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"Rina, I need you to come with me okay?"

"E-Eh?" Rina says in surprise. Before she could say anything you grab her hand and you drag her out to where Shin wanted to meet with you.

"Young miss!" The maids try and stop her as both of you run out. "The master told us to keep you here!"

"Sorry! She apologizes to her maids. "I'll be back later okay?"

You run towards the meeting spot as you held Rina's hands. Right before you get there you notice a dark sillouete moving in the darkness. "Was it just my imagination?" You think to yourself.

"Shin!" You call out to your friend as you finally get to the bridge. "Shin where are you?!"

"Shin-kun!" Rina helps you out as well.

"Rina, let's separate to find him okay?" Rina nods her head.

"Sure"

Was this Shin playing a prank on you? why would he do this? "Shin! You keep calling out to him over and over again.

Then as you pass by under the bridge you felt an arm grab you into the darkness and pin you down. "Shi-"

The dark figure puts her finger on top of your lips as she says. "Shhh!"

It took you a bit of time to recover from the shock, but once you did you instantly recognized who it was. "Reiko!? what are you doing?"

Reiko just smiles back at you. "Teehee" She says as she sticks out her tongue.

[1/2]
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>>100298418
RAPE SCENE INCOMING
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fucking hell
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I fuckin knew she was bad all along. There's no way to interpret "lips curling into a smile like a cat" in a good way. She did that shit twice to us. We're about to get used and abused.
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"Shin!" You hear Rina's voice in the background still try and find him. Reiko was on top of you, preventing you from moving. She then bends down and she puts her right ear to your chest.

"Your heart is beating faster and faster huh Anon? is it because of Rina?"

"What are you doing Reiko? why are you doing this? and where is Shin?"

When Reiko holds up Shin's phone with a mischievous smile you knew what was going on. "Sorry Anon... I had to borrow his phone to call you out here I didn't expect Rina-chan though so I guess I'll make this quick..." Rina's tone had a sense of confusion to it. "Anon... do you really think me and Shin would make a good couple?"

"Huh? what do you mean?"

"It's just... he asked me out today... and I didn't really know how to answer... it was the first time anybody said "I love you" to me..." She then laughs at her own statement. "Well outside of you know... my clients..." It was too dark to see, but you could've sworn Reiko's eyes were watery. "What should I tell Shin?"

You didn't know why, but her tone was almost begging for you to say, "No, don't go out with Shin"

[ ] "I think you guys are a perfect couple."

[ ] "Just follow what your heart says"

[ ] Custom
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>>100298418
>"Rina, let's separate to find him okay?"
I hope all four of the characters end up as sex slaves because Reiko sold them out to her fat, old man customers who don't mind cute boys, either.
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>>100298698
We're fucked
>[x] Go find Rina and get the fuck outta there
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please do not promote disgusting fanfiction threads
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Do you people actually enjoy shitting up /a/?
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>>100298698
[x] I think you guys would make a perfect couple.

Now get off me skank.
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>>100298698
[x] custom: "Look, if you aren't into shin that's fine, I'm sure he will understand. How about me, you, and rina go out to lunch tomorrow to discuss your situation? (This opens up the harem possibility. We can't just leave rina, she was first. But reiko is sweet and we can't crush her either. So why not both?)
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>>100298814
>>100298842
Newfags pls go
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>>100298698
[X] "Just follow what your heart says"
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>>100298698
[X] I think you both deserve better than a relation that isn't based on mutual feelings so don't make me decide for you.
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>>100299010
*relationship
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>>100298698
[ ] "Just follow what your heart says"
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>>100298698
>[X] Custom
"Do you want me?"
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>>100298814
>>100298842
Threads like these were really common several years ago as I remember. So go fuck yourself.
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>>100298698
[X] "Just follow what your heart says"
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>>100298698
[X] "Hey, it doesn't have to be this way. Here hold my hand for a moment. Do you feel that warmth? Everything will be okay."
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-> Just follow what your heart says
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>>100298814
>>100298842
Get lost!
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>>100298698
Bros before hoes.
Tell her to calm down. GENTLY push her aside in a way Rina can se you both. She is desperate for some reason but that is okay, what is not okay is she using shin's phone to make us worried as shit.
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inb4 OP wants us to keep Reiko so bad he will use some cliche as "we didn't remember that we did promise to marry reiko when we were like 5 years old".
and also: "whenever we aren't with reiko we feel bad for no apparent reason"
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>>100298698
As we push Reiko aside we can see Shin's body floating in the river.
Reiko smirks like a cat.
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"Just follow your heart" You tell Reiko. "Just do whatever you feel is right..."

"I... I see..." Giving her such a vague answer probably didn't help her, but in order for her to be happy, you knew she has to make this decision herself.

Just then both of you noticed that Rina's voice has stopped in the background. "Ah... you feel so warm Anon..." As Reiko laid down on your chest your beating hearts start to sync, as does your breathing.

You couldn't get yourself to say it as well, but Reiko felt warm as well. However, both of you were startled as Rina's voice cutes through the silence.

"What are you doing Anon?" Maybe because it was dark, maybe it was just your imagination, but for a split second you could see deep darkness in Rina's eyes. Darkness fueled by jealousy.

Immediately Reiko unmounts you. "Ah! sorry about that Rina! I just tripped and fell on Anon so it's nothing..."

Rina smiles a forced smile as she pretends to look for Shin. "Ah... where has that Shin gone off to... he just ran away after he confessed to me!"

Reiko then bids you and Rina farewell. "I'll see you guys around" She then limps off while muttering something to herself.

"Hmm... what was that about?" Rina's laugh gave off an odd feeling for you. "Shall we go back to your place? Anon?"

[ ] "Are you sure your father would be okay with that?" Drop her off at her house.

[ ] "Sure! let's go back to my place"

[ ] Custom
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>>100299373
I would still boner her. I would cuddle with her and talk about how she killed Shin. Happy End.
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>>100298698
[x] Custom:
"Reiko, open your eyes"
A car's headlights flashes her face with light: "I see, you eyes are open"
"A-anon kun"
"Look, Reiko, what you did was wrong. You can't use Shin's phone to trick me into coming here. Next time wear no disguise and come into the open"
"But anon, it was cold outside and.... am i here in vain?"
"Reiko, hold on to the night and there will be no shame"
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>>100299555
[X] Custom
Go after Reiko
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>>100299555
[X ] "Sure! let's go back to my place"
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[X] "Sure! let's go back to my place"
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>>100299555
[x]custom "lets go to the convenience store first, then my house." Gotta stock up on condoms nigga, mc-kun is all about safe sex.
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>>100298814

CYOA is an old thing on /a/, /tg/ , /x/ and even /b/, at least the last times I used to browse. Why strikes me as odd is the high levels of whiteknight/touma mode 'must help everyone'. I miss the old squicky CYOA trying to make them as fucked up as possible.
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[X] We can't let Reiko sleep outside or with one of her customers. Grab both Reiko and Rina and have them sleep over at your place.

>>100299555
>for a split second you could see deep darkness in Rina's eyes. Darkness fueled by jealousy.
We are going to die now.
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>>100299844
edgy
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trips
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>>100299555
[x] "SureI let's go back to my place"
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[x] Go for Reiko.

I have already known what the normal end is like. I wanna see whether the Reiko route could end well. Please deliver, good anons.
I'll check back tomorrow since I gotta sleep.
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>>100299555
Takes Rina to your place, say that you want to spend more time with her, but also show that you are worried about her bruises, or she getting more of those. Also kiss her, DEEP, loli vampire monogatari 2nd season style. Just to show her to not worry about it.
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>>100299555
>jealousy

[X] "Sure! let's go back to my place"
Need to streghten the love and share D.
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>>100299955
seconded, also manly grabbing her while doing it.
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>>100299955
Yes.
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>>100299555

X custom

Take her home, call the father, demand explanation for the beating, call what ever Nip based child hotline there is. Fuck it go on the run, even if you did the above if he really is abusive (he could have just hit her because he shat himself that she disappeared in a foreign country, or she could get her yandere tendency from him) his job will give him resources.

Too many damn cops man, ask Shin and his father for help/evidence, start the blackmail game. We need answers.

7 fucking captcha
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>>100300082
No, you'll ruin her life. We need her to play the part of perfect daughter until we can free her.
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OP you little fucker you said six hours and I set an alarm. I would've missed this if I didn't check the catalog just now. What do you have to say about that, huh? HUH?! HUHHHHHHHHh?!
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1 - Go after Reiko
6 - take Rina to your place
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>>100299955
This, at least the kiss please.
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>>100300675
The old thread died
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I can't unsee Rina as Rena anymore.Reiko is used goods but still best garu.
Still, Sunohara mode is the best mode.

Oh, the feels!
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Those CYOA threads are allowed now? Make up your own mind, /a/.
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>>100301004
i guess /a/ isn't just one person after all
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"Sure, let's go to my place" You tell Rina. After she helps you stand up she immediately clings onto you. You have never really seen Rina like this before. She is usually more reserved. You couldn't help but smile after you figured out she must be jealous about Reiko. "I guess in some ways she is still childlike after all..."

"What is it Anon?" Rina asks why you were laughing. All you do is you pat her on the head as you say.

"It's nothing"

She puffs her cheeks in disapproval as she says. "Mou... you are so mean Anon!"

Finally getting back to your apartment you tell her to get comfortable. "I'll get us dinner at the convenience store okay?"

"Okay" Rina nods. "Is it okay if I use the bathroom?"

"Go for it" You tell Rina.

On your way to the convenience store, your heart was racing. It was almost as if you were nervous. "Two boxed lunches again huh?" The man behind the counter smiles slyly at you.

However you were too distracted by another thing on the shelf. "Should I get it... I don't know if I should..." You think to yourself. "What kind of message would I be sending Rina if I show back up there with a condom!?"

"You okay sir?" Finally you hear the cashier call out to you. "That would be 16.99 sir"

"Ah, sorry yes..."

[ ] Bringing condoms back will just force Rina.

[ ] It'll show Rina you care enough for her to have safe sex. "Actually, can I add one more thing to that?"

[ ] Custom
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>>100301004
/a/, is a collection of people. How can people agree on everything?
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>>100301145
>[X] Custom
Buy condoms and put in your pocket. for emergencies.
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>>100300675
You better cacth up on the old threai in the archives.
Alot of stuf happend after the supposed 6 hour brake.
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>>100301145
Buy condoms, you don't need to slap it in her face. You know she is wanting it for years.
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>>100301145
[x] buy the condoms, but keep them secret unless she tries to sleep with us
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>>100301237
[x]Custom
Buy a condom or two, just don't stick it on your forehead for everyone to see duh
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>>100301145

>Lead Rina to her house, head to yours alone and call Shin over for epic bro-tier night.
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>>100301145
[x] Get a lot of condoms and do Rina all night long to the point that she realizes that she needs a professional girl to help her take care of our libido.
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>>100301004
Not that we should be flooded with them, but I guess just a bit is ok, we don't get much of those threads anyway.
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Bump
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>>100301145
[x] Buy some condoms for Reiko
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>>100301145
>[x] ribbed for her pleasure
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>>100301300
Buy condom and call shin over, we are going to have a condom balloon fight tonight.
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>>100301145
>[x] Buy condoms and hide them in pocket, then see how the night will unfold.

duh
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>>>/soc/
>>>/b/
>>>/lit/
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Last thread, if anyone missed the last part;

http://archive.foolz.us/a/thread/100281348/
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Pic related is Shin. Congratulations /a/.
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>>100301465
>>>/out/
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>>100301390
>condom balloon fight
What.
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You decide it was better safe than sorry. "Just a second actually!" You run up to the shelf for family planning and you grab one or two condoms.

"Oho... I see how it is" The cashier shows you a lewd smile. "I'll put these in this paper bag so she won't see it"

"Thanks" You tell him as you take the two bags.

As you walk the short walk back to your apartment you could feel your heart beating faster and faster. With each step your imagination goes wild.

You imagine her saying, "Anon, I'm ready for you now..." as she lays on the bed.

"Anon... I want to feel you... inside me" You couldn't help but blush as you imagine Rina saying all these lewd things.

"I'm back Rina" you finally get back to your apartment.

"Ah! welcome back Anon! I'm in your bedroom right now!"

Suddenly your heart starts to race again. "In my bedroom?"

"Yeah, you can come in here if you want!" Was this it? was this Rina inviting you?

When you open the door to your room, Rina was on your bed. "Ah! you are finally here! I've been waiting for you Anon..."

[1/?]
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>>100301785
RINA CONFIRMED FOR YANDERE
ABORT, ABORT
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>>100301785
Fuck, hold on, my pants are still on
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>>100301785
>The cashier shows you a lewd smile.
Cashier ruute start.
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>>100301833
FUCK YOU, EVERYTHING IS BETTER THAN EXPECTED. RINA IS BEST GIRL.
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>>100301785
This is getting lewd.
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>>100301785
>"N-No Rina! I have to stay pure for Shin!"
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>>100301785
Make love, reward Rina.
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>>100301785
>I've been waiting for you Anon...
Waiting for him to explain the note Reiko left when she slept there
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>>100301943

YANDERE TRAIN GO!
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>>100301785
Cashier is best cashier.
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>>100302025
Haha, oh shit we're so fucked, oh no wait no were not cause we told her.
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>>100301785
[x]Custom:
Suddenly, a massive wave of spaghetti and tomato sauce bursts from anon's pockets, flooding the whole apartment and suffocating Rina and Anon-kun. Her last words, "He-Help me!" echo in your head as you draw your last breath. A tear escapes your eye and gets lost in the sea of red as you think about how you failed Rina.
The End.
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"You have?" You take a deep breath.

"Yeah... I hope you didn't mind, I didn't have a change of clothes so I borrowed your shirt" Surprisingly, you didn't mind her borrowing your shirt as much as you did to Reiko.

"I-I don't mind" You stutter as you see Rina's smooth, flawless legs. Your heart was beating fast and hard.

"Also... Anon I found this..." She bends over to reach for something on the other side of your bed. Your eyes widen with shock as you see her striped pantsu.

Was she seducing you?! "Rina..." You whisper to yourself. What could she have hidden on the other side of your bed?!

Finally when she comes back up, it was just a board game. "Look at what I found! it's the old board game we used to play all the time! we should try it again!"

[2/?]
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>>100302157
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>>100302157
Dropped
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>>100302157
>board game we used to play all the time! we should try it again!
2pure4me
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>>100302157
Crisis averted. Play the game, enjoy quiet time, because tomorrow will be maximum shitfest.
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>>100302157
KyoAni: the thread
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>>100302157
Batsu gaimu?
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>>100302157
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>>100302225
>>100302226
>>100302227
>>100302238
>>100302284
>>100302300
>>100302330
Calm down guys, it is 2/?, she will just tell that she was kidding and wants the D.
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>>100302157
Fucking genius, rofl
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Please op, give the d to nibutabi
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>>100302508
We play the game, then squirt in her just like she wants. We'll hold her hand, snuggle her, and tell her it'll be ok. Remember, her dad savagely beat her today.
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>>100302157
>>100302157
"O-Oh..." You didn't know why but you felt both relief and frustration when you find out that she wasn't trying to seduce you. "Y-Yeah... we can try that! it should be fun..."

"Great! I'll set it up in the kitchen then!" It was a little known game of axis and allies 1942 edition.

"I'll be right there" You knew it would take her quite a while to set it up so you decided to take this chance to change into more comfortable clothes. After all you've been wearing your uniform since this morning.

After you change you get a call on your cellphone. It was Shin's cell number. Was Reiko calling you again for something trivial? You answer your cell phone, "Hello? Reiko? I'm busy righ-"

Immediately you are greeted by Shin's excited tone. "Anon! oh my god! I couldn't wait to tell you this... but Reiko-chan just said yes to my confession!"

"Ah Shin, it's you"

[3/4]
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>>>/b/

/a/ - Anime & Manga
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>>100302680
>axis and the allies
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>>100302680
>It was a little known game of axis and allies 1942 edition.
Breaking out your inner board game nerd, eh, OP?
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>>100302680
"Yeah it's me, it's coming from my cellphone afteral- Ah you probably thought it was Reiko... she told me that she found it near the park where I confessed to her today, I must've dropped it or something." Even though you were the one trying to match both Shin and Reiko up together, a small part of your heart still felt jealous of Shin.

"Congratulations Shin! I'm glad to hear that."

"Ah! I'm so excited right now... besides what are you doing right now?"

"Oh, just hanging out with Rina, she is over right now."

You didn't even have to see Shin's face to see the lewd smile forming across his face. "It's nothing like that Shin, I'll see you tomorrow, congratulations again."

Hanging up the phone, you go back to changing. After you have put on your pajamas you go outside. "I'm ready Rina-chan! have you set it up yet?"

When you get back into the kitchen you froze. On the table were the two pieces of condom's you bought as Rina stares at it. "Anon-kun... what is this?" She turns to you as she asks.

[ ] Custom
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>>100302680
Oh god. We'll be here forever.
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>>100302680
>axis and allies
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>>100302767

[ ] Rape Rina and cry while doing it
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>>100302680
I'm happy for Shin, he's a great guy.
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>>100302767
[]They are balloons!!
*begin to fill one of them
"What are you waiting for? Fill one so we can have a fight!"
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>>100302767


They're for when I go balls deep in that pussy
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>>100302767
An investment for our future
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>>100302767
He didn't take condoms out of the bag?
>mfw

[X] Custom
Say: "I like it safe."
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>>100302889
^
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>>100302767
[x] Be honest and forthcoming about your thought process. She's not dumb, you can't cover it up, and trying to be smooth will probably only make things worse. Besides, you've known each other forever, one youthful misstep isn't going to ruin your relationship. Maybe she'll even be relieved to know that it's her you want to do this with, and not Reiko.
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>>100302767
It's for y- I mean for us, I don't want you to get pregnant with my child...yet.
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>>100302767
[x] Custom
"I always carry some just in case"
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>>100302767
[x] "What the hell? Did that convenience store clerk slip those in there!?" Lie your ass off to avoid an embarrassing situation, and hope to god you didn't leave the receipt in the bag.
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>>100302767
[x] "it's a condom." This one was easy.
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>>100302961
This one.
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>>100302767

What do you think they are?
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>>100302961
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>>100302767
[X] Water bomb balloons, I saw them in the store and remembered our childhood so I impulsively bought them. Is something wrong?
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>>100302961
The only correct answer.
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>>100302961
nigga this
If we're getting a stupid excuse or NANDATTE im dropping this
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>>100302767
>[x] Be honest and forthcoming about your thought process. She's not dumb, you can't cover it up, and trying to be smooth will probably only make things worse. Besides, you've known each other forever, one youthful misstep isn't going to ruin your relationship. Maybe she'll even be relieved to know that it's her you want to do this with, and not Reiko.

i like this anon's response
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>>100302767
[x] "Oh, so you want my baby? Well then, fine by me."
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>>100302767
OP this >>100302961
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>>100303063
Now put one inside you so I can fill it with "water".

Seirous answer:
>>100302961
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>>100302767
"Are you ready to have a child?"
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>>100302961


Why is everyone picking this? We're making this CYOA boring as fuck.
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>>100302961
this would be the logical answer, but it wouldn't leave any space for the oh-so-funny anime tropes and gags, would it?
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>>100303073
She starts arguing about how she isn't ready for this, you start stuttering: "I-I c-can explain!" and proceeds to not explaining.
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I think I missed the other thread what happened, why is there maids
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>>100303225
Rina is fucking loaded
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>>100303195
>>100303201
I just... I just want to win, for once. Shin got his girl, why can't we get ours?
;_;
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>>100303269
>Shin got his girl
Have you seen True Tears?
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You decide to be honest and forthcoming about your thought process. She's not dumb, you can't cover it up, and trying to be smooth will probably only make things worse. "I just wanted to be safe in case you know, we do it" You tell her the truth. "I mean we've known each other forever and I don't want one misstep to ruin our relationship!"

After you explain yourself, it was up to her if she wants to make a big deal out of it or not. "Eh..." Her lips curl into a smile. "I see Anon wanted to play more adult games huh? sorry I didn't notice..."

She then walks up to you and gives you an embrace. Her buxom presses against your chest. "You should've just told me Anon... after all I exist only for you..." You felt her warmth as she gives you a hug. "You can do whatever you want with me, after all I told you remember? My heart and body is yours and yours alone..."

[1/?]
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>>100303317
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>>100303317
I'm erect, but still skeptical.
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>>100303317
Oh gods I'm so happy. We did it anons we finally got our happy end!
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>>100303195

White knighting, normalfagging, I think /a/non's dream is often to NOT be the dense/retard MC because that's what we get flooded with all day. I do think we are making it a little tame and too logical, OP is compensating, needs more twists and dilemmas that we can't 'win,win' in both white knighting/logically doing things and getting the happiest outcome.
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>>100303317
OH SHIT ITZ HABBENING
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>>100303317
And now they'll get conveniently interrupted.
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>>100303317
Finally, yes.
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>>100303269
>Shin got his girl
I thought Reika was secretely an undercover agent from a magical alien society who was sent to anon-kun's school to check on him as he will soon discover supernatural powers of his own.

At least that's what i got from the whole "reika stealing Shin's phone and dragging you in a dark alley" arc
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>>100303317
yiss
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>>100303317
Is the twist that in the end Anon was just playing an eroge?
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This is becoming very lewd now.
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All is right.
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>>100303505
>>>/v/
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>>100303317

Her father will beat your door down the moment you put it in. Don't do it now, do it while at school. Put her down gently without activating yandere mode or suspicion.
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>>100303317
It's time. Wait a sec, let me go get my inhaler.
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>>100303472
That would be so fun
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>>100303569
Weren't we at our house?
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>>100303690

>maids saw us leave together
>they know you
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Don't just rush to put it in, we should play the board game, batsu game edition. Every time you beat an army you can give the loser an order.
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>>100303317
>after all I exist only for you


I'm not sure I like the sound of that
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>>100303690
Yes we are. Ignore him.
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>>100303195
Because we're tired of boarding the mothership, anon. We just want to win once.
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>>100303806
Everyone is Reiko
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>>100303569
>Her father will beat your door down the moment you put it in
And send her off back to Germany to get married to a fat, old, rich man. Her passing words:

>I at least wanted to give you my first time, but now I'll be eaten by that beast of a man. I ran away from our marriage meeting before and bought you sausages and DVDs but it was futile, after all.
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Now for some FS/N tier h scene text by op

RINAS ANUS
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>>100303317
"Now, let's go, if you want to play something more adult" Rina holds your hands as she leads you to your bedroom.

She lies you down on your back. You could tell that even though she was pretending to be strong, that she was still nervous. "L-Let's see here..." You could see her hands shaking as she tries to unbutton the shirt she was wearing.

"Ah, I'm so clumsy" She laughs awkwardly as the shaking prevents her from unbuttoning the last button.

"Here let me help" You tell her as you sit up"

With one swift movement you are able to unbutton the shirt and slip it off her revealing her body. "S-Sorry... I wasn't really prepared for this so I just wore my normal underwear..." She couldn't even make eye contact with you as she laid there with only her matching, white bra and pantsu.

"N-Now... then... this should be first..." She then grabs your pants and she tries to unbutton it. However, once again she experience the same issue. However, this time, after a deep breath she is able to calm down and get it unbuttoned herself.

"Here we go..." She takes another deep breath.

She then starts to slip off your jeans but when it gets to your ankles she pulls it off with so much force that it send her offbalance. She falls backwards as she yells out. "Kya!"

"Are you okay Rina!" You ask her with concern.

"Y-Yeah, I'm just a bit nervous teehee..." She recovers and now she was staring right at your crotch. "H-Here we go..." She breathes a deep breath as she slowly pulls down your boxers...

[2/?]
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>>100303977
Hahaha holy fuck
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>>100303977
I don't think I like where you left this one off.
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>>100303977
My heart! Shes so damn cute!
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>>100303977
inb4 there is no cock, just a bunch of pixels
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Man, I hope she isn't just rushing into this because she doesn't want us to be stolen by Reiko.
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>>100303977
>matching, white bra and pantsu.
I thought her pantsu was stripped.
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This is very cute.
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>>100304148
White with white stripes.
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>>100304148
Good point. Boner killed, plothole too massive.
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>>100303977
You still weren't fully hard yet when your boxers come off. However, once you felt her delicate finger wrap around your shaft, you start to get harder and harder. You finally reach diamond level hardness when Rina open her mouth and gives you a lick from base to tip.

The wetness and the softness of her tongue, coupled with her hot, warm breath was enough to make your mind wild with pleasure.

She licks you all over, without a pattern. You can tell she was inexperienced because she struggles to find rhythm. However, you didn't mind it, after all it was your first time as well.

It was evident as only a few seconds of her groping you and you were already throbbing, ready to explode at a moment's notice.

"I-I'm putting it in Anon..." You hear her say.

You thought you were holding up pretty good as a first timer, but once you felt her lip go around the tip, it took all your willpower not to ejaculate right then and there.

Her soft lips slowly caresses the tip as she slowly goes down your shaft. After her soft lips, come the warmth of her mouth. It felt mindnumbingly good.

You almost black out as she starts to move her head up and down. The subtle sucking feeling, Her firm tongue pressing up against the underside, Her soft lips, softly, but firmly gripping you was enough to make you moan in pleasure.

"I-I can't take it anymore..." It was only mere minutes since you both started but you couldn't hold it in. The throbbing was painfully pleasureable now and all you could wish for was your sweet release.

[3/?]
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>>100304716
YES.
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oh my
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>>100304716
>you will never have an blowjob as good as fiction
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>>100304716
We have reached maximum levels of lewd.
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>>100304716
>Oh Anon you came already....
>It seems Jamal-kun is the only one that can really keep up with me
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>>100304716
>"I-I can't take it anymore..."
You push her aside knowing that you won't be able to climax with this girl, you rush to your phone to call shin and have condom balloon fight.
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Finally you do it... "A-ahhh~" Your juice feels her mouth as she starts to gag. "I'm coming Rina!" You wanted to pull out but it was too late.

It felt like it lasted forever. The two seconds in which you climaxed felt like it lasted for years. But once you finish, you slowly pull it out.

You find yourself covered in a mixture of her phlegm, saliva and your own cum.

"H-How was it Anon?" She manages to force herself to smile as the mixture of juices drips from her lips... She then closes her eyes as she swallows everything in her mouth.

You thought your night was over, but Rina insisted that you take her first time from her. "W-we aren't over yet Anon! rest up!"

You've never seen Rina so determined before. "Okay, okay" You smile at her. "Just give me some time okay?"

"Okay!" Rina smiles at you in the sweetest way possible.

After about 3 minutes, Rina got fed up of waiting and decided to take matters into her own hands. "A-Anon... y-you just need some stimulation!" She tries to squeeze her boobs together.

You start to feel yourself getting harder and harder. "T-Take this!" She says as she fondles herself. "Take that!" She yells out as she changes her pose trying to turn you on as fast as possible.

When she took of her bra and presses it against your crotch, you reach it again. The softness and the warmth of her breasts sends you in wild state of pleasure once more.

"G-Good... n-now it's time for the main part..." She says.

You take a big gulp as you watch Rina slowly slide down her pantsu. The darker shades of white alternate with the lighter shades of white until finally the only white thing you could see was her skin.

[4/6]
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>>100304716
[ ] Genuflect
as you remember you lost your balls last winter and thus cannot climax anymore.
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>>100305168
>"Okay!" Rina smiles at you in the sweetest way possible.
Oh God, my heart
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>>100305168
> The darker shades of white alternate with the lighter shades of white
I see what you did there.
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>>100305168
>The darker shades of white alternate with the lighter shades of white until finally the only white thing you could see was her skin.

WELP laughing too hard to have a boner now, thanks writer anon. Cant believe you actually went for it.
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>>100305168
I like you, I am pleased.
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>>100305168
My boner is confused, how does a pantsu with shades of light and dark matches with a white bra?

Also, she said she wasn't wearing her naughty underwear, ask her to go home and change into them.
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>>100305314
>>100305349
explain...
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>>100305168
When her pantsu reachers her ankles she puts up one leg at a time to take off her underwear completely giving you a glimpse of her hole.

You were distracted as you could only focus on one thing that you didn't notice her trip on her own underwear as she comes falling towards you face first. "K-Kyaa!!" You hear her yell.

You manage to catch her and immediately she apologizes to you. "Ah! I'm so sorry! I'm so unsexy!"

"It's okay Rina! You are the sexiest girl in the world.

"R-Really... you promise?" Her eyes were like that of a child begging for candy.

"Of course!"

"O-Okay... I-I'll try my best not to mess up anymore!" She carefully climbs onto you and she tries to carefully put you in. "H-Here we go..." Slowly she lowers herself onto you.

However, there would be a point where it would become too painful for her and she would immediately fall forward and support herself with her arms. "Are you okay Rina?"

"Y-Yes... I-I'll try harder next time..." She would repeat this ritual 3-4 more times until finally you tell her.

"Here Rina, just relax, let me do it okay?" You then put her on her back so you could have more control. You needed to do this as carefully as possible to avoid hurting her more than necessary...

[5/6]
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>>100305472
see >>100304148
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what happened to the condoms nigga
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>>100305577
>begging for candy.
I guess it is time for some dandy.
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>>100299617
How did no one get this and why was this not picked?
Fuck you, /a/.
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>>100305862
RUA a shit
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>>100305862
I WANNA BE WITH U.
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>>100305577
Slowly, you enter her. You could feel just how tight she was. "Amazing..." You think to yourself. Once again however, there would come to a point where it would be too painful for her to continue forcing you to retreat.

It must've taken 15 tries until finally you are able to fully penetrate her. You immediately feel blood drip down your shaft. "Are you okay Rina?"

With a pained smile she says. "Y-Yeah, I'm okay... keep going..."

Using a mixture of her own vaginal juices and her own blood as lubrication, you thrust it inside her over and over until finally you climax once again. "A-Ah~~!"

"I-I can feel you inside me... it's so warm..."

You collapse in exhaustion on top of Rina after you finish the deed. "I... I love you Anon..." You hear her say before both of you fall asleep.

"I love you too Rina..."

The next morning, when you wake up, you saw that Rina was still sleeping peacefully beside you. "I guess I should cook her breakfast" Putting on some clothes you go outside your room and you start to prepare.

You notice the two condoms you bought yesterday. "Ah crap! I forgot to use those..." After you start your breakfast you go outside to collect your newspaper.

"Hmm I guess it's not here yet" You think to yourself as you find the newspaper receptacle empty. However, it wouldn't be too long until the delivery guy shows up. "Good morning Anon!"

"Reiko!? what are you doing here?"

"Hmm? what do you mean? I've always been your newspaper delivery guy!" She hands you the newspaper. "So how's your morning going, do you need me to keep you company?"

You notice her wearing her cap lower than usual, as if trying to hide something.

[ ] Invite her in for breakfast.

[ ] "It's good, I'll see you in school.

[ ] Custom
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>>100305840
This, did we just waste all that money?!
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>>100306094
[ X] Invite her in for breakfast.

HUEHUEHUEHEUHEUHE
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>>100305840
Oh shit, they forgot. She pregnant now.
BETTER TAKE RESPONSIBILITY
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>>100306094
[X] Custom
Steal her hat
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>>100306094
[x] Invite her for breakfast
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[ ] "It's good, I'll see you in school.
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>>100306094
>You climax once again
>Notice 2 condoms
>"Ah crap! I forgot to use those..."
Oh shit
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>>100306094
Condoms come in multipacks ya big doofus
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>>100305962
/v/ pls
RUA didn't invent Erasure.
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>>100306094
>[X] "It's good, I'll see you in school.
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>>100306094
>[x] "Sorry, I'm a little busy right now. We can talk at school, alright?"
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>>100306094
>"Ah crap! I forgot to use those..."
You just knocked up an ojousama, you bastard!
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>[x] Custom
Tell Reiko that you're busy and you'll see her in school. Go back inside and cuddle with Rina until she wakes up.
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>>100306304
>>100306288
>>100306221
>>100306419
These.
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>You notice the two condoms you bought yesterday. "Ah crap! I forgot to use those..." After you start your breakfast you go outside to collect your newspaper.

>hfw
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>>100306094
[X] Invite her in for breakfast
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voting closed.
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>>100306094
"Want to see something good?" Invite her to peek on you and Rina
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>>100306094
Use condom with reiko.
jk, please do not take seirously
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>>100306580
don't give OP any crazy ideas now, we're sailing straight for the good end...
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>>100306094
ask reiko if she wants to join and teach rina the ways of the dark side
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>>100306094
[X] Invite her in for breakfast.
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3 - invite her in for breakfast.
5 - I'm a little bit busy right now, I'll see you in school, cuddle with Rina until she wakes up.
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>>100306094
Invite her in for breakfast
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>>100306753
5 fucking 5
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>>100306948
>>100306533
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Make Rina go Turi Turi.
>>100306879
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>>100306094
>"Ah crap! I forgot to use those..."
We're modern strange cowboy.
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>>100306992
>turi turi

Son....
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"My morning is okay, just a little busy, I'll see you in school okay?"

"O-Oh okay... S-sure, I'll see you in school" She laughs awkwardly as you leave her outside. As you walk back to your apartment you hear her tone start to get fearful. "S-steven-san? what are you doing here?"

"I'm here to talk to you about your recent 'absences' my little girl" You take a quick look back to see who it was and it was a tall man talking to Reiko. He looked like he didn't belong, almost as if he was from another country.

"I-I'm so sorry Steven-san... it's just I've been busy with my grand father lately an-" The man raises his right hand and she gives Reiko a sharp slap to her left cheek.

It made enough of an impact to send her baseball cap flying revealing her huge black eye on her left eye. "Sorry doesn't bring in money" The man then grabs her arm and starts to drag her out of there leaving her bike abandoned in the middle of the street.

"What are you looking at" The man looks at you trying to intimidate you. Before Reiko would be dragged out of your sight, your eyes would meet.

You thought there would be fear, anger, or sadness in her eyes. However, to your shock there was only two feelings. Her eyes were filled with shame and hope. She was embarassed you had to see her in that state, while simultaenously being hopeful that you would somehow save her.

[1/2]
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>>100307351
Pimping ain't easy.
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>>100307149
Just as well. Condoms are awful.
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>>100307351
Money in the bag, pimpin ain't easy.
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>>100307351
Time for Shin to save the day
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>>100307351
Going back to your apartment you wanted to see if Rina was already awake. You wanted to cuddle her after all until she awakens. However to your surprise she was already awake.

"Y-Yes... Yes father... I'm sorry for staying out all night yesterday..." She was busily getting dressed as she talked on her phone. "I won't do it again... yes father..."

You could see the terror in her eyes. "I'm coming home right now... please forgive me..." Little by little, Rina's hope is being robbed away from her.

After she hangs up the phone she apologizes to you. "I'm sorry Anon... I have to go back home, I'll see you in school..." She trails off. "I hope..."

[ ] "I'll drop you off at your house!" Go with Rina.

[ ] "I'll see you at school Rina." Go after Reiko

[ ] Custom
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>>100307351
Left, Right, Left, Reight, B to grab the door handle, A to slam it shut!
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>>100307584
"I'll drop you off at your house!" Go with Rina.
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>>100307584
Seems like we're gonna get a despair ending

Fuck you op

Chase after reiko
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>>100307584
>[ ] "I'll drop you off at your house!" Go with Rina.
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>>100307584
>[ ] "I'll drop you off at your house!" Go with Rina.
prepare to beat that fucker up if he lays a finger our waifu again
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>>100307584
[x] Custom
Tell Rina to sit her cum-stained ass down while you go beat the pimp's shit in.
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>>100307584
Reiko route
Reiko route
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>>100307584
>[ ] "I'll drop you off at your house!" Go with Rina.
Then propose to Rina in front of her father.
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>>100307584
go with rina for fuck's sake
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>>100307584
[ ] Custom
"I'll drop you off at your house!", text Shin about Reiko situation
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>>100307584
>[ ] "I'll drop you off at your house!" Go with Rina.

Reiko a shit
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>>100307647
>>100307675
>>100307684
It's like you guys want rinas dad to rape your asshole
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>>100307584

Touma mode.

We must save them all. Tell Rina to stay for the day, do not under any circumstances go home until you tell me the truth. I will go grab Reiko and try to get something rolling with Shin to keep you off the street and prostituting. Clearly she's doing this for grandfathers hospital bills but there's got to be some other method to get money.

There's always run away with the both of them. Harem modo.
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>>100307584
Chase after Reiko.
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>>100307770
you don't?
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>>100298418

HELP can someone send me alikn to the second part , is this the third part right?
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>>100307584
"Don't go anywhere. " Send Shin after Reiko, go see Rina's dad yourself.
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>>100307584
Explain the situation to Rina and tell her to wait here. Text Shin and tell him to come over, and bring a bat. Rush after Reiko and keep her safe until Shin can get here, consequences be damned. Then take Rina home and confront her father personally. We're going to fucking win this shit and no amount of despair can stop us.
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>>100307584
Go after Reiko
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>>100307909
this is the 2nd thread. There's a link to the 1st somewhere in here
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>>100307917
double
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>>100307584
>[ ] Custom
"Please, wait for me here" Go after Reiko
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>>100307917
this
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>>100307909
He continued on the old thread
http://archive.foolz.us/a/thread/100281348/#100296831
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>>100307584
[ ] Custom
Call Shin and inform he about the situation whiles you go to Rina home
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voting closed.
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>switching routes so late
Nope, going after Rina means going after Rina. Stay with her.
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thanks anon
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>>100307917
This
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>>100308127
but we've already fucked Rina, anon-kun. Time to go for an adventure into unexplored lands
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>>100308215
And get a Nice Boat, huh?
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>>100306879
Wow, I don't remember this scene at all! From which ep is this?
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Just because this is probably the most important choice and I don't want to mess up in the counting I made a poll here.

http://strawpoll.me/1026091

I'll wait for 20 minutes and close the poll.

I can't be trusted with the counts anymore as I haven't gotten a single wink of sleep since I started this story.
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>[ ] "I'll drop you off at your house!" Go with Rina.
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>>100308467
The one where your mom sucked my dick
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>>100307584
[ ] "I'll drop you off at your house!" Go with Rina.

Confront thr father, ask for Rina's hand in front of him.
THIS IS NIBUTANI'S ROUTE.
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>>100308492
>0 votes for he whore
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>this is probably the most important choice
NOT EVEN VOTING, I CAN'T TAKE THIS
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>>100308145
No problem. Glad to help
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DDt99U_6vCo
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Inb4 all choices end with BAD END
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>>100307835
THIS!
TouMAN the shit off these modafuckas.
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>>100308492
LOOKING AT RESULTS BEFORE VOTING IS NOT ALLOWED
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>>100307917
this
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>>100308492
does the 3rd choice involve shin?
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>>100308741
yes.
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>>100308492
Wow, what happened with this
>>100307917
the best ending?
I will vote in tell rina to stay while go after reiko if it involves calling shin first to some daysaving.
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>>100307835
Fuck it, we've come this far.
Let's roll with this.
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>Tell Rina to wait here while you go after Reiko
Saving one person means not being able to save another.
Drown in your ideals and die.
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Archer get the fuck outta here
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>>100308870
Fuck off archer see touMAN, he obviously can make it happen.
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I'll destroy that screwed up illusion of yours!
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>people wanting Reiko to get raped
No, what? Why are you doing this?

Take Rina with you and save Reiko. Or tell Rina to stay inside. Or take Reiko inside and hide for a while. Or just have Reiko stay there for a bit.

Tons of options. Surely you don't need to abandon one or the other.
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looks like the votes have slowed down.

shortening time to 3 more minutes instead of 13 more minutes.
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I fell asleep, could someone tell me the post # of the other OPs for this chain?
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>>100308467
It is from the movie.
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>>100308870
I fucking knew this would happen.

Fuck off Archer.
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>>100308870

Anime heroism has distorted my world view to the point that I must help all those I know. Sure it destroys my own life, but I'm fucking compelled to help, it's why I don't want to make friends or get involved, I see a problem that I think I can help with, and I must. What's wrong with trying to help the both of them anyway? The time frame permits it.
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>>100309078
scroll up m80
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>8% left battery on phone

Oh fuck
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>>100309253
I have a feeling you might not want to see what happens next, anyway.
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>>100309142
Anime heroism is absurd, life is about choices. There won't always be one path, sometimes you have to choose one way to go and forget about the other path.
There is not "everybody is happy" ending.

Hell, did you watch Fate Zero, it explains what I want to say better.
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Vote closed.
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This shit ended without motorcycles, convertibles, GnR, Queen, Stands/Ripple, Imagine Breaker and UBW. This CYOA is shit.
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>>100309253
in case you don't make it here's the ending:
the pimp is Rina's father who is actually also the MC's. He faked his own death (while his wife actually did die) because the wife (MC's mom) had found out he was touching young MC
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>>100309354
NO.
This better not be a democracy. I swear will fucking cut you.
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>>100309354
Final votes are 53% going to Telling Rina to wait while you try and save Reiko
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>>100309433
We fucked it up. It's all over, now.
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>>100309346
Looks like someone needs to break that illusion of yours.
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>>100309388
What the fuck
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>>100309382
Imagine Breaker was here all the time, /a/non-kun.
Hymen Breaker as well
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prepare for BAD END.
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>>100309382
>Stands/Ripple
There is still time, anon.
Maybe the Pimp's Stand is named "Somebody Gotta Do It"
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>>100309761
>Anon's real name is Johnny Joestar
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>>100309388

But that would be incest with a half sister? Or step sister.
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>>100309842
>Shin's family name is Zepelli
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>>100309857
School/Shiny/Cross Days logic, since we're going for that nice, cozy boat anyway.
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>>100309842
>>100309898
I really hope OP does something like this.
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>>100309433
DROPPED
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>>100309898
>Rina father is Speedwagon
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>>100309898
Clerk-san is actually DIO.
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"Wait here okay Rina?" You explain the situation to her before going out there again.

"W-wait Anon! I think it's too dangerous for you to go alone! why don't we call the cops to help you out as well?"

Immediately you snap at Rina. "No cops..." You knew that if the police get involved and see what kind of history Reiko has, there is a chance she might be sent to juvenile detention.

"W-what why?" Rina protests as she is genuinely scared for your well being. "Anon!"

To placate her you tell her. "I'll call Shin for backup instead okay? With the two of us, that pimp is no match!"

You give Shin a call but unfortunately he doesn't answer his phone. "Where could he be?" You think to yourself.

After you send Shin a text message telling him to come to your house you get your bat and you prepare to fight the pimp that took Reiko away...

"I'll be back okay Rina? just stay here..."

Rina just obediently nods as she says. "Okay..."

[1/?]
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>>100309966
>Rina is Higashikata Rina
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So we fuck up huh?
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>>100309996
Shin is getting raped isn't he
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>>100309996
I sure as fuck hope Rina was smart enough to lock the door.
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>>100309996
dont tell me that shin is the ntr
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>>100310089
Plot twist: She's not.

Just according to writerfag's keikaku.
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Obviously Shin is the final bossu.
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>>100310208
He's had so many chances to give us the bad end. If he hasn't done it so far, he won't do it now that we're at the end, right?
Right?
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>>100310264
He is at least awake for 12 hours. If that didn't make him insane and make a bad end to ruse us, I don't know what will.
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>>100310231
So, you returned from hell, MC?
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You try and find Reiko everywhere, when you finally find them they were talking in an isolated back alley. "What are you talking about you want to quit? this is the only way for you to pay your grandfather's hospital bills right?" He was trying to sweet talk her into coming back to him while he chokes her with one hand. "How are you going to pay for it? are you going to take on multiple part time jobs? huh?"

"Y-Yeah..." Reiko manages to say as the man's right hand blocks her windpipe. "I... I don't want to be in the business anymore..."

You see his grip tighten around her neck. "I've seen quitters like you before... usually it's just a guy they've fallen in love with... have you fallen in love with someone huh?"

"A-Anon... w-what are you doing here?! run!" Reiko's eyes widen with shock as she sees you.

Steven then starts to laugh. "I... I see now... so this is the guy... this is the guy that has given you the courage to quit huh?" As he loosens his grip on Reiko's neck, she gasps a deep breath of air. "I guess I'm just going to kill him..."

Suddenly, when you are threatened, Reiko breaks down. "N-No! don't do it please Steven! he is not the one, I promise you he isn't the one!"

However even in the face of this adversity you stand there, confident at your abilities. You look back to where your apartment is, although you could barely make it out, you could see Rina's face through one of the windows watching you.

"Please Steven! stop this right now! I'll go back... I'll go back to you! just please let him go" Steven ignores Reiko's desperate pleas as he keeps walking towards you.

"Get away from me right now Reiko, I need to take care of some business" He then kicks Reiko in the stomach rendering her unconcious before taking out a knife from his pocket. "I hope you are ready for this boy... the moment you got involved with this whore you were a dead man..."

[2/?]
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>>100310312
>at least awake for 12 hours
>make him insane
nigger how much do you sleep do you need!?
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>>100310408
fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck
he kills you while rina watches
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>>100310408
>kinfe
top lel
Full-on Touman. Right hand is justice.
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>>100310408
I was going to go to sleep hours ago. Damn you, OP, and your thrilling tale!
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>>100310408
>Shino films this on his phone
>passes the evidence to his father
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>>100310408
You have my sword
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>>100310408
Shin we pave the way, it time for you to stand in stoplight
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>>100310408
I warned you.
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>>100310572
And my bow
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>>100310632
And MY axe
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>>100310408
Time to create a meaning or to die pathetically. We have no regrets, and grin as we prepare for the mischievous attack.

It was a boring life, anyway
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7jyuw-9_VRA
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>>100310664

And muh plot armor
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>>100310408
That's enough. I just wanted a happ Nibutani ending.
Take the stab for Reiko, if you die you'll be remembered as a hero who tried to fight an abusive pimp.
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I think it's time to recognize OP as a healing-type writer.
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>>100310782
HE HAS A FUCKING BASEBALL BAT, HE CAN CRUSH HIS FUCKING SKULL IN.
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>>100310408
trace on nigga

lvl 8 reinforcement
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>>100310853

He may not be capable of using it. Pimp kun could have back up.
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OP, this is a reminder that if punches are going to be thrown they need to take at least 2 threads of "AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHH" before they land
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>>100310408
Your heart beats faster and faster, was it from nervousness or excitement? As he gets closer and closer, adrenaline starts to pump through your veins and you become restless...

Raising the bat to shoulder height you swing at him, however Steven was quick despite his muscular stature. He dodges it cleanly and he tries to stab at you while you were off balance.

You feel the cold blade graze you as it makes a clean cut through your clothes and a shallow cut on your skin. Your excitement grows you see your own blood.

"I won't miss next time" He tells you as he wipes his blade clean of your blood.

"Likewise" You tell him with a cheshire cat-like smile. Once again you go on the attack, this time you hit him right on the right shoulder which makes him drop his blade.

Seizing the opportunity, you push your advantage and you swing at him a couple more times but he dodges it. Once he got an opening, Steven dives for his knife that was now lying down on the pavement.

With one lunge he manages to get to the knife, he rolls and once he gets back on his feet he was ready and pointing his knife at you, however, you anticipated it and once he holds out the knife, you manage to hit it with the tip of your bat away from his hand once more.

His head turns towards to find where the knife went which gave you enough of an opening to land a clean hit on his jaw. "Augh!" He moans in pain as he crumples down onto one knee.

His body starts to shake and then his laughter starts. "Not bad Anon... not bad at all..." He takes off his sports coat to give himself more freedom.

Putting up his fists he signals you to come at him...
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>>100310897
IF I'M DYING, I'M TAKING SOMEONE WITH ME
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>>100310914
ATATATATATATATATATA

Do it Ken
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>>100310914
I HAVE FAITH SHIN SHALL COME TO OUR AID
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>>100310914
>adrenaline
>veins
Dropped.
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>>100310914
see >>100310912
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>>100310914
Baseball bat is reach and a weapon, this dude is fucked now.
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>>100310914


Swing away Merrill
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Adrenalin kicks in, this music starts playing http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=E-hbQJa8UNM&list=PLWC4c8SDqaVq1pLYMUFpnxcgLeaDrOIY9
Its time to fuck shit up.
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This shit excites me far more than the sex scene.
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Yandere Rina will come save the day


Calling it
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MC, USE YOUR HISSATSU WAZAAAAA!
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>>100310914
omoshiroi...
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>inb4 Pimp-kun loses his way

Also official fight music:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DGlCwwuDhOQ&
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>>100311096
>a yandere using her powers for unambiguous good
That would make this a 10/10.
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>>100311140

But it's rather mundane, dudes just beating on a mere pimp. When did we go full shounen hero mode?
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>>100311216
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CGiRb_r2M8M
Thread theme.
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inb4 suddenly you feel a cold steel stabbed in your back, as you faint, you turn to see who was...
You see the smiling face of reiko
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>>100311140
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>>100311267
>pimp is actually Dio
>mc is actually JoJo
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If none of those thread musics are TTGL row row, I won't acknowledge it.
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>>100311279
>smiling like a cat
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>>100311267
>not this
http://youtu.be/m3aFFSBl7Tc
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>>100311352
SEE THE INVISIBLE
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>>100311354


Everyone has cat like smiles in this
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>>100311402
DO THE IMPOSSIBLE
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>>100311382
>>100311267
>>100311140

>implying MC is not the touMAN and Pimp-kun is AKKUSARARETA, and that this fine tune isn't the OST;

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FLrPjjL7DTE
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>>100311410
except cats, they smile like sly dogs
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>>100311461
BRO BRO SAVE THE WHORE
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With confidence fueling your body, you attack him full force. It was wild swings after wild swings. You were sure you had the upper hand until he grabs your bat and he pulls you in.

As you are pulled in by Steven, you see him smirk at you. A split second after you saw his disgusting smirk, you felt a knee land onto your stomach which makes you let go of the bat.

Your vision blurs because of the pain. "I like your bat... it's very handy." You try and get on your feet again after recovering from his knee, but as soon as you did, you take a bat right on your chest.

Shockwaves of pain emanate throughout your body from where you were hit. Before you could even recover he hits you again, this time on your side.

The pain of your kidneys being crushed was enough to crumble your knee. There came a point where you couldn't even feel anymore pain, it felt like your consciousness leaves your body and it felt weird seeing yourself get beat up by Steven while Reiko laid unconscious on the floor.

"Why! Wont! you! just! die?!" Steven keeps swinging at your unconscious body.

"I... I don't mind dying this way... dying a hero..." Just then you hear Rina's voice call your consciousness back into your body.

All of a sudden you get your second wind. "R-Rina!" Your blurred vision comes back and you felt the pain melt away. "Of course... I can't die yet... I still need to be with Rina..."

Steven was taken aback. "I... You shouldn't even have the energy to stand right now!"

Your lips curl into a cocky smile as you spit the blood from your mouth. "I'm not going to lose that easily...

It felt like the tide was changing... With the help of your friends backing you up you can beat him!

You charge at Steven with all the might you have left and you put all your feelings into your right hand ready to defeat Steven!
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>>100311482
>baseball bat hits him
>reflected
>punches him in that opening
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>>100311575
>you take a bat right on your chest.


lol wat
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>>100311575
ITS THE POWER OF LLOOOOOOOVVVEEEEEEE!
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>>100311575
>You charge at Steven with all the might you have left and you put all your feelings into your right hand ready to defeat Steven!
Why is this so funny?
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>>100311575
>With the help of your friends backing you up you can beat him!

This is why I love shonen.
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>>100310615
FUCK OFF
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>>100311575
>"I... You shouldn't even have the energy to stand right now!"
Why didn't he just keep hitting us? Pretty sure he had us, there.
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>>100311645
Cause touman
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>>100311645
cuz hes gonna break the ilusion of reiko raping of his
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>>100311575
>kidneys crushed
>stands up and fights back
i don't think that's how it works:
http://www.liveleak.com/view?i=0a2_1267981100&comments=1
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>>100311575
>right hand

You know your shit, writerfag.
Respect.
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>>100311575
meanwhile shin is taking notes of the class for you, reiko and rina, as a good friend he is.
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>>100311679

To be fair, Steven should be out cold after a hit to the jaw with the bat. A shattered jaw a minimum. But BRAWLER logic is in play, even without the alcohol that normally fuels it.
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>>100311575
>inb4 MC is dead and this is the fantasy he sees as his brain expires
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Where the fuck is Shin?
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>>100311867
see >>100311809
Wouldn't wanna miss those trig notes
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>>100311701
I motherfucking warned you.
You can't keep up with pimp.
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>>100311842
He's already in a coma.
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>>100311575


The actual ending will be MC beats pimp-san and saves reiko and rina is alright with harem end but its actually all a hallucination brought on by violent brain trauma after getting struck in the head with the bat. Shin gets both girls and visits Anon's grave and says hes happy you died
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We are so going to get back stabbed by Rina soon. She'll be getting jealous you are not rushing to beat the shit out of her dad. Well, we still don't know what the real issue is, but I take it her obsession with him is because he's her hope spot or something.
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>>100311842
>inb4 MC doesn't actually exist and the whole story is just some retards posting on an anonymous imageboard.
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>>100312006
fuck you spoilerfag
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Can't we just have our happy ending?
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>mfw
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>>100312061


This never ceases to make me rage
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>>100312148
didn't you know? Moot made /a/ a fun-free zone
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>>100312061
THIS GUY
THIS FUCKING GUY
I FUCKING
SWEAR
HATE
let's just save this for a KNIM thread
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>anon dies
>suddenly the words flash in anon's mind as his brain expires
>game over
You step away from the arcade machine, muttering "fucking bullshit, Steven is op" under your breath

The end
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>>100312061
I dropped that manga long ago, MC is an asshole.
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However, there was no such power of friendship, you were badly beaten up and your second wind was a mere illusion. Steven easily side steps your right punch and with one right hook you were back down on the ground.

You feel your consciousness slip once again, but before your vision fades you see Steven raising up the bat one more time to deliver the final blow... "I guess this is goodbye..."

Before the bat hits you however, you saw a sillouete block it for you. "I'm sorry Anon..." The dark figure says. "I know you said not to call the cops but I can't let you die... you have to live Anon..."

The bat hits the sillouette before blue and red lights and siren noises fill the air. "Put your hands up..."

"W-what is going on..." You think to yourself, finally losing enough blood to lose consciousness...

It wouldn't be until two weeks later that you would find out what truly transpired that day... Waking up at the hospital the vision in your right eye was still blurry.

"Anon! you are finally awake..." You saw an excited Reiko greet you.

"R-Reiko..."

Immediately tries to calm you down. "Anon, just relax, I'm here to help you okay?" Her face still had faint traces of bruises.

"What happened to me... where is Steven? where is Rina?"

[second to the last part]
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Stop with these shitty threads holy shit. This aint anime or manga.
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>>100312432
NO
RINAAAAAAAAAAA
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
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>>100312432
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>>100312432
NO
NO
ABORT
ABORT
SHUT IT DOWN
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>>100312432
Where is Rina?
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>>100312432
Why does the slut always live???
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>>100312432
NOW SHE'S DEATH I TOLD YOU NIGGERS!
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>>100312432
>>100312501
It's totally Shin who blocked the blow.
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>>100312432
>However, there was no such power of friendship, you were badly beaten up and your second wind was a mere illusion.
MY SIDES
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>>100312432
DAMN YOU, OP
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>>100312562
>inb4 Rina is Shin
>Right eye blurry
We brain damage now?
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>>100312535
Nice.

>>100312432
If it isn't Shin I swear I will fucking find you and I will kill you.
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You seriously doing this OP?
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>>100312432
FUCK
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>>100312432
>However, there was no such power of friendship
CYOAOTY
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>>100312562
So rina and shin were actually the same person?
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>>100312432
>However, there was no such power of friendship, you were badly beaten up and your second wind was a mere illusion.
Glorious.
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>>100312432

SHIT
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I like it when writerfags rip us to pieces realistically. This internal rage and suffering fuels me.
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>>100312432


I laughed then immediately got upset
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>you look to the left of reiko and see Shin smiling like a fagot
>"sorry bro, but I'm fucking both of your girlfriends now"
>shin and reiko laugh uncontrollably
>you feel yourself drowning in your own spaghetti
>with your last breath you draw the words "tfw no gf"
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Reiko fags report in.


Looks like we're winning this shit
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At least she didn't die a virgin. But now her father is going to tear into us.
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>>100312620
>>100312664
>rina is shin
No, faggots.
>After you send Shin a text message telling him to come to your house
>shin comes to house
>where is anon
>omg anon is fite
>no cops
>no anon!
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I love it when the power of friendship gets crushed
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>>100312787

lel'd
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>>100312811
>implying in the two weeks Anon has been out Shin hasn't been nailing that used pussy
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>>100312432
S-Shin?
>>
Reiko explains to you what had happened. "I only heard it from Shin... so some of the details may not be right..." Reiko tells you that after you were cornered by Steven, Rina comes storming down from your apartment. She was carrying a kitchen knife and she tried to stop Steven from hurting you any further.

Steven went completely ballistic on her hitting Rina right on the head with the bat. "Rina was apparently knocked unconscious instantly..." Rina called the cops right before she went down, but it was thanks to Shin that they made it there on time...

After Shin got your text, he immediately sent for the cops and ambulances to go to where you told him to meet you. "I see... I have to thank Shin then..."

"Yeah... it was thanks to him that you didn't really sustain too much permanent damage!" Reiko tells you.

"How about Rina? how is she doing?" When you asked those words Reiko immediately becomes quiet. "Reiko? where is Rina? is she doing okay?"

"S-she is at the room next door..." Reiko looks away from you as she covers her eyes. You could hear her start to cry as your heart races in nervousness.

"Please... tell me nothing happened to Rina!" You think to yourself...

Immediately you stand up and you go to the room next door. You didn't even care if you still felt pain, all you wanted to confirm is if Rina is okay or not. You almost break down in tears as you see nothing in the room but a bed with a corpse under the sheets.

"Rina... no!!" You felt horribly inadequate for not being able to protect her... You kneel down beside her bed and you take the blanket off to confirm it was indeed Rina. "Rina... why..."
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>>100312432
OP, can you just go back and kill off MC? I think it's a better ending and more heroic, MC ended up as a pussy.
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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vdXwIeiDUYM
THREAD THEME
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>>100312787
that would be the biggest NTR ever existed
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You start your monologue about how it should've been you and not her that died. Then all of a sudden, Reiko comes in to the room clapping as she wishes you congratulations.

"Congratulations Anon!"

You look around confused. "W-what?" What kind of sick joke was that?

Then, to your surprise, Shin comes in afterwards. "Congratulations Anon!" Shin tells you. You start to get confused. What exactly was going on.

All of a sudden, people start swarming in wishing you congratulations. The maids, your classmates, Rina's parent's, they all come in clapping and wishing you congratulations.

Just when you were at the peak of your confusion, when you look back at Rina, she was also getting out of bed. "I... I thought you died..."

Rina turns to you and just smiles. "Congratulations Anon!"
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>>100312931

OH SHIT WHY OP JESUS FUCKING CHRIST IM MAD AS FUCK DAMNIT
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>>100312931
>tfw dead gf
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>>100312820
>>100312811
Because of Rinas father you never mangage to get a job.

Reiko supports you and you end up clinging to her in your suffering.

Shin never forgets this betrayal and cuts all ties with you.

You and Reiko live a few more years under the bridge before you get killed by a thug for 5 dollars.

Based on a True Story, this was:

My childhoodfriend went to Germany but suddenly this prostitute keeps talking to me and I still believe in the power of friendship.
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>>100313002
FUCK YOU
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>>100312931
You killed her....
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>>100313002
Fuck you, OP.
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>>100313002

What kind of TWEEST is this.
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>>100313002
FUCK YOU
I'M FUCKING CLAPPING NOW
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>>100313002
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>>100313002
10/10
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>>100312931
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

>>100313002
should've waited longer
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>>100312931
I fucking hate you.
So god damn much.
I hope you die.
And all you fags who voted for going after Reiko, too.
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>>100313002
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>>100313002
Nigga.
I lol'd
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>>100313002
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>>100313002
m night shymylan
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>>100312931
FULL MAD NOW
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>>100312931
>not getwellsoon.jpg
You fucked up at the last second OP.
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>>100313002
This isn't OP, right? Right?
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>>100313002
this cant be op
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>>100313002
>You start to get confused. What exactly was going on.
MY FUCKING
SIDES
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>>100313002

OP, what the fuck. I was so mad, and now I'm fucking giggling like a shitty 8 year old
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>>100313145
fuck i hope not, i was hoping for clannad, not a fucking tv game show
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>>100313002
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=w18Sfg4wdmA
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>>100313046
>because of one faggot you can't get a job
Impossible

Why wouldn't you just move to a different city

Why don't you just slam dunk shin's boypussy from the beginning?
>>
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZHq68t2kgwM
Uh, thread theme. I guess.
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>>100313002
Finally, Rina couldn't help it anymore. "I'm so sorry Anon..." She tells you.

"I just wanted to surprise you when wake up and wanted to pull off that scene from your favourite anime!" She helps you up.

"Rina? you are alive?"

Rina nods. "Yep! I am! 100% although I do feel a bit soar in the head taking that bat to it..."

You embrace Rina as everybody watches. "I'm glad... I'm glad you are alive..."

"Thanks Anon... I'm glad we could be together like this again..."

Just then Shin yells out to Rina. "Aren't you going to tell him Rina?"

"Oh yeah Anon! I do have to congratulate you for real this time..."

"Why?" You ask her confused.

Then with a sly smile on her face she leans in and whispers to you. "We are having a baby!"

End.
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T'is already past twilight as the computer screen silently and ever so steadely illuminates my face witch is twisted in utter despair at the horrors I have just beheld and the fears I hold for the future. Truly there is no greater sorrow, no greater anxiety as that, wich I experiance on this bright night, while the moon is still shineing uppon the streats in its radiant beauty. Curse you OP and curse your kin, witch couse my soul sutch pain.
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>>100313164
No one can write all that and post it in one minute. It was OP
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>>100313002
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>>100313258
>We are having a baby
NNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
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>>100313002

Is this a 'being a hero is stupid and suicidal' ending or 'trying to be the hero is a reasonable thing'. Or is it 'you can't save everyone'. Why you do this to us OP?

I'm glad it got meta/had some attempt at meaning towards the end.
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>>100313258


I'm boo'ing you in real life
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>>100313258
I don't even believe this is the end.
The ride can never end.
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>>100313258
What the fuck
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>>100313271
infinite alcohol work
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>>100313258
>soar
Also, if you would have done the shin route you wouldn't be a dad
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fuck this world
told you niggers to stay with rina
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>>100313258
it was an 8/10 up to the fight, two posts just brought it down to a 4/10
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>>100313258

;_;7
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>>100313258
THnaks anon , the porn part awkaard was the best
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>>100313231
>implying her father wasn't the President of the World

Besides you got half crippled by the pimp, you don't have too much to choose from anyways

>>100313258
Yeah, True End he is in a coma after all.
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>>100313258
seriously.
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>>100313416
>inb4 OP makes another post explaining how we were in a coma the whole time after the fight and we'll never wake up
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>>100313258
I don't care if this is OP, it's true end.
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>>100313192
>not a fucking tv game show
Are you fucking kidding me
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>>100313258
My fucking sides. I don't even care anymore.
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>>100313416
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Omedetou, /a/.
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>>100313192
You can leave now.
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>>100313258
>Then with a sly smile on her face she leans in and whispers to you. "Chad Thundercock is my new boyfriend, and you have to pay child support!"
Best end
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>>100313258
Nigga I waited for this shit for hours. I could've been watching anime.
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>>100313479
My coma niggers
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>>100313258
Wow. That is bad.
If you are OP, you should have just left it at the Evanjellyon end.
You completely blew it with this one post.
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>>100313258
>>100313002
>>100312931
This last tweest fucking killed me. Is the ride finally over?
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>>100313258
>Then with a sly smile on her face she leans in and whispers to you. "We are having a baby!"
Such railroading. We bought condoms for EXACTLY THIS REASON, and what happens? We knock the girl up. Bullshit.
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>>100313494
>>100313543
>watching evashit
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>>100313642
>being a newfag
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>>100313258
>Epilogue
>9 months later
>Rina gives birth
>The baby is black
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God damnit OP, fuck this shit.
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>>100313258
Gee, pregnant on the first try. Should've used the condom.
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What about Rina's dad?

hes ded?
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I kind of wish you had the balls to end it rather failscade like. You never resolved the full issues, what happened to the pimp? Reiko's situation? Did she and Shin fuck? Is Reiko over you, or did the whole standing up for her make her panties wetter again (after listening to you and Rina fuck and then crying herself to sleep on your porch). And what the fuck happens to Rina, she is preggers and her father is still looming.

3/10 plot points unresolved and there's not really anything new in terms of aseop or theme.

I need a drink it's been 6 hours monitoring.
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>3 tweeeests in 10 minutes
I was not ready.
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OP here,

I'm too tired to write an epilogue, but I'll try to quickly summarize what I have in mind before I pass out.

You make a family with Rina, although her parent's protest it at first, Rina soon proves to her father that she needed you to live. She would threaten her suicide if her father ever tries to take you away from her and her father would be rendered powerless to do anything to both of you.

Although Rina becomes a high school mother she still raises your daughter well. You help her with her studies while she was pregnant, eventually both of you would become a normal family and move to the city.

Reiko would end up with Shin. After Reiko's grandfather dies at the hospital, and Reiko was going to move to another family halfway across the country Shin follows your bold move of proposing to Rina, by proposing to Reiko.

Reiko has never really known what true love is before so she warns Shin. "I am probably not the best candidate for a wife or a mother..."

But Shin doesn't care about it, he just tells her I want to spend the rest of my life with you.

They now travel the world together.
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>>100313690


If only the ending was that good
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>>100313793
It's shit.
SHIIIIIT.
Try again later, OP. And don't blow it next time.
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>>100313690
make this happen.
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So how many of you are ready to do it /a/? I can not think of a better situation to end it all.
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>>100313793
Nice.
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>>100313793
OP here

Disregard that, I suck cocks.
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>>100313793
Fuck it, I'm ok with this.
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Is OP serious? That is the fucking ending? It makes no sense at all, not only that, but it doesn't explain shit.

>>100313793
wowowow wtf? Tip: You were doing 8/10 until fight scene, the ending was shiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiit.
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>>100313904
Why?
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>inb4 OP is EA
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Another writefag please hijack the ending
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>>100313904
I'm with you on this.
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OP, you should've ended it at >>100313002
It would have been the most amazing ending.
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>>100313869

/a/ can always be counted to complete decision trees. Though you need less [X] Custom, pick your shit from the onset. it was entertaining enough for a short CYOA, we kept it rather realistic and headstrong until touMAN scenarios showed up.

When did /a/ become so whiteknight-ish in CYOAs?
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>>100313690
served it
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>>100313793
6/5 it's okay
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>>100314080
>When did /a/ become so whiteknight-ish in CYOAs?
No one actually wants to see her get abducted by aliens while MC miraculously changes into a tentacle ridden toddler who happens to be the mastermind of said alien colony and proceeds to rape every orifice he can find.
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>>100314217
I don't think you know where you are
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>>100313793
It was great , 8/10
congratulations writer anon
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>>100314080
Sometimes we need a break from
[X]insert banana into anus
[X]rape your dad, and your dog, and Steve Buscemi, and the principal, and the mailman
[X]kill yourself
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>>100314080
No clue, though last I've been in one was that KLK CYOA and some faggots cracked under the pressure of the EDGE there as well.
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>>100314217
That sounds amazing
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>>100314260
Is this /d/? Nope? Yeah, I think I'm in the right place.
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>>100313793
Good job on the characters op, I liked them a lot.
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>>100314217
>No one actually wants to see her get abducted by aliens while MC miraculously changes into a tentacle ridden toddler who happens to be the mastermind of said alien colony and proceeds to rape every orifice he can find.
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>>100314080
>realistic and headstrong


That was the problem with the whole thing. It was fucking boring.
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Reiko deserved more time. She made me remember Semete, Ano Yuki which OP clealy ripped off. It all was for the better, though.
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Well, when MC hit the pimp in the jaw with the bat, that should have been it. That's a direct knock out most of the time. But alas OP fucked up.

Then we should have settled the matter with Rina after the cops showed up.
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>>100314485

I think people just wanted to subvert the usual cliches and kind of hoped that OP would compensate with twists, but I don't know if it's because we could 'see them' or what, but not enough twists popped up. Not unreasonable since we took it in a rather logical manner and only got over emotional towards the end. That and MC-kuns stats clearly were lacking.
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>>100314749
He could go either for bad ending or good ending, but ended with idk what the fuck is this ending.
I guess I would prefer that Rina died in the assault, reiko became eternal friendzone(sometimes with benefits) and shin lived his life whatever.



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