Why can't more monster girls come in pairs?
first for shirohebi surperiority.
>Doesn't even post one
Fuck you, demoness time
fucking furry piece of shit at least I didn't ruin the thread with what amounts to furry.
4th for oomukade is second best
Is that the jabberwocky?
I may have the worst luck of all my siblings. My first two brothers both died in a freak accident involving a kumquat and a manticore. My older sister on the other hand got embroiled in an odd cult dealing in some odd stuff called “demonic energy”. I on the other hand am about to be sold, enslaved, and live out the rest of my life in shame. Perhaps I should give you some information about how I wound up in this predicament.
First and foremost the residents of this city of mine are odd and varied. They are all women of odd origins with many striking features. Some have horns, tails, scales, and even made completely of goo. That’s right, I live in the wonderful New Port City, home to the first attempt of monster human co-existence. “New Port City”, they used to say, “a place of harmony where man and monster could start anew.”
Though the city which I live in is a melting pot of cultures, it is also a cesspool of crime. This wasn't the state of affairs before. The city was filled with kind and gentle people willing to help their fellow monster or man. Well it was that way until the government passed the damned prohibition act, banning the act of giving semen to the monster girls.
I'm sorry but I'm not feeling it.
Dunno looks kind of like a Jersey Devil.
>My first two brothers both died in a freak accident involving a kumquat and a manticore.
Are you Anubis Anon?
It's the Jersey Devil. The Jabberwocky doesn't actually have a defined appearance in its originating text.
>Soldier arise, stand and fight! Bring joy at last to this fallen knight!
>Your body lies beaten, battered and broken. Let my warmth be your own, fate has spoken.
i am torn between wanting the D to rime or not
yfw im reading that right now
Dearest Manitcore writefag, please proof-read your work before posting. It's enjoyable, but the amount of grammatical errors and typos is jarring for me.
Artificial semen substitutes had been created for the monster girls by that damned company Olympian Industries. Thus foolish humans argued that monster girls no longer needed the real stuff to keep themselves sustained. And then some stupid politicians got it in their head that the actual stuff would empower the monster girls and they may gain the potential to enslave all of humanity. Pretty fucking stupid if you asked me but then again politicians aren’t exactly our best and brightest. Of course this was all political bull crap created by a bunch of incompetent fools and the greedy CEO of Olympian Industries so that they could force monster girls to depend on their artificial crap saying it was for the good of both man and monster. To make things even worse they made it nigh impossible for man and monster get married, which was the only legal way for monster to acquire natural semen.
nope, just trying some crap out
i'm going for a limited choice system so I'm going to get to one choice then write the rest tomorrow
Now that you mentioned it, I'm hoping that you she does.
The one on the right looks kind of like a guy...hopefully just reverse-trap.
This was all most likely a political and social backlash against the monster integration program that happened years back. Monsters had been long hidden from mankind until one day they decided to integrate with society. This was a period of great prosperity and cultural integration until we realized that monsters only gave birth to more of their kind. Then some yellow paper fearmonger set off a spark that would blow the situation out of proportion. The dumbass had the nuts to say the human race would be doomed as man prefered monster over woman. And because of this preference soon monsters would run everything and the human race would become the minority and ultimately slaves. This load of crap snowballed until it finally became a giant steaming pile of shit that was the anti-monster groups which would lobby for the prohibition act.
What, the Anubis story?
You should check out the others. I think I've improved my smutwriting ability each time.
I'm also adding to the sphinx/salamander one I just posted. Someone said they were sad that there was no backdoor funtime with Aamina, and I aim to please.
That grin... just... yes.
Does this count as dollarham yuri?
That’s when the crime lords started popping up. The first one being the Don, a succubus queen who first started the business with three of her sisters. Then came the Yakuza led by their charismatic Kitsune and backed by their many oni. Soon followed the vampires, coming from Russia to muscle in New Port’s market market. All monster girls looking to profit in the white market that had sprung up in response to the prohibition act.
Many underground semen trading markets showed up created by monstergirls who bought and sold semen for those who wanted the “real product” since giving the real product was illegal and getting married became nigh impossible due to the law. Men who were in debt or just unlucky got sold into factories where they are milked every day for their “product”. The luckier ones get sent to brothels to service monsters every night.
Life is so cruel. I just want to fuck the ass of a age old kitsune and then live the rest of our days with together. Why can't I have my one and only wish...
S-Stop doing that you two! How lewd!
its been a while but trying my hand on coloring again
>Well it was that way until the government passed the damned prohibition act, banning the act of giving semen to the monster girls.
This is so many multiple levels of retarded that I can't fit the all into one post.
>I'm also adding to the sphinx/salamander one I just posted. Someone said they were sad that there was no backdoor funtime with Aamina, and I aim to please.
Ooh, yes. This pleases me.
After my brothers died in their kumquat experiment and my sister missing, the family debt racked up by my alcoholic mother fell on me. Our family used to be very rich until my father died and all the money went to my mother. She was a spoiled brat who quickly lost all the money gambling. Unable to fuel any of her addictions without out money she made a loan from the Don thinking she could turn things around at the tracks. With what little money she did earn she spent it all on stupid shit instead of paying back the Don. Finally in a drunken stupor she fell into the streets and was hit by a truck. Probably the best birthday present she could give me.
I had no one left, my brothers dead and my sister missing I knew I had to do at least something. With little left to lose I begged the Don not to send me to a factory. Fortunately or unfortunately for me the Don loved young boys and I was a young and pretty lad. After possible the most degrading experience in life for me I was made into the Don’s personal plaything. There I learned all the trades of a pleasure slave. I learned to sing, to clean, to massage, and how to pleasure a woman.
What happens if a Dullahan puts their head on another dullahan?
Let's try this again...
i just finished reading that one and the escape from the city one
It wasn’t all bad though, the Don gave me an education I never could have gotten had I stayed in the slums. I learned the basic things like reading, writing, and arithmetic. And when the Don discovered my wit I was educated in many subjects so that I could provide and interesting conversation. I learned philosophy, art, science, and language.The Don’s subordinates also took a great liking to me and even taught me how to shoot a gun, cast some basic spells, and even how to fence. All, of course for a small price.
The years passed and I grew into a young man. I was quite happy with the situation I was in despite its bleak beginning. The Don and her women grew kind and gentle with me and I found an odd love for them.The Don was the mother I had always wished for and her subordinates were like a bunch of spoiled older sisters to me. Call it Stockholm Syndrome if you will but they were the best thing to happen to me all my life and I loved them with everything I had. Well in more ways than one.
Why would you abandon her /a/?
>inb4 poor tear edit
I was trying something new
You mean rhyme. Rime is a different thing entirely.
And right when I was happiest things went all south again. A gang war broke out and needless to say the Don lost the war. To humiliate the Don, I was drugged and brutally gang raped in front of the Don and all her subordinates.
The bastards had starved me for a week only bringing me out so they could rape me in front of the Don and her subordinates. Worse was that they had deprived the Don and her girls of semen for days on end and as succubi they were at their breaking point. Despite that they were begging in tears pleading for my captors to stop hurting me instead of begging for my semen. I had tried to offer them some words of consolation but my mouth was forced shut as the snatch of a manticore smothered my face.
I will never forget the faces of despair on my family.
And as a final insult to the Don, all her property, were all auctioned off. They sold her art collection, her wines, her guns, her land, and finally her crown jewel. As much as I wish to say that her crown jewel was a brilliant diamond or an enchanting sapphire, that jewel was me.
Restrained and naked I slowly was forced onto stage by a minotaur for everyone to see. I was then greeted by a giggling crowd, all with lewd eyes raping me. The room darkened then all the lights were shone on me. As I tried to hide my nakedness the minotaur guard next to me grabbed my arms and forced them up. Then with a booming voice she spoke.
“NOW FOR WHAT YOU HAVE ALL BEEN WAITING FOR, THE DON’S MOST PRIZED POSSESSION, NICOLAS EHRLICHMANN!”
The minotaur dropped me to the ground then stuck her finger into my mouth revealing my pearly whites to the eager crowd. In an attempt to resist, I bit down hard on her finger.The damned woman didn’t even notice.
“AS YOU CAN SEE HE IS IN GOOD HEALTH”
She then grabbed my penis and began to stroke me in order to force me erect. She first gently stroked me with tenderness I never would have expected from a brute like her all while pressing her massive breasts against my back. Then she slowly licked the nape of my neck and turned my face to her.
I weakly begged the minotaur. Ignoring my plea she leaned in and violently forced a kiss onto me. The minotaur stuck her wet tongue into my mouth and raped every corner of it. I tried to resist to protect what little pride I had left but eventually I raised my flag in surrender much to the minotaur’s delight. Smiling with pride she then turned her head back to her captive audience.
Well, it sounds like a classic politician move, so at least there's that. I bet there were "committees" involved.
>No Balrog waifu
Would you let her pass, /a/?
>and then live the rest of our days with together
Her AND her daughter. Pretty sweet deal if you ask me.
Her grand daughter, actually. But sure, the mother-in-law can join in too.
that's bad and you should feel bad
“TRAINED BY A SUCCUBUS QUEEN HIMSELF I’M SURE HE WILL PROVIDE MUCH ENTERTAINMENT FOR ANY ONE OF YOU.”
Then she began stroking me wildly, obviously trying to provide a free sample to the eager crowd below. Pumping her hand on my prick while raping my mouth she slowly increased the speed. Hips bucking and eyes rolling back I finally spurted out my last bit of dignity along with my sperm. My semen splattered on to the stage in front of the enemies of my Don, each one of them laughing at my humiliation. The minotaur then dropped me onto the ground knowing I was too weak to even crawl away.
“BIDDING STARTS AT $10,000!”
Oh my Don, if only I had the strength left to bite my tongue and end this all I would. But some part of me still clings to the hope that you and your sisters will come and save me. Oh Don my, if only I had the strength....
>tfw dead darling
“Congratulations, Nick you fetched us $100,000. Ten times your original price. I’m sure your Don will be pleased.”
Blearily I raised my head up and stared into her eyes. The minotaur laughed then handed my chain to a....
I'll continue it tomorrow
>Nearly Headless D
you seem to bee using the bucket tool. pro tip: dont. or maybe brush over the edges cause it pains me to look at it
Let's go with Wight. It might be classy.
you seem to bee using the bucket tool. pro tip: dont. or maybe brush over the edges cause it pains me to look at it.
i dont mind the edit
Oh sweet someone finally wrote some mg smut with anal. Been wondering why nobody did it
Bad edit, or bad because I made it?
Because I feel bad for both
Can you give me any advice when it comes to coloring stuff?
Because my works are decent at best
I, uh, actually don't use the bucket tool...
I'm trying to work on the shading and shit, which I do over the base layer, but I just haven't gotten it down yet
>yfw the next chapters involve the harem going to Hell to get Darling back.
>To humiliate the Don, I was drugged and brutally gang raped in front of the Don and all her subordinates.
>The bastards had starved me for a week only bringing me out so they could rape me in front of the Don and her subordinates.
You said basically the same thing twice. Don't do that.
Never mind I know why it did that now.
It's because for that particular picture, I used the Magic eraser for the line art...
Normally I don't do that, I color over the lines
Nah that was just Photoshop
Can't wait to see the effort that's going to go into getting him back, though
I'd rather have a reclusive bookworm than some aristocrat any day. Besides it gives us a high likelihood of getting super powers.
Ok with me. Let's do this.
why isent there any doujinshi with
>balrog GF laying on the bed
>boyfriend wearing a fake beard
>"can we do this later, or ill be late"
>YOOOOOUUUU SHAAAAAALL NOOOOOOT PAAAASSSS!!! /he smacks down his dick
>balrog GF blows air out her nose in a tired yet humored way
>tries to get past him
that's much much kinder to look at now.
the earlier one was just wrong
More spider bondage when? Only reason i even still lurk these threads. The novelty of monster girls in a harem setting can only go so far.
>Oh Don my
>city created in vain attempt at human/monster girl co-relations
>strict laws on human/monster girl relations
What is this, fucking... Bizarre Slime?
It's because for some weird reason, I used the Magic eraser (which is basically a reverse paint bucket) on the line art, and moved it to the top...
We need some stories with one anyway.
Wait, did the new (untranslated) chapter come out already? I thought it appears around the 21st.
Kind of amazed you dumb nerds haven't compiled a list of recommended monster girl doujinshi yet.
19 of every month since it came out
Except last November
I want to fuck the kraken.
>That night, your dreamless sleep is interrupted in the middle of the night by a rustling sound
>You wearily get up from the couch, annoyed by what could be making that sound
>you rub the sleep out of your eyes and proceed into the kitchen
>The sight immediately wakes you up
>You find manticore standing above the trashcan with a plate and fork in hand
>on the plate and the fork is are pieces of the destroyed cake she had thrown away earlier
>her expression is nothing but shock as she stares at you
>You don’t say anything as you move to the cupboard and get a plate for yourself
>Taking a fork, you cut manticores cake in half and put it on your own plate
>She still dosnt say anything, frozen in embarrassment as you begin to eat the cake
>You mention that it was good cake
>She dosnt say anything as she takes another nibble on the cake
>She barely nods, and instead the two of you eat the destroyed cake in silence
>Eventually the two of you finish your cake and place the dishes in the sink
>you mention that she should probably have some water before she went back to bed as you went back to your own couch
>but as you slide back into the couch you feel something heavy fall on top you
>”Don’t say anything” she says in a low tone as she too crawls beneath the blanket with you
>To surprised to offer a rebuttal, you merely node as she gets comfy atop you
>shes warm, her breasts press against your chest and your natural reaction is to wrap your arms around her, being careful to not entangle her wings
>she dosnt say anything as she closes her eyes and begins to drift asleep
>This it seems, was better than any dream as the two of you embrace each other and fall into a deep sleep
You only get a rouse out of these guys if you call them Furries in Denial.
>He doesn't know how to use the monster girl tag on sad panda!
continuing the oomukade and harpy cyoa, probably the last until tomorrow.
In the end you were convinced to stay just one more day, and if by the end she hadn't awoken then you would leave her here with the tent. That's what you told yourself anyway, beignt eh fool that you were you'd probably end up wasting the entire week.
the day went slowly, every few minutes you glanced nervously at the sun hoping it had already gone down, and whenever you weren't checking the sun you were caught up with Omuchan trying to seduce you or begging you to not leave her even if you hadn't even said a word.
by the end of the day the harpy was stirring in her sleep. she seemed deeply troubled but no matter what you did she refused to wake up. Omuchan took the change of affection as a sign that you were cheating on her and forced you to cuddle with her for the rest of the night while repeating how much you love her.
when you woke up it was to Omuchan's drool slowly dripping onto you as she smiled in her sleep. "oh anon... I knew you'd never cheat." she mumbles while tightening slowly over you while prodding you with her insect legs.
with some effort you managed to escape, she seemed to feel this even while still asleep and begins sobbing softly. If this had been anyone else you would be concerned but it was just business as usual for Omuchan who cried when you didn't eat the second piece of burnt toast she cooked for you.
you tip-toed over to the harpy who was still sleeping and began testing to see if she would finally awake. "hey." you prodded her eyelids, plucked a feather and even tried touching her wound but she didn't wake up. with a sigh of despair and a slow shake of your head you realize she might never wake up if she still hadn't by now. the only thing to interupt youtr thoughts are the arms of Omuchan that wrap around you
"Anon, w-what are you doing?!" you brush her off and walk outside thinking on what you were going to do.
what do? continued tomorrow
To be fair, this is probably what would actually happen in a modern setting with monstergirls as they are in MGE. So I'd say Bizarre Slime was just ahead of it's time.
>eating cake from the trash
It'll never come back, Anon
Took you long enough. Unless you were waiting for that other guy to finish.
>The next few weeks the two of you seem to grow closer
>You begin to teach her the fine arts of cooking and how to do her own laundry
>the two of you begin to play games together regularly
>You even still give her baths when she asks for it, although she never does anything to you
>This all changes one day when you arrive home from grocery shopping
>Manticore is standing atop the stares her arms crossed as she stares at you intently
>something was definitely off
>She throws something at you, it clatters to your feet
>a police badge
>your police badge
>But that’s impossible
>You instantly reach to your ankle and feel your badge wedged in the sock
>”So were you going to tell me any time soon or were you just going to lead me on like a dog leash the whole time?” she asks menacingly, her spiked tail writhing behind her like in the days you first met her
>You never had plans to inform her you were a cop because you never thought it was important
>manticore dosnt say anything as she strides down the stairs, her arms still crossed as she stares at you angrily
>”I’ll give you one chance to walk away before I really get mad.” She threatened, her claws slowly growing larger
>You reaffirm that you had done nothing wrong and that being a police officer had nothing to do with anything
>The right hook sends you flying across the living room
>”It’s you bastards that did this to me! I did nothing wrong!” she roars as she jumps atop you, driving her knees into your gut, you could feel something crack as you struggled to fight back
>”You’re just trying to frame me like all the other humans in that damn police station!” you feel yourself be picked up and thrown across the room again
>"I live my life alone, by myself without bothering anyone! And yet you people always try to blame me for everything!"
>Her tail whips around and slams you across the face
>But you dont go down
>You assume a fighting stance and prepare to fight her off
HOW CAN YOU SAY YOU LOVE HER IF YOU CAN'T EVEN EAT OUT OF HER GARBAGE CAN?
A little confused on her story. Was she resurrected by a cat spirit or did a cat spirit just borrow her form to take revenge for her?
Wait, 19th Japan time or 19th Eastern Standard?
Looks like I gotta search through foolz.
>your police badge
>But that’s impossible
>You instantly reach to your ankle and feel your badge wedged in the sock
So what happened here?
I just want someone to love me.
I just want to feel loved
Shut up. I can dream, Anon
I have no idea, I only played the Wii version
Hopefully the writefag has an explanation. Had it not been specifically said that it was HIS badge then she could've just shown him a badge she lifted from another cop, and the act of feeling for his own badge would show MC's guilt. As it is I don't get it. How could he even tell that it was his badge from on top of the stairs, anyway? It's not like you could read the numbers from there.
Sometimes I look back at my childhood and wonder if Deis from Breath of Fire is my reason for liking monster girls.
I sincerely doubt she's "Done nothing wrong" she's way too ready to just beat up random humans for that. She probably thinks assault isn't a crime or something...
Or whenever she goes into blood-lust mode she doesn't remember hurting anybody.
>with some effort you managed to escape, she seemed to feel this even while still asleep and begins sobbing softly.
This is really annoying that harpy bitch hasn't woken up yet, maybe we just continue the journey to imouto and if we find someplace we can dump her the dump her there? Omu seems well again and probably can carry her
You literally just have to pull out your cock and they want you. Paladin-kun should be safe.
Forgot about that 'blood lust' thing she's got going on.
And.....since she's beating up cop-kun currently.....
Fucking BOF 2 and it's monstergirls.
I should finish it one day.
Hello! For those of you that missed it last thread, and even for those that did, here it is again, with more added!
This is by far the longest smut story I have ever written. I hope you enjoy reading it as much as I did writing it.
Also, please leave feedback. What you liked, didn't like, etc. The more feedback I get, the better I can write in the future.
Also, due to how tired I am right now, I suspect I've made more than a few typos, omissions, or grammatical mistakes. If you can point those out I'd appreciate it.
Screw it. We carried her around when she was half dead before we can do it again. Let's pack up the harpy and head to our village. At least then we can put her under a real roof.
This writefag did say he wanted to write a more "dark and serious" story. I wonder if it will end with cop-kun dieing and the manticore realizing she has metal health problems that way.
And I meant like a place to take care of her, not just look for a comfy ditch to throw her in
I just finished reading it a short while ago. Are the only changes you added at the end?
>WHO DID THIS TO YOU?!
>You did... but you told me no to tell you about it.
>What? But I'd never- well, at least not this bad.
>You said you'd say that too.
Ah, to clarify the word count went from 4300 to 6300. So I added a good bit.
There was a new zton short in the kemono lovers that just got uploaded onto the panda. It was on the last pages before nezumi's piece. Apparently he did some furry orca lizard thing
What would you and your monster waifu do for fun when you're not boning her, assuming you two do anything fun other then boning?
>an hour later you arrive at the police station covered in blood and bruises
>many of your coworkers give you a concerned look as you force yourself into the police chiefs office and slam the door shut behind you
>the police chief was in the middle of scarfing down a doughnut when you arrived
>”Ah hello officer. I see the manticore did quite a number on you.” He said happily for some reason
>you could guess why
>”Don’t worry son. With this, we’ll finally get her locked up for good and off the streets.” He said as he began to write something down
>You slam your hands down on the desk, demanding to know what her crime was
>The police chief merely looks up at you exasperated
>”A human was seen at an ATM withdrawing what appeared to be his life savings. Right behind him was the manticore. A few days later the man was nowhere to be seen or found. That manticore was the last one to see him alive. But she refused to come with us for questioning so we tagged her with obstructing the law.”
>he began to rummage through the desk as he began to look for something
>”But after this little debacle, we’ll finally take her down for good. Especially after attacking a police officer. She should know better.” He said confidently to himself
>you throw your police badge on the table
>”Whats this supposed to mean?” the police chief asked quizzically
>You take out the police badge hidden in your sock and also throw it on the desk
>Two of your badges are there
>The chief seems unsettled as he picked up both
>”Ah yes. Well…we were unhappy at how long this case was going on. So we …decided to speed it up a bit.” He said placing the badges aside
>”You have to understand officer. Their kind dosnt belong on the streets. Nobody likes manitcores, not even other monster girls. You’re lucky to have survived this long against that monster. You know how disgusting their kind is." he said shuddering
>you begin to feel your rage build
I would try to get her into racing like I am. I'm not sure how fluffy tails would work on a motorcycle though. Seems like kind of a hazard. Like, in racing you're going to crash at some point. There's no avoiding it.
Would the asphalt grind her tails down to bloody nubs?
What a horrifying thought.
Drink juice boxes.
i seem to have mised the juce box thing . Care to explane?
Oi. We entered the police forge to fight drug lords and protect the street. Not to frame monster girls.
Oh please tell me It's time to disregard the consequences and throw down...
>Not to frame monster girls.
Well, it's not technically framing her in this case. She was baited into attacking, but she did beat us up.
punch that motherfucker across the jaw.
call jusge dredd and have him take down the chief for obstructing justice.
Christ, that sounds horrific.
Makes me want to post more fluffy tail to get it out of my head.
But then the power of magic happens and she just lands softly on them.
police chief aint living his life correctly
you guys know what happens then
>"30 years in the cubes creep." you hear from a nearby office.
>"no idea, but he gets the job done.".
Is that a box full of 9 fox girls or just one Kitsune?
Not the twist I was expecting at all.
I still think crazy blood-lust was better.
Not my story though so whatever.
Oh god, what a bastard.
is it weird that my favorite fantasy with a honeybee girl is to feed her royal jelly until she's big and fat enough to produce hundreds of little bee daughterus?
Well, maybe you could make some kind of leather pouch to protect the tails.
That aside, I wish I knew someone who could drawfag me something fluffy-tail related I could have a printshop do on vinyl that I could then apply to my bike without raising too many questions.
For example, a straight-up Tamamo would probably be a bad idea.
Arguable. Even then there's the rape.
>9 kitsune lolis jn a box
I think my heart would give out
a little bit yeah
Yeah. Feeding fetishes aren't really the norm here.
Just dangle one of those tails the furries like from the back of your bike.
Or better yet, get nine of them.
Yeah, I think for Safety's sake, we should hope it's a kitsune
Apparently violent rape seems to be legal but non-sexual assault is totally against the law.
Considering that cop-kun went and called the boss about it, manticore rapes don't seem to be that much of a crime. I'd say that the norms of society in this story adjusted themselves to accommodate the monster girls.
>Totally not a kumiho guise
Well, for starters my bike wouldn't pass tech with that.
Second, no way. Not just because it's something furries do. It's tasteless.
I want something tasteful yet mysterious enough that only I, or someone else who know of monster girls, would 'get.'
>Nobody likes manitcores
I don't care if she tries to tear me a new asshole, this makes me just wanna hug her.
Nope. No way am I letting her near my liver.
Don't be shy, anon
10/10 Would force into moonshining. Ain't no edible livers on the path we're walkin.
Bitch, I'll give you a pig's liver in exchange for a one night stand
How about a image of a Tamamo ball?
Pictures like these make me wonder what it'd be like to nuzzle my face into their fluffy tail.
Should have a some wh40k purging guy on your bike. Then they would know your into monster girls
>manticore rapes don't seem to be that much of a crime.
>violent rape seems to be legal
We're now overthinking something the author meant to be simple, but if Manticore rape is that much of a pain why not just make it fucking illegal so you don't waste months trying to get Manticores tossed in jail?
That might look kind of cool. If it was me it wouldn't even be in color though, just black or white.
>your fists ball up at your sides and you know what you're gonna do, there's no way to avoid this feeling inside of you except by destroying the man in front of you
>"I know it may seem tough but it was simply a... blah blah blah" he keeps on talking and your desire to break his face only grows, you step forward and he looks at you confused before realization spreads across his face "what are you doing?!" your fist flies forward to connect with nose
>"I wouldn't do that if I were you kid." a strong voice resonates from the doorway which was kicked in and your fist stops approximately a centimeter from your chief's face. "y-yeah, you touch me and I'll put you away scum!" the chief stands up and you're left with your fist and rage in the air.
>"after all" the voice continues talking "It's ten years for interfering with a criminal investigation led by a judge." the chief seems to stop frozen and you feel a hand push you out of the way and onto the ground
>"you're accused of obstruction of justice, 2 charges of entrapment, and a whole variety of charges involving emezzlement, how do you plea?" the man slams his hands onto your chief's desk who remains completely still
>"I-I don't understand?" the chief slowly backs away but the judge calmly takes out his gun and shoots two bullets into your bosses' knee caps.
>"understand this." the judge walks across the desk and grabs the now screaming and bleeding chief by the collar "How do you plea?!" he screams loudly into your chief's face.
>"g-guilty! P-please let me go!" the judge smiles and throws him to the ground straight on his knee which twists even more.
>"70 years in the cubes, and 80 years of community service scum." you're still dizzy on the ground from the strength of his push but you muster some strength to ask him as he drags away the bleeding boss.
>"w-who are you?" for a second you swear his scowl softens but he looks at you normally "I'm the law." before walking out with the chief in tow.
THANK YOU DREDD. YOU'RE THE HERO WE NEED AND DESERVE.
Tamamo ball isn't a bad idea.
Would anyone in these threads be able to do a lineart version that'd print well onto a laser-cut vinyl sticker?
Tamamo ball should be pretty easy, IIRC. I just can't be assed to dig through my HDD looking for it.
She is bit different from other Kumihos.
She eats souls instead of livers and is currently on withdrawal.
Well, the author borrows the concept of monster girls from the MGE, and in his first story, monster girls need semen.
Not really over-thinking it so much as just taking the laws of this world in stride.
Someone throw me a bone here. ;_;
What happens when you lose your soul again.
I will always love you judge Dredd
liver probably explodes.
Yeah, I don't have an image either. Pulling it from a screenshot is too small for print, so it'd have to be made into a vector.
The only program I can (kind of) use and have is MSpaint.
>You arrive back at manticore’s home some time later
>You don’t bother to open the door as there is no front door left, nor most of the front of the house
>You make your way inside to find manticore sitting on the couch, holding an ice bag to her head
>she was also bloodied and bruised up but in much better shape than you
>you flop down beside her exhausted both physically and mentally
>”So how did it go?” manticore asks weakly, her tail barely moving
>You explain to her what had happened
>She suddenly jolts up from her chair, alarmed
>”You killed him!?” she yells out surprised
>Well maybe, you couldn’t find a pulse after your repeatedly punched the police chief's face into the ground but you assumed his fat rolls and gotten in the way
>at most he suffered heart attack
>She merely laughs as she settles back down next to you
>you find her paws was holding tightly to your hand
>you grip it tightly as you tell her that there would be consequences
>She smiles at you squeezing
>You don’t know how long the two of you stay like this but eventually three black SUVS arrive at your house
>They came faster than you expected
>but surprisingly what comes out one of the SUVS is two humans, male and female, an oni monster girl and a Centaur monster girl
>the oni comes up to you, looking quite important
>”You’re the police officer was assigned to watch over this manticore are you not?” she says pushing up her dark sunglasses
>You identify yourself and manticore’s wings and tails suddenly flair up next to you, preparing for a fight
>pick a wife
>pick a mistress
>pick a step-sister who secretly wants the D but instead purposely walks in on your bath or leaves her door open just enough that you'll see her changing
if the guy and the manticore get together I'd be okay with this as the real ending
Either you become a lifeless husk or a ghoul enslaved by whatever took your soul. depends on the writer.
>You slip your other hand under Inet, and pinching and tweaking her clit while you work her folds with your tongue.
>and you think she’s drawing blood from her lip she’s biting it so hard
>Utterly and completely lost her orgasm
Small grammatical errors here and there. Here's just what I found.
Anyway, really enjoyed the addition, man. You were really able to emphasize how different the two girls felt. Good work.
Then why can't I still use the pig liver?
>monster girls need semen.
You don't need rape to get semen though.
And for that matter, if they wanted her to beat him up all they needed to do was have him show up at the door in uniform and insist to come in or something. They already knew she hated cops, the cop meido thing was just a waste of time.
I can vector, that's what I was thinking of anyway.
You die for real no going to heaven or after life stuff
And thank god, moot seems to have removed the ink blot captchas. Those shits were hard as fuck to figure out
i liked it but im also dyslexic so im not the beast at noticing typo/grammatical errors
It gave me a massive erection
Even if you got the transplant you not having a soul would just mean that the pigs liver would detonate as well.
All of them would be Caster.
>non police SUVs
Seriously, my eyes are already shit. Having a captcha that hard to read is effectively a permaban
Cheers. Though the second line is correct, is it not? I can't find anything wrong with it.
Oh, is that all?
>You don't need rape to get semen though.
Well, I'd say it would depend on their metabolism.
Anyway, in the scenario you described, the cops could be called out on 'aggravating' the manticore. This way, with her lashing out at cop-kun after 'accidentally' finding his badge, she could take the full brunt of the blame. And if they were questioned as to why they sent in a cop undercover to watch over her anyway, they could just bullshit and say that she needed 'special attention' after running out the last few guardians appointed to her.
There, easily rationalized. Just gotta be more lax in your reasoning.
see last panel
rock hard even though i just finished faping to your anubis one
>Cheers. Though the second line is correct, is it not? I can't find anything wrong with it.
It's a bit of a run on. Maybe re-write it as
>and you think she’s drawing blood from biting her lip so hard
>I can vector, that's what I was thinking of anyway.
I would be very appreciative if you could. I'm not sure how the detail would work out. There's a limit to how fine the lines can be and such, I think. I guess I could always send it to the printer and ask them if it'd work. And then get 'the look' as they try to figure out what it is.
i hate that look
This is the face of true happiness
Huh, doesn't seem that bad.
Also another noteworthy thing.
Once again in the last panel.
This comic does contain fair amount of mg. Do you want a link?
id just get it as a decal and slap it on the gas tank
>One day you're walking home from school/work/stripclub/pizzahut/lightbulbexpo
>you're suddenly pulled into a dark alley
>as you contemplate why the alley is so dark in mid day, you realize it's a succubus who plans to suck your spirit energy
>she does so, turning you into an incubus in the process
>thanks to that one day two weeks ago when you watched an episode of Will and Grace, you've been turned into an Alp instead
A) Find a guy and let him give you the D?
B) Go to a women's bar for lesbian nom-noms?
C) Make a website where you upload pictures of yourself in women's underwear and con people into buying the bras and panties you're wearing in them?
D) Explore your new body and indulge in the use of cucumbers and shampoo bottles?
E) sit back on your couch and watch Rocko's Modern Life episodes while eating Skittles
>the cops could be called out on 'aggravating' the manticore.
>Hitting cop while he's doing his job properly is okay now
Eh, I don't think it works that way. If anything, it'd probably cause less shit than having a cop in her house for no real reason. Still, it's not a huge enough detail to ruin the story or anything, just one of those niggling things you can find in any story if you look hard enough.
We can't BOTH be lazy here, dammit. You could at least grab the image if I'm going to ve-
Wait. Alice's bow would work pretty well too, wouldn't it? Or would that look too girly?
It warms to the cockles of my heart to bring joy to others.
To be a little gross, think about being turned on for the hours it took to write. My pants are a mess.
Gotcha. I re-read it a few times and got that feeling too. I tried changing it up.
It was pretty sensual, anon. I liked how more assertive the little sphinx has got after she started joining in on the festivities. I don't know why, but there's just something about an enthusiastic loli that gets me going.
Was hoping for a more detailed description of the imagined make-out session between Aamina and Inet, but since you're writing from the MC's PoV (and his vision was already obscured by something just as enchanting), then the vagueness is justified.
>you watched an episode of Will and Grace
still needs to be printed. Also, my gas dark is oddly shaped and the only flat surfaces on the side are covered by knee-grips.
I was thinking of placing the decal on the bottom of my fairing so it'd show up in photos.
Sure I'll open up MGQ. The Bow may be a bit girly.
Yeah, since it's being written in second-person I tried to keep it to things 'you' would see, feel, or imagine to be happening.
you poor bastard
>Hitting cop while he's doing his job properly is okay now
They've already got her locked up on house arrest. So in the scenario you described, and considering what the welfare people would know of her personality, it'd just be harassment to continue haranguing her about the issue.
Dress up in cute gender ambiguous clothing.
If there's a way to do it without screencapping the game itself, I do not know of it
E) sit back on your couch and watch Rocko's Modern Life episodes while eating Skittles
Holy shit is this even a question?
that would be cool and who cares if it looks girly if others dont like it fuck them
>The oni reaches out and grabs your hand, shaking it quite suddenly
>”Then on behalf of the Monster Girl Association for the Advancement of Equal Rights, we’d like to thank you for your wonderful service for monster girls everywhere” she said handing the two of you a lollipop from her coat pocket
>Confused, the two of you take it
>Oni continues “We’ve actually suspected the police department here to be discriminating against monster girls. And it’s thanks to you that we finally have the proof we need to shut them down. At least until properly reorganized.”
>The oni monster girl suddenly leans down and using just her bare hands snaps off the GPS ankle bracelet that manticore had been forced to wear
>You ask her if that was legal
>The oni monster girl merely shrugs “We’re a federal agency of the government. We can supersede a lot of things.”
>she begins to take out a slip of paper and scribbles something on it
>”This should be enough for reparations and cover the damages” the oni continues as it hands you the check with a quite a few zeros on it
>”Now if you will excuse me, I gotta go pick up a feral wolf girl.” she said doing a hand motion, that caused the other three agents to hop into their vehicles and drive off
>as quickly as they had come the three black SUVS had driven off again leaving the two of you alone in your dilapidated house
End myself for becoming an abomination
That's more than sufficient for a vector. I'm seeing three shades of gray here, is that cool? Please do keep looking for the bow, too.
>”Now if you will excuse me, I gotta go pick up a feral wolf girl.”
>”Now if you will excuse me, I gotta go pick up a feral wolf girl.
>”Now if you will excuse me, I gotta go pick up a feral wolf girl.” she said doing a hand motion, that caused the other three agents to hop into their vehicles and drive off
Busy day, huh.
wolf girl. Oh shit
And putting a cop IN her house has the same smell. It's going to get nasty either way, just being upfront about it is cheaper and would probably look less odd.
>>”Now if you will excuse me, I gotta go pick up a feral wolf girl.”
I smell a spin-off
>”Now if you will excuse me, I gotta go pick up a feral wolf girl.”
It already happened
It's already written
Hang on, going through the files with extractdata.
I heard you guys liked ghost girls.
I already talked about that?
Jesus Christ you guys are such faggots.
>Well that was odd
>You look over to manticore, who was just as befuddled as you albeit slightly more sad
>you ask her whats wrong
>”Well…now theres nothing to stop you from leaving.” She says wistfully
>”Your free now, just like how I’m free now.” She says wiggling her free foot
>you scratch your head
>you notice the ring that you were awarded when you graduated the police academy
>it was simple design, you didnt want it to be too flashy
>you considered it one of your greatest accomplishments in your life
>You slide the ring off
>You take her paw and place it there
>Manticore seems confused
>you quickly explain how human marriage customs work
>manticore instantly blushes but takes the ring and holds it close to her chest
>she leans agasint you, her shoulder pressing against yours
>”Hey…do you know how manticores propose marriage?” she asks in a low tone
>You shake your head, maybe you read it somewhere before but off the top of your head, you couldnt remember
>Manticore pushes against you some more, her tail wrapping around your leg
>Her face is red as she smiles evilly at you
>Oh, now you remember
There, I am content to let it end here. Manticore is such a hard character to write, shes supposed to be cruel and sadistic but thats still pretty hard to write even with a 2000 character limit, so the best I could do was tsundere manticore
Next story is actually a soviet fluffy tail inspired one, but i wanna get permission form that particular write fag before i delve into his territory
And an arachnee masseuse
It needs to be monochome for a die-cut I think.
Otherwise I'm not sure what they do for colors on a solid decal.
maybe grab alice's bow if you could too, please
maybe I could put it on the other side
Don't hurt me any more than this, anon.
At least she kept her word.
Go wild good sir.
Your storytelling is pretty decent.
I kind of wish you'd break away from the greentext format though.
And your grammar/typos gives me fits.
>No Judge Dredd ending.
Mordekaiser's ult captures their spirit and he controls them, so she's not doing it willingly
Bleeding dick anon from the last thread.
Can't fap for two weeks, probably.
Sorry for further offtopic, I just felt obligated to tell you what happened.
Glorious russian fluffy tail?
>Manticore pushes against you some more, her tail wrapping around your leg
>Her face is red as she smiles evilly at you
>Oh, now you remember
I like the format. It's more....flexible.
Alp a shit
This is the only time I've actually liked genderflipping succubutts (or genderbending in general) and that's just because the bro became fuckable with big tits and inverted nipples and didn't freak out about being a girl because it was controlled.
Shame this series was marred by a bitchy lolibutt. Would have been better without her.
It still doesn't make sense, especially given the fact that Cop-kun has zero qualifications to make him more suited for the job. They basically just got lucky that he put up with the bullshit long enough to get hit. They'd be better off with a "legitimate" warrant being served or the like, because a cop doing police business makes sense and stands up under scrutiny, a cop doing social work does not.
Oh, I was thinking of one of those decals for some reason. I'll see what I can do, probably end up making two different versions in the next week or so. Just check the archives for "tamamo ball" and my posts should show up whenever I finish.
Just find new and exciting ways to jerk off that don't involve the areas that are scratched.
It could be either. I'm not really sure which would work best. A black decal with white line-work would work too since I have black fairings.
I could also put something die-cut on my windshield, though then it wouldn't appear in photos.
Many thanks, anon.
So what did you do with your cat?
Thanks for the story. Feels like you spent more time defining the relationship between the two MCs here compared to your previous stories.
8/10 I thoroughly enjoyed it.
I'm trying to write about a world with monsterpeople in it but I keep running into a wall. I have Lamias and centaurs but I cannot think of any other species.
Is there a list somewhere or something to read up on about monsters?
Is this your first smutless story? And you really should've used that new manticore bride pic
>You received 1 - One Tamaball.
Are you serious anon?
Just look at this thread for many examples.
Or look at MGQ, or MGE.
Just shows that you should not mess with murder emperor.
Anon do you have a pastebin?
See, you're over-thinking things. You gotta be more flexible.
They couldn't take her in and had to settle with a house arrest. She ran out her previously appointed guardians, so they could say she needed special attention. And the cop was chosen for the job because they thought he was best suited for it, so I assume they knew that he had a high tolerance level.
Is that from WoW?
>You received 1 - One Alice bow.
So I'm still confused over the blood thing from a while back. What was up with that?
You are all wonderful people here and I am glad we share a common interest.
Could have had more smut. Regardless, 7/10.
Ahri a slut
I get about 30% of the story written out, and have a general idea of where to proceed form there. But its the other imput from the other anons that help inspire or change the story. Maybe somebody wanted something particular to happen or noticed something or I just had a brilliant idea that had to be written out. So there I am speed writing into 5:00 in the morning trying to put this out. Sometimes the plot has to be shortened or cut out and my mind takes the greatest hit because its fuking 5:00 in the morning and I started this shit at around 10:00 pm the previous day.
So for the other 60% its totally speed written, green text helps keep it short for me
Let me know if you need any other sprites, keep in mind they're not cleaned, so some might take some time.
If there were another monster girl game would you prioritize gameplay or monster girl sex scenes?
Don't do this
NEVER do this
MGE is good, people will bitch less about cosplay due to the limited descriptions in text.
You can also just think of your own stuff. It's not hard. Just think of an animal, real or fantastic and girl it up.
Cut out subplot. Its 5:00am, im tired and I didnt have enough time to expand on it
What kind of game is it?
Everyone must learn the horrors of setouchi and delphinus to be able to fully appreciate everything else.
Pretty good, she was still a bitch though. Also, what was up with the blood licking, did it not have any significance or did it go over my head?
That's a gun, not a monster
Refer to that post
Ah, you always run these pretty late, it seems. Well, go ahead and go to sleep, man.
Which is why Lissandra is better.
sorry for stupid question but MGQ is a game right? If so where can i get it? Im too tired to geal with google.
Sounds like me, though I do a straight up CYOA format with maybe 10% of it pre-planned.
I'm currently stuck thinking about how to make my most recent entertaining until I get to the end.
The 2k character limit really grinds my gears as I hate stretching something over two posts due to the minute-long post timer.
I am aware
The problem with a monochrome setup is that I'd be restricted to something that looks like this. It can be DONE, but when you're already working with an image as simple as Tamamoball taking out much more detail risks turning the design into little more than a pointed sphere with some notches in it. You'll notice that even AT&T's newer logo has three colors on it, plus some shading to round it out. Anyway, I'll play with it, you can decide what you want to use.
Of course I'm over-thinking it, that was established from the start. Your explanation just requires me to stop overthinking at a point you deem convenient. I say nay, my autism is taking this all the fucking way.
Which I'll probably do when I put it on the pastebin, its 5:00am I dont have the drive
Because of fluffy animal ears under that helmet
Higher res bow coming through.
/lolgen/ pls go
>Which I'll probably do when I put it on the pastebin
Ah yes. The cherry on top.
Unless you're thinking of expanding on that blood sub-plot, you may as well edit it out when you do put it on the pastebin.
B-but I'm scared to even look at the pastebins
Go to bed already, based anon.
I want more Hitomi
Yeah, there's the stuff. I wonder, could the die-cut people maybe scuff part of the design to give some semblance of color? This one would probably be better for monochrome than Tamamoball, but with two tones it'd look even better.
I keep thinking shes iori from imas
How about dota then?
Thanks anyway for the great story
Your stories always make my day.
just fuck already
LoL a fucking terrible too.
Why are you afraid of pastebins?
I dug through some PMs on a local forum where I talked about stickers with the printer, and she mentions they do full-color. If it's CMYK or what I don't know, but I do know that she has a bike with a full.... ugh, rainbow dash vinyl set that's quite colorful.
A full-color tamamo ball and ribbon may be possible.
>Of course I'm over-thinking it, that was established from the start. Your explanation just requires me to stop overthinking at a point you deem convenient. I say nay, my autism is taking this all the fucking way.
See, what I'm trying to tell you is that you need to suspend your sense of disbelief. Remember for a moment that the monster girls in these stories are based from a setting where they subsist on semen to a certain extent.
You gotta accept the closest rationalizations you're given. Press to hard to try and have it all make 'proper sense', and you just end up breaking a story. I'm not saying that you stop at a point where I find convenient. I'm just telling you to find your own point of convenience and stop yourself from going past that.
I've never played it.
I don't even play LoL anymore since the only guy I played it with kind of stopped.
I don't like playing alone.
Forever Silver I.
Mmmm yes spectre.
Wait. Is this the only time Hitomi shows up with a nose?
Because then I'll be there reading.
Oh man is this the kind of stuff they post in lolgen? I need to start browsing more if so.
Please read my stories and give me feedback.
I don't have much; it's certainly under 100k words. Probably barely 50k.
That is made by Karbo.
Ugh. That really is a horrible design
I kind of like it. It's fairly unique.
Okay, I'll do it. B-but only 'cuz you asked nicely.[\spoiler]
>I'm just telling you to find your own point of convenience and stop yourself from going past that.
I found a scab. I scratched at it. The wound is now bleeding. That's really all that happened here. It's not a story breaker or anything, if you asked me to point out a flaw in the story that might not even be one of them, but I did notice it and now I'm discussing it solely for the sake of discussing it, that's all. Besides, if I was entirely unable to suspend my disbelief I'd be griping about how stupid anything that requires semen to perform its life functions is, I just ignore those scabs, so in a sense I'm still suspending my disbelief, the height is just a little lower than your explanation requires.
>A full-color tamamo ball and ribbon may be possible.
And then some, it's really just a matter of what you want.
Is she suppose to use her horns like a missile attack?
Well, I mean for a little decal done by the local printshop for at-cost pricing.
Even if I was bold enough to go full itasha like that, it would be hilariously stupid for racing. I've already had two low-sides. Anything fancy would be annihilated.
b-be gentle. The War and MG stuff is my attempt at something resembling an earnest effort at creating a story.
Well you know, it all really started with this post
And I was just providing an explanation for why this sort of behavior would be tolerable. Then you started talking about how there were more efficient ways to get her to beat up a cop and blah blah blah. I was just addressing your own concerns.
And it's not really suspending your sense of disbelief if you're just ignoring it all, you know? To do that, you actually have to find an acceptable rational that you can believe in.
I will be kind. You've done good so far that I've seen.Been thinking of joining in on the CYOA fun but I'm afraid too many anons will find my setting/s exotic, ironically. That and there's been tons of CYOAs...
Do it during the 11-6pst time. All the other cyoa'ers seem to do it +7pm PST
Go to /tg/ then
Honestly getting tired of three+ people running COAs at the same damn time an NOBODY NAMEFAGS FOR CLARITY
Seriously, if you're going to fucking do this, get a name you can search threads/archives for
I just finished reading your Salamander/Sphinx thingy and I quite liked it. I think I'm gonna get started with your War and MG story now before going to bed
concerning sphinx/sala story... phrases like 'love juices' and 'girlcum' stand out quite a bit, so try not to repeat using them in such close proximity.
Were those three characters created just for that one-off, or were they existing? I guess I'll be finding out soon enough anyway.
Weekdays or weekends? Dumb question I know, but I work during the week...
My homeboard is /tg/ but I can't go back. And yeah, I'd namefag, nothing to worry about there.
Indeed. There has been some anon saying he's doing a bookwurm story and we sort of got one yesterday but I'm still not sure if he was another anon or the bookwurm one since it ended so fast and it seemed like the bookwurm guy actually had a long story in the works
It's even more annoying when they don't bother linking to their previous posts.
I was about to mention that these writefags should name themselves for easier search, I guess I second that.
Oh, they came from this story
The story he posted on this thread was just an extension.
>And I was just providing an explanation for why this sort of behavior would be tolerable.
And I showed why your explanation wasn't tolerable. Seriously, taking months and planting things just to get one idiot cop punched is akin to building a Goldberg machine around your entire house to light the stove. The trick here is that when you're not thinking about how clunky the machine needed to light the stove is you still have fun watching it work. I'm kind of doing both at the same time.
>To do that, you actually have to find an acceptable rational that you can believe in.
That's one way to attain SoD, but not thinking about the issues works just as well. The result is pretty much the same.
Posting my monstergirl waifu.
I think the timing counts for both day and ends. The thread from this afternoon had none or one really short lived cyoa, we actually talked about monster girls in that thread instead of jerk stories
Won't you be joining us soon, brother?
>That's one way to attain SoD, but not thinking about the issues works just as well. The result is pretty much the same.
Er, that is what suspension of disbelief is. It's all about being given a reason to make something look like 'it could happen'.
It's not that I have a problem with your way of doing things. I was just offering you explanations and telling you how they could work out. Here, for example
>Seriously, taking months and planting things just to get one idiot cop punched is akin to building a Goldberg machine around your entire house to light the stove.
I could simply state that they had not planned to do that at first.
Since the manticore's previous guardians didn't last for a day, and that the boss had reason to believe that the MC's character would allow him to persevere and last longer, perhaps they thought that the relationship between the two would naturally degrade to the point where she would physically assault the cop. The guy was pretty racist, after all, so it's not hard to accept that this was his line of thinking. But seeing how it wasn't happening any time soon, they decided to plant the copy of the badge in the house to force a conflict.
I don't namefag because I just throw everything into a pastebin.
I've also been told I have kind of a unique writing style and people have been able to pick me out.
Eh, getting tired and running on a limited number of euphemisms for stuff can make things difficult. As another anon said, it's just another lewd story that ties into the 'escape from monster city' cyoa. The end of that one has a lewd scene with the same trio as well.
Any feedback is great.
I've only just started writing (The war and MG 1st chapter was like my second attempt ever at writing something) so I'm just kind of trying to improve by volume at the moment.
Yeah, that's why I start writing so late. I get home from work, eat, relax, etc. On weekends I can be up until the morning hours, like now.
>I don't namefag because I just throw everything into a pastebin.
Yeah, this makes it fine. I can follow a CYOA well enough, the problem is in reading the entire story. Having it all put in one place, however, mitigates that problem.
> Looks 100% human
>giant ice claws for hands
She's a yuki-onna. It counts.
Bitch, that's just ice magic. She has real hands
Gotta agree with this anon here. If she had a more striking appearance, it would be more acceptable.
How'd you even grab the sprites? I've been wanting know how to do that for a while.
Kind of a slow hour at this time. All the Americans are in bed and the Euros haven't quite awoken yet.
I was thinking, the bow wouldn't work so hot due to the black fairings. It'd need to be on a light color background to work... which then makes the tamamo ball not work
I'm trying to wring another chapter of the sharpshooter story out of my brain but it's just not coming to me
Try writing in another format, IE not greentext.
Try writing the ending of the chapter first and work towards the beginning.
Read other stuff that's a little similar for inspiration.
but greentext masks my incompetence
Works great for most formats.
No it doesnt.
It just highlights the cancer.
Shame she has to die.
>Not living out your golden years with your steppenwolf waifu in Argentina
I got foxgirls and squidgirls so far in this thread, is there a list that I can crib from?
Hi /a/. Just got back from a weekend skiing, so no scans tonight.
I'll scan and probably stream a TL tomorrow night.
I have the magazine. This chapter. Also, next month we have a break.
>Not killing all fascist scum with your gun/monster waifu
What's your problem?
Your night or our night?
> Break next month
>not being a fascist overlord with your dragongirl waifu
>Also, next month we have a break.
Okayado is gonna work on getting us the anime again.
Just like when he was "sick".
THEY HAD BETTER NOT BOTCH MIIA's SLITHERING!
is it just me or there are less tripfags and more avatarfags now?
>Also, next month we have a break.
Guess we'll have to wait a bit longer before we finally get to meet the Dullahan.
Where the hell have you been?
I'm still waiting for the winter to arrive. There's barely enough snow here to cover the grass.
Hope you had fun.
>not crushing the inferior races under the heel of your boot with your monster girl fascist waifu
>Being a communist
Enjoy sharing you're waifu with the proletarians
at least post girls.
Not like there is deficit of them in mtg.
I dunno about that.
Have you tried?
Re-write one your greentext stories as 'normal' prose and post it.
I think you may be surprised.
Also, how can you expect to get better if you don't push yourself? We learn and grow when we're uncomfortable and scared.
What? The only guy that I can think of who avatarfags is that slothguy.
maybe someday. at the moment I feel like suddenly shifting formats would be weird
>next month we have a break.
his or yours?
either way its fine
Daily reminder that Harpies are by far the hottest monster girls to me, personally.
Don't do it later, or you will always 'do it later.'
Man have you seen the tripe I shit out on this board? I'm fucking ecstatic when someone says 'Hey I didn't slip into a grand mal seizure when I read your bullshit.'
Shit, have you seen the amount of people that clamor for your continued storyline? That means you're made something people find interesting. You've already got the hard part down.
We are getting more and more tripfags who write shitty beta self-insertion fapfics in their attempts to be appreciated by anyone.
That's one of the few harpies that doesn't look like they're underage so I'll give you that. I need to see more adult aged monster girls. That everyday manga seeemed to have a good thing going until the harpy and the daemonette showed up.
Okay, I have to ask. Is anyone else having problems with some posts not appearing? The only way I can know they're there is if someone replies to them or if they're a reply to another post
Do you have something in your filter that's blocking out certain posts?
Do you have inline quote links turned on? Sometimes, when you follow a chain of quotes, some of them disappear when you close them all up. Just refresh the page and it'll return to normal.
Don't use a filter
That must be it. I'll just turn it off, it's kind of annoying
Requesting a B.F.M Monstergirl picture
I don't remember seeing that happen when I played it.
>Thinking that you're above it while either just another prole or a fascist piece of shit.
Class is everywhere tovarisch.
It is,let's keep it that way.
I guess you must be special then, because you are so classless you could be a marxist utopia.
I'll have to remember this for future use
>next month we have a break
So you all like monsters. How would you deal with an Men In Black type agency dealing with all monster-people active in the immediate Earth Area?
I cant belive you really thought you would get a different answer.
You really think that a Mr. Johnson and Mr. Black would let you join their little sub-juncture agency, regardless of your experience with some urethra happy harpies?
Doesnt matter, i will wear their skin.
Don't you think that monstergirls prefer their lovers to be shotas?
no, because 'monstergirl' is a catchall term for all monster-human hybrids that are female, including ones that are adult women.
is there a pastebin somewhere with all pastebins from monstergirl threads ?
Once again I have to add more fictional characters to my "too good for me" list.
Okay, but I believe that most monstergirls prefer shotas...
Can't seem to find this on sadpanda
I think you need to see a doctor, your cancer is spreading.
The master smutlist, be warned
Zombina best tomboy.
Well, Mon Squad is just Zombina and her unimportant bitches.
All Mon girls are great girls.
>Swords stronger than steel don't do shit
>Even if you don't whip out your dick, you're still fucked.
Unless you have a blessed sword, you're fucked.
I don't get it.. what's so lewd?
No they arent.
Manako is boring, Tio is shit, Smith is just a poor comic relief character.
does anyone know if monstergirl quest part 3 finished translating? and if it did, can you post a link to it?
She's best to bully
I'd give her the tweed pettycoat
Yes, since last month.
The usual place at rogue.
I just started playing myself though I've had it downloaded for a month.
Why are all girls in EMG such massive sluts?
Is it time for Greentexts?
>Implying they are not all just smitten by the natural charms of the Darling
I can't fault them for that.
Well he IS Tenchis cousin.
What does her eye feel like?
Wet, disgusting and all over the floor.
She's a woman not 3 steps behind a strong Japanese man, she might as well have a hourly price tag on her.
There are strange things done in the midnight sun
By the men who moil for gold;
The Arctic trails have their secret tales
That would make your blood run cold;
The Northern Lights have seen queer sights,
But the queerest they ever did see
Was that night on the marge of Lake Lebarge
When I cremated Sam McGee
Now Sam McGee was from Tennessee,
Where the cotton blooms and blows
Why he left his home in the South to roam
'round the Pole, God only knows.
He was always cold but the land of gold
seemed to hold him like a spell;
Though he'd often say in his homely way
that he'd sooner live in Hell.
On a Christmas Day we were mushing our way
over the Dawson trail.
Talk of your cold! Through the parka's fold
it stabbed like a driven nail.
If our eyes we'd close, then the lashes froze
till sometimes we couldn't see,
It wasn't much fun, but the only one
to whimper was Sam McGee.
And that very night, as we lay packed tight
in our robes beneath the snow,
And the dogs were fed, and the stars o'erhead
Were dancing heel and toe,
He turned to me, and "Cap", says he,
"I'll cash in this trip, I guess;
And if I do, I'm asking that you
won't refuse my last request."
It's like people haven't seen this guy, just look at how perfect he is.
Thats not a perfect body.
A perfect body doesn't have to be huge.
isnt that just the patch file? don't i still need the actual game?
Uh, just download the japanese version of the game from nyaa. It's been out since half a year ago. And it only takes about a minute to run the english patch and combine all 3 parts of the game. Just read the readme.
Do you think Miia has visible tanlines, or is she naturally darkened?
I'd like to think she goes out on the upstairs patio and lays out to tan.
Beach Chapter when?
cool. thanks, anon
she's from a jungle tribe
>Dullahan uses a scythe
Fuck that, there's no good Sword vs Scythe comparison.
How am I supposed to get MEMORIES BROKEN, TRUTH GOES UNSPOKEN if there's no Sword vs Sword.
Okaydo is really going full Arai on me, just shooting me in the fucking chest when I trust in him.
Just call me Kido and toss me on top of 100 Billion Yen, I'm done
So vampires don't count as monstergirls?
before i go to sleep
Tan Miia a shit
i didnt mean to quote anyone.
You're a shit
Though, Papi is the darkest, while Cerea is fair skinned, and smells of Mane and Tail with a hint of Lavender.
Tan Papi a good
Miia uses Darling morning wood as a source of heat so I don't think she has tan lines.
No, but the perfect body certainly is bigger than... that.
>Cerea smells of feces
Fixed that for you.
What does she do, touch it?
She coils certain parts of her body around it.
Gentlemen, i present to you, Heaven.
>You'll never wake up with miia hugging you.
>you'll never wake up with any kind of feminine individual hugging you.
Where can I order a box of mofu mofu?
Good Morning Dahling.
I always thought she might have a slight lisp due to her massive tongue, now I just want it to be when she gets flustered.
I prefer my bones to be unbroken
This is the best Dredd ending yet.
I think he meant that it's bad and you should feel bad because it kinda hurts to look at.
Why would you do that? You hurt my feelings by making her so sad.
Why are you always such a pussy, pussy-kun?
Darlings balls must be so blue that they actually turned into black holes.
who needs their shoulders in properly located
who needs their shoulders in the right places
Why can she be real
Thought I'd try to clean the title page up.
Every night Ms Smith slips by darlings bed and sucks him off.
You talking shit?
I swear to fucking God if Dullahan has big boobs im going to lose it.
she would never love an /a/non even if she was real.
And if she was real you'd all end up calling her a 2DPD slut who sleeps around and only cares about material shit anyway, so what's the fucking point.
Gah, it's hard to get these tiny scans decent.
I want Tio to be my Onee-chan
Jesus, too big!
Yeah, i mentioned Cerea didnt i?
Quick Darling, grab a jar of dirt!
I'm not following...
Aye fuck you m8, I fookin rek ur shit. I swear on mi mum I will.
You know where i am.
that's why you wait for the high-res .png raws.
aww i missed the new chapter
Damn thats short.
Hopefully the Miia one will be atleast 8 meters.
Not yet, just a few preview pages.
Hopefully soon. Double helping of Hitomi this month as well.
>Double helping of Hitomi this month as well.
But its shit.
>Not yet, just a few preview pages.
You a shit.
Any one notice how where his head is being cut is right where that half circle notch in the scythe. Darling is not dead?
Ofcourse, thats how i know its shit.
I think that's the entire point of the notch. Maybe took a double-take but it's pretty clear he's not being cut.
All i know is, Miia is about to wreck some shit.
Lamias, harpies, onis, cyclops etc is one thing.
But a race of people who can pop off their heads and still go about their business as usual will be difficult to explain.
Biology frowns upon this shit.
I hope she has normal but beautiful boobs
they could have a seprate brain somewhere in there torso
symbiotic relationship of 2 different mgs
The power of the brain is nothing compared to the power of the heart
I did not.
I am sorry sir.
Please don't put me on the wall.
So retarded, i can definatly see Okayado going with this.
Or he will go Illuminati route like CW.
Screw the Headless Horseman! Damn mount never drops for me.
Your silly power of heart is nothing compared to the power of the Dark Side
I got it on my paladin alt, first run.
it's magic, I ain't gotta explain shit
Excapt this is a universe where magic DOESNT exist.
How do you know that?
Don't you believe in the magic of the heart, anon?
The only magic in EMG universe is Miia.
There are all manner of creatures yet to be revealed to human kind in EMG,
What would happen if Ootsuka Reika drew monster girls?
10/10 would marry
would anyone be interested in replaying the bookwyrm cyoa from a few days ago?
No, we have had enough cancer already.
They'd find my decomposing body, hand still clutching my chest, a few days after the first chapter is scanned.
Was it completed? I thought it just kind of disappeared.
>Not the Combat Train Cerea
One smack on a leg and its off to the gluefactory.
there were two actually both written by me
the first one was kind of a spin off from the main story which was about the centaur and bdsm
the second was pure bookwyrm but ended abruptly because I fucked up
And Miia will do what?
Try to crush steel armor?
Suffocate something that doesn't need lungs?
Theres a power behind those scales that the worthless horse couldnt even begin to imagine.
don't you guys know, that even death fears Okayado's dullahan?
>there are people who actually like that vegetarian piece of shit
>Can't even break Rachnee's webs
>Miia having any strength
>Meanwhile Cerea can cut solid objects with a Fake sword
>And fire three arrows in a .5 second span
>and can probably reach speeds of 80 MPH in all cardinal directions
more like her tits will randomly fall out onto D
>doesnt realise that Okayado had to pull deus ex machina just to keep Centorea relevant
Jesus christ, i cant even take you seriously anymore.
>deus Ex machina
at least use actual arguments and not buzzwords
>somehow cutting apart a door with a fake sword faster than gravity can deal with it
>realistic and not deus ex at all
Atleast try to support your arguments instead of just being a retard.
YES AND WE'RE HELPING HER THIS TIME!
Miia is too jealous
Papi is too bird brained
Cerea is too sheltered
Mero is Mero
Suu is a rapist
Rach is a rapist
So you're the bookwurm anon then. I didn't realize both stories were being done by the same person. When are you going to continue the omu one? I'm curious what you're going to do with the harpy
>in a series with a Doppleganger and a Zombie sentient pile of thick water
>In Japanese anime and manga
At least try.
Suu is superior rapist
Hey, i just want a biologically and evolutionary sound monstergirl world.
Because thats how we need to play the game if we want it to come true.
i wonder how they will deal with her
Give me a location
What if the dullahan actually has a really long, flexible neck, that can camouflage itself?
So Cerea and Dullahan fight when? Its going down.
Im at your place.
Shes a giraffe?
Okaydo already had that chance, he blew is
source on this comic please
I wish he'd have kept the 'brothers' thing in EMG. I am so sick of this stupid harem bullshit where it's just a rotation of whose tits pop out for half the pages.
one of okayado's previous works, you can find it on sad panda
I wish he just kept it darling and miia and instead built the world around them.
Okayado cant write for shit, his one and only talent lies in drawing tits.
best monster girl coming in
Well, it's not a bad talent if you only get to pick one.
He had to make it harem because then the other fags who didn't have lamia as their favorite would be like, but muh waifu and his manga wouldn't be as popular probably.
Silly you, you posted the wrong image.
Here, let me correct your mistake.
Ah yes, profit over quality.
EMG is the moeshit equalent of monstergirls.
>No wife skills
>not picking the talent to grab tits whenever, whereever, whoever
too bad moeshit is all we have
Look like you made the same mistake. Here is the right image
Your overconfidence is your weakness
>lies and cosplaytier
My oh my.
Someone is well versed in trolling.
like I said, use the 'brothers' thing. Every chapter focuses on one guy and one girl without all the pointless harem fuckery.
Hell I probably could've even been fine with three girls, but it's getting stupid now.
Or at least have more plot and less PLOT.
Just something, man. Hroz' one-shot characters have more development in four pages than Okayado's girls over ten chapters.
What was better the "brothers" series or The Adventures of Prof. John Smith?
I'll probably keep doing omuchan after I finish with bookwyrm, I just really love bookwyrms. how did you know I was omuchan guy as well?
Your faith in your waifu is your's.
Brothers was about living with a girl, John Smith was about mounting them and breaking them.
To be fair, it was a new twist on a safe theme. You never put too many radical ideas in at once or risk tanking. Gotta pander.
It may be just a generic harem but that's what you need to bring more monstergirls mainstream and work toward anime and such. The time for risk is after you build up your capital.
Like how could Sunrise ever have been able to make Dougram without raking in those Gundam bux? The risk is that you get mired in the same profitable rut though. And that's what you hope doesn't happen.
Brothers stories can give you heart attacks.
Smith is just porn.
Namefagging to help eliminate confusion.
There's a CYOA, which that anon is doing, and then I'm writing a completely separate one. My current backlog is thus (in no real order):
* Shy Ushi Oni
* MILF Lamia for Dan
In other news, I think I missed Captain's weekly story. Did he post one?
Because we have few competent cyoa writers. And I guess I've been able to recognize when you write and you usually end with what do.
Yes, here you go
Who do you think is competent?
One day she will be real and then we will see who gets the last laugh
>Smith is just porn
And the Brother werent?
>Brothers was about mounting girls
I dont see much of a difference really.
We either get moeshit or MERMAIDKNEES.
Japs dont have any balls.
You go big or go home, and i guess its the japanese tradition to go home.
All the great works that started what we have today were risks that they took because they had passion.
Not that they wanted money above all else.
Okayado is a greedy pig.
And no cheating.
They have some heartwarming things.
Four years ago the hermit crab was nothing. Okayado is doing what he should IMO. This is his one shot and he needs to stick the landing. Milk that all he can and work on more ambitious projects with the dividends.
Well we only have two real in thread cyoa writers, the one who did the monster city, and then the one I was responding to. There might be other cyoa writers on the pastebin but I've never read those. There's one who is doing the delivery one but his doesn't seem very good. Also there's another who was doing a zipangu one with a lot of grammatical errors, but he seems to have disappeared. His seemed like it might've been quite good considering the amount of back story he already had planned out.
I dunno about calling him greedy. Not like people who create manga are exactly rich, even the very popular authors.
Though I do think there's just way too much pandering in anime/manga these days. It's like the creators got too close to the fans and now feel obligated to provide specific content to keep them happy. And the fans expect them to do it.
He should improve his writing before he does anything else.
If it wasnt for the monstergirls, noone would be reading EMG.
What do you think of 12beast?
It went to shit when it went from one-shot to actual series.
>Someone thinks you're a semi-competent writer
I hope to resume the last one I was working on, and actually make it interesting.
Dont kid yourself, they just want monstergirl smut.
They will accept anything to get that.
Doest Okayado hate working on 12Beasts
anon, let the kid dream for a bit.
I like writing smut too
so it all works out
I think he mentioned he was sick of working on it because of the pressuring deadlines.
They were ready to murder a mermaid to get some berzerker christmascake lizard tail I guess.
Damn I need to update the pastebin.
When did this happen?
I never knew there were so many women in these threads.
This shit is twilight level.
Is the guy who was going to write the CC Centaur story here?
Last time I wrote smut someone said the sex part happened to quickly
Do you guys actually like background to your smut? I usually just try to dive right in and have the two peoples relationship be whatever they want it to be prior to the sexing. Do I have to describe how they met in detail or something?
background is the most important part. If we just wanted sex, we'd go to porn&virus.com
That's because Hroz is the king of Vanilla
I forgot about the yellow bird guy, his is okay as well but I haven't bothered reading his since it's so long.
pick one and only one. They are rape machines, not lovey dovey snugglefriends
>implying its not what you are interested in
You faggots go after all straight for the sex in every CYOA.
The faggots turn to CYOA-cancer because they cant make a scenario in their heads to fap, so they need help.
And they cant fap properly if you dont completly build the scene for them.
Its so pathetic, i think you guys really just are a bunch of middleaged housewives.
>he's not very good
Haha, you have a better opinion of me than myself.
Fuck that, I personall partake in the CYOAs just for the sake of the story not only because I want to fuck X or Y.
Having a bit of story before the smut can make it more enjoyable.
Not always, there can be outliers
Its ok anon, you dont have to lie to me.
So how much? I usually just have the scenario explain itself. Anon finished his work in the royal palace, Anon finished sorting Dragon's gems, Anon was walking along the forest. etc
Like a little more than half of the first post goes to "background". Is that too little? I feel like some people give 2 full posts for it
Oh, so you're that guy?
Yeah, it happened too fast if you want to make an actual story. Euphemisms were good though.
Also you should get your pastebin linked on the big pastebin, makes me sad only your cyclops teacher one was on there. Also you still haven't done your lamia one yet? I only ask because your lamia story was what made me look at your other works.
Can she dislodge her vagina as well?
Yes, that filename tells you exactly what to do.
Look at something on pixiv and you'll notice there's an eight digit number in the URL.
Replace it with the one from the image.