres Wally - D
Activated by putting waldos hat somewhere on the targets persons (Can be put into pockets or backpack etc). This will cause all those around to recognize the target as waldo. Even masters will identify the holder as waldo.

Where where where wheres waldo - B++
The strength of waldos presence consealment increases for each person within a 500m radius from himself.
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>>100984886
Okay, I was thinking of making one for the Bogeyman but that first bit cancels out that.
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>>100984650
A human for the most part or even demi-god, must have a legend as people weave stories about you as another translation of Heroic Spirit is just Legendary Soul, not a legend like a celebrity but they must think you more than human in a way, and it's a lot easier if they're before a certain point in time.

>>100984886
Avenger was summoned before the grail was tainted as the Anti-Hero class, even though he was the one to taint it he only tainted it after death. Meaning Anti-Heroes can be summoned with a proper class. Still since he was summoned before the point when the grail was infected he counts
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>>100984373
You don't need to have been a mage to have high mana, jesus man check out Vlad from Apoc, or even Heracules
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>>100984886
I'm sceptical on that full beasts bit, wasn't iskanders horse in IH ?

Waver flat out says that all of the things in there are servants.
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>>100985015
>Vlad from Apocrypha
You mean the vampire? Like, someone that was similar to a DAA?
>Heracles
Learn2legend pleb.
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>>100985014
That was more because the Matous hacked the Grail and had the choice to summon either Ruler or Avenger because they're the Matous. Ordinarily a non-tainted grail shouldn't be able to summon anything but "Heroes".

>>100985015

F/A Vlad gets it largely from DDotS, a ridiculous Staging Ground Boost, and the vampiric deal. Herc because everything in his legend screams "god this guy has a huge amount of inherent power," Nasu wanking, divine spirit aptitude, and AoG means better.
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>>100984998
It's not like Hercules is real; but in Nasuverse whoever has had a legend in the past including obviously fake people did really exist.

There are some other Grail Ways like the Mooncell or Fate/Strange Grail. The more a heretic or strange the master himself might be, the more distorted the hero might be in return. Which is how a ghost once summoned a living story as her servant in one Grail War. Even how Medea in FSN summoned a random ghost that could break the laws of physics in FSN itself. Since a servant who is not bound by that age cannot summon another servant, and thus she used the temple gate as both the catalyst and master.
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>>100984706

>Luck
I know, I was mainly joking too, but not sure if he deserves A, as Luck is defiance of fate.

>Reinforcement
Right, but it didn't literally make people stronger, it motivated them with friendship and stuff, so Charisma.

>Thorn
You could just take out the conceptual part and make it Anti-Phantasmal Beast. Not sure if it would earn the status of Conceptual Weapon from the legend, so that's probably the better way to go.

>Lion
Okay on both comments.
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>>100985179
They bumped up vlads base stats to fit in with the comment at the start 'as powerful as Arthur in Britain or Heracules in Greece'

So even without DDOTS and the fame boost his stats are still pretty high . Picture is his base stats

>>100985149
>You mean like the vampire
No turning vampire is his NP, he doesn't gain the benefits unless he uses it
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>>100985087
Heroic Spirits can be non-human, but to be summonable as a first instance from the Grail you've got to have some humanity. After that, Servants (if they have an EX NP) can summon Heroic Spirits that are non-human. it's weird and doesn't make a lot of sense.
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>>100985179
>That was more because the Matous hacked the Grail and had the choice to summon either Ruler or Avenger because they're the Matous. Ordinarily a non-tainted grail shouldn't be able to summon anything but "Heroes".

Very few parts of that statement really fit here. I mean for starters I can assume you mean the Einzebern's, they did not hack the grail but just worked within the rules to create a broken result by forming a new class mold to summon something into, the bit about either Ruler or Avenger comes out of nowhere, and just all of it is a bit of a mess.
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>>100985179
Yeah, For people like Vlad, Cu or Heracles, staging ground would make them very powerful due to their fame in the area.
Cu with staging ground can throw a spear at a ship.
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>>100985014
Angry Manjew was only able to be summoned because the ones that summoned him were the ones that created the grail in the first place and cheated.
Also, everyone knows how much of a bad idea is it to summon Avenger. The dude is weak as fuck. It's not even funny. Even any assassin fighting him head-on without presence councealment will beat the shit out of him 10 out of 10 times if Avenger's master isn't godlike fighter.
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Icarus - Rider

Str - E
End - D
Mana - B++
Agi - C (EX)
Luck - D

Skills
Independant action - A
Riding - A

NP

Wings of Icarus - Were eagles dare - A

The wings are responsible for Icarus's EX agility. The wings can be used to fire a huge blast of air towards the opponent . The feathers on the wings themselves are extremely sharp and can be detached and fired in this blast of air, however each feather detached lowers icarus's agility. These feathers regenerate over time.

Wings of Icarus - Apollo's Wrath - A++

Infuses the wings with fire, in this state all of icarus's attacks gain the fire attribute, and gain a large increase in damage. However while this NP is activated icarus's wings will catch fire and the feathers will burn. Feathers lost with this Np can never be regenerated and thus the agi loss is permenant.
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>>100985253
Yeah, there are always these weird shenanigans that can come up. Moon Cell can have Servants who are ineligible because Moon Cell, and Not!Kojiro's a made-up wraith because improper summoning because Medea.

Strange/Fake is better not mentioned, though. Written by the guy who made Baccano and Durarara, hence why it's in America, Hydra's ineligible, and a lot of things just blatantly contradict the other things.
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>>100985380
>Also, everyone knows how much of a bad idea is it to summon Avenger. The dude is weak as fuck. It's not even funny. Even any assassin fighting him head-on without presence councealment will beat the shit out of him 10 out of 10 times if Avenger's master isn't godlike fighter.

Hindsight is a bitch, but they didn't know that at first as they thought they were summoning the literal devil. Still once the class is created it proves that an anti-hero can be summoned naturally, and if that's the case then something could be summoned as an Anti-hero that also doesn't suck.
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>>100985323

Those are his base stats when summoned in Romania. It discounts DDotS but yeah.

>>100985349

You're right on the Einzberns, typo on my part. The bit about Avenger and Ruler is from F/A. In FSN timeline, they summoned Avenger. In F/A timeline, they summoned Ruler. That decided how war 3 went, etc etc. The Einzberns were capable of bending the rules on how the grail summoning procedure worked because they had direct access to the way in which the summoning functioned.

>>100985362

Pirates can't do anything against Protection from Arrows.

>>100985395

B++ MAN why.

AGI is reaction time, not speed. Even then, they wouldn't boost him that much. Rank up to AGI, capability of flight.

Second NP would be alright on the condition that it's a one-use NP, and after its use the Servant will perish.
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>>100983891
>Stats
Agi was supposed to be B+ , but other than that i don't really see the problem.

>Eotm (T)
It was supposed to be like Hercs bravery, negated but the rank was still there.
>Madness
I mispelled it
>Mad Cry
Yes
>Np's just a curse
Not really, he manufactures the goop in his body and it slowly leaks from him, its not really a curse, he makes it flings it whilst he fights.
>Rank High
I could accept your arguement on that point, i was going lower but then when i added the whole can turn humans in abominations i thought it was worth the rank up.
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>>100985395
Flight is no longer considered a True Magic, no reason for EX rank.
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>>100985672
>Pirates can't do anything against Protection from Arrows.

Settler in the Stars : EX
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>>100985749

>Stats
Well, Herc summoned in Western Europe (Germany) is B+ STR, and A rank END is some solid stuff.

>EotM
Ah, gotcha.

>Mad Cry
Is that in the legend? Realize that it's not in Franken's either, but Nasu Franken =/= Shelley Franken.

>NP
I mean the effect imposes a curse. Transforming humans isn't really A++, I'd probably say B rank. That seems to be enough for human transfiguration and Servant weakening.
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>>100985902

I mean that Drake shoots cannons, Cu dodges. Unless she uses the Wild Hunt instead of the Hind, she can't hit him.
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>>100985672
They couldn't be his base stats in romania.

As i said here>>100985323

He's supposed to be as powerful as Herc in Greece or Arthur in Britain.

You take arthur and add a rank and she's a lot stronger than Vlad. You take Herc and add a rank to his already amazing stats and he's a lot stronger than vlad (if were considering vlads base stats as being one lower than in his sheet).

However if vlads base stats are the same as his current sheet, add demonic defender and the dame bonus and his stats are somwhat similar to were hercs and sabers would be
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>>100982092
Remove every +

Strength is way too high, A rank Clairvoyance is already precog no need for random modifiers, A rank item construction allows for making of immortality potions and in comparison some big ass arrows aren't that impressive(also a Caster class skill, remove completely) and monstrous strength is way too high.

Medusa, one of the most famous and powerful monsters only had B in monstrous strength.
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>>100986021

You misunderstand that phrase. The equal of England!Arturia or Greece!Herc doesn't mean their parameters are equal. It means the strength they gain from fame puts them on the same playing field. Vlad's fighter jet will inherently be weaker by virtue of what he is compared to Dragon Girl and Sky Lifter, but his nuke allows him to match them.
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>>100986020
>Pioneer of the Stars (星の開拓者, Hoshi no Kaitaku-sha?, localized as Settler of the Stars) is the unique Skill given to heroes that became turning points in the human history. All difficult voyages and challenges which are considered "impossible" turn into "events that can be realized".

It's an ability that basically makes anything possible, especially if they're impossible
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>>100985253
>>100985349
Fuck it I'll give it a go

Assassin - Bogeyman
Str - C
End - D
Mana - B
Agi - A
Luck - C

Skills

Sack (method of assassination of "naughty children)
Presence Concealment - C (by day) A+(at night)

NPs

Who's that knocking at the door?- C

The Bogeyman is said to take away children who are naughty. However unlike most assassins he is far more courteous in his spiriting away of people. His main method is to knock at the door when the child is being belligerent or not obeying their parents. If any of a Masters comrades is conspiring against him or plans to do naughty things with the Grail he will soon hear the knocking of the bogeyman. If he continues to ignore the bogeyman then the bogeyman will enter and take the bad person away in his sack.

What is in the Darkness?-A

The Bogeyman can turn a once safe haven into a nightmarish place by blocking out all of the lights and making the rooms seem much bigger than they already are. He lies in wait while the victim slowly becomes more and more frightened of the noises and whispers in the darkness. Then when the victim is completely broken down from their fear, he gets them.

Yeah it's probably shit isn't it?
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>>100986143

We actually got a new line added to the description when Drake's new info came out.

"It is the overcoming of the inefficiencies of the current era with merely human power. It is the "pride" that burns within a handful of genii that give power to their frantic efforts."

It just means she gets EX Luck. Cu can't Gae Bolg her, but he can just...you know...stab her.
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>>100985960
Artorias roars a lot during his fight, In paticular he does a miniroar when he gathers his power and gets a strength boost. Rather than adding that as an NP (I thought it would be too much like Lance) i added it as mad cry (Which would freak enemies out to make him look stronger instead)
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Saber: Hector
Lancer: Achilles
Archer: Odysseus
Rider: Diomedes
Berserker: Ajax
Caster: Cassandra
Assassin: Paris
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>>100986235
The Scream of Terror's more like paralyzing the enemy in fear. You could probably just change it to an original skill that gives a temporary boost of STR by one rank.
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Lancer - Ajax

Strength - A
Endurance - A
Mana - C
Agility - C
Luck - D

Skills

Projectile (Rocks) - A (Can throw rocks as fast as bullets, the size is limited only by Ajaxs strength)
Magic resistance - C
Eye of the mind (False) - B

Noble Phantasms

Teucer - C
Can activate upon a thrust of the lance. Upon a thrust an arrow will fly from over Ajax's shoulder towards the target of the thrust.

Rho Aius - A+
The original Aius a shield of seven layers wielded on Ajax's left arm,Before the first offical layer lies a coat of bronze which must be destroyed before damaging the layers of cow hide.Gains a bonus vs projectile weapons. Damage against the layers of this shield can be regenerated over time, however once a layer has been penetrated it cannot be reformed.
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>>100985672
Agi is a combination of Speed and reflexes. In Icarus case the wings give him a massive boost in speed.
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>>100986818

No. It's just reaction time, dexterity, and things like that. it's mistranslated and misudnerstood as speed a lot because the speed stat doesn't exist, which is dumb.
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Saber - Khalid Ibn Al-Walid

Str - B
End - A
Agi - B
Mana - C
Luck - A+ (Fought his whole life, got forcibly retired from being general. Joined as a infantryman and continued to fight. Died in bed of old age, bitter and resentful that nobody ever managed to fucking kill him.)

Class Skills
Magic Resistance: B

Riding: B+ (Modifier to anything he's riding's Endurance; he used to take a camel, ride it through the deserts and attack from a completely unexpected angle by riding the camel till it died and then consuming what he could from the corpse and marching the rest of the way. Can only still ride stuff that his B rank allows, no mythical beasts.)

Personal Skills
Eye of the Mind(True): B

Military Tactics: A
Undefeated general, only military leader to ever halt the Islamic armies during Mohammed's era. Lead lesser forces and destroyed all who stood in his path earning him the name "The Sword of Allah"

Charisma: C
Good leader of warriors, but no leader of men per see. Got kicked into early retirement by politicians.


Noble Phantasm:

'Saif-ullah' - Swords of Allah: C+
Known for his habit of taking many swords with him to every battle, Khalid has an unending supply of swords on him, though since he is only used to using one they're only somewhat useful in their infinite number.

Fine swords, sturdy and sharp but without special inherit qualities. Applying Broken Phantasms freely is the main idea behind this NP, giving it a boost. Rather than a Rank Up from C(30) to B(40) it acts as C(30) to C+(60). Or effectively an A rank NP in the case of God Hand.

*Whistle*, Camel! - B
Summons a camel mount or a small troupe of nameless lightly armored camel riders armed with swords, lances and shields. They're quite weak and are no match for any heroic spirit, though in numbers and with Khalid giving them orders they may stall and fight on nearly equal ground against one. A very cost efficient NP despite summoning wraiths and creating their equipment and mounts.
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>>100987664
The only thing in paticular i'll point out is the mention of God Hand, which is incredibly out of place.
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>>100987990
Given that A is ranked a 50, I just wanted to make it so he could at least kill Berserker once. He'd still lose since he has no other means, but I just wanted to give him something.
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Have Achilles stats been released yet? If all his stats aren't Hercules tier and his shield isn't a EX ranked noble phatasm I will be very angry
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>>100986240
I'm surprised there haven't been any Homeric heroes in the nasuverse yet.
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Archer - Nobita

Str - E
End - E
Agi - E
Mana - E
Luck - E (A++)
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>>100988924
Haven't been released yet, his spears effect supposedly has been tho, along with his invunrability effect
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>>100988924
Chiron still may be better, since he trained him and shit while being all Centaur god.
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Saber: Saint Peter

STR: B
END: B
AGI: C
MAG: B+
LUK: A
NP: A

Noble Phantasms
Ear of Roman, anti army, B rank: In the Bible, Saint Peter lopped off the ear of a roman guard, and this probably deprived the guard of his hearing. This NP allows Peter, by channeling Prana into his sword, to temporarily deprive his enemies of all of their senses within a certain radius.

Deny Me Thrice, A rank, anti unit: In the bible, Jesus said before the cock crowed, Peter would deny knowing him three times. When Peter slashes an opponent 3 times consecutively, he can do a chant which essentially denies his opponents existence, killing them instantly.
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>>100989650
He who lives by the sword will die by the sword
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>>100989582
>May be
>Wisdom of the gods
Chiron is well better
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>>100989762
Live and Die By the Sword: Anti Self NP, Gives Peter one rank higher to all stats, but lowers all stats by one rank after the battle is over.
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Saber - Miyamoto Mushashi

Str - B+
End - A
Mana - C
Agi - A++
Luck - A

Skills:

Independent action: A+
Battle continuation: A
Bravery: B
Eternal Arms Mastership: A+

Noble Phantasms:

Anti-Personnel Noble Phantasm
Fifth Ring, The Book of Void - B+

A long and short bokken, which Musashi can dematerialize from physical space. The bokken can be rematerialized in any space at Musashi's discretion (including inside other objects). The process of dematerialization and rematerialization are instantaneous, allowing Musashi to wield the bokken without the limitations of a human body or physical law.
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>>100991546
I usually like inputting his life struggles as his Book Of Five.

And you gotta have the Oar.


I would say he would have multiple weapons, being a katana from his days before Musashi, a Bokken, for his triumphs over dojos, another katana, for his days traveling, Dual swords, Cause why not, and the Oar, for his battle with Kojiro.
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>>100991546
Also, he's divine.

He's a sword saint
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Assassin - Ecstasy a.k.a. Darks
Str - E(EX)
End - E(EX)
Mana - E(EX)
Agi - E(EX)
Luck - E(EX)

Skills:
Independent Action - EX
Presence Concealment - E(EX)
Counter Hero - E(EX)
(allows for staying up late)
Noble Phantasms:
Edgyness - EX
In the presence of death, knives,psychos' pointy objects, and Greenday, all of Ecstasy a.k.a. Darks' stats and skills become EX
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>>100993039
Assassin - Ecstasy a.k.a. Darks
Str - E(EX)
End - E(EX)
Mana - E(EX)
Agi - E(EX)
Luck - E(EX)

Skills:
Independent Action - EX
(allows for staying up late)
Presence Concealment - E(EX)
Counter Hero - E(EX)
Noble Phantasms:
Edgyness - EX
In the presence of death, knives,psychos' pointy objects, and Greenday, all of Ecstasy a.k.a. Darks' stats and skills become EX



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