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Anyone read this?

Just finished everything up till now. It's pretty good imo.

Thoughts? Opinions?
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>>100287853
After looking at that cover art I have decided to pick it up.
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it's a yuri series about non-blood related sisters

so either people will love it or hate it with a passion
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>>100287956

It's pretty fun if you like yuri and drama. The mc is pretty cute in the way she is and everything.
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>mangafox
That's a crime to that gorgeous art.
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>>100288015

I enjoy the dynamic between the main girls. They're so different and seeing them thrusted together is fun.
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Too much crying
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>>100288069
actually it's a typical masochist/sadist dynamic

you see it all the time in shoujo series
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>>100288021
You're starting to make it sound really gay and not the good kind of gay.
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>>100288105

Yuri, drama and crying are my thing. It just hit a sweet spot for me.
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>most detailed kiss in the history of that magazine
>het
Why?

>all this drama, parent issues and MC not being able to just fucking kiss her sister
Why?

But I'm still enjoying it.
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>>100288069
>thrusted together
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>mangafox
Commercial spam/advertising is not allowed anon.
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>>100287853
K-On hands strike again, with revengence.
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>>100288149
Is crying now considered a hobby?
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>>100288201
Sorry, it was all I had. ;_;
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>>100287853
Her dad is an asshole.
>leaves home because he wants to be "free"
>forgets about his daughter and makes her heir of the principal, giving her huge responsibilities
>never gives her tips on how to handle her duties
>actually he never calls her
>comes back and is all like "I'm sorry but you'll understand when you're older"
>still acts like a dick and doesn't even try to reason with his daughter
biggest dickbag in history
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>>100288229

I enjoy a good cry every now and then.
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>>100288275
Go watch a Mexican soap opera.
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>>100288275
That's pretty fucking weird. Whatever floats your boat.
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One of my favorite yuri manga.
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The art is the best.
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Are same-sex schools common is Japan?
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>>100287853
Hot, steamy, angry sex will ensue some time in the future. Art is obscenely good. Wrtting could be better but it's yuri with a plot, so I won't complain.
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>>100288528
MC-chan is so cute.
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>>100288526
Not so much anymore.
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>>100288231
Do you even dynasty-scans, anon?
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>>100287853
>mangafox
>actually thinks Citrus is good past it's art
>We have someone ask this at least once every week.

You really need to just kill yourself.
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>>100288494
>What Mei needs now isn't love
>but a good fuck
Fixed.
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>>100288575
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>>100288255
In a sense, i agree with you. Should at least have waited for Mei grow up so he could pursue his dreams of a laid-back life.
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Too bad actual lesbians are never this attractive. And if they are, they're attention whores and not actual lesbians 99% of the time.
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Is the drama heavy, or is it just fluff that gets resolved at the end of the chapters?
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I remember an anon dumping it some time ago. I think it cut off after the older one found the younger one's manga or something. It was pretty good stuff.
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>>100288787
It's pretty heavy.
My heart aches every time I read a chapter.
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>>100288694
>too bad reality ain't as good as 2D
There. Fixed that for you.
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>>100288825
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>>100287853
>>>/u/
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>>100288694
thats why this is called "pure" love
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>>100288787
The drama feels so forced I don't even know how could anyone take it seriously.
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Chances of anime adaptation increasing considering Inugami-san to Nekoyama-san got one.
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>>100288694
73.6% of all statistics are made up
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>>100288787
It's about daddy issues. But it got revealed by ch07 so I don't know how can it be continued. It's very melodramatic and forced so it's pretty much builds on melodramatic issues.
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>>100288921
And ST just got one too and te kisses ain't censored.
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>>100288874
>forced
>>>/out/
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>>100288921
For a bimonthly manga like this, give it another 10 years.
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>>100288921
This.
Comic Yuri Hime titles are pretty popular too.
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>>100288977
Serialization can always change to monthly.
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>>100288963
>Thinking it's not.
The fan base of this series is mostly brain dead idiots.

The only good thing about it is the art, deal with it.
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>forced
Stop using that word. It's not helping your argument.
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>>100289064
It's always the same buttmad /a/non shitting up Citrus threads or getting upset when it's mentioned.
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>>100288937
How so it got revealed in ch07? We knew she had daddy issues since ch02 or 03.

Why do you thin it's forced?
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>>100289041
>forced
>brain dead idiots
>only good thing ... the art
>deal with it
Just get out
>>>/v/
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>>100289064
No, it actually is. You just refuse to admit it, and/or don't understand what the word actually means.

You write it off as a 'bussword' because it proves you have shit taste.
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I liked it so much I bought the first volume.
I love "incest" and I love yuri.
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>>100289122
You really need need to stop trying to direct people to other boards. You look even more retarded.
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>>100289151
The drama's not forced.
It's got build up, actual consequences and character development.
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>>100289187
>direct people to other boards

>do I fit in yet?
Careful. Your new is showing.
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┌(┌ ^o^)┐ホモォ…
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>>100287853

>http://www.animenewsnetwork.com/news/2014-01-15/Citrus/Citrus-getting-an-anime-series-green-lit
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>>100289233
>Your new is showing.

You need to learn how to hold a conversation on /a/ before you attempt to police others. It's obvious that you are the one who needs to get out of here and not the other guy.
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>>100289200
No it doesn't, you just to stupid to realize otherwise. But it is kind of pointless to try and convince an idiot they're retarded.

The story is set up like multiple one-shots where problems get resolved with in a chapter. Said problems come up with no explanation.
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I love the art, but the drama is too dramatic even by shoujo standars, and the characters do stupid shit to force this drama.

>Yuzu comes to the conclusion that Mei needs family instead of a lover.
>That's a good plot point
>Cries three feet away from Mei about how she could not be her lover

what the fuck what happened to being a good sister? why do you cry in front of the person you want to heal and put them in a ever worse situation?

>Himeko is introduced to Yuzu as Mei's friend who hasn't been getting attention
>Himeko tells obvious lies about fucking Mei
>Yuzu believes her for no reason; she knows Mei doesn't pay much attention to her
>Himeko acts like an annoying bitch the whole next chapter
>It's Mei who gets fed up with her shit and stops her

At least she calmed down the last chapter.

And don't get me started on her father, the poor oh so misunderstood rich guy who was unhappy and needed to be free, who only wants his daugther to be happy like him by giving her the prime example of abandonment and all that crap.

I love Yuzu as a character, even when she is an idiot she is a lovable one, but I swear to god Saburouta would make her act completely OOC just to have more forced drama and break Mei.
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>>100287853
>mangafox
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>>100289308
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>>100289187
Everybody redirects everybody to other boards since the beginning of 4chan. The hell are you talking about.
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>>100289428
He wasn't kidding. Your browser is just broken.
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>>100289512
He's done it multiple times. Read the thread, it's obvious samefagging.
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>>100289538
If it's true well shit, there goes whatever Sakura Trick and Akuma no riddle may accomplish regarding yuri.
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>>100289538
Stop.
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>>100289647
Hmm, stop what?
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>>100289605
You seriously believe that badly made shoop? Really? Are you fucking retarded?
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>>100289538

>mfw its true
>mfw my body's not ready to hold all these sparkles and bubbles

will it save anime?
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>>100289717
While I agree it's bad, let see you make a better one?
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>>100289368
>what the fuck what happened to being a good sister? why do you cry in front of the person you want to heal and put them in a ever worse situation?
She didn't cry in front of her.
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>>100289647

it is real, open the link in chrome
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>>100289747
>mfw people falling for trolls

>>100289761
What does his ability to make a better one have to do with anything? If you do a shitty job of something, it's a shitty job. It doesn't matter who calls you out, and whether he can do a better job.
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>>100289819
ok, she cried around the corner, still three feet away
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>>100289368
>what the fuck what happened to being a good sister? why do you cry in front of the person you want to heal and put them in a ever worse situation?
Yuzu definition of "good sister" is being Mei's rock. You can't be strong for others if you show weakness in front of them. I thought it very coherent for her to not cry in front of Mei.

>Himeko bs
Himeko is the classic childhood friend that don't want to lose her only friend to anyone.
Yuzu clearly ain't the brightest tool in the shed. Add that to her weird feelings, not knowing what do feel or do about her "sister", it's to be expected that she act strange, dumb and a little jealous, even if, to us, it was a obvious lie.

>about the father
Completely agree there. Guy is the perfect of what bad parenting is, however, I can't help but to sympathize with his motives. I just wished he would have done that now, that Mei is grown-up, instead of the worst time possible, when she was a kid.
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>>100289820
It's fucking sad, that a bunch of them will actually try it.
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>>100289834
It's like saying "I'm better than you" and not being able to prove it.

Besides, past just leaving the anti-aliasing on for the text it's fine. Though, that is kind of a big tell.
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>>100289959
No, it's saying 'you did a shitty job'. Do you have issues with reading comprehension?
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>>100289959
It doesn't even look like the right font and don't tell me the 2013 would fuck up that badly just due to aliasing. It looks like it has a completely wrong size compared to the rest of the text.
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>>100290047
He's probably the guy who did it, otherwise I don't even see why he feels the need to vehemently defend this work of art.
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>>100289896
>very coherent for
That's not how you us the word coherent.
>ain't
Anything you think or say is wrong.
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>>100290124
>Disregard reasoning
>Focus on grammar
It's like as if this is your first week on the internet.
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>>100289538
>Legit looking URL.
Why are you doing this to me!?
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>>100289896
>I thought it very coherent for her to not cry in front of Mei

Anon she was around the corner bawling her heart out. She was suffering and crying enough to get a gundam.
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>>100290047
>How does implication.
>>100290077
Same exact size. Looks thicker due to anti-aliasing. Welcome to photoshop.
>>100290120
I already said I did it. Good job keeping up.
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>>100290169
No, that's not grammar. It's incorrect use of words, and if you are trying to use words you don't understand or know it means you're not smart. Thus nothing you say is correct. You're 'reasoning' is also shit because Himeko's whole character was "I want Mei's V" she was given no characterization past that.
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>>100290227
Really. From I understood by the scene, I got the idea that Mei was outside the cemetery and the grave was pretty far inside.
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>>100290344
I understood that Yuzu only went back a little to leave the watering stuff behind.
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>>100290228
Sorry, but if I leave anti-aliasing on my numbers still don't shrink that way if they actually were the same size as the rest of the letters.
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>all that forced drama and situational conveniences

That aside, it's pretty good. Drawing is nice and not horrendous like in girlfriends
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>>100290492
There are multiple types of text anti-aliasing. You much be new with photoshop.
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I can appreciate taking time to set up the character dynamics and everything but I feel like it's only now that any real developments started happening.

Maybe I'm just burned out on romance drama anime/manga propelling itself along through hundreds of pages of no actual communication and misunderstanding.

Still, I can respect Yuzu trying to put aside romantic/sexual developments to help Mei.

Worst case scenario if I want the payoff, it's not like he hasn't made erotic manga starring their doppelgangers.
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>>100290446
Weird. I seriously thought Mei was like "She probably want to be alone with her dad" and went away to wait for her at cemetery grave.
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>>100290625
I meant cemetery entrance
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>>100290492
There are multiple types of text anti-aliasing. You must be new with photoshop.
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>>100290593
I know that, but regardless of what mode or other shit I try in PS my 2013 doesn't shrink half in size in comparison to the rest of the text if it is originally in the same size. So other than putting a fuckton of shit over it no one needs or fucking up the size or font on the number from the start, I have no idea what the hell you did to fuck it up like that.
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>>100290790
I made it in roughly 40 seconds. I didn't even change the staff of the original screen cap.
I honestly wasn't to concerned with it.
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>>100287853
There is a reason not!sister is acting like that, right? Her father fucked her since she was 3? Or she's a succubus in disguise?
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>>100291597
>not!sister
what?
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>>100291643
I think he's retarded and does not realize that ! means 'not'.
So that would be not(not)sister. Meaning she really is her sister.
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>>100290617
I don't remember this. Is that a doujin?
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>>100292971
Those aren't Mei and Yuzu. They're characters from Saburota's oneshot in Wildrose.
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>>100293085
Right.
Well damn, Saburouta sure loves those two designs. They even act the same.
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Yeah it's pretty good.
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>>100289538
>it's first chapter
>it's
0/10 apply yourself.
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>>100296597
>Actually reading it.
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The art and the girls are cute but it's nothing special elsewise. It works like a typical shoujo story where the girl goes for the cool lone wolf that no one talks to because he's too cool for school, then gets a female rival who also likes said lone wolf even though the guy treats them like shit/ignores them most of the time.

Only difference is the guy is a girl and they're both lesbians. Really generic shit.
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>>100289896
>>100289368

>about the father

I hate that character, not only because of the bad parent, but because the setting for him is really weak, what kind of man who remarries is not with his new wife or doesn't know his wife's daughter? Maybe Yuzu's mother went in for the money but still, is really unbelievable. It also makes me mad that Yuzu thinks he's not a bad person when he is the most selfish uncaring faggot to ever exist.

I would have like the story just fine if Mei's father was still a shitty parent, but because he was raised like that by another shitty parent and was overstrict. It sounds cliche, but at least I would buy it.



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