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Story time /a/.
I just finished translating this, hope you guys will enjoy it.

Some of you may remember me from yesterday's thread.
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It seems I forgot to rename the files.
Not that it mattered.
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>>100734511
I like where this is going already.
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>>100734511
Nofuckingway that's a boy.
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>hope you guys will enjoy it
oh i will, OP
i will
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reading speed > posting speed... suspenseful!
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>>100734956
Blame the cooldown timer and my slow ISP.
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>>100734960
>But didn't that uniform are what's causing...
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Will they fug?
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>>100735102
Should it be "isn't"? I'm not a native English speaker, so feel free to correct it.
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>>100734511
What.
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>>100735166
"But isn't that uniform what's causing..." would be correct.
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I'm gonna upload the fixed page after the dump. If there's any more errors, just let me know.
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10/10 spiritual successor to KnJ.
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God damn it Japan. When will you stop drawing a girl and calling it a boy? My dick cannot handle all this fapping.
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Ok, now this is weird.
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>>100735377
Should be 'loved' in the bottom right panel.
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How many pages is this?
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>>100735460
Sometimes I edit speech bubbles into pictures of flat girls from different series with the text "I'm a boy"; makes my dick diamond.
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Who knows?
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This is weird.
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Since you said to point out any issues...

>>100735045
There's a grammatical error on this page. It should be" "I thought you were having some kind of problem."
I think it might flow better if you separate the thoughts out as follows, though:
"Why do you need to lie? You made me worry so much... I thought you were having some kind of [serious] problem."
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>>100735685
I kinda want his mother to barge into the room and ruin their fun.
For no real reason, it just would be hilarious.
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So, as a parent, in Japan of all places, how do you let your normal boy walk around in girl's clothes?

And go by himself to his former teacher's house all the goddamn time?
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>>100735810
>implying sensei doesn't NTR mom by doing kiddo
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this is fucking gay
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That's all folks.

I'm gonna fix and post the pages with errors in it and then upload the rar somewhere.
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>>100735839
I think it is cute.
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>>100734511
I thought that was a loli and got a boy instead. God damn it Japan.
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Promising beginning but disappointing ending.

Thanks OP.
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>>100735851
Cute story, but the fact that the girl was a trap had no effect on the plot or the ultimate ending.
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>>100735851
Thank you, OP. That was kinda cute.
>>100735886
Aye, same, there's not a trace of boyish feature on that trap, what an amazing skill/
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>>100735879
It's still gay.
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Here's page 8.
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>>100735836
It's called negligence.

We have it in America, too.
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Why did I spoilered the image?
Page 9.
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>>100735630
Im gonna start doing that with 3DDP
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>>100735976
This why does it have to be a boy.

Reminds me of Prunus Girl. I read that entire series hoping that "he" was actually a she. Why did I dream for too much?
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And page 12.

Since I have nothing better to do while waiting the rar to finish uploading, I'm gonna dump yesterday's comic too.
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>>100736067
>did I spoilered
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>>100736101
Because shota trap > loli
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>>100736101
>why does it have to be a boy
Because boys need love too?
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Shut the fuck up. Prunus Girl is my Bible. Don't diss it.
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>>100735921
This is true, it would've been nice if the fact that he was a trap effect the story in more than a single text bubble.
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Does the fact that she's actually a he really change this story much at all? Why not just call it a girl, would that be too generic
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>>100736564
This mizuki nigga is adorable.
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http://myanimelist.net/people/21295/Chita_Tsumura

Oh, now I understand why the girl needed to actually be a boy.
It's just the artist's fetish.
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>traps

Yeah, I'm out. But please feel free to enjoy this if you like it.
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That's all folks.

The rar files can be downloaded here:
https://www.mediafire.com/?x6n6kfg1j7f1d

Feel free to share or re-upload it somewhere else like sadpanda.
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Aaahh this is so cute and heartwarming...
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how can one OP be so based?



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