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Monster girl thread
Year of the horse is the worst year edition
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>>100548049
Do you really have to start shit?
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>>100548049
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Right now, at rightStuf, seven seas titles are on same, time to pick up MM if you haven't already.
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>>100548195
He's just jealous he can't use his waifu a table
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>>100548320
>You will never sleep on the side of your centaur waifu's horse chest, rising slightly with every breath she takes as she stares embarrassed of her form despite it's comfy bed qualities
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starting bookwyrm story. all aboard

you were at the library for an assignment or something, does that really matter? anyway you had picked up what you needed and were heading out with the books you had selected, you hardly made it past the gates as you were assaulted by a blur of green scales. the rush of it sent you flying and caused all your books to spill onto the floor.

the world around you is a strange blend of stars and spirals, they blend into one another and soon you begin to make out a face among all of it, an extremely feminine face with strange protrusions. Her look is one of worry and anxiety as something scaly pokes at your temple. The world comes back into focus and her expression changes to relief and she gives you a sincere smile before lifting you up.

"You alright?" her words come out brutishly, she actually pronounced the g in alright. Despite all of this she is happy as can be and begins shaking your hand with enough force to rip it out of its socket, she stops when she sees you in pain and hugs you, which only manages to crush your spine and causes you to gasp in agony.

She completely detains her attempts at kindness and with the utmost care lays you out to rest, your books placed in a messy pile next to you. for the first time you realize she has a giant fucking tail which should've been a more important trait, that and the fact that she covered in claws from her arms to two horns curving out of her jet black hair.

"who are you?" you regain your breath and the feeling in your lower body, she nearly gives you another handshake before stopping herself at the last second and slowly pronouncing her name "Dagurashibanipal!" her accent is thick with something approaching german or norse, she looks at your confused expression and blushes "call dagura." with her thick and primitive tone.

"help with books?" she extends a single clawed nail for you to shake and the other toward the towering pile of books that you were taking out.

what do?
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>>100548425
>what do?
Learn to capitalize you stupid fuck.
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>>100548195
Whatever do you mean?
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>>100548425
Say sure
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>>100548425
Please work on your grammar. I implore you.

That aside.

We're strong, independent men who don't need no wurm.
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Shit 404'd while I was writing. Quoting from last thread.

>Someone thinks you're a semi-competent writer
>Dont kid yourself, they just want monstergirl smut.
To be fair that's effectively true in non-monster girl forms, too. Best-selling erotica and (erotic) romance tends to have the prose and setting quality of a fucking child but people splurge all over how amazing that shit is because it panders to their keywords and/or has a possibly naked guy on the cover.

Key is just to keep writing and not be discouraged by whatever. Improving is good an all but consistency and doing it at all will get some results. Enjoy what you're doing and go from there. Also adding 'cancer' to 4chanX post filter since I've never once seen a constructive post with that shit in it. Fuck that buzzword coming back.

>Do you guys actually like background to your smut?
How much is a tricky thing to really have a straight answer for. It depends on what you're aiming for, but some background and scene setting helps. For all people will say they want longer, involved development, character and all that, shorter straight up smut has a place. Context and pacing still helps, but I tend to be with you on having people already in the relationship. I hate the paint-by-numbers generic 'meet, try to get together, mandatory happy ever after' people think romance HAS to be, like no one can ever have romance or fun while IN a relationship.

Still, before I go off on a tangent, you do still want to draw the reader into the setting, why they should be invested in the characters and what they're doing, be that living together, a gradual romantic build up or explaining it's a succubus' rape dungeon and everyone's invited.
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So I was thinking of doing a Cyoa On fucking anonkun, where it's simple as fuck to do, and this time, nobody will become the "niggerest"

anyone interested?
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>Miia not being best girl
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Hello again, Monster Girl Academy guy here with an update since last nigh, almost all on Fiona except a few little bits on minor characters.

http://pastebin.com/1PCrGhx7

It was mostly going back to the Fiona lewd and adding in a bit more detail, as well as the relationship before, an anon pointed out that the lewd is kinda short so I expanded on it, added foreplay ect, feedback and critique is once again appreciated.
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>>100548300
Fuck off Arkada
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>>100548701
what were you planning on doing?
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>>100548677
What do you mean? Is there something in my grammar that stands out?
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>>100548801
A story about novice wizard who decides to go on a grand adventure with his male paladin and female centaur bros
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>>100548728
That's not how you spell Rachnee
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>>100548812
Everything. You don't use proper punctuation, you don't capitalize things, and your writing is terrible and doesn't even make sense at points.

>She completely detains her attempts at kindness

For example, this. This makes no sense.
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>>100548425
Well, we have no reason NOT to help her.
>>100548695
If you'd allow me to do the same.
>>Dont kid yourself, they just want monstergirl smut.
Again, I'm personally here for the story, not only because I want to fuck X or Y.
>No need to lie, anon
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Obligatory Manticore.
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>>100548425
Just because the wurm is illiterate doesn't mean you have to be too. Unless the story is told from her perspective, please improve the grammar.
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>>100548425
Purge
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>>100548812
Capitalization, or lack thereof.
Your sentence structure is stilted.
You use commas where you should be using periods.
Then there's "She completely detains her attempts at kindness." What does this even mean?

Just to give you an example, and not to say that I'm a master editor or writer, but here's how I would write the first segment.

>You were at the library to pick up materials for an assignment. On your way out, you were run down by a blur of green scales just past the gates. The sudden impact sent you tumbling; the books you were holding were scattered all over the floor.
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>>100548762
Same anon as before here, there's a couple of other things i've noticed that i'll offer some input on once i've finish reading it.
>>100548942
ehh, i'm not too fond of centaurs myself but if you'll write it i'll read it.
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>>100548812
At a glance, capitalization. Some full stops instead of commas, per example but maybe a minor thing.
>The world around you is a strange blend of stars and spirals. They blend into one another and soon you begin to make out a face among all of it, an extremely feminine face with strange protrusions.

Generally would reccomend running things through MS Word with Options - Proofing - Style & Grammar shown. Can ignore it's hardon for changing they're to they are but generally it has good points.

>>100549019
>Lying
You really think someone would do that? etc.
But yeah, I like story building and purpose too or I'd just write fapping shorts and one-shots instead of longer story arcs that happen to have erotic themes and happenings at their core. Half the time in MGQ I didn't want to lose cause I wanted the story progression rather than whatever monster rape it was.
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>>100549229
Is that supposed to be an MG42?
If so, she's fucking massive.

But, then again, artists that aren't really 'into' weaponry tend to screw up the scale pretty badly. This image is a good example.
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>>100548701
>and this time, nobody will become the "niggerest"
I'd like to see you try and stop me.
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>>100549582
I also just realized the stock of the Dragunov is in the crook of her elbow instead of against her shoulder.
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>>100549320
>Implying Smut

I thought that MonMusu thread goers hate NTR
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If you were a paladin of the church and sent to purge the lands, how long do you guys think you would last before you fall in love with a monster girl?
I think I could purge the region as long as I was sent to a place with uncute monster girls. But if I was sent to a lamia or kitsune populated land, I'd probably falter after the first few kills and run away from the cause.
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>>100549582

I made that point like a dozen threads ago. She'd be like 8 feet tall. Direwolfgirl.
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>>100549846
I wouldn't have become a paladin in the first place because I am not a mindless zealot.
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>>100549846
I'd make it 2 steps and marry the first rock that looks cute. I'm just not cut out for killing.
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did anybody put the neet manticore on the monstergirl writings page or do they have the whole story I fell asleep when they fell asleep on the couch (ironic)
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>>100548425
Where is her other arm?
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>>100549846

Do you have to get up close and personal or can I use something ranged? I think that's the deciding factor really.

Well, that and families. You think a whole village or region isn't going to have cute little kids and wives with loving human husbands and so on? Even with demonizing your enemy and brainwashing, that stuff will make people crack.
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>>100548406

Horses sleep standing up though.
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>>100549986
just search manticore in the archive.
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>>100549974
>cute rocks
What?
>>100549986
He went to bed when he was done; no pastebin upload yet
>>100550046
Behind her. Look carefully.
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>>100550129
She's not asleep, she's on her side
She's awake and feeling awkward with you asleep on her
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>>100550129

She's not sleeping. She's laying down. The dude is using her like a jumbo lap pillow. Well, more like a side sofa.
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>>100549265
If I remember right anon said english isn't his first language
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>>100549724
>IMPLYING smut
I was referring to how writefags often portray their personalities, not sex.

What does NTR have to do with anything?
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Posting that Cyoa, come by, play and stay a while
http://anonkun.com/fantasy/my-new-story/-JDgA8_baduAVmJmT4p6
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>>100549846

I would be and Anti-Paladin for my Monster Lord.

Surprisingly enough, I'm still holy-affinity since Angels are also monsters.

The main difference is that I don't have to be Lawful Stupid
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>>100548049
would you take them home and give them a nice life?
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>>100549846
I just have to imagine that they're all just backstabbing cock hungry sluts who only love people for their dick. Then I remember the corruption and the Grimdark of the KCverse, and I can just keep on killing
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>>100550313

There's only one true paladin. His name is Dredd, and he's no pal of yours.
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>>100550178
I cant seem to figure out the anatomy of it.
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>>100548975
This guy knows what's up
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>>100550110
Well you could play sniper with a bow and arrow I guess. Also why would you feel bad for such vile creatures that will make the human race extinct
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>>100550392
He's holding her left arm behind her. You can just barely make it out.
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>>100550389

>Paladin
>Not Justicar
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I think someone suggested this last thread, anyone interested in doing a story about an oni who only goes after beta nerds?
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>>100548975
Mag nigga
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>>100550413

>Rachnee
>Not the OTP of the series

>>100550743

Would, but writing is bollocks.
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>>100550743
Why not write it yourself?
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>>100550743
KC pls go
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>>100550934
I want to believve
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>>100550934

The real OTP is when all of the girls are deported because Best Girl messed up some paperwork because she wants Darling to herself.

He won her over with his amazing instant coffee that she craves.
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>>100550934
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>>100550743
Sounds interesting enough to write about breaking betas, but sadly I have 4½ projects under way currently and one more planned.
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>>100551136
Is this from an insect battle or something?
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Pure CC Centaur CYOA when?
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>>100551481
When you do it yourself anon-kun
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>>100551481

>the day /a/ forces the writer to take them to the glue factory
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>>100551481

When you stop being lazy and write it yourself.
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>>100551537
>You will never have a Dragon Waifu
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>>100550743
I'll do it after the Patriots vs Broncos game
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>>100551481
How about desperate CC dark elf?
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>>100551585
some anon said he was going to draw a dragon girl and a knight but he never delivered, not while i was here though
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>>100551481
Literally>>100550293
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>>100551857
That's not really about a pure 25 year old centaur.
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>>100551846
Here you go
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you're not scared of ghosts are you anon?
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>>100551986
Shit's 2spooky4me
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>>100551986
How do you fuck something that's intangible
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>>100548762
>>100549320
The fist thing I want to point out is i noticed "but it's not like you "x" anyway" was used a couple of times. Don't do that, it's irritating. Especially when it's written more than once. You really don't need to add those in ever anyways so I'd recommend getting out of that habit.

Second, comma splices EVERYWHERE. There were tons of places begging for a proper pause but instead left with just a meager comma. Some of the sentences went on for 3-4 wraps when they really didn't need to. Part of that reason may be because everything is so compact; which leads me to my last concern.

Third, this may or may not be my own pet peeve, but I hate it when dialogue is in the middle of a paragraph, and a giant paragraph at that. Separating dialogue and breaking up your paragraphs make things a lot more organized and easier to read which in turn, makes finding spelling errors(which I did notice a couple of) less of a pain to dig up and fix.

A great example imo is Anonymooses saga. I don't recall him ever making an extensively long paragraph over anything and if he has then it doesn't happen very often.

You can go back and look over it again if you want, but at some point the best thing for you to do is move on and continue writing. Also remember, try to get more advice from others over your work before coming to any single conclusion.
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>>100552055
didn't ghostbusters have a ghost blowjob scene?
or she can poltergeist your dick
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>>100552055

Have her possess people. Now that would be an interesting setup. No way to fuck that up. No wait, they're already doing that this season and they found a way.
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>>100552119
What?
>>100552110
>ghost blowjobs in ghostbusters
I.. don't really recall this happening.
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>>100552055
Decent story form a while back.
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>>100552110
http://youtu.be/HIZhBUXNwzw
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>>100552197
i was going to post it but >>100552267 did
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>>100552267
Wow, I completely forgot about that
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>>100551585
>You will never have a Lilim waifu
>You will never help provide /a/ with their monster waifus after mind-breaking, corrupting and transforming the lot of them into zealously devoted servants
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>>100552197

Don't act like you don't know. It's so bad but I'm watching it anyway.
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would you take her ectoplasm load
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>>100552468
The only shows I'm watching this season are KLK and Silver Spoon
Then again I don't even know what's airing
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>>100552442
>You will never purge a Lilim and her husband with your wandering mercenary Lizardman waifu and free all her slaves, who go off to find husbands
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>>100552500

>Ray, when a ghost asks if you want to fuck. You say YES
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>>100551759

>Unicorn admits to loving you, although you're apprehensive to the idea
>Decide to take the plunge and marry her, deflowering her and having sweet carnal love making for over ten rounds, leaving her with a stream of white dripping from her mare parts
>Head back to village
>Your childhood friend is there, angry at you for marrying a monster
>Sit down with her and try to talk things through, start to feel lightheaded. She slipped you something.
>Everything becomes blackness.
>End up having a wet dream, wake up to your friend riding you ferociously, her juices making it like dipping your member into fine oil
>She finally stops when you climax, forcing you down to the hilt, trying to impregnate herself
>Return to your unicorn wife, she asks you what happened. Remain quiet, so as to not hurt her feelings.
>She tells you she's feeling kind of amorous bashfully, and you wearily oblige. She's tighter than before, and it doesn't take long for you to pour your seed and energy into her.
>Fall asleep.
>Wake up the next morning, your wife now sporting two horns instead of one, her beautiful white hair now a black color.
>She's fingering your rapist while massaging her breasts, the slit near your morning wood
>She merely smiles at you and tells you "Have a good breakfast, darling~"
>MFW Bicorns will never be real
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>>100552085
I ahve to say paragraphs and commas are my biggest problem, normally I do screenplay stuff for my course and not in that format I suck at standard writing. Im going back and trying to fix my format every now and again, cutting down paragraphs now.

Going to carry on as well, Alice stuff up next, also thinking of doing a Monster Girl City thing, quite alot darker than this, with more world building. MC has been raped, torn up a mentally and physically ect. Just thinking of what to do for it but its in the pipeline, I keep getting ideas and writing then without thinking though.
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>>100551857
That's not about aCC Centaur.
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>>100552442
We need to have a word.
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>>100552689
I thought they only turn bicorn if you fuck another monster girl, not another hoomin.
Also
>non-monogamous relationship
Get the fuck outta here
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>>100552838
i want to believe
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>>100552689

>manage to avoid ever getting raped by a monstergirl
>get raped by a human after you get married

Never have I wanted THE LAW to be involved so much.
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>>100552893
didn't mean to reply
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>>100550129
actually not quite true. Horse do need to sleep laying down to catch deep REM. What horses in the wild to is sleep on their side while other horse stand guard. What you see sometimes is horses take breaks while standing, but this is nowhere near real sleep. Horse sleeping while standing is one of those urban legends


I used to ride a horse.
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Manticore guy here, finishing up story with obligatory smut

>Some time later
>you manage to carry manticore over the threshold of your hotel rooms door, her tail wrapped around your waist as you heaved her over to the bed
>”Hey, I’m not that heavy arnt I?” she said with her arms held behind your neck using you as support
>You wouldn’t dare tell your newlywed wife that, but she should at least stop eating all the junk food
>With your house still in need of repaired, the two of you opted for a lavish hotel in the upper part of town
>a single nights stay was enough to break your wallet, but with the reparations from the Monster Girl Association for the Advencement of Equal Rights, staying a night or two wouldn’t hurt
>You finally make your way to the bed and toss her on it, where she immediately sank into the soft mattress
>Your wedding ceremony was rather small, seeing as she had no friends or family to attend and you yourself didn’t invite many of your own guests
> But it was still a merry celebration as you wed your waifu
>she couldn’t help but blush the entire time as you slipped the ring on one of her fingers
>With the human marriage ceremony complete, now it was time to honor the manticore’s traditional marriage ceremony
>before you even remove your jacket, a coiled tail suddenly picks you up and tosses you on the bed
>the softness of the bed causes you to immediately sink but soon you feel her weight on your hips as she straddles you, your paws pinning your shoulders down as she stares hungrily at you
>”You know it was really embarrassing standing up there in this dress.” She said, a twisted smile on her redden face
>You knew, she was shaking the entire time
>”And I saw the way you kept staring at my cleavage too” she said as she slowly began to unbutton your shit and jacket and pull it off
>You knew that too, you made sure she would notice
>She had pulled your shoes off now, and was busy pulling off your pants
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>>100552838

ANY woman who you have sex with after the unicorn makes her into a Bicorn.

Then after the fact, she goes about to make the other woman part of the harem.
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>>100552969

Horses ribs puncture their lungs if they lay on their side for too long and they risk injuring other organs.
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>>100553065
>seeing as she had no friends

What happened to cheshire?!
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>>100553065

>”So I hope your prepared for the consequences” she said as she suddenly ripped your underwear off you, exposing your diamonds
>she seems transfixed on it, her eyes growing hungry as she gently grasped it with one of her paws
>it was interesting texture, like soft supple leather as she began to stroke it in her hands
>”Ah, theres already precum too.” She said as she suddenly leaned forward and licked the tip of your dick.
>your writhing only seemed to get her more excited
>She straddles you again, and you could feel the hot wetness of her lips caress your dick as she slowly rocks herself on it
>You ask her what happened to her underwear
>”I wasn’t wearing any. Theres no point if you were just going to rip them off afterwards. Look” she said as she lifts the front of her dress to you, exposing her white lace garter belt, stockings and naked wet pussy, her lips gliding up and down across your dick
>You cant help but push yourself against her at the erotic sight, and she laughs again as she pushes back
>she leans forward, enjoying your frustration as she began to circle her tongue around one of your exposed nipples, causing your to gasp loudly at the odd sensation
>You fight back, bringing your arms beneath her dress and grabbing her haunches, pulling her forward onto you, giving you enough room to finally impale her with your rod
>she instantly yelps, her mouth agape as she grows accustomed to you, her eyes fluttering in pleasure
>she was hot, the sensation much different than her tail
>she leans back, her face red as stares at you flustered
>”Your gonna pay for that” she said coyly as she raised her hips, leaving only your head inside her before slamming back down atop you
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>>100549053
Obligatory Superior Smile
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>>100553127
Hence why horse do not sleep very long on their sides, but they still need to lay down every once in a while.
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>>100553065
Do you have the full story somewhere?
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>>100553065
>>she couldn’t help but blush the entire time as you slipped the ring on one of her fingers
I wonder what kind of ring he had to get for it to fit on her huge paw
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>>100553194
>Superior
What a nice opinion of yours and I respectfully decline it.
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>>100553189

>the effect was exhilarating as she began to bounce atop you, taking the lead
>You hold on to her hips for dear life as she ruthlessly began to ride you, gyrating her hips in every possible motion at varying speeds
>You lean up, grabbing the front of her dress with your teeth and pulling them down, freeing her breasts
>you could feel every fold caress your dick, and she would always yelp whenever she took the entirety of your shaft
>the sight of a lustful manticore in a defiled wedding dress riding atop you is too much as you begin to feel yourself to reach your climax
>she seems to feel it too as she picks up speed
>”You better not come before me!” she says half commandingly, half in a lustful haze as she rides you faster
>you quickly reciprocate, pounding your hips into her, hilting her, and meeting her every thrust
>Eventually the added pleasure causes the two of you to climax at the same time, your fluids colliding together inside of her
>”Its hot…its really really hot” she said as she clutched her stomach as your continued to thrust into her, ensuring that every bit of your seed was left inside her
>The two of you collapse back on to the bed, breathing heavily while you clutched her within your arms
>You could feel her warm drool drip onto her chest as she was lost in a pleasurable trance
>after a few minutes of resting she wiped her mouth off, and pinned your shoulders again as she stared down at you
>”You’re my mine now husband.” She says laying claim to you
>You only smile as wrap your arms around her and claim her lips for yourself


The end. Will put on pastbin afterwards
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>>100553323

Not a big deal. People get custom cast rings all the time. Now the weight of it if it was gold, holy shit that's a lot of cash.
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Ooo a threesome with Cheshire?....I might have to write that....
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>>100553404

Fix your perspective when you do. You keep switching from present to past. Make it consistent one way or the other.
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>>100552085
>Third, this may or may not be my own pet peeve, but I hate it when dialogue is in the middle of a paragraph, and a giant paragraph at that.
Heh, yeah, I always stick with the 'dialogue is always a new paragraph' rule, only very rarely bending it in terms of if the same person says something again after narrative. By habit I manage to get a 2-3 line paragraph of narrative in between dialogue pieces so it doesn't look too flimsy, lacking orientation or character.

Then I see shit done in first person with three lines of no-orientation dialogue or any sort of class passing for best sellers.
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>>100553331
Well I think that your opinion is something that you as an individual are entitled to. And while I may disagree with what your opinion is, I respect your choice to hold said opinion and will not hold it against you, nor degrade your opinion.
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>>100553466

>Chesire is force feeding Manticore venom to people

oh god.
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>Manticore sitting on your dick
>Cheshire sitting on your face
>Kissing each other deeply
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>Be a Paladin
>Get a letter from a princess who complains about being alone inside a tower with a dragon
>Go fight the dragon in order to free the princess
>In the middle of the difficult battle, the princess stops you
>She says that she only wanted to complain about it to someone, not to solve it
Later, in a tavern
>Drunk, tell your friends about what happened
>''Hey, why don't you sometimes try it the other way around? Save the Dragon from the Princess!''
>And here you are, returning to the same tower you once left disappointed
I fucking love /tg/.
Fookin' Princesses is one of the greatest stories going on in /tg/ right now. Right after Peter Parker Quest.
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>>100553404
I think you could've maybe made more emphasis on how manticore's make their vagina the best most perfect vagina for the person who she keeps getting semen from.

A lot of writers seem to not focus unique traits of monster girls like them using the semen they get from their tail to make the perfect vagina and the wurm having to retract their under scales to get to their sensitive underside and vagina. Kind of a shame
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>>100553611
>ULTRA HI-RES D FREE DOWNLOAD
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>>100553709
>More than 15 chapters

I dropped that shit when the dragon started acting tsundere.
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>>100552267
>>100552055
Ghostbusters aside, there's also The Entity, which has ghost rape.
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>>100553404

http://pastebin.com/dPpxue6f

Pastebinned Full manticore story

Yeah its full of grammatical errors and one of these days maybe I'll go back and fix them all
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>>100553846
I'm still waiting for a new chapter, KOTR hasn't posted anything on /tg/ since last year.
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>>100553874
And of course that Scary Movie scene.
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>>100553846
Does the dragon turn into a girl or is it still a full blown dragon?
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>>100553709
>Someone already did the "Save the dragon from the princess" story
Fuck, there goes nearly five pages of work.
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>>100553323
>>100553442
Resizing rings isn't that difficult, but can be extremely costly to size up, depending on obvious factors. (Thickness of ring, how many sizes, what metal, etc)
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Retrying this I did the editing that was suggested and I also did some more to the story hope this makes you guys happier that the first try and the name is only for the pastebin list.

> You're a simple guy, average grades, average paying job, average background
> Want something more in your life, something un-average, something you can be proud of and find meaning in
> Feel its time for a change of scenery and move to a new bigger city, New Haven City
> Get a new job, you work as a vet for animals and monsters alike and enjoy your job
> One day you overhear a coworker talking about how the Ryu are considered gods and that there recently was a shrine erected for a group of Ryu and Shirohebi
> You make a mental note to check into that on the weekend
> You learn that the shrine is actually very close to your new and very nice apartment, being a doctor for monsters pays off, big time
> You decided to go and have a look, you were never that religious, raised as an agnostic you never really dove to deeply into religious maters, but you figure that a little investigation couldn't hurt
> As you walk up to the shrine you take in the landscaping, the shrine itself was on a very large plot of land with many trees and had a small section in the center with a crystal clear pond with lotus flowers floating on the shimmering surface and koi swimming around in a river that ran around but did not connect to the pond
> As you walk around the pond you see the buildings arranged in a U shape around the back half of the pond where there are steps into the the water and you can see a girl, no a Ryu lying on her back in the water and you cant help but be marveled at her beauty and you don't even notice the white serpent tail on the ground as you trip face first into the dirt
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>>100553404
I also want a manticore wife, why is the world so cruel
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>>100553966
It's a girl that shapeshifts into a mighty dragon (or a mighty dragon that shapeshfts into a girl. I'm not sure which
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>>100554105
Me too anon, me too
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Just a few words of encouragement to all you writefags:

I couldn't write a decent story of any length or coherency if my life dependet on it. So hats off to you and rock on.
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>>100553065
>that picture

Man, she looks happy, but also sad.

It's like she's smiling because she got invited to a wedding, but shit, there's an undercurrent of sadness because she knows no one will ever marry her.
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>>100554105
I wish I could have one as well.
>>100554156
I would marry the her in an instant.
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>>100554156
Anon pls, she's smiling because she's the one getting married. I don't want it to be just invited ;_;
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>>100554110
It's the latter.
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>>100554080

> As you walk around the pond you see the buildings arranged in a U shape around the back half of the pond where there are steps into the the water and you can see a girl, no a Ryu lying on her back in the water and you cant help but be marveled at her beauty and you don't even notice the white serpent tail on the ground as you trip face first into the dirt
> as you walk around the pond you see the buildings arranged in a U shape around the back half of the pond where there are steps into the the water and you can see a girl, no a Ryu lying on her back in the water and you cant help but be marveled at her beauty and you don't even notice the white serpent tail on the ground as you trip face first into the dirt
> "Ouch that hurt" you say rubbing your nose and checking for blood you look behind you to see a pearly scaled Shirohebi starring at you seemingly both angry and worried
> "Are you okay sir?" she asks offering you a hand
> You say yes and take her and to help yourself up and through your stupid luck right into her soft, bouncy, and large chest
> You quickly remove your self from her cleavage (reluctantly, you would have loved to stay there) only to be meet with a strong smack to the face and a red faced girl "what is wrong with you, pervert" she leans forward anger and embarrassment in her golden eyes
> It is at this time that you can clearly see the sword in her other hand and you begin to stammer and back up towards the pond at an fast rate as she slithers forward
> " I'm sorry i didn't mean to, i eh um, you just offered me your hand, and er i didn't watch where i was getting up to, I'm truly sorr..." you are cut off as you slip backwards and tumble down the bank to the lake slamming into the water and cracking your head on a rock
> You start to fade out as you see the Shirohebi and the Ryu hovering over you
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>>100554239
Can you imagine what's going through her head? Damn, that'd be depressing. Full of "I'll never get to wear this dress again" and "I won't ever be the one sending out invites."

And then maybe she goes home and cries for a bit while trying on a wedding dress her mother gave her.
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>>100552689
bicorn is best waifu. my harem does need a top bitch
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>>100554457
I forgot,

do bicorns actually have sex with their husbands or do they just watch?
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>>100554156
That's because nobody likes rapists
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>>100553969
>Someone already did the "Save the dragon from the princess" story
>Fuck, there goes nearly five pages of work.
Dude, that concept is like 10 years old. Just finish your story, no need to get bent out of shape.
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>>100554380
Wow, bad end already?
You might want to proofread a little more, because there are a coupled of lowercase i's, and a couple of places where punctuation is needed
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>You will never waltz to La Danse Macabre with a Wight and teach the little skeleton girls how to dance.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=71fZhMXlGT4
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More like year of the WHOREse am I right?
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>>100554386
Maybe if she wasn't such an abomination, she could be happy
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>>100553709
I have not heard of this before? Link to pastebin please?
Although I have a question, it's not the weird sudo-furry type thing /tg/ does a bunch is it? Like, the dragongirl has a mostly human form right? Not "it's just a dragon with tits".
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>>100554080

> "Ouch that hurt" you say rubbing your nose and checking for blood you look behind you to see a pearly scaled Shirohebi starring at you seemingly both angry and worried
> "Are you okay sir?" she asks offering you a hand
> You say yes and take her and to help yourself up and through your stupid luck right into her soft, bouncy, and large chest
> You quickly remove your self from her cleavage (reluctantly, you would have loved to stay there) only to be meet with a strong smack to the face and a red faced girl "what is wrong with you, pervert" she leans forward anger and embarrassment in her golden eyes
> It is at this time that you can clearly see the sword in her other hand and you begin to stammer and back up towards the pond at an fast rate as she slithers forward
> " I'm sorry i didn't mean to, i eh um, you just offered me your hand, and er i didn't watch where i was getting up to, I'm truly sorr..." you are cut off as you slip backwards and tumble down the bank to the lake slamming into the water and cracking your head on a rock
> You start to fade out as you see the Shirohebi and the Ryu hovering over you
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>>100554669
Completely human form.

Dragons can shapeshift, and she has the shittiest harem archetype personality as well.
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>>100554518
They have sex with their husbands, and encourage him to have sex with others.
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>>100554080
It's better than last time at least. No grammatical errors that I can see.
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>>100554518
it doesn't say specifically but i don't see why they wouldn't join in. a threesome with bicorn waifu is best anyways, the other waifu can work the front while you work the bicorn's backside
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>>100554575
>You will never buy a giant furnace to warm your undead cold waifu before making love with her
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>>100554720
Why are we rito, how'd we even become a doctor
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>>100554884
thanks anon.
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>tfw not enough work of your waifu
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>>100555024
TFW do it urself figment
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forgot picture
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>>100554894

They do join in, Bicorns go out of their way to make you a harem because the mixture of spiritual and demonic energy is a cocktail of delight for them.

Basically they have you fuck your other wives first, then ram that mare pussy onto your member and milk you for all it's worth while trying to bear your children.

In the end, it's possible you end up with a giant harem of wives and daughters all willing to service you, and your Bicorn wife there, her pussy readily awaiting your dick.
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>>100554720
See >>100554572
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>>100554669
http://pastebin.com/u/Shadow_XXVII
And just in case:
http://suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/archive.html?searchall=Fookin%27+Princesses
>>100554748
She isn't really trundere anymore. She was tsundere only at first. Now she'smore open about her feelings with Sir Knight.
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>>100554720
>You say yes and take her and to help yourself up and through your stupid luck right into her soft, bouncy, and large chest
You forgot to put the H in Hand there.
Also
> " I'm sorry i didn't mean to, i eh um, you just offered me your hand, and er i didn't watch where i was getting up to, I'm truly sorr..."
You forgot to capitalize "I" after the first "I'm".
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>>100555123
>http://pastebin.com/u/Shadow_XXVII
Cool thanks.
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>>100555078
I swear her thumbnail makes it look like she has a dog shit on her cleavage.
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>>100555172
I noticed that this is my first time doing this so i may ask for a little forgiveness here and there.
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>>100550934
As much as I want it to it's never going to happen. She got shafted in her date chapter so Centorea could get more time.

The only current possibilities right now are Miia, Centorea, or some bullshit harem end. Every other girl gets basically no real interaction with darling.
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>>100555244
Fuck you, I can't unsee it now
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>>100553065
>before you even remove your jacket, a coiled tail suddenly picks you up and tosses you on the bed

*pomf*
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>>100548425
A-are you not going to continue this?
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>>100555393
>Bestgirl buried under a mountain of frilly things because she doesn't need to show off

As it should be
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>>100555024
I know that feel bro.
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>Pluck the weeds in your yard
>This comes up

Congratz anon. You're now a mandragora daddy.
Take good care of her and make sure she never, EVER screams.
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>>100554720

> You awaken on the floor of a nicely decorated room and lean forward only to have a sharp pain in the back of your skull
> "Shit, what the hell!" you scream clutching your head and finding it is wrapped in bandages
> You begin to look at your unfamiliar surroundings it looks like an old Japanese style house and you see a lake outside
> "Oh yea, the shrine." your head throbs as you remember slamming into the into the rock
> Just then you hear a sliding of the door you turn to see the same Shirohebi that you tripped over peeking in from behind the door
> "Oh, so your up its about time you sleepy head." she smiles warmly at you and blushes, you don't know why though
> "Um yea, I hope you don't mind me asking but, what your name?" you say tilting your head to the side as to get a look at her from behind the door
> "Oh my name is Yukiko, Yukiko Amagi. Might as ask the name of the man who tripped over my tail, touched my chest and has been sleeping in my room for the past three days?" she says blushing
> "My names Anon, WAIT THREE DAYS!" you scream and clutch your head in pain as you try to get up
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>>100555937
And then they all fucked
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>>100555994
I'm getting there don't worry anon.
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>>100555937

>"Why would I wait for three days", said the Ryu, shocked that I would shout such a statement at her
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>>100555758
Seeing all the criticism I honestly got a little bummed out, you guys are right and I don't want my shitty smut to pollute these threads, so I've decided to stop writing until I feel confident in my ability to write grammer goodly.


plus I woke up with neck twisted up and right now every movement leaves me in a world of pain


maybe later today after reading up on my uses of commas and other grammar related issues I'll give it another shot.
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Reminder that nothing will transpire between any of the other girls and Dollerham in 23.
Even if they do it'll just be them shouting their name for Darling and standing there like a Bunch of Papis (TN: Papi means Retard)
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>>100555937
>Yukiko Amagi
You like Persona, don't you anon?
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>>100556161
I hope it's nothing serious, get well soon.
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>>100555393

>Dullahan
>Wielding a scythe, has Kayako level hair

Oh look, she's copypasta'd from 12Beast.
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>>100556344
Yes anon, yes i do can you tell who i formed a relationship with also Yukio means snow so i thought it would fit with the white scales.
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>>100555937
3 days out cold would mean he has brain damage.
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>>100556596
Don't worry. She gave him a cure potion or cast a spell or some other shit.
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>>100556161
Hope you get better,even if everyone ends up hating your stories I'll still be your fan
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>>100556683
No anon.
Being a good author means that you don't glaze over your plot holes.
You have to find a better way to explain them.
Either that, or the MC could actually have some brain damage, so now he has an excuse for why he's retarded.
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>>100556161
Ow, then yeah, while I won't say wait for the absolute best conditions to write, cause you'll never get them, that's really not a state to be worrying about writing in anyway. That's cool though, striving to improve is good. Really still recommend using MS Word or something to help run its own grammar highlights. A bit higher tier than commas but while getting passive voice warnings pisses me off no end, fixing them does give it a better flow.

I don't know how good free alternatives are but when you have Cecaelia pirate booty, life is free at least have some sort of up-to-date auto-proofer to assist with basic highlight warnings.
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>>100557052
>Being a good author means that you don't glaze over your plot holes.
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>>100556161
Being able to take criticism is an important part of improving.
I'm not trying to be insulting, just looking at where you can improve.
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>>100557120
So...
Are you trying to prove me right?
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>>100555393
Thought I'd try a different approach.
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Two weeks until Year of the Horse. Which centaur doujin will you be fapping to?
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>>100555937
> Yukiko comes rushing in "Oh no are you okay? Where dos it hurt?" she grabs your head and pulls it to her chest and hold you there examining your head and the bandages
> You calm down and say your fine as she slowly releases you from her hold blushing heavily
> At that moment you hear a girlish giggle come from behind you as you see the Ryu from earlier slithering up to you with a soft smile on her face
> she quickly slides up next to you and looking at you for a moment smiles widely and hugs you tightly "Oh your finally away husband, I'm so glad your ok!" she says holding you in here cleavage tight enough for you to begin to suffocate
> she notices and let you go you look at her for the first time actually seeing what she looks like she has blue hair with a lighter blue snake like body and eyes as pure and purple eyes that gleam like amethysts in the light
> "Husband?" is the only word your able to say as you stare into her eyes, quickly snapping out of it you look at her and ask "What do you mean husband?"
> "well you went into the pond silly! that's the customary way to propose to a Ryu and i accepted and took you here to help bandage you up with Yukikos help!" she says happily smiling and looking at Yukiko who blushes
> "Well of course I would help mistress Nami, he tripped over my tail so he also proposed to me" she says blushing and hiding her face
> you just sit there dumbfounded by the situation
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>>100557299
None of them.
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>>100557299
All of them.
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>>100557237
>Tio blusing
slut
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>>100557299
I've already begun.
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>>100557357
>"Oh your finally away husband, I'm so glad your ok!"

Should be "Oh you're finally awake husband, I'm so glad your ok!"
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>>100557430
>Tio
>A Slut
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>>100557299
The ones with NTR
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>>100557522

Should be.
>Oh! You're finally awake husband. I'm so glad you're okay.
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>>100557570
There's no horse NTR
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>>100557608
I know exactly one.
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>>100557522
I'm sorry didn't see that my bad man.

But yea it should say that.
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>>100557591
You see this guy?
Listen to him
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>>100557561
Tio is a nice lady, who like all the girls in EMG, just need love.
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For those that missed it yesterday, I conjured up some more pure smut of Salamander and Sphinx from Escape from Monstercity.

http://pastebin.com/5LHkq8XN

As usual, any feedback is appreciated.
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>>100557357
>"Oh your finally away husband, I'm so glad your ok!"
I'm sure you meant to write 'awake' there.
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>>100557591
>Oh! You're finally awake, husband? I'm so glad you're okay!
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>>100557677
Exactly, you speak sense anon
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>>100557677

>Those breasts

Jesus Christ it's like she's smuggling Big Berthas.
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>>100557591
>awake, husband.
Just comma, not finally transformed into 'Awake Husband'.
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>>100557677
Tits
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>>100557680
>any feedback is appreciated
Shit's hot as fuck nigga.
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>Dat jump forward into shitshow
>followed by "Jesus, how'd we get here?" cliffhanger

Moose you cock.
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>>100557798
It's like she's smuggling bags of sand
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>>100557763
There's definitely more energy in that. She does seem pretty spastic.
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>>100557828
Still nothing compared to that Minotaur.
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>>100557680
I'm curious, is Inet's lower half comprised of two lion legs, or an entire lion body?
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>>100557623
Fucking ahobaka
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>>100557961

>Minotaur asks you to milk her
>You oblige
>"I'm feeling a bit amorous"
>That feel when you'd die from breast smothering and/or snu snu, whichever came first
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>>100558029
100% lion pussy
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>>100557677
Did the new chapter come out yet?
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>>100558087
Gotcha.
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>>100558087
Fda certified
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>>100557357
>blue snake like body and eyes as pure and purple eyes that gleam like amethysts in the light
Huh? Also really? Using names of existing characters from different franchises? This is fucking fanfic tier
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>>100558087
Why are furries part of monstergirl threads?
Anyone?
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>>100549846
I'm a cutthroat asshole for keeping appearances.
My soulmate could fall from the heavens and I would not lift a finger to help her in the slightest if it meant I was being watched.
Then again pride also takes a foothold and I find myself to be one of those people that would never sully myself with an abomination.
Perhaps it is best left to the fields of fancy~.
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>>100558166
nope just a preview of the next chapter
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>>100558182
They are all fanfics of MGE universe.
And they are ALL fanfiction.net tier.

i.e dont belong here, and they havent been tolerated until recently so i dont know from where all of you cancerous faggots come from, but it would be really nice if you adapted to 4chan or just fucked off back.

I bet you are muslims as well.
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Would a Mantis?
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>>100558076
Why not just taking a nap between two bean bags?
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>>100558344
How does she even dress herself?
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>>100558076
>die from breast smothering and/or snu snu
Why not both?
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>>100558166
yes, it's out. the scanlators just contacted your isp to block all content related to chapter 22 from you.
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>>100558395
This thread is for monster girls, not monster boys
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>>100558402
Careful anon, americans dont understand sarcasm.
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>>100558373
She has hands in that pic one is behind her head
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>>100558394

She's much taller than a human, and I doubt that while she's destroying your pelvis with those ludicrously tight vaginal walls that she'd be able to smother your face with her giant pillows.

If anything, all you'd manage to do is lick her rock hard abs and cum so fiercely that you may or may not knock her up before dying.
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>>100558477
They are monster boys?
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>>100558556
Stop speaking for us, you midget.
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>>100558478
>americans
But i'm Canada,
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>>100558611

Now don't start that again.

>beatlevulture.jpg
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>>100558556
Why not just be on top?
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>>100558611
That image is, yes
Do a google image search if you don't believe me
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>>100558629
Hi Canada, im Dad.
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>>100558611
Of course there are goddamn-
Urgh. Look, you do realize that perverted girls also exist who are straight?
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>>100558685
Can you stop a cowgirl from going cowgirl?
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>>100558344
Would a mantis shrimp.
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>>100558477
You allow furries.
Thats a further stretch than male girls.
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>>100558769
male...girls?
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Pastebin is updated. I'll get to writing the intro for next time. Might be a few days before I can continue.

http://pastebin.com/u/YBA
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>>100558848
Traps
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>>100558744
I can, dunno about you.
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>>100558769
Both furries and monsterboys are shit.
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>>100558907
>I can
You are a terrible lier
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>>100558898
Then just say traps.
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>>100558917
Yet one is allowed while the other isnt, despite furries being further distanced to monstergirls than monsterboys, aliens or robots.
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>>100558685
oh god. I want to oil up those abs.
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>>100558711
>Girls

I don't know what kind of monster girl you are talking bro
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>>100558981
I did, it was the other anon who did not
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>>100559005
Since when are furries allowed here?
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>OH ANON, YOUR JUICE IS SO DELICIOUS
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>>100559055
Those juice boxes are kind of expensive
It'd be better to buy it in bulk containers and give her a sippy cup.
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>>100559103
I know right.
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>>100558972
Have her on her hands and knees on the floor, stand on the bed, and prepare for snusnu.
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>>100559055
That must be some fucking good juice.
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>>100559048
Horse/Lion pussy.
Since some time.. two years ago.
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>>100559055
>>100559055
cleaning her fallen feathers must be a pain
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>>100559142
Go live in a farm with Yennefer already, Geralt.
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>>100558344
would she eat you
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>>100559323
>not with Ves (Roche path) or the succubus (Ioverth path)
You got shit taste.
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>>100558711
I think he more meant the image than in general. It's rather chibi, has that headdress thing and throwing a hissy fit. I can see it now that it's been pointed out but eh.

>>100558769
>>100559048
By this shitposting definition, any monster girl that isn't basic cosplay tier is a furry since not generic human body. Passive-aggressive crying about it is also more obnoxiously pathetic than any horsefucker.
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>>100559352
Only the head of your dick.

That means she sucks a mean dick. No vore.
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>>100558344
why would i want a girl that would eat me after doing her?
i'd rather a kitsune
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>>100559372
I'm talking about the books, man, not the game.
I still haven't played them because my toaster can't run them.
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>>100559010
>>100558685

>Walk into the forge, notice Minotaur hard at work
>She's working in the nude, the sweat rolling down her body in the amber light and getting caught on her muscles before rolling down
>Your eyes gravitate to her behind, you can't help but notice the glistening beads of sweat on her lower lips
>Her hammering has stopped and she's looking at you, smiling softly at your raging hard on
>It's painful enough to remind you of your first erections in the beginning of puberty
>She simply asks for you to "help her" and lifts her cow tail up lewdly, her lips opening slightly and wetly
>It's just too much for you and you jab your member into her tight and wet hole, getting a rather surprised "moo~" out of her
>You can't help but grasp those glorious buttocks at you lick her back, she calls you a pervert and tries to continue her work, but the stimulation from your constant thrusts gets the better of her and she stops completely
>She stands up, her face flushed red hot from your shagging, and merely spreads her legs before straddling you and teasing you further by gently sliding your "sword" along her sheathe
>"I hope you're ready, moo~"
>TFW she proceeds to snu snu your brains out on the forge floor in cowgirl position, her udders hanging in front of your face
>Unable to resist, you latch on like a newborn babe and suckle at her milk, it's refreshing and warm
>The stimulus is too much for your partner and she clenches down HARD, almost enough to break off your dick, it feels like.
>You can't take it and explode within her, the hot sticky white stuff spilling out a little from her brown slit.
>She smiles and gets up, telling you that she'd like it if you came back again to "help with my work"
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Hi /a/.

So seeing as I'm taking off work due to not being able to move / having no voice, I've got some time now to scan in the new chapter of MM.

Also, there are two Hitomis this month, and a new CW. MM is on break next month.

I know you've all been spoiled, but if you'd like, I thought about doing a stream while I scan and/or TL. Is anyone interested?
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>>100559624
Stream?
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>>100559624
That would be great. I know you've heard this a million times already, but you're the best. Thanks.
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>>100559624
yeah sure why not.
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>>100559624
Do it do it do it do it
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>>100559624
IT BEGINS
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>>100559624
What, exactly, makes the stream interesting to watch?
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>>100559780
It's like an artist paint a picture. The beauty is in the process
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>>100559624
>Dollarham revealed on very last page
>MM is on break next month
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>>100559780
why did you put comas in that sentence?
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>>100559624
Sure, go ahead?
How was your skiing vacation(?), by the way? I'm asking because there's little to no snow over here and I'm jealous as fuck.
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>>100559413
>implying all monstergirls have animal reproduction system
Oh please.
You dont even know the meaning of shitposting, or of monstergirls.
You just wank to whatever isnt entirly human and call it a day, even when it really is about fucking an animal rather than a human with strange appendages.
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>>100559840
But she isnt creating anything.
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>>100559841
>Darling is kill
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>>100559849
Because commas can be put in that sentence and it stresses the word exactly, possibly indicating that the person saying it does not believe that it would be interesting to watch said stream.
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>>100559780
You can masturbate with her voice.
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>>100559962

She's only threatening him. Are you high?
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>>100560013

Where're the raws at, anyway?
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>>100560001
>So seeing as I'm taking off work due to not being able to move / having no voice
>having no voice
Try again.
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>>100549846
Just imagine MGs in 3D. They would be cock-hungry bitches, willing to cheat on you as soon as a larger dick comes along. And they take all your money of course.

Would make pact with evil deity so i can keep slaying them for all eternity.
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>>100560065
DAMNIT ANON

LET ME FUCK WITH THEM
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>>100560076
>MGs are real
>they are worse than any 3DPD bitch
>Thor comes down to smite the evil monsters

To glory!
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>>100560064
>>100560065
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In >>100560064 he is dead, but in >>100560065
his head is in a notch on the blade....what is real?
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>MFW People actually think Dullahan is the D

It's Death. The head in her hand is a Red Herring since she's a Skeleton and can do that shit.
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>>100560065
Darling better have a jar of dirt.
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>>100560120
You don't get to fuck with me unless you pay the $80 like everyone else
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>>100560143
death fears my dullahan
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>>100560187
Does that mean she'll be flat chested?
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>>100559968
Yeah sure. If you don't know how to speak proper English, or you are literally retarded.
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>>100560187
Death doesn't go in for that sort of thing, nor is he petty enough to send threatening letters
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>>100560064
>>100560065
Which one is legit?
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>You will never burp inside a Manticore's tail pussy
>You will never have a harpy tickle your asshole with her tail feathers
>You will flatulate inside a goo girl's body and watch the bubbles rise
>You will never be taken to a Mermaid cave and be viciously raped to death for their amusement
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>>100560303
>nor is he petty enough to send threatening letters
>he
>implying
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>>100552055
tangibility depends on concentration i guess
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>>100560303
Dullahans arent petty enough to do that either, but Okayado will disregard anything in favour of fanservice.

Dullahan will join the harem, mark my words.
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>>100560391
That manga was weird
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>>100560293
Uh, what the fuck are you on about? You realize that it's perfectly fine to use commas like that and you are just making yourself look retarded, right? I mean, you're just trolling, correct?
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>>100560065
That scythe would be pretty fucking useless. it hit something and the blade would snap off and the notch. unless the blade was folded over a thousand times.
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>>100560398
>Dullahan will join the harem, mark my words.
Of course she will. Darling will seduce her.
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>>100558888
Ok. Thanks for the update bro.
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>>100560398
All original girls will join the harem, mark my words.
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>>100560341

>You will never venture into a thick jungle and meet this Lizardwoman
>She will never take you back to her temple-city and have ritualistic sex with you
>She will never carve out your heart with her foot talons, her stomach distended from her pregnancy
>You will never see her birth your child's egg in your last fading moments of life, your death an offering to the Serpent God
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>>100560477
>Science
>Monstergirls
Pick one
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>>100560481
He doesn't seduce shit. They just fall head-over-heels for him for no real reason.

Such is the plot of a harem manga.

I remember thinking it'd be a romantic comedy between a man and his lamia. How foolish I was.
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>>100560452
Im not saying they cant be used like that. What I am saying is that if you spoke that out aloud you would sound like a fucking idiot.
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>>100560511
Wait, that means...

Holstaurus girl
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>>100560558
>He doesn't seduce shit. They just fall head-over-heels for him for no real reason.
That's what he wants you to think
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>>100560540
both
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>>100560481
>harem protag
>seducing anyone
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>>100560529
You should ask permission from the Slann before doing that
Might save you from the ritual death
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>>100560303

What if it's not a threatening letter.

What if it was actually a friendly offer of assistance.
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>>100560477
most scythes would be pretty fucking useless as weapons, actual war scythes look quite different from the farming tool
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>>100560591
Wait, what? Are you being serious? You gotta be taking the piss out of me. No one is stupid enough to seriously believe that.
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>>100560558
What are you talking about? Darling seduces pretty much every woman he encounters. Each time he charms a Monster Girl with his masculinity and charm.

Hell, I'd probably go gay for Darling. Or rather be corrupted into a Monster Girl and fuck Darling senseless.

>TFW You will never be corrupted into a Monster Girl and fuck Darling senseless.
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there is not enough of best girl here
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>>100560622
of course he does
cause its true.
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>>100560652
Well yeah, the blade is angled back towards the
user. You'd be more likely to hurt yourself than an enemy.

But the scythe is symbolic and death isn't a warrior so whatever
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>>100560614
of course
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>>100560677
I agree, there isn't nearly enough Rachnee
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>>100560677
>motivational
Just no.
Nope.
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>>100560646

>Asking a Slann for anything
>When they literally communicate telepathically in indecipherable skin pigmentation changes and mathematic sequences

Why do you do this to me, Anon.
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>>100560558
>Being this mad of a beta
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>>100560677
>motivational
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>>100560631
>tfw Fran will forever be trapped in that boat forever
>tfw it will never be animated
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>>100560622
Darling is so dense that all girls are pulled towards him.
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>Alice will never force feed you her favorite foods because she wants to taste them on your semen
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>>100560871
>forever be trapped forever
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>>100560677
>Making motivationals
Airtight that's fucking it. I've got to draw the line somewhere. Fuck you and your retarded aspie friends. I'm out.
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End is lewd, not really descriptive because I don't know how to write that shit

>be you, spooky skeleton mode beta nerd, no gf etc.
>usually you would be spending Fridays on your laptop watching animu or some shit
>have cool popular friend, he insists on taking you out this Friday
>has been joking around for a while now that he wants to set you up with a monster girl
>friend is usually sarcastic, never take him seriously
>friend has been this way since he hooked up with lamia gf
>you obviously prefer 2D, but hey, you heard that monster gfs can be pretty devoted
>this time your friend is serious, takes you to a local bar to meet a friend of his gf
>red flag: friend's gf used to be a gang member, the Tunnel somethings, you can't remember
>well, what's the worst that could happen?
>bar is pretty crowded, mostly monster girls by the looks of it
>notice a group of kitsunes in the corner
>hey your friend must be trying to set you up with a cute fox girl or something
>"Look over there Anon, she's sitting at the bar, near the end"
>the bar? It's pretty crowded, I can't see--
>she's some kind of huge muscular woman with a single demonic horn
>this is not my kitsune waifu
>friend starts telling you about her
>single, interested in dating, bawdy sense of humor, rather short temper
>apparently has some history of violence, was involved in gang warfare when she was younger, seems to have mellowed out now but still engages in the occasional bar brawl
>also a little racist, still uses the term "no-horn"
>why are you telling me this?
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>>100560725
Whos gonna kill Death?
Even if someone manages to defeat him, he can just opt to NOT reap himself.

>>100560802
>implying you arent the mad beta for liking a story where the protag just gets swarmed by girls despite being a virgin
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>>100560901
>Darling is so dense that all girls are pulled towards him.
the comparison is clever,
but kurusu actually isn't dense, he's aware of miaa and cerea's affection
he just can't act on it cause of butt pounding prison or getting killed during sex.
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>>100560871
even if she dies there, they can bring her back, no need to be sad
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>>100560924
Shiieeeeet
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>>100561011

He won't get killed during sex so much as whoever he has sex with first is his guaranteed wife.

Hence why Rachnee tried to have a "rendevous" with him, she was trying to get ahead of the competition.
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>>100561011
He would already have started dating Miia if his house wasnt filled with Team Cockblock.
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>>100560945
>basically, you do no want to get on her bad side
>fuck this I'm out of here
>try desperately to find an excuse to go home, but your friend will have none of it
>puts his hands on your shoulders
>"Come on, I already told her about you, she really wants to meet you"
>he pushes you towards the oni, you are mentally prepared to make a break for it
>too late, friend has already called for her attention
>"Hey is this that Anon you were telling me about? Wow, you really do look like a wimp"
>um, what has friend been saying about you?
>"Oni here likes to joke, she's a really funny person! :)"
>friend sits left of the oni, leaving the only other open seat directly to her right
>looks like she's been here a while, thoroughly drunk, keeps pounding them back without batting an eye
>H-hi, I'm Anon, n-nice to meet you..
>can hardly keep the fearful spaghetti in, all the while oni looks you up and down with a bemused expression
>she's fucking ripped, taller and stronger than your beanpole self, could probably kill you with one hand
>suddenly takes your arm
>"How loud would you scream if I snapped your arm in two, like this?"
>makes a crunching sound with her voice, followed by boisterous laughter
>flash a terrified look in your friend's direction, only now he's pretending not to pay attention
>"Haha, just messing with you no-horn"
>"h-ha.. yeah.."
>screams internally
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>>100559624
I would be interested in a stream
If I knew what the link was
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>>100560993
>Whos gonna kill Death?
her coworkers probably
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>>100560904
That seems a pretty round about way to make my semen taste like semen
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>>100561115
>He would already have started dating Miia
More like marrying.
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>>100560677
shes a a foot bigger than me...is that what normal women feel like around me
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Sorry it's taking me so long; on top of moving slowly, I had to get some breakfast, as well as some medicine, and get all the pages ready to scan.

If you give me 30-45 minutes, I'll start streaming.

Spoiler for MM:
There were two letters and two Ds.

>>100559875
It was good! It was the first time I'd ever skied, but it was really fun. I went for about 8 hours the first day and 6 hours the second. Everything hurts so bad right now, and I got sick to boot. At least I get work off to catch up on manga stuff.
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>>100561145
>despite her sadistic sense of humor, she really is pretty funny and easy to talk to, ignores (relishes?) your spaghetti mannerisms, you start warming up to her
>plus dat body, still very feminine with large full breasts, despite the fact that she looks stronger than most men
>she starts telling you tales of bad-assedry, e.g. one time she punched some centaur's lights out, ended up getting in a fight with a whole centaur clan, some of them were packing heat but it's the oni way never to use a weapon besides your bare hands
>she's puffing her chest out, it's like some old man telling war stories, but it's clear she's trying to impress you
>you are both impressed and terrified
>this whole time you haven't been drinking much, you're not much of a drinker, still feel pressured to take sips every once and a while
>oni girl notices, was that a glint in her eye?
>"Anon, I like you, but I can't respect anyone who can't handle their booze"
>starts ordering more drinks, clearly intending to have some kind of competition
>"I mean, if you can't out drink me, who knows what will happen to you?"
>would stand up and leave, but still considering the possibility of going home with one less arm
>"friend" is nowhere in sight
>deep breath, fight or flight mode activated
>already feeling tipsy after one drink, meanwhile oni looks basically as drunk as when you met her
>she has been drinking the entire time
>a few drinks in, you pass out
>oni slings you over her shoulder, which would usually invite strange looks anywhere else but is treated as commonplace here
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>>100561302
>There were two letters and two Ds
The fuck is this.
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>>100561302
Also, summaries for this month's chapters:

Hitomi 5: A girl dealing with her invisibility.
Hitomi 6: Hitomi's semi-abusive tsundere male coworker with six arms.

CW: Class Rep and the girl who has a crush on her go to hang out / on a date. Then, the trio discusses historical happenings.
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>>100561115
>Push Cerea down stairs to break her leg; she goes off to the glue factory
>Leave a teflon pan on the burner to kill off Papi
>Flush Suu down the toilet
>Mero can probably stay since she just masturbate while you and Miia fuck
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>>100561302
The plot thickens...
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>>100561319
>takes you back to her appartment, throws you on her bed as if you were a ragdoll
>you are half-concious now, she rips you jeans off without much effort
>wait, she's naked, what's going on
>s-sex? b-but you were saving your virginty for that special someone
>still, erection
>"You no-horns are so easy, you just can't resist my pussy can you?"
>she's pinned you now, you're basically helpless
>[X] Struggle
>"Your resistance just makes me wetter"
>rape scene
>you wake up in some strange bed, your hips ache like fire
>she has you in a headlock, your face pressed into her chest
>she's snoring loudly
>endure it for a while, eventually she wakes up
>"Morning, kid. Hey let's go out for some breakfast, I'm starving"
>gently pats you on the head, she's extremely tender with you, despite the fact that she could snap your neck in this position
>pulls you in for a kiss
>"I like you a lot, kid. Go out with me. I'll keep you around for a long time."
>moral of the story: in the US, millions of men are taken advantage of like this all the time. If you drink socially, be careful of your company, and always have a friend nearby to watch out for you
>end
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>>100561302
>two
Get to feeling better TF.
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>spoiler
Holy shit
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>>100561378
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>>100561302
>There were two letters and two Ds.
so i was right... it will be the Director and the Dullahan will kill him
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>>100561203
War aint gonna do shit.
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>>100561415
How do we deal with the spider?
Fire as usual?
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>>100561451
Don't worry, we find out about both D's this chapter.
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>>100548049
In all seriousness wouldn't she burn her back with the heater?
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>>100561302
>that spoiler
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>>100561541
How about you stop spoilering our fun, you goddamn pedophile witch?
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>>100561421
>rape scene
Wow, you couldn't even have described it beyond that.
Fuck you
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>>100561421
I dont drink, so I couldn't like her and then I would go for those kitsunes.

[X]Touch fluffy tail
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>>100561541

Doppel and DUlla?
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>>100561095
Rachnee would have gone through with it too if Cerea wasn't a cockblocking prude
>I'm too uptight to try anything so nobody else is allowed to either
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>>100561526
Put a lock on the outside of the attic door when she ain't around.
Then when she is, throw a couple bug bombs up there and lock it shut for a day or two.
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>>100561302
Good to know you had fun.
How the fuck can it be -20 degrees celsius outside but just barely enough snow to cover the ground?

>That spoiler
I'm telling ya, the first one's obviously a Dullahan. The second one's Dad.
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>>100561653

She's a cockblocking prude because her husband was basically about to be raped by a spider he had already been kidnapped by.

Hell, had Smith not shown up in the kidnapping chapter i'm fairly sure Rachnee would've fucked Darling.
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>>100561734
she was just teasing him back when she kidnapped him, she only went for sex when she found out he was looking for someone to marry
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>>100561723
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>>100561595
Cant fap on your own?
Stop encouraging fanfiction.net cancer.
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>>100561701
>you will never spray raid on Rachnera
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>>100561796
>>100561734
also, forgot to add
>husband
u wot m8
he's more of a leader and a master to her than a husband, he never fucking married her
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>>100561882
It'd be nice to take that haughty bitch down a peg. Whenever she gets out of line you mace her with Raid.
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>>100561734
>her husband
Yeah, Darling is Miia's.
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>>100561882
>yfw insecticides don't do jack shit to spiders
you won't kill my waifu that easily
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>>100561587
How about you don't read spoilers then?
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>>100561964
>>100561882
>not fire
Raid wont work on her.
She needs to feel the burn.
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>>100548049
>Year of the horse is the worst year edition
We brony nao?
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>>100562022
make me
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>>100561932

Becoming a centaur's master is basically like marrying them, Smith said. Hence why Centorea takes EVERYTHING about Darling so seriously, because she wants him to only have that mare pussy.
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>>100560677
Fuck off.
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>Find deep dark cave
>Full of bones
>Stumble over rock in the dark
>Become tangled in web
>Spidergirl ties you up, fangs glistening
>She asks you your name
>When you tell her she says that's a stupid name and calls you "Dinner"
>She refers to you as Dinner all through the conversation
>Right when you think she's about to eat you up, she gives you a warm kiss
>Softly she whispers in your ear, a gentle song


Now I'm the queen of the spiders
Oh, the 'rachne VIP
I've reached the top and had to stop
And that's what's been botherin' me
I wanna have a man, husband
And stroll right into town
And be just like other women
I'm tired of skulkin' around!

Oh, husband true
I wanna marry you
I wanna walk with you
Talk with you, too
You'll see it's true
A queen like me
Can learn to be a waifu too

>Now here's your part, Dinner
>Lay the secret on me of winning your love

>But I don't know about true love

Now don't try to kid me, Dinner
I made a deal with you
What I desire is passion's fire
To make my dream come true
Now give me the secret, husband
C'mon, tell me what to do
Lend me your power, take my flower
So I can be with you

You!
I wanna be with you
I wanna talk with you
Walk with you, too
You'll see it's true
Someone like me
Can learn to be
Someone liked by you!
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>>100562035
Summon Kurt Russel with a flamethrower
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>>100562122
Needs more scatting.
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>>100559562
That was nice
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>>100562035
arachnaphobes pls go
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>>100562098
Don't complain when you're spoiled then.
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>>100562007
I went and tested your theory on this spider that lives in my kitchen
its dead now
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>>100562055
We have been "bronies" for the last year.
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>>100562142
Why not Russel Peters?
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>>100562266
how?
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>>100562320
you never watched 'The Thing' did you?
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>>100562112

She hasn't been impregnated yet, she's still a filly.
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>>100562334
and people saying that only abominations are monster girls
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wasn't there an anime with a loli lamia that was always topless for some reason?
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>>100562237
I don't like you
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>>100562412

>That feeling when Hollywood will never have the balls to make eldritch shit like in The Thing ever again
>Where the actors are actually reacting to things in the room, not bullshit generated by a computer

>>100562449

You can't just fuck Cerea and impregnate her anon, this isn't MGE where literally every monster girl will rape you and try to impregnate themselves with a few exceptions.
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Why she is so best girl?
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>>100561436
a female Darling would be the perfect waifu...
rule 63 on him yet?
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>>100562620
You posted the wrong picture anon.
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>>100562266
u wot m8
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>>100562689
You mean the girl who's barely around?
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>>100562620
because it really is impossible to beat dem legs
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>>100562481
does Ultimate Kars count as a monstergirl?
when I think about Kars is technically closer to a female than a male in that form.
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>>100562689
>Liking a human

You freak get out
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>>100562620
>>100562689
Please, don't start this again.
The only good girl is all of them.
Come on, lads.
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>>100562797
>when I think about Kars is technically closer to a female than a male in that form.
he doesn't look so feminine to me
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>>100562689
8 legs > 2 legs
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>>100562620
I wish she'd make more excited faces, she's a lot cuter like this than what she looks like normally
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>>100562870
It is not the number of legs, but how the legs are used
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>>100562838
>human
funny joke
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>>100562972
>wrapping her legs aroud you and pulling you up into her web for forceful loving
yeah, 8 legs still > 2 legs
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>>100562846
Isnt this angel beats?
Im trying to remember where this is from but i cant remember.
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>>100563066
No legs > any number.

Wouldnt you love an arachne who had to amputee all her legs because of the war?
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Would you rub both of her tummies?
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>>100563188
yes.
also the horse body is where her womb is, the other way is too wierd to me
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>>100563247
You don't remember the page where they imagined life with darling and cerea was pregnant on her human side? Although I wonder how the hell her human half was going to give birth to a centaur
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>>100563188

>Shiba centauroid
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>>100563072
angel beats had potential
it was wasted
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>>100563345
But... all she's seen is pregnant humans, not centaur women. She's been too sheltered since all she did was train as a child.
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>>100549846
id do it if you placed m in an area with carnivore monsters who rape and eat humans
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>>100563484
if the author wanted to convey that he should have show the stork in her fantasy.
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>>100563484
Its because the readers dont know what the fuck a pregnant horse looks like.

They would just think that Cerea got even fatter.
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>>100557357

> "Okay whats going on here? Is this some kind of joke I only fell in the pond because Yukiko was coming at me with a sword!" you steamer
> "This sword?" Yukiko pulls the sword from out behind her "this is fake, it for ceremonial purposes only." she lays the sword down best to yo and you touch the edge its as dull as a pillow
> "Ara ara is this him?" you turn around to look and see another Ryu in the doorway smiling "good morning young son-in-law how was your sleep? My little Nami uses some of her power to heal your wounds if she had not you would have got some serious brain damage, however that was here first time using her power witch is relatively weak from being so young i offered to heal you myself but she said she would take care of you."
> She winks and adds "You also seem to have won the heart of Yukiko as well, your lucky that my daughter dose not get jellos easily and that she agreed to share you with her or you would be split in half right about now" she giggles happily and you notice just how funny she finds the situation
> You tilt your head "I'm sorry who's Nami?" you ask as you turn to look at the other Ryu now that you think about it Yukiko did call her mistress Nami what was up with that
> Nami coils up and blushes as she looks at you "Um, I'm Izanami but, but i like it for my friends to call me Nami." wait like Izanami the god? you looked at her and saw her beauty again, she had very nice skin now that you noticed was a bit darker than Yukiko's but not tan, wow she is really cute
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>>100549846
I'd kill so many monsters you'd be able to stack their bodies to the moon
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>>100563604
paladin-kun pls
you wouldn't kill this loving family, would you?
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>>100563546
Yeah, that too.
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>>100563689
>Arachnee
Easily, now if it was a cute monster girl then maybe not
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>>100562873
But she does have some of the best faces anon. You just don't see it yet.
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>>100563624

That's pretty cute. Brown once again proves itself best.
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>>100563624
That doujin, man.
I busted so many nuts to that.
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>>100563732
Perfect. Now she can pull the wedding carriage for Darling and Miia.
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>>100563567

> You turn to look at Yukiko and look at her more closely she had lovely blue hair, lighter than Nami's, scales that were as white as chalk but reflected the light like a pearl and smooth light skin, her eyes which you originally thought were gold were actually more of an orange-ish yellow and seemed very soft along with the smile, she has a great body a small waist and large breasts she was just as cute you were tarting to feel really good about your situation
> Your stomach growls and you look down embarrassed and the girls both smile at you and each other and giggle "Well you seem hungry." you turn around to face the other Ryu "yes sorry ma'am" you say blushing
> "It's no problem at all come have breakfast with us we figured you would wake up today so the girls mad you breakfast." she smiles at you but something in her tone is foreboding "Oh by the way my name is Aika, however you are welcome to call me mother."
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>>100563567
>>100563948
Dude, you really need to spell check this shit.
You really have some potential, but your bogged down by you awful grammar. If you took the time to correct your mistakes (Or not make rookie mistakes in the first place) the quality would improve tenfold.
Also, what's up with the fucking Ryu mother? That just seems weird and out of context. I can't explain why, but it feels like she shouldn't be there.

On a side note, clever name with Izanami.
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>>100564031
And then theres the fact that hes greentexting.
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>>100563624
>tfw your cute niece asks you where babies come from
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>>100563689

I normally have a fear of spiders, but this. This is just absolutely adorable.
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>>100563899
I want to protect those eyes
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>>100564054
Well cut him some slack, it is babby's first attempt at writefagging.
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>>100564143
>Well cut him some slack,
if you dont call his shit now he'll end up like cwc
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>>100564143
He's also posting on 4chan, which doesn't exactly have a reputation for being a hugbox
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Would you Tio's horn? I would.
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>>100564275
And we will have even more cancerous fanfiction.net tier fapfics.
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Hey guys, what's your opinion on sexy lady vampires?
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>>100564360
Unless you write middleaged housewife MG-related smut, in which case these faggots will treat you like a prophet.
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>>100564360
>>100564275
>>100564377
I guess the only solution is for him to just stop all together, right?
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>>100564391
They are sexy.
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>>100564362
Yes please

Where're the lewd pictures of someone licking the horn making her shiver?
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>>100564391
As someone with a biting fetish

I hate them

I hate them a lot
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>>100564391
Sorry pal, there is bad blood between us.
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>>100561451
I thought the director might be in on it.
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>>100564451
Is that a happy scream or a scared scream
Because I wrote something up and I'm not going to lie, it has some...aggressive neck biting. Not Throat ripping blood spurting neck biting, just a love nip
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>>100564391
I have a bite fetish so...

I like them a lot.
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you know the truth is the only reason I like monster girl is because of how devoted they seem. I don't care about having a horn or spiderlegs or snake tails or any of that shit.

if you gave me a human with the personality description of an oni I'd be happy as if I had an oni itself, anything would be fine, because the only thing I truly want is for someone to love me.
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>>100564450
That would be preferrable yes.
It would be the honourable thing to do, to prevent this place from sinking deeper into the shitswamp its heading towards.
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Alright, I'll be streaming in the usual place in about a minute.

I'll be starting with MM, then going through Hitomi and CW.


No promises on any TL today, but we'll see how I feel.
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>>100564489
If it's to her skull, I'd think it'd be sensitive like a tooth and not naughty or fun to play with at all
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>>100564658
Make sure you gag the kids so we dont hear them scream for help from your basement.
The NSA might find out.
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>>100564623
A scare one bro
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>>100564362

I certainly wouldn't mind getting her horn up my ass.
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>>100564729
Tio would make a great cyclopsbully.
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>>100564729
perforated colon
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>>100564535
Fuck you guys, I'm posting my smut and your going to like it
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>>100564827
Good luck. I've only read one story that made biting properly sexy
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23rd hour of the Last day. 1 hour remains.

At the stroke of midnight on the night of the full moon, she would feed. She would command you into her chamber, have you kneel before her, order you to take off your shirt and spend the entire night feeding on the blood that would come flowing from your neck. Savoring and enjoying every last drop. She would do this until either you passed out or she had claimed to be "full". But you knew she was truly full, that would have killed you. She dined at least once a week, and she had killed many meals before. Maybe" killed" is the wrong word. They weren't ALIVE but they got up afterwards much easier than you ever did.

Her excuse for keeping you was that you were a particularly fine "vintage". You didn't know what that meant. Blood is blood, and you weren't some noble lord or royal prince or heroic warrior, those few who you once supposed to be the people with special blood in their veins. She clearly didn't think the same way. She had sucked the life out of your old Lord, she had even spat out the last mouthful in disgust, leaving him as nothing but an undead husk as your village was overtaken by a blanket of never ending night and She took the Lords castle for her own.

She had stood before the village at the beginning of that never ending night, announcing her victory as the lord got back up as nothing but a mindless zombie. Tensions were high, people were scared, and it was then that you made what was the most sensible, yet foolish act you've ever performed in your life. Your brother had always been a figure people looked up to, and when he picked up that stone and moved to throw it you knew the rest would follow his lead. You knew the village would revolt, and you knew that she would turn everyone single man, woman and child into a creature just like the old lord, and you knew, without a doubt in your mind that , you couldn't let that happen.
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>>100564772
i wonder if she ever accidently poked her eye out with he horn
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>>100564772
>Implying Tio and Manako aren't fucking
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>>100562122
That was fucking beautiful, anon. Nice to know someone appreciates classic Disney.
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>>100564432
>middleaged housewife MG-related smut
I now know what must be done.

Honestly though, having blunt honesty and such is better than a bunch of stupid faggots that think they're doing gods work with amateur hour shit where you're more worried about your reputation than telling people they're fucking failures.

With that said, really, people, use a fucking word processor program with proofing tools. Some fixes should even come up in your browser.

>>100564623
>>100564827
Make with the links.
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>>100564901
And it had damned you to your fate. She saw you twisting his wrist, she saw the rock drop from his hand, and she heard the words you had called your brother for trying to challenge her. She saw it, she smiled and she ordered you to come to her. You didn't do what you did out of respect for her ,you did it out of fear. Fear for your brother, for your family, for your entire village. She commended you on your wisdom, she held you up as a example of the best course of action and they all hated you for it. You had saved them all from undeath and they hated you for it. Even your own brothers eyes were filled with contempt. If she had left you their they would have lynched you, you were sure of it.

But she didn't leave you there. Instead she took you with her and made you her "Pet". A slave who accompanied her and did everything she wanted. You never questioned her. If she got the slightest bit angry you would soothe her with compliments and sympathy. If she ever mentioned dissatisfaction with something you fixed it or removed it entirely. Worst of all, if she ever hinted at her thirst, you offered yourself. She would reject it every time. You were to be used only for her "Special Meal". So you had to bring her a servant. They hated you too, feared you even. You were her Pet but they were just vermin to her, and she would use and dispose of them as she pleased. And despite the shame, the humiliation, and the trial you were getting stronger every passing night. You held yourself higher, you spoke clearly and with authority, you could tell a person's weaknesses just with a glance. You were becoming like HER.
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>>100564653
Sorry for trying to do this I would have at least liked to have finished the story, but if you truly feel i should stop i understand, I'm not that good and it is my first time trying this but I will respect the threads decision if that is what you guys want.
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>>100564901
>Her excuse for keeping you was that you were a particularly fine "vintage". You didn't know what that meant. Blood is blood,

Nutrion from food goes into your blood, so if you have a healthy lifestyle and diet then your blood will be of higher quality and will provide her with more nutriment.

Biology bitches.
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>>100563689
>you wouldn't kill this loving family, would you?
I would and I'd do it with an honest to god smile on my face
I'd use their blood to paint my home of which I built with their bones.
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>>100564971
So every full moon for the past year, she would take your blood and your very essence, all. That is why you hated this night. She would return you to the vermin you once were, and for the next few days you would struggle to exist. She would mock your weakness, your inability to do the tasks you did as an afterthought not a day before, and she would remind you. That was her favorite part, making you remember. Remember the town you "saved" to struggle under her reign, remember about the people you had fed to her, remember how you are nothing compared to her and how you never will be. Remember how you will only ever be Human.

The clock strikes midnight and the doors open. You walk into the darkness of your Mistress' throne room. It is entirely empty. There is no living thing in the castle on the night of the full moon. She sits on her throne, in robes of the richest crimson. You stand before her. You can feel the dark majesty radiating from her very being. Hunger glares in her eyes. The look of a predator and a monster. One that knows little or nothing of mercy or caring. But something is off. There is something else in her eyes that you haven't seen before. Her entire demeanor is cold as always but there is something deep in her eyes. Something like a burning fire.

"Kneel"
You fall on your knees .
"Strip"
You remove your shirt and toss it aside.
"Present yourself"
You crane your head to the right, exposing your neck.

She lifts herself from her throne and slowly makes her way towards you. She circles you and you can see the strange look even more than before. She stops in front of you. No that's wrong, it has to be. She feeds from behind, she likes it when they try to run form her . Your head straightens to look at her better. There she stands, with the same smile she wore the day she took you, and her eyes are a blazing inferno of...something. Something you have never seen in her before.
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>>100564995
Your sacrifise will contribute to keep this place from falling into even further decay.

Well done anon, you may carry yourself with dignity.
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>>100565065
Her hands make a move to her neck and the clasp of her robes. A faint click is all that accompanies her clothes falling to the floor. She is entirely naked underneath and the moonlight streaming in through the hall's windows radiates off her pale skin. Your eyes widen and your mind utters a thought you would never have associated with her before. For the first time in a year she is not terrifying. She is not cruel. She is not sadistic or dreadful. She is the pristine moon personified. She is the all the stars of the night sky given form. She is absolutely, unquestionably, awe inspiringly Beautiful!

And she is kneeling with you. You don't remember her getting on her knees. You don't remember her lips pressing against yours. You haven't the faintest idea when you dared to wrestle your tongue with hers and feel her sharps fangs. You don't know where you found the audacity to wrap your arms around her body and pull her against you. But it's happening, your body is moving of its own violation, careless of the consequence. After what seems like hours of embrace the kiss breaks and she, a cold, bloodless, vampire is blushing like a newlywed bride. But she isn't cold. Quite the opposite. You can feel the heat coming off her in waves. The dark and terrible majesty had been replaced with a something entirely new and different. Tender, loving warmth
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>>100565178
Her hands reach down and undo your belt as she pulls your pants down to your knees. Your member reveals itself, eager and ready, and the devious smile returns to your Mistress' face as her eyes look up at you teasingly. She kisses its tip and gives it a long lick along the underside of its length, before taking it into her warm, wet mouth. Her ruby lips slide along your blood filled skin and her fangs tickle the top of your rod. She moves faster and faster, taking you deeper and deeper into her mouth. Her eyes never look away from your own and the burning fire inside them threatens to set your soul aflame. Eventually it all becomes too much and you unleash yourself into her mouth. Your seed bursts into her mouth in waves and she swallows every last drop of it before pulling away and leveling her face with yours.

"And now" She says, licking her lips "Time for the main course.

She kisses you deeply again pushing you down onto your back and falling on top of you. She straddles your waist and rubs her wet slit across your hardening rod. She puts a generous coating of her eagerness onto your crotch before finally lifting herself up, positioning your tip against her pink gates. But she doesn't move herself down. Instead she rotates her hips around your head, teasing you. You moan and beg but she doesn't move, she just looks at you with her fiery eyes, waiting for the boldness to return. But you mind won't accept it, Waiting isn't an option right now, for either of you. This eternal night can't last forever and you're not losing a second of it to her games, not this time. She gets her wish and with the boldness you never knew you had you grab her by her hips and thrust yourself into your teasing mistress. Her legs buckle and she slams herself back down onto your entirety, forcing you to join her scream of bliss with your own.
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>>100565238
And here i thought it was going somewhere.
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>>100565238
She raises herself back up and you pull her back down. You lift her up and she forces herself onto you. Both of you wanting the sensation to continue but never wanting your bodies to separate. Your hips slapping together and your member penetrating her depths. She moans and screams and touches her body and her eyes never leave your face. You moan back in response looking up and away for a second but she grabs your face and makes you look at her. She wants you to watch her, to be the only thing your mind even conceives. Her fingers glide across her body teasing herself as you use your hands pound her body furiously against yours. Eventually you feel her body tensing around you. She's reaching her limit and eventually her folds clench your cock in a vice grip as her orgasm rocks both your bodies, and for the first time she looks away from you as she screams her pleasure to the night sky. Suddenly, her face dives towards yours, but instead of the kiss you expected she sinks her fangs deep into the veins of your neck.

(fucking 2000 character limiter)
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Stop with the CYOAs, holy shit go to /tg/
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>>100565148
thank you, I hope you would be ok with me finishing up the story and just putting the whole thing in a pastebin and posting it to the thread later?
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>>100565371
It doesn't hurt. Her feeding never hurts. Those who scream are just scared of what she could do to them. That isn't even a afterthought for you right now. There is only her. But you can't see her face, you can only feel her. She isn't draining you like she use to. You can feel the blood leaving your body but she is giving something back. You can see your skin turn pale and lifeless but your mind is as quick as ever and your dick is still rock hard as it pounds into your mistress' snatch. All you can think of is her. her beautiful body being ravaged by your scepter. Her noble face expressing her endless want for you. Her fiery eyes smoldering with lust . Her lovely neck. Her pristine, gorgeous, unmarked neck. The audacity from before grips you once again. You can't help yourself as your tongue slides across the skin over to where you can sense the large vein, full of her dark aura instead of crimson blood. You sink into her with razor sharp fangs you don't remember having and revel in the taste of her very soul as she revels in the taste of yours.

Eventually it all becomes too much. You both drain each other of your energies. Your bodies move on their own and the pleasure is magnificent. Finally you both slam into each other one last time, screaming each other's names to heaven and hell and everywhere in-between. Your pump her womb full of the last seed you would ever produce as a human, and she showers you with all the affection her body can spare. You both collapse, her on top of you, completely and utterly exhausted. You lie locked together in both of her throne rooms. No longer as master and servant or as a man and a monster, but as two vampiric lovers. Man and Wife. Lord and Lady.
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>>100564995
Hahaha. You do know that the guy you're talking to is talking about all CYOAs and stories in general, right? Don't mind him.
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>>100564995
Get a word processor. Some free thing or pirate booty, I don't really care since you're not trying to use it for professional ends. Make sure grammar and style is being proofed. Pay attention to and learn from grammar error highlights. I only know that MS Word gives explanations and examples for why things are highlighted, can't speak for other programs. When you're done, leave it for a few hours to a day, change the font, proofread and edit for things the auto-proofer doesn't catch. Half the shit I catch after the fact makes me think I was drunk or asleep when I was writing, but it got written at the time.

Be less beta, enjoy writing and improve your passion to be more interesting.
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CYOAs need to go to /tg/.
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>>100565414
A few days ago I would've told you to go fuck yourself, but yeah, these are reaching a new level shit and people don't even respond to them it's like a ghost land of shit where the few remaining souls think it's actually chocolate.
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>>100565453
yes please
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>>100565479
Wait by story is not a CYOA it just a shity greentext, and are you saying continue or don't I'm confused?
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>>100565371
>(fucking 2000 character limiter)
I'd have gone with a pastebin link because of that, yeah.
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>>100565549
I think the best solution is
being very critical and harsh so that only good writers stay and the bad ones are forced to flee or try to improve.
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>>100565454
Many years Later
You awaken to your partners soft whispering
"Wake up, Love. The night is young and we have our duties to attend to." she pleasantly reminds you
Duties. Yes, you have your duties...what were they again? To Her? Yes obviously to her. Your Lady is your everything. Without her you are nothing and she without you. But what else? A Vampire's mind is not suited for the menial and every day.
"What? You don't remember?" She asks incredulous "Must I remind you again and again?"
That's one thing you loved about your wife. She was always reminding you of all the things you had forgotten during your rests.
"Remember the day we met? When you saved me from that town of brutish humans?
How could you forget the day you met your beloved?
"Remember all the meals we've shared over the years?"
There are as many fine bloods as there are fine wines but her aura was and always would be your favorite.
"Remember how you and I are perfect equals and always will be?"
You were made for her and her for you.
"Remember how you are and always will be my Lord husband?"
You can't think of it being any other way.
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One CYOA per thread is enough, you guys. Right now, this is fucking pushing it. Start a monstergirl thread on /tg/ if you want to fill it with CYOA's.

>>100565545
>Not just using Google Docs
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>>100565545
I will take this advise thank you sir i will finish it tomorrow i have the day off from school.
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>>100565621
Different guy. Go ahead and continue.

What is green text but just another way to format and present a story?
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>>100553404
good job annon, i don't have any awards to give, but good job
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>>100564901
>>100564971
>>100565065
>>100565178
>>100565238
>>100565371
>>100565454
>>100565648

So how was it?
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>>100565779
Your writing is damn good. Didn't enjoy the story much myself, but that's just because I don't like vampires, you're a solid writer
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>>100565779
Post it to /tg/, where this stuff belongs.
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>>100565779
let me tell you a little something

if you need to ask, it wasn't good enough.
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>>100565621
Do you even fucking reread your post before you press submit? There are glaring errors that you could easily fix if you just skimmed before you posted
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>>100565779
You would use pastebin or something next time.
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>>100565779
I liked it. Errors here and there but nothing that I actually tripped over
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>>100565864
You know what, no I don't because i honestly don't care that much it's a simple reply
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>>100564489
>>100564729
I was talking about her lower horn.
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>>100565779
tl;dr
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>>100566043
Go be gay somewhere else, anon
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>>100566043
/d/ pls
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>>100565995
Is English your first language? If not, I can understand.

We use commas, periods, and capitalization to separate text and make it read nicely.

You should have learned it in high school if you grew up in an English-speaking nation.
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>>100565779
Excellent work. Please keep writefagging, we can always use more talent.
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>>100565838
Basically this.
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>>100565852
This is the third smut thing I've written. I'm looking for feedback and criticism buddy. I'm not going to pretend it's on the level of mainstream novels and yell at anyone who criticizes it.

I want to improve for your benefit
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>>100565779
I would have liked to have seen more character depth at least on the side of the vampire. Storytelling was good as was establishing setting.
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this is my last night, guys
tomorrow I quit internet (bad times)

as a /d/eviant that has been since the beginning (even in that thread were it was unanimously decided that "lamias give best hugs", I must say...
that it has been a pleasure to chat with you
even the flamewars were fun

Miia is my favorite but all girls will always be best girls
I will try to keep downloading the chapters somehow

good nights
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>>100566090
Yell at the Anon from the last thread who said smut needs back story
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>>100566122
Not him, but I merge the comma rules from german (native) and english. I tend to just put them where it feels right.
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>>100565995
If you the writer don't give a shit about your story then the reader sure as hell ain't going to care. Don't even bother posting it here
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>>100565652
Looking at it, it doesn't look like Google Docs tracks grammar and style. Personal thing but not sure it has the sort of style formatting I need either. Also doesn't have a save as 97-2003 .doc option for ebook formatting, .docx tends to go all to shit with platforms or just get straight up rejected.

For general purpose the grammar and style thing, though.

>>100565736
That's the spirit. I've written a lot of stuff that hasn't seen light beyond a couple people that perhaps will one day. Practice and passion is the only way you'll get better at anything.
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>>100566285
>If you, the writer, don't give a shit about your story, then the reader sure as hell ain't going to care. Don't even bother posting it here.

fixed it for you
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>>100566207
what happened /a/non?
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>>100566207
>Quit internet

Wut?
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>>100566207

Good luck /a/non!

Get a good/cheap cellphone or tablet with a decent browser and find those WIFI spots to sustain you through the drought...
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>>100565779
Skip smut, build character and world.
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>>100566285
>>100566333
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>>100564658
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>>100566355
bad times as I said
must be cautious and start to afford until I find a better job
>>100566415
stop paying it, you know, that thing isn't free
>>100566466
thanks
no need to do the cellphone thing
can download from a pc in the library I work for now

just I need to find something better
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Just a head's up: TF is currently livestreaming.
>http://www.livestream.com/prettyanonymous
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>>100566683
Oh shit well man I hope things get better
and remember to come back don't leave
us for the crappy 3D world
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>>100564658
Where is the location?
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>>100566783
>>100566749
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>>100566749
Oops. Nevermind
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Guys, i just finished Bioshock Infinite.

...

I need some scaly monstergirls.
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>>100566285
I wasn't taking about my story I was talking about when I normal replay to people I truly acre about my writing I love books and have been reading since I was very young. I was always seen as weird for liking to read when others in my class found it annoying or stupid if you could just watch a movie. I wanted to be a writer but always thought I was bad at writing and I was right, but honestly now I really don't care what you think of my writing it makes me happy it only one person enjoys it and that's why i will continue to do and get better, so be a dick if you want to but i will dust myself off and stand taller after every word.
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>>100566683
>internet
>not cheap
What kind of shithole do you live in?
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>>100566956
don't get the correlation but sure
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>>100566956
>Guys, this is my blog, give me images
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>>100566956
Is your mind fucked anon?
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How does one tell the difference between a Wolf Girl, and a single-tailed Kitsune?
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>>100567104
Big time.
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>>100567113
Wolves are fun while kitsune are boring
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>>100567113

Wolves have furry breasts and vaginas.

They apologize for the fur and being hairy, but at the end of the day it's just something to grab onto.
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>>100567005
you're a cringe gold-mine, I'm guessing you're 14 or 15 and a bit of an outcast?

You suck, get over yourself. If you want to get better then feel free to do so. Just don't expect to give a shit about your blog entries.
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>>100567113
usually by the tail. a wolf girl's tail will be more upwardly curved, often a bit scruffy at the bottom, and will have less fluff. wolf girls may also have a visible canine tooth.
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>>100567305
>and a bit of an outcast?
But Anon your on 4chan, in a monster girl thread no less. Your the tiniest bit of an outcast by default

We're a couple of misfits! we're a couple of misfits!
What's the matter with misfits? That's where we fit in!
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>>100567439
That was true in 2003-4 before Faux News told the world about us.
Then it all went downhill and now we are filled with normalfag furries.
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>>100567005
Translation:


I wasn't taking about my story! I was talking about when I normally reply to people.

I truly care about my writing. I love books, and have been reading since I was very young. I was always seen as weird for liking to read when others in my class found it annoying or stupid.

I wanted to be a writer, but always thought I was bad at writing. I was right, but honestly, now I really don't care what you think of my writing. It makes me happy it only one person enjoys it, and that's why I will continue to do and get better.

So be a dick if you want, but I will dust myself off and stand taller after every word.


I think you should take some basic grammar lessons first, broseph.
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>>100565779
It was alright. Wouldn't mind seeing some more of your stuff once in a while.

But seriously. Use Pastebin.
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>>100567534
If you're talking about centaurs I swear to Charon, Anon.
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>>100567646
If it makes you feel any better, lion pussy is also included.
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>>100567439
Yes, you're on 4chan.

There may not be very many rules, but there are plenty of social rules.

One of them is typing with correct spelling and grammar.

Why? Who knows? But it's always been that way. It's how we distinguish ourselves from the Gaiafags who use smileys and have no regard for the English language.

Whatever happened to the "lurk for a year or more before posting" rule?
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>>100567636
Yeah, Yeah, got it, pastebin.
I just don't really like the block letters it has. Literature should flow and the very appearance of Paste bin's text stomps my writing buzz.

But I'm autistic so what do I know?
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>>100567385
Ah, thanks. That'll make my picture sorting alot easier.
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Holy fuckballs have these threads turned into shit.
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>>100567746
>CYOAs
>"you will never"
I remember when this shit would turn an entire thread into a personal hatefest on whomever posted it.
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>>100567852
you're telling me, I think it's time we bounced from this joint.
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>>100565779
I started off being a bit critical, but then noticed the page number we're on and honestly didn't see anything beyond this. Basic proofing mode;
>But you knew (if) she was truly full, that would have killed you.
>They weren't 'alive' instead of caps
>never(-)ending night. She (even) took
>She saw it, smiled and ordered you

There's the odd comma or " out of place, and personally I try not to start a sentance with But. 'However,' et al. fits but generally if it's short it can be put on the end of the prior sentence.

Got a lot more fluid and fine when it moved into the erotic, though positions were maybe a little weird. She moved behind him, undressed, sure, but then was in front and kind of doubling down to get at his cock if he's still on his knees? Might be derping and missed standing up. Also having nothing in the room makes it feel a bit cold and weird. Props and set pieces are great.

Last post kind of confusing and iffy format too but generally the pace, set up, prose and emotion were good and engaging.



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