lets start with a smile
Oh what? No more weekend only containment thread? I, for one, am glad. Very glad. Let's commence our wonderful general thread and discuss all the wonderful general things. SO GLAD.
>Cheshire Cat's right iris is fixed
also, does anyone have a pastebin link to the Wurm story from last night?
im still waiting for the cont of that i dont think its finished
what is your fetish?
I have no idea why, but I have a scent fetish
oh. ill be taking 1 or 2 sketch request tonight. give me something i might like
a Yuki Onna cuddling with her lover?
A wurm like >>100171539 making a heart shape with her claws
Did somebody do the salamander-commissar-thingy? because if not, that would be nice
a knight abandon the princess and fall in love with the dragon instead
i like it. will deliver in an hour or two.
i am look foward to it!
It's not very compatible with monster girls.
some monster girls have feet
Yeah but only really vanilla stuff like vampires, succubi and fairies.
I like vanilla.
>not wanting a dragon girl footjob
>not wanting frog feet
Come on, anon. Be creative.
Technically, the entire tail of a lamia could count as a "foot"
what? no, its all her belly until the tail
Why would I want that?
Might as well throw this out there, but is vanilla really such a bad thing? I mean, simple tastes and all that...
My Alchemist got killed by one of those on Saturday...Fuck 'em.
Well, no, it's not inherently bad or anything, but it gets boring eventually.
>not wanting a dragon girl footjob
Wouldn't the scales hurt?
its not a bad thing, people are just too extreme about how monstruous they look
I just find "vanilla" designs to be often really boring and uninspired. I like seeing how a monster girl artist can combine the human and the monster parts into a great looking whole. Of course some monster girl species are inherently vanilla like kitsunes and such. But just putting weird clothes on a girl and calling it a monster girl is fucking stupid.
For me it's not about looking vanilla or not, but about how well designed the look is, monstrous or not.
That's why I dislike cosplay tier, but I have nothing against a normal humanoid vampire.
what the fuck is cosplay tier
This is cosplay tier
i still think its better than dawing a pile of meat and putting a human torso with tits in it
i don't get it
What's the difference between cosplay tier and a well designed vampire? Since vampires are SUPPOSED to look human it seems like an odd example to use, almost like a false distinction.
Derogatory term for a monster girl that looks more girl than monster. For some reason, the wonderland designs come to mind. Not necessarily a bad thing, but frequently accused of poor design.
There's no actual inhuman traits, not even an unnatural skin or eye color. Just a girl wearing weird clothes.
Cosplay tier doesn't really apply to things like vampires
Cosplay tier is for monster girls that should be a bit monstrous but instead just look like normal girls wearing weird costumes.
It's not for monster girls that are more girl than monster, it's for monster girls whose monster parts look fake.
but the entire point of monster girls is to make monsters more huamn
Vampires and Kitsune are supposed to look mostly human, so it's fine if they do. But a golem is not supposed to look like a little girl in brick-patterned clothes. That is cosplay tier.
Also applies to stupid anatomy like Knees on a mermaid.
Quick question! Your monster girl waifu comes up to you and tells you that she needs something. You ask her what she needs, she replies with "I need about tree fiddy". What do?
More human and a girl in a costume are two different things though.
tell her to go back into the lake
Try to imagine an MG version of ol' Nessie.
This is suddenly having me think about an MG take on the nosferatu-style of vampire...which, I guess is nothing more than a werebat.
Then how about you post a well designed golem girl?
Monster Girl Academy Anon here posting another update finally with some fluffy sheep lewd
As usual, always looking for feedback and errors I missed out, any useful critique is appreciated.
I already know how I want this route to end but im having one more update before an ending epilogue, all of my classes are cancelled this week so expect quite alot of content, after finishing Fiona's story I might be doing some one-shot yuri if I feel like I can pull it off, or one shots with MCx minor characters (list is at the bottom) until I feel like another longer story.
Why is there so little good fanart of fox girls? Do nips not like the fluffy tail? I've passed 7k image mark on on the "fox tail" tag in one of the boorus and so far I've seen 3 actually good looking images.
>More human and a girl in a costume are two different things though.
Not at all, the artist just took the slider too close to "vanilla" for some people's liking.
>stupid anatomy like Knees on a mermaid.
This one's as much tradition and convenience as anatomical mistake at this point.
It's about that time that I begin to notice my darling Lich seemed to have grown about three feet taller. It weren't no lovely Lich it were that damned loch Ness monstergirl again.
Dang monster stole her cloak to try and trick me and you know she knew my waifu only had the one darned cloak.
Whether I can post one or not doesn't make >>100175077 any less of a little girl in brick-patterned skimpy clothes.
SO has TF scanned Z-Ton's monkey yet?
Right and when the slider is that far over it's cosplay tier.
would rock her?
i dont get how the bricks on her upper arms could possibly be part of a costume, and there are costumes like this which makes what you are saying make no sense to me
And the problem with a golem girl like that is that there aren't very many ways to fuck her. Which is a bad thing in a porn setting like MGE.
Monster Girls have long since transcended porn.
So I just finished up the newest chapter of Monster Musume (slowpoke, I know) and I feel like I should be horrified about Rachnea raping Lilith, the fact that Lilith seems more a succubus than a standard devil and that Rachnea actually out-... Over-sexed? Either way, that she basically beat out of a sex demon at their own damn was pretty damn cool in a twisted way. Still, think Ranchnea will get a date of her own? Part of me was disappointed that she didn't respond to Lilith's spiel with "Congratulations for stating the obvious, you must have spent all night on google figuring that out." or something like that.
Come off it. You're being a pedantic shit.
Considering her personality, it would probably be an indoor date or some place inconspicuous. Then again, perhaps that chapter could be used to help ease her out of that...well, for lack of a better term, that self-consciousness of hers.
God, I hope we get a Rachnee date chapter. I feel like we were sort of cheated out of one
Why does this make me want to imagine Rachnea taking Kimihito out to a roller derby game?
>"With your natural toughness and my webs, we'll be an unbeatable team!"
>Meanwhile, their competition looks like something out of Wacky Racers and Speeder Racer on rollerskates.
I apologize, I am a silly person and fan of the absurd.
Dakini is a cute.
no, i think you are just asserting your autism in this thread. i think cosplaytier is just a term you use for things you dont like and that its bullshit, since even stuff like lamias can have good-looking cosplays of them done.
Is there going to be more dates?
Because right now I only can see two girls winning the Darling: Miia or Cerea.
Rachne, for example, looks like she only has a sexual attraction for Darling, not love.
Papi and Suu look more like daughters than possible wives.
And Mero, well, she has some development in that last page of the Miia-Mero chapter
we need more Rachnee love development
Yeah, you can call it that but it's still no different from the original intent.
>You're being a pedantic shit.
Yes and no. There's a lot you can do with latex and enough glue, so unless you're messing with limb thinness or body proportion big time it can be difficult to make something that looks suitably non-human but is still attractive.
for example could pretty much work as a costume aside from the fact that the hands are a little big. That's why "looks like a girl in a costume" is a pretty bad metric to use. But then, we've always been bad at making divisions, just like the "more monster than girl vs more girl than monster" argument to distinguish MG from furry.
I think it's less that they're unpopular and more because you don't see them as much in these threads because they're sort of vanilla alongside cat and dog girls. Just keep looking, I'm sure you'll find them.
I'm sure each of the girls will get a chance at a date, even Suu.
Adding to this idea of mine, the 'd' suspect for that chapter will be Dick Dastardly.
I chuckled at that far more than I should. Still, nothing wrong with a little absurdity.
holstaurus diner story from last thread for those who went to bed and missed the link.
As of last chapter, there's strong implications Rachnea does like Darling for more than his 'D'.
And a Suu chapter seems like a strong possibility since she does have an established personality, she's just quiet most of the time.
I do have faith the author is not going to milk this 'arc' (it's still fairly episodic) for all its worth and see to it we get a chapter to each girl.
Cosplay Tier does not mean that you can make a costume out of it. With enough prosthetics and special effects you can make a costume out of anything.
Cosplay tier means IT LOOKS LIKE A CHEAP COSTUME or a Monster Themed accessorised outfit.
And the golem girl in question is just that. A normal girl in brick-patterned clothes with little-brick-patterned floaters on her arms and a head accessory.
You know, after seeing Ranchera's pedipalp legs, I can't stand Driders without them. They're such a perfect little design element.
They are quite neat, aren't they?
It is bothersome that a lot of the monsteriglr designs from that one guide do tend to come off more as the "cosplay tier" stuff. I mean, hell, I think Chachamaru from Negima makes more convincing golem girl. (Well, at least when you can see all her joints and seams)
You have my apologies.
>there will never be a side-scrolling adventure game with sprites from MGE
>there will never be delicious sprite rape scenes
yeah, and lizard girl is just a girl in scaley looking clothing, lamia is just a girl in a big scaley tubesock, etc,etc...
>Wake up to read the endings to the wurm and holistar stories
What a great way to start the morning.
Is holistar sex the messiest of all the monster girl sex? Milk everywhere to clean up afterwards
Well we could mod in our own races into Starbound. That'd be at least part of the way there. I dunno that we have any sprite artists in the thread, though.
Ever find yourself reading up on or trying to learn more about what inspired some of these monster girls?
Was going to say slime, but she'd easily clean up after the deed is done.
What wurm story
A lizard girl usually has inhuman looking ears, ears and feet . If it were a cosplay at least it's a damn well made one.
Kind of curious, how would you rank this?
no better than the golem
Someone already made a vast majority of the MGE girls in sprite form. I'd be hoping for something like Eroico though. It was short, but fun and fappable.
It actually started as a bsdm centaur story but then a wurm saved us.
How good of a conductor is a slimegirl?
Could they survive an eletric current going through them?
Explain further. Preferably with either said sprites or links to them.
There's a lot of lizard girls that just have weird ears and a tail. Non-human hands and feet are optional, and most people don't like them.
I'm surprised the MGE ones have them, since they mean less options during sex.
I don't understand your point. The complaint is levied at the depiction, not the species that it represents.
I'd have to go digging through ~10,000 unsorted images. Basically, it was a sheet that showed a bunch of the MG's in sprite form, along with a separate sheet for the Mimic MG, showing all her different forms from absorbing other MG's.
>IT LOOKS LIKE A CHEAP COSTUME
This still doesn't even approach a good place to draw the line, we've got a full body lamia cosplay that still looks like a cheap costume. I mean hell, what if someone makes a really good Kitsune costume? Is that still cosplay tier or despite being an incredibly vanilla design is it magically something more because it's well made?
A bit more difficult to pull off, but this still boils down to what you like vs. what you don't like. Just relax and quit whining, guys.
I finally read Alice in Wonderland the other day. I seriously don't get why the Elevens like it so much.
Just saying that the "usually" wasn't quite right. Actually, most lizard girls have normal or mostly normal hands and feet.
Did you take LSD before reading it?
Because they have a massive throbbing erection for the name Alice
I bring you this from /tg/'s Dragongirl threads
Going off of game knowledge here. Most slimes are resistant to electric shock, but there are species that are quite vulnerable to electricity.
Found myself reading up on centipedes, myself. Now I've been plagued with the recurring thought of a cat-fight between an Oomukade and an Ushi-Oni (which in folklore aren't as dangerous as I expected).
Are you two serious? Because most of the book is terrible wordplay, and that wouldn't translate at all.
Only a shitty lizardgirl.
The MGE one is definitely cosplay tier.
>we've got a full body lamia cosplay that still looks like a cheap costume.
If it has knees or a butt, then yes, it's cosplay tier. I thought we mentioned this already.
Does it go any further?
So is sayanara sensei and yet people here still like it
>since they mean less options during sex
Is granberia Cosplay tier?
New MGE girl when?
oh boy, here we go again
The butt is covered and it looks like she's on a wedge or something to hide the knees. It's still a cosplay though.
Nah we didn't get past her murmuring babies. I think cyao anon fell asleep
I'm about to start writing the Lich/Paladin thing. (Or Blackguard I guess if that's what people are in to.) I've got a few ideas for things that could be done.
We either start where we left off, which was just before introducing Lich to the townfolk.
>Collecting components for a plague cure on a snowstorm covered mountain
>Dungeon crawling for treasure and relics
>Shopping with her in a monster accepting city (Which would basically be where we were previously, but without the possibility of being run out of town)
>Lay on hands all over that butt
Course if anyone else has suggestions that are good I don't mind going with them either.
>Dungeon crawling for treasure and relics
Why would the paladin or the lich care about this one?
I like the mountain idea, it'd be a good way to lower people's hesitancy to accept her, too. Or at least it could work that way if Anon plays his cards right.
The collecting components sounds like it has a good chance of HIGH ADVENTURE
Shopping is open to lots of comedy that I see
The dungeon crawl could go either way.
It's a journey over destination kind of thing.
I wouldn't say that, because her hands and feet don't quite look like booties.
And? We've explained already that cosplay tier doesn't mean "it's possible to make a costume of it."
So it's Monday. Does anyone remember the Saturday thread? Or am I home free?
I was also thinking about a lich and paladin story.
Sort of powerful paladin dies and gets resurrected by a Lich
Story can go in two ways
He resists her control the whole time but slowly falls in love
In the end finally, says I love you to lich, lich smiles and says I love you back because she's happy she's gotten complete control over you now and you're her pawn.
He doesn't like it at first but slowly falls in love with her and she with him.
She puts her soul into him because she doesn't want to be without him anymore so if she dies then he dies.
Paladins from the order he comes from have been searching for the lich that desecrates his grave.
MC tells them to leave and that he is happy with her swearing on his oath.
Maybe a bonus end?
Some paladins believe hes mind controlled by the lich to say that and come kill him
As he and lich are dying an angel appears
Brings both of them to heaven since MC was still good, and lich was never evil just born that way
Lich turns into a angel in heaven? I guess and then happily ever after in after life.
Do you guys think this would be a good story? I know it still needs a lot of fleshing out
Calling something cosplay tier is like tipping back pints of Guinness in a summer heat wave and mocking your friends as unmanly for drinking lager. It's just macho posturing to make sure that everyone knows how HARDCORE you are about monstergirls and that they're all FILTHY CASUALS WHO SHOULD GO BACK TO /C/
>We've explained already that cosplay tier doesn't mean "it's possible to make a costume of it."
Show me where. The only post I've seen that even came close immediately contradicted itself.
I'm pretty sure that "cosplay tier" guy is trolling, and if he isn't he should keep his retarded opinions to himself.
Nobody remembers me?
I'll just keep the continuation of the Wurm story to myself. As well as the Ryu story.
not very high quality but it has a fair amount of MG
I don't see why you take offense. The Cosplay Tier label is geared at the designer of the monster girl, not at those who enjoy it for whatever reason.
Post more Dakini, too.
Isn't the Wurm's story finished?
>The Cosplay Tier label is geared at the designer of the monster girl, not at those who enjoy it for whatever reason.
It's still used to insult people that like the designs. This is /a/ and all, so we should really be used to it either way, but when you have people acting haughty about which does happen it's hard to ignore, much like in the example that other guy made in the post you quoted.
So I realized my MG folder needs more dragongirls. Anyone got any good ones?
Shenron pls leave
I'm the one typing out a below average story, full of spelling errots, on a phone.
Well type more
Timing too good
Had to be on purpose
Alright, be honest now. Who's your kaifu?
The one we gave a scaly back rub to?
>much like in the example that other guy made in the post you quoted.
Seems to me that that's simply striking a nerve.
Perhaps he agrees, deep down?
You better back the fuck up before you get smacked the fuck up.
>Perhaps he agrees, deep down?
Let's not even start down that road.
Oh no, the rocket scientiest!
So should I pick up where I left off? With our hero receiving a claw-job from a Wurm, using semen from a previous ejaculation as lubricant?
Or should I start the story about a Ryu making love with a little boy?
I understand what you're trying to say, but a pint of Guinness Extra Cold is actually really refreshing on a hot day.
Think of cosplay tier as meaning CHEAP cosplay tier.
For example, consider two golem costumes - one is done with full-body textured makeup, some angular prosthetics blended in under the makeup, contacts etc. to create a convinving illusion of a body formed of living clay. This is not "cosplay tier" even though its strictly cosplay.
The second is just someone who's wearing some brick-patterned legwarmers and arm-length gloves. This is cosplay tier.
I shudder to imagine how kaifu Destroyah looks...
Otachi. We're expecting our first soon too.
>scaly handjob from Wurm
Can we get both?
The quest, or at least the part of it you'd be useful for seemed simple enough. Find a flower, bring it back to town so that Lich and a local alchemist could concoct a cure for a plague. However nature has a way of complicating things, as evidenced by the howling wind and the soft crunch of snow being crushed by each of your steps. You're wrapped up in more than enough clothes to keep you safe from the cold, but it's still a miserable trek up an ever increasing incline. You still can't help but feel that life and undeath are being a bit unfair to you since in total contrast to your misery, your friend is walking ahead almost entirely naked without so much as a sniffle. Funnily enough you were sure the townsfolk had convinced her to bundle up as you had, but once the pair of you were out of sight she'd discarded almost all of it. She's walking, but none of her steps are leaving indentations in the snow or making a sound as far as you can hear. She insisted on leading the way as "You wouldn't know what we need when you see it." and sure enough, already she had randomly stopped only to dig up some snow and retrieve a flower, or a sample of moss that lived beneath. You make a mental note to ask how she knew where to look when there's no danger of freezing to death.
You're starting to question why you even had to come along on this journey when you realize you're being led into a cave. There's a deep relief in escaping the wind cutting at your face, and you can even remove the cloth around your mouth and talk normally for the first time in hours.
"This mountain is ridiculous!" You exclaim while shaking the snow from your legs. Lich seems to be too deep in thought to hear, her mouth covered by her hand as she examines the walls around you.
That is, she seemed to be too deep in thought until you notice the crack of a smile peeking out from the side of her hand.
>You think this is funny, don't you?
>Ignore her and move deeper into the cave
>With our hero receiving a claw-job from a Wurm, using semen from a previous ejaculation as lubricant?
That sounds nice.
does anyone have a proposal situation for a cyoa for later?
Where can I find the previous parts?
Both. But I prefer Ryu.
>For example, consider two golem costumes...
Finally, someone attempts a decent definition. It still doesn't work though because there's no clear cutoff and never will be. You posted two extremes most people would agree on, but the middle is still nebulous. For example, >>100174023
You could make it pretty good or godawful. Since everything would basically just be glued on whether or not it looked "cheap" as a costume would come down to detail. There's nothing special going on with her torso at all, and her legs could either just be boots she clearly slipped into, or they could be some things she sewed and glued together herself that she put on and then covered the seams where her legs go in with foam or whatever to make it look natural. The same thing applies to the arms, and the head could be take care of with a normal headpiece and some hair work. What about the claws? Are they plastic or do they look like bone? Same thing.
You could get two cosplays of entirely different levels of expense and quality from that same image, but is the design cosplay tier or not? You have to answer one way or the other, but the metric given can't put the image in one category or the other based solely on what's drawn.
>Ignore her and move deeper into the cave
No need to be an asshat, plus, we gotta make sure this place is safe.
Unless someone else saved them, you'll have to surf Foolz.
I'd propose my vampire/dhampir story, but I don't have it on my phone and don't want to type it out.
Man I love this picture
...now I want a montage of a cute ushi-oni trying to get through the day with her claws, a look of intense concentration on her face as she tries to use a pen at work/text her friends on the subway home/use the computer to update her dating profile (she lives in hope!) and write steamy fanfiction about lovingly raping her precious darling husbando before getting up early to make him a bento the next day before he goes to work
that fucking game is too hard, took me a lot of time in the last boss
Charlotte the Ushi Oni - She's the monstergirl equivalent of Macha from 40k. I will write this soon (tm).
A late night rendezvous with a Jurogumo?
A power struggle between hornets and honeybees?
Trying to think of some of the lesser used ones...
>Macha from 40k
The girl from Dawn of War? I can't see it
I propose that you post it in Anon-kun instead of here.
>Ignore her and move deeper into the cave
>posts are dated from this Tuesday
Are you a wizard?
Alright, I think this is where I left off.
"ATATATATATATATATATATATATATATATATATATATATATA!" The Wurm shouts as she jacks you off at ludicrous speeds, hitting all of the pressure points in your dick at the same time!
You feel untold levels of pain and pleasure from the act. You want to scream but can't, due to being smothered by her big titties.
This goes on until you cum so violently, that your dick and body split down the middle, turning you into a fountain of blood.
This sounds horrible
Anon has good taste.
I second this. Maybe dump a few posts here to get some attention, then take it to Anon-kun. The CYOA isn't bad, but the threads get clogged.
I'm not sure anymore. Its mostly been things that could coil around me (Lamia, Slime, etc), but last night I had this really violent dream about a manticore. I loved it
Then find us a better one.
only mg I have
The real nosferatu-style would look much more degenerative and...repulsive.
Give her tree fiddy inches of dick, then shove the rest in just as she looks content.
Destroy phylactery, proceed to vanquish other abominations blighting the land.
It's more a reference to the ever-virgin status: http://1d4chan.org/wiki/Macha
Yes, a Time Wizard.
The middle is always going to be ambiguous for something like this, since character design exists on a continuum.
This doesn't make the definitions useless though, it just means that you're always going to have some sort of grey area. The same thing exists with defining species in biology, since even though it is clearly extremely useful to distinguish between species, it's essentially impossible to nail down hard transitions in evolutionary history, or even between certain concurrently existing species. The usual coarse definition for two distinct species would be that you cannot create a viable zygote using gametes from the two candidate species that will develop to be a reproductively fertile offspring. The last part is why for example lions/tigers and horses/donkeys are separate species, as ligers/mules are (usually) sterile.
The closest to a hard definition you could get would be that a design is cosplay tier if it could be replicated perfectly with a cheap, low effort costume, but even then there are a host of caveats you could define to improve the definition.
i want to use her breasts as pillows
I still think her hair needs to be more cream. As it is, it looks simply like it's uncolored.
Don't forget about setting either. If you go MGE, monsters have specifically been transformed to look human. If you go Niku Drill, they are certainly less human, more animal/monster.
This is a matter more common law and spirit of the law rather than something you can put into concrete. It's something you have to do on a case by case basis.
You try to focus, you're here for something important after all. You step past her and deeper into the cave, examining the walls and floor for signs of life.
"We're here for a flower, right?"
"Essentially, yes..."She trails off as she steps over the snow you've managed to leave behind, which elicits one last chuckle out of her. "The roots are what we really need though. We're looking for an open chamber with a source of light and water. It won't be too hard to find compared to the ones that were buried under the snow."
You hear the telltale swish and crackle of air from her gesturing before casting a spell, and then see a small blue light fly past your shoulder to illuminate the cave ahead.
"I have to admit." She continues as she passes by. "This is a lot more fun than what I'd been planning to spend the next few decades working on. You were right about heading out to find something to do with myself."
Even if the cold hadn't been bothering her it's surprising to hear that her definition of fun seems to be rooting through snow for plant life, even with that in mind it's nice to hear that she's enjoying something that will help people.
The light comes to a halt ahead, finding that the cave splits off in two directions. You can't see light coming from either side, and both seem structurally sound at first glance. However the path to your right is closer to a crack in the wall than a proper path, Lich could likely fit through, but you wouldn't be able to follow easily.
>Send Lich ahead to the right and wait for her here.
In the first paragraph of part two;
>seems they were a little disappointed but you can't you that you are,
You can't you that you are? What?
You also seem to forget every so often to capitalize personal pronouns, and myself is one word not two. You forget to end sentences with periods sometimes so you should watch out for that. I had to reread some parts to make sense of it because of no periods being where they should be.You sometimes forget to use quotation marks at the end of some characters' dialog. Also I'm not sure if you have spell check on and it replaces some random words but when it's getting to a lewd bit and the guy's cock is described as "heard" and not "hard" it's weird to read.
I'll see if I can't find a bigger version, but it's just so damned tiny.
>didnt realize it was a gif
>as i was looking away the mnster girls looked at me
>saw it in the orner of my eye
What happened to the story about the sensitive ushi-oni trying to make friends/not be so scary but accidentally still being terrifying due to her woefully underdeveloped social skills?
>As well as her more conventional fapfics, she posts some stories where she doesn't even rape the man, they just cuddle; these are some of her favorite works.
>She posts these with a different account though, since most of the other MGs on the site call her a fag and complain about the lack of smut in them.
The problem there is that the middle is so freakishly wide. On one side you've got the golem that started this, and on the other you've got what, a very few extreme examples? I was going to say Garo, but even she'd be questionable if she wasn't so spindly so she hardly counts as an extreme despite being a concretely monstrous design. You don't even come close to placing most monstergirl designs we've got to work with, and even if you did the entire Cosplay Tier category just cropped up as another way to try and quantify that my tastes>your tastes. It's a pointless and I daresay harmful distinction when we're all here for anthropomorphized beasts to begin with.
>most of the other MGs on the site call her a fag
I wonder how most settings would even handle this. Depending on semen for life in some way isn't uncommon, how do you deal with that when you're a lesbo?
It's the same Ushi Oni. Or, at least, my head canon says it is. Have to finish this work, then I'll write.
I realize it wat no damn waifu, but it wad that gawt damn lawch ness mawnstah
so I say, "Damnit now get outta here mownstah you aint gettin no tree fiddy"
Probably the same way vegans are treated in the real world.
Thanks man, just making some quick changes now, I suck at grammar most of the time and when spell checker doesnt underline sometimes I just press on not noticing that its the wrong word
.I really need to read more thoughly but I was tired as shit when I submitted it.
I guess its kind of like forcing yourself to eat vegetables
But what if Nessie is my waifu?
Special menus? I wonder if there'd be some kind of... sperm... bank... for situations like this? Would they still like semen and just hate men or what?
Well don go givin her anoda tree fiddy
For a monster there may be a distinction between actual sexual attraction or love and the need to feed. One could solely be attracted to females and only want to have sex with them, but still wring men dry of semen just because that's what they need to do.
Would you fuck a slime?
The examples were intentionally extremely distinct to emphasise that you can indeed have designs that are essentially clearly "cosplay tier" and others that clearly were not. As for there being very few examples, that's because it's just one post in a thread, not really the place to write an essay exploring my own understanding of the boundary zone.
Garo isn't really cosplay tier as certain structural parts, like her fingers, tail and ears, are clearly inhuman - no costume can restructure your hands. I would add that there are quite a lot of designs in MGE where parts of the design are "cosplay tier" even if not all of it is; for example, the lizard girls and the mantis girl have parts that are essentially a leotard with themed pieces glued on, but they also have things like the tails/scythes that would be impossible to completely achieve with a simple costume.
The MGE golem is a the common go-to example because every aspect of her design could be achieved absolutely perfectly with simple costume pieces, so you don't have to spend time clarifying which parts are cosplay tier or not. Most other girls have at least one or two things that aren't "cosplay tier" abouth them
Depends, are we talking a threesome with the slime carrier and the parasite slime, or just the slime?
I would this one.
They look out of place, dunno why.
They look like they'd be white in 'her' first appearance.
Monster girls can like women too right?
>get off work from waitresssing job
>terrible job, horrible pay too
>walk home in the dark, terrible hours too
>hear the distinct sound of a kitten mewling in an alley
>heart strings plucked
>Delve into alley to give kitty a warm, new home
>mewling gets louder as you investigate further
>suddenly come face to face with cat monster girl
>huge evil grin on her face
>jump back in surprise, but quickly regain your composure
>monster girls only preyed on men, you had nothing to fear
>apologize and turn around to leave
>suddenly feel a tail wrap around your ankle
>”My my, look what the cat dragged in.”
>suddenly get pounced on my cat monster girl
>she straddles you, sitting on your chest as he uses her legs pin your arms down
>she spreads your legs apart, using her tail to pull up your skirt, revealing pink panties and thigh high stockings
>She licks her lips as you feel her hot breath on your crotch
>you stifle a cry as you feel her rough tongue lick through the panties
Stop with this yuri shit and go back to /u/
Thats kind of gross and ruined the whole thing, I cant get into this
Have more tinfoil via >>>/tg/29490218
I always assume that the settings with the whole semen thing going on just don't have lesbian monstergirls, they're all either hetero or bi. The desire to feed on semen always seems to tie in with some sort of hardwired lust anyway.
Settings that don't have the semen requirement could still have lesbians, though. Which settings have it as an actual need, anyway? Even MGE doesn't have them actually needing it to live, they just lust after it (and men) intensely, and refill their mana bar from the mystic energy they can gain from it.
>you can indeed have designs that are essentially clearly "cosplay tier" and others that clearly were not.
No disagreement there, there are a small number that are black and white.
>Garo isn't really cosplay tier as certain structural parts, like her fingers
This is actually most of what she's got going for her, aside from the thinness of her limbs. You could fatten her up, hide her hands and she'd be a weeaboo with a cosplay fetish.
>tail and ears
Both of those would be pretty easy, actually. In the page I posted it looks like she might even have two sets of ears.
>there are quite a lot of designs in MGE where parts of the design are "cosplay tier" even if not all of it is
Exactly, so you've got parts of your definitions smeared all fucking over the place. We're not even talking about a gradient now, it's just a palette with bits of gray tossed around. You define so little with even the fairly good definition you're using there's not much point and bringing up the topic can lead to an assload of shitposting. "Cosplay Tier" really does nothing for us, but I guess it wouldn't be so terrible if everyone was as reasonable in using and applying the idea as you are.
Too bad they aren't.
>Even MGE doesn't have them actually needing it to live
It DID for some of them, the trick there is that the MGE is a living document and KC has changed quite a bit in style since he started. As for others... You know, I really can't think of any off the top of my head. Huh. There's still that hardwired cocklust to deal with though.
The definition is simple: Does the monster girl look like she's wearing her monster parts? (Y/N).
Garou's Hair and fingers look like they're part of her, so she's not cosplay tier.
The Wurm's skilled hand brings you to a second orgasm, covering her hand in your genetic clam-chowder. She pulls her hand out of your pants and starts to lick you semen off of it in a overly erotic manner.
"Delicious, and it's thick too."
She releases her hand from the back of your head as she says this, freeing you from the soft and warm prison that is her breasts.
"So can I go now, Please?" You ask, hoping that she'll let you go and that you didn't suffer any brain damage.
"You won't be going, not until you take care of this." She grabs one of your hands and brings it to her soaking pussy.
Why hasn't this been scanned and uploaded yet?
Read the reply chain, it's not that simple at all. Even the hair you mentioned could be a wig.
Because there is no justice in this world.
For the millionth time, it's not about whether or not you CAN make a costume that looks like that.
>hide her hands
covering up the tricky bits doesn't alter whether we can consider something cosplay tier or not; it just means you're hiding part of it.
>tail and ears
true enough it looks a bit like she has two sets of ears, but the tail would be hard since it wouldn't actually be able to move independently; this also applies to stuff like extra limbs and so forth. Most altered ears or horns I wouldn't count as cosplay tier though since in a typical cosplay they would be on a hairband/you'd still have the human ears there, which distinguishes between a costume and the actual character design.
>definitions smeared all fucking over the place
As has been stated repeatedly, "cosplay tier" is primarily commentary on poor design choices, and so it is perfectly fine to apply it to specific parts of a given monster, as each part is its own design choice. Insisting that it can only be applied to every part of the design or none of it is like saying I can't criticize one costume in a movie but say the rest are good; either they're all shit or none of them are or else "my definitions of a movie having bad costumes are all over the place". Or like saying that I can't criticize a single element of one characters costume, like some cleopatra character with a fantastically well made linen dress and really good accessories but then this one, obviously plastic fisher-price crown with hot pink heart "jewels" on it, or else "my definitions of a bad costume are all over the place"
No one's shown me the first time yet. I'm still waiting.
Shown you what?
[ ] Fuck her like a man
[ ] Fuck her like a Beta
[ ] Summon Gnome and escape the bind
[ ] secret option only available when you've cleared the game twice
It's evident from that fact that most of the other posters can agree on what constitutes a "cosplay tier" design without pre-negotiating the precise definition that it corresponds with some well-defined concept, even if it is difficult to articulate nicely in words. People honestly have a harder time getting agreement in academic circles on what exactly constitutes "art", so if anything we should ban the use of that word before we start going about claiming "cosplay tier" is a useless term.
You are cosply tier anon
I am now envisioning someone dressed up as particle board or toilet paper.
Was this a bad idea for a story? ;_;
I thought I had a good idea going while dreaming it up last night
>it just means you're hiding part of it.
It does, but I did say ASIDE from the hands she didn't have much going. That was the point.
>it wouldn't actually be able to move independently
That seems like a silly thing to bring up when most of what we're looking at are still images to begin with. If it looks like the design at any point it works.
>in a typical cosplay they would be on a hairband/you'd still have the human ears there
You know, even in most kemonomimi designs the part of the head where the human ears would be is hidden. Beyond that you could pretty much cover the band with hair.
>"cosplay tier" is primarily commentary on poor design choices
It's "design choices I don't like," but yes.
>one costume in a movie
Ah, you went up a level of categorization there. That's equivalent to complaining about, say KC's MGE designs rather than an individual MG, which is what we were discussing. And then you're looking at a number of different designs and trying to find an average.
>I can't criticize a single element of one characters costume
More on point, and a fair criticism I suppose.
Shown me where it's said that being able to make a cheap cosplay representation has nothing to do with being cosplay tier. You're the second or third time someone has mentioned that and I've yet to be directed to a post saying that. The argument doesn't even make sense.
you guys should have more respect for the "cosplay tier" girls, they are the ones who got most people into monster girls
>The argument doesn't even make sense.
I don't know how it could be simpler. It's not about whether a costume can be made or not, because you can make a costume for almost anything with enough skill and budget.
Cosplay tier refers to whether the design looks convincingly natural or not. Whether it looks like the monster is wearing her monster bits, or they're part of her.
Mostly I just find it funny that you take such offense to the concept. Kitsune, for instance, are pretty cosplay tier, but I still love them.
>[x] Fuck her like a man
I wonder, what DID get everyone here into mostergirls?
For me it was arachne
Good reasoning. Trying to remember when I started liking the more... different looking girls now.
I'd like to think I always have.
You're fucking shyte mate. No one cares about your cosplay-tier rubbish. Go check in at the autism clinic already.
The mermaid scene from an eroge I played nearly 12 years ago. It was the hottest scene in the whole game.
Maybe I should have waited till night time to write.
>most of the other posters can agree on what constitutes a "cosplay tier" design
But they can't, that's why it's debated so much. Just look at
Then look at
Two very different definitions right there.
>People honestly have a harder time getting agreement in academic circles on what exactly constitutes "art"
"Art" isn't a very useful term for the same reasons.
>Cosplay tier refers to whether the design looks convincingly natural or not
Already addressed. See my argument waaaaaay up here: >>100181098
Most of the designs we've got here could look good or shitty if properly or poorly rendered in real life. A drawing really isn't enough to say if a design would look "cheap" or not. You'd need an actual cosplay for that.
>Mostly I just find it funny that you take such offense to the concept.
I don't. My posts should sound serious, but not angry; I've barely even cursed here and when I do it's because I swear like a sailor in real life. And I do like Kitsune quite a bit actually, my problem with the whole "cosplay tier" thing is that it too often devolves into my taste>your taste because it's not defined at all.
>look into them
>internet says they're a type of monster girl
>hmm, what's a monster girl?
and here I am
i always loved girls with animal ears and tails, then i moved into the more exotic ones
>A drawing really isn't enough to say if a design would look "cheap" or not.
A fucking bikini with a brick pattern on it LOOKS like a costume enough to call it cosplay tier. Why are you bringing "cheaply" into the equation? It LOOKS like a costume, like it's a human in funky clothes, so it's cosplay tier. See also: Chesire cat, and many others.
I'd like to get my hands on that booty.
MGQ appeared in the 2012 vidya awards. I was looking for fap material, so I gave it a try.
After that I needed more Dragon girls. Because Granberia
Are you me?
The original comics by the EMG guy
>A fucking bikini with a brick pattern on it LOOKS like a costume enough to call it cosplay tier.
Already addressed, I conceded that there are some designs that are clearly cosplay and others that are clearly not. And again, as in a post I already linked you to, most anything can look bad if done wrong. Read the discussion, please.
why do you keep posting this
MGQ and Okayado's comics.
has someone been posting it a lot? I saved it a while ago and posted it because I thought it was funny
Okayado's early works planted the seed, but was EMG that did me in.
Monster girl quest
souldn't wurm be called wyrm?
All I remember was someone I knew told me about this disgusting game called monster girl quest, to which I downloaded just to see it for my own eyes, but ended up getting drawn into the whole genera.
Do you remember the name of the eroge?
I can't remember if it was Harpies or Dragon Girls that got me hooked.
I think it was Nocturnal Illusions.
But everyone says Wurm anyway to piss off KC.
Why does everyone want to piss KC off?
Lamia, the feel of her wrapping around you while cuddling made me feel happier than I ever could with a human girl
I want to fuck a dragon
Was on my recommended videos for some reason, got curious about what it was singing about, discovered mgq
How good is mgq anyways? The gameplay doesn't look very good, I like kamidori a lot better, and it had much better art along with voice acting as well.
Holy illias someone actually made a song about mgq? I'm too afraid to even open that link.
We all want to do it.
Generic catgirl #62747525586
More specifically, it might've been Aisha. Goddamn dat brown catgirl.
>Two very different definitions right there.
I WAS the longer post there, and I was in agreement with the other post you listed; it's just a somewhat simplified/brief way of putting part of it. The first of the two long definitions is compatible with "not looking like she's just wearing it/looks like actually part of her"; the second is an example of a costume that is just wearing patterned clothes. The two definitions are essentially the same other than their phrasing; namely, I'm a wordy son of a bitch (I too swear like a sailor, hi 5). I have found it to be a useful shorthand since, for whatever reason, I seem capable of intuitively understanding what others mean by it. I have never had a case where a character is described as "cosplay tier" only to think "what the fuck are they on about" when I look up an image of them.
Going by quotelinks claiming ownership of posts in this thread at least, you seem to be the only individual saying that their is confusion over the meaning. Everyone else is trying to provide definitions and examples of a concept that is difficult to articulate with words, and you are taking exception to them or claiming they are in disagreement with one another, but nobody else is complaining about their content as we can understand them as different ways of trying to express the same idea.
Ctrl+F cosplay in the last week of threads (closing tabs? haha) the arguments are about whether the term itself is defined well, not my taste>your taste
Listen to it, it's good. The dude had a promotion a few months ago to DL for free, too
>that whole fucking song
holy shit my sides
I saw the announcers in Yuyu Hakusho and I've always loved animal ears/tails on people. Eventually I saw a snake girl and fell in love with Lamia (and slimes to a lesser degree).
>she'll never look up at you and say, "Look Papa, I'm a rattlesnake!!"
>Listen to it, it's good.
I'm having difficulty seeing how one could pull that off
surprisingly it really is, and the lyrics are hilariously amazing
>not having the colored one
excellent taste sir
what is this called anon? I can't find a proper name when using google.
heroico, its pretty good and challenging
>Ctrl+F cosplay in the last week of threads
Yeah, that's happening. For the last month or so we've been stuck on writefaggotry anyway, not much to bitch about with character designs here.
>I have found it to be a useful shorthand since, for whatever reason, I seem capable of intuitively understanding what others mean by it.
Which is the problem I have. There's this vague sort of idea which places the extremes pretty well in place but, again, confuse the center. I don't know, maybe it's just some form of bias on my part since I do certainly remember numerous arguments in the past, but I know I wouldn't bitch about it as much as I do if the discussions involved were always this civil.
And on that note, I'm going to shut up. No point clogging this thread with the discussion, especially when we've got something other than writefaggotry going on at the moment.
I honestly can't remember not liking them, even as a child. Slimes and lamia are probably the first ones beyond the culturally familiar giants/demons etc. that I encountered though.
mind giving me a link? tried typing it in google and can't seem to get it.
>start it for three seconds
I cant anon, it's too embarassing
Same, I'm getting a lot of spanish stuff
my mistake, its Eroico
>the colored ones are 2 folders deep and unorganized
Thank you kindly anon
How do you organize everything else? I can never find anything.
open up the link to youtube, expand the description, read the lyrics, and reconsider
I just happen to have it sitting on my desktop, next to my MG folder(s).
I sort them NQ and Q, then by specific types of MG for each
>Nonquestionable (completely sfw, maybe too vanilla)
>Questionable (everything else)
Sometimes I might sort them by artist, if I know it
Damn, you had me good with that thread subject.
I kept searching for ''monster girl'' in the calatogs for at least six hours.
No wonder I couldn't find it.
When I was younger, I happened to stumble into a bunch of mangas with catgirls in them. Then there was Angewomon and Lady Devimon
I didn't think much of the matter, I just fapped to it casually. Then I found Heroes 3 with its Nagas and Medusas.
Fastforward several years, I've played Sengoku Rance and Monster Girl Quest appeared.
you won't be so thankful when you get in the desert
Since everyone else ignored it
latest monster girl doujins where?
>fuck her like a man
"Alright, fine!" You agree to fucking her, puffing out your chest as you do so.
"I like that spirit of yours." She rips your expensive mercenary pants off of you like a cheap stripper outfit, exposing your erect dick to the world, and then positions her wet snatch over your dick.
"Are you ready?" She asks, giving you a toothy grin as she does so.
You look at your dick, then at the Wurm, then back to your dick, and finally the Wurm, "Yeah, my body's ready."
"Then let's begin!" She slams her hips down, her pussy engulfing your dick all the way down to the hilt in one go.
Cool. I've been able to understand intuitively what people are getting at even in the grey-area cases so I guess it just works for some of us as a term. I can't recall any particularly vicious arguments even before the last week or two, but I could have missed some threads due to timezones or something.
Good grief, that song is actually remarkably good. Even the vocals are well recorded, which is usually the problem with these sorts of fan works.
Thank god I always have headphones in, don't think the street should be hearing this.
Did that one anon ever finish Soviet Fluffy Tails?
Chapter three went up a day or so ago, and he uploaded another oneshot with a holstaurus at some point in the last day.
it's all linked in the big bucket o' smut on pastebin: http://pastebin.com/mZEhPMMW
Thank you kind sir.
You cum instantly, like a little bitch.
"You came already? You're such a pathetic loser." The Wurm uncoils her tail and releases you, and then walks/slithers away in disappointment.
Eventually, every monster girl finds out you are a premature ejaculator, and laugh at you instead of raping you.
Eventually you kill yourself and go to hell, but even there they laugh at you.
Honestly it was probably MGQ pictures of Alice I kept seeing floating around, along with those two MGE vampire pictures by butter-t. Actually kind of ironic since she is the only lamia I've ever really liked a lot. I like the general concept of them but she was the only one without a generic, annoying personality.
>You came already?
they really like to boast of their sexual skills huh
Didn't look like boasting to me.
It's still boasting if it's true.
>guy comes from insertion
>girl gets disappointed, insults him, and leaves
That doesn't look like boasting in any way.
>Just like real life
Women, no man. They live off sperm. That's what make monstergirls so great.
Yo Hound, have you seen this? I know you like Centorea, so I thought you would like this.
No, but they can turn lesbians into cock hungry monsters with demonic energy so there's that.
To all of you arguing about "cosplay tier":
Who fucking cares? If everybody could just suspend their disbelief enough, and appreciate/believe what the canon and art tells us, this wouldn't even be a problem. And if you are too autistic to do this, and still want to think some of them are in a costume, they are hot anyway, as far as MGE goes. Some of the girls being just cosplayers in monster-like clothes never even occured to me before people started talking about it in these threads, and even then I thought it was ridiculous. This really does just come down to a my taste>your taste argument from what I see, honestly. Just felt like ranting.
>Just got this today.
>First couple of pages= insta boner.
why does actually owning the manga better?
There used to be way more greentext stories on monstergirl threads.
Did all the greentextbros leave?
my google-fu is weak, can somebody please give me the sauce on this?
Schizanthus. Literally in one of the first few links if you google it.
Did you actually Google it? The second link takes you to an online reader.
I'm happy for the break myself. It was too much of a good thing.
fuck! forgot the pic.
Buying the manga demonstrates the market, which means more stuff will get made.
it's a blessing in disguise, the greentext was overtaking the thread
Ah. Well anime when?
Not too soon, I hope. If there have been a few more successful manga in the same genre then it'll be more likely to be well funded than if it's still basically just EMG out there.
it didn't say schizanthus anywhere on the picture ;_; thanks
anyways, that was the best 12 pages I've read in a long time
WHY ARE THE GOOD ONES ALWAYS SHORT
Well, some series or another has to take the plunge and EMG is pretty accessible. I just hope they wait until there's more source material
Because they have less time to fuck it up in those one shots than in serialized stuff
They should at least make an OVA to speed up the process.
Because z-ton decided to not continue it. Which blows.
I wish he had more time to fuck up ;_;
i like manticore
CHAPTER 2 NEVER.
An anime adaptation of EMG would work brilliantly as slice of life, so I'm not so worried about quantity of source material there; though I suppose it would help to get more details of characterization down.
Manga wise, if the genre gets more established I'd love to see a long runner based on just one couple's budding relationship, kind of like how EMG looked at the start with Miia.
Well shit, I'm gonna have to visit /tg/ more often. Uber dense MC is also incredibly amusing for some reason.
He's not so much dense as completely unflappable/apathetic.
Which is still hilarious, of course.
There's actually more to that same story being written as we speak, in the linked thread. It's pretty good. Although some of those dragongirl pictures in that thread have less GIRL to dragon than I'd like.
Caught up doing other stuff, might still continue later tonight if lucky. My apologies.
What other stories would you like to see told in a monstergirl setting?
I'd like to see three-five humans on cultural exchange in a lamia village.
>that dawning realisation by the humans and lamia over the first day that there isn't a single chair in the entire settlement
Well it seems like no one but me cares about the Lich and Paly story right now. But I was one of the original guys who came up with the idea in that old thread so I have some personal attachment to it anyway.
Man. Hope this keeps up. Pretty fun read.
I care, but all I do is stalk and read it.
Try it again in a few hours/tomorrow night, I'm enjoying it, I'm just too preoccupied at the moment to hang around to vote.
I'm reading but Lurking
Remember, not only was CH 21 a disappointing missed opportunity
But it confirms an 8th harem member to be Dullahan's pair.
>But it confirms an 8th harem member to be Dullahan's pair.
Just ignore it, it posted in the other thread as well.
if Cerea fought Dullaham it'd make them Sword rivals.
That did not happen therefore there's going to be an 8th member
It's nice to hear it, so thank you for saying so.
I could start again in about ten minutes if I keep it short or green text it if you guys are interested.
We seem to have acquired a new thread >>100192367
I guess this is because the OP didn't include the phrase "monster girl" so someone didn't find it in the catalog
Eh I just woke up and was actually pleasantly surprised to see it picked back up.
Thought the premise of it was interesting.
I actually ran across this one out of luck and saw that one immediately after this one.
The premise seems cool, it's just this thread is a little dead. I'd recommend keeping it in the same prose style throughout if you could or else it'll be weird reading the completed pastebin.
Some of the choices aren't especially conducive to voting either; I had no real idea what answer to split up/stay together would be best so I was content to leave it at the one vote already there.
They mean the same thing. Wurm is Old High German, and Wyrm is Old English that's the only difference.
I hadn't really thought about the choice format. Do you have any suggestions, or preferences?
I'm in the other thread as well if you want to carry this conversation over there.
Keep your cyoa in this thread, the other thread was actually talking about the manga
game play is like any other rpg
its strength lies in other areas
as far as fap materiel its mostly femdom but it does cover a variety of niches, some scenes do have voices just not all , alice the four knights and illias have voiced scenes
the story and characters interactions are surprisingly very good I especially liked the interaction between Alice and Luka watching them discuss things gave me the same kind of feeling I got watching Horo and Lawrence from Spice and Wolf , not that I'm implying that their relationship is similar just saying it made me feel the same way.
People can't meaningfully vote unless they can see what each choice is going to result in, otherwise it may as well be random and so nobody cares. This is why people rapidly get frustrated with CYOAs where the author tries to pull a tweest with the outcome of a choice more than once in a blue moon, since it undermines their decision even when they did think they knew roughly where it would take things.
As for myself, I don't really mind; I usually only engage with a CYOA if I think the suggestions by other anons are missing something important.
If by talking about the manga you mean posting the same pictures that have been posted a thousand times along with the same discussion that has been had a thousand times (snake vs horse pussy, who is best girl/X is best girl, your waifu is shit etc) and unrelated food discussion, then yeah they are talking about the manga.
That makes sense. I was thinking about it as a DM and setting up risk versus reward scenarios, which, you're right doesn't fit as well with the audience only getting the one momentary choice before everything plays out .
Seeing a MGE thread on /r9k/ or /b/ years ago piqued my interest
I miss old r9k...
Yeah, CYOA's are best done as more of a story where the audience gets input on the setting of the next scene or major directions to take with certain characters. They don't really work as 'games' per se.
guess you weren't there 2008
I did; just haven't had time to upload it.
Not going to translate it, though. Too much stuff on my plate. Sorry!
Problem being that many people who run them have a story they want to tell. That's not the point of a CYOA. The author should only ever have that particular scene planned out and how it can end because the choices made therein may very well diverge from where you thought you were going with it.
the biggest problem I've had is when the author gives some incredibly stupid choices.
some like "listen to her?" which obviously no one is going to say no to.
then there are ones that are like "do you love me?" again obviously people say yea because that's the point of smut.
This is why I'll never do a cyoa, I'd love to, but the stories I'd like to tell aren't really translatable to such a directionless format.
Cool. Thanks for your work on EMG, by the way.
So going with the split up thing as an example would you prefer less choices about stuff like directions and more do to with the tone of their relationship instead?
More or less, I guess?
Honestly, quite a lot of CYOAs may as well just tell a conventional story and use comments in the thread as a form of live feedback about the direction things are going and source of occasional inspiration if there are any standout posts/clever ideas for things to happen
How about putting us more in control of moving the story by recognizing tidbits you've hinted at before. We shouldn't be flying blind here, without /tg/'s dice system everything that happens should be in our hands one way or another. More or less, anyway. Basically, just give us options where the decision actually matters and we've been armed with some information to make a choice.
Definitely some food for thought, thank you both.
I find that if you're telling a story with CHARACTERS instead of a generic self insert, it works better to put give choices that put the character into situations he would have to react to, but if you're going the opposite direction you'd take the reverse with you directing the self insert and having people choose how he reacts.
Thanks to the Granberia fight, I actually wanted LESS porn from MGQ, and more actual fights.
I feel like both
Would work well together.
Limiting the options in a cyoa and taking comments in as more of a feel for the flow of the story and the occasional piece of inspiration can be off set a problem of there being too many options which seem to have no real merit. However if you're not getting many comments It's easy to see how this would falter pretty hard.
However having meatier choices can spur discussion on said choices. Which in turn feeds the first tidbit into the second cycling into another.
Does the demon lord and chief god not have a page on the monster girl wiki? I'm curious to what they look like
>They have taken on the form of women due to the demon lord’s power, but because of the enormous power they already possessed from birth, they haven’t been completely subverted by her power.
>They can even temporarily change into the form of the enormous dragons from the time before the new demon lord took over.
are dragons powerful enough to defeat the demon lord it they want?
No images of the actual demon lord, just it's offsspring. As for the chief goddess, there's so much crossover with MGQ around that I just assumed it was Ilias.
I went to /d/ about 5-7 years ago.
one of the first threads that I saw that did something for me was monster girls.
I've been in love ever since.
One-on-one? Probably not. They were still affected by a blanket spell that affected all monsters. If the demon lord were to focus on one, they'd probably be toast. Get a handful of them to cooperate long enough, they could probably put up a fight.
>Get home from work
>Two MG threads
For what purpose?
Individually they're the strongest species, but even then they're not able to totally resist the Monster Lords power when its spread over every single monster in existence.
No one dragon would be able to take on the monster lord, and if the entire species tried they'd be facing war with the entirety of monster-kind for it.
there is another one??
ops just worded the op differently.
No, just powerful enough to resist a passive change in their monster dna or whatever.
Someone started one up cuz this one didn't have Monster Girl in the title for searches. That, and this one has been half-dead for a while.
that's something I don't understand.
the description of this and some other monsters make it sound as if they are opposed to what the demonlord had planned for them.
can you imagine the crisis and panic that all the monsters must have felt when the demonlord first took over and all their newborns were weak women with only some of their characteristics?
like you were an arachne then originally you were just a giant spider, now after the news of the new demonlord taking over all your children are grotesque half human half spider mutants.
that must have sucked majorly
Seems to be focused on the EMG manga whereas this is more of a general.
Probably not a good sign.
Or it was fantastic because now you were just as powerful but didn't have to worry as much about humans hunting you, or facing ostracization from other monsters.
it didnt go down like that though
every monsters themselves were affected not just their children.
>Probably not a good sign.
you guys have kind of cluttered these threads with stories and cyoa.
The feeling of her vagina's soft walls on your dick almost makes you cum again. The Wurm begins to move her hips, causing your dick to move in and out of her hot and slippery snatch.
You try your best to make this last as long as possible, such as thinking about baseball, mining, or Dark Elves being beaten by town guards.
Don't want to cum early again, and make her think that you're a little bitch.
"You ejoying it so far?" She asks, her breasts bouncing as she rides you.
"Yeah." You respond, still doing your best not to blow your load early.
"Good, good. Because play time is over."
As she says this, her pace starts to increase.
The sudden increase is speed is too much for you to handle, and you explode inside of her.
Your genetic chowder pours into her, staining her insides with your DNA.
that sounds even worse really.
that means that entire cultures of civilized monsters were destroyed over night when all the men were turned into cock-craving sluts.
can you imagine being an elf man and waking up one day with a set of luscious soft breasts and a warm needy snatch, suddenly overpowered to want to find a man and milk him dry inside your slutty pussy. your wife as well is off looking for a human man to satisfy her incredibly increased need for dick and your sons who were once respected warriors are now bending over to allow some anons to fuck their asses like the whores that they are.
elder dragons who were respected being transformed into women, liches being turned into little girls out of fucking nowhere. minotaurs being genderbent mid-battle.
the demonlord is singlehandedly responsible for the largest cultural genocide in the history of the universe. and that turns me on
Well, I guess I'll be honest and admit I like them more than EMG. I liked that manga at first, but then it just became a meandering harem clusterfuck. There really isn't a whole lot to discuss with it.
Our lord is an awesome lord
actually what happened to elves are different
in the mge setting elves aren't monsters , they are just another race of people like humans who eventually got infiltrated by succubi, though I think its been stated certain elf settlements have survived by exiling any elf they suspect of being tainted. mge dwarfs are the same though they never made any effort of kicking out succubi dwarfs and now the entire race is dwarf succubi.
What's that manga called?
Imagine the monsters that didn't have major physical changes slowly coming to terms with their massive personality and priority switch due to cocklust.
>Elf that has no idea why she's so eager to shove a man to the ground and fuck him
>Vampires suddenly finding themselves unable to resist biting lower and lower places
>Lich who spent the last several decades working on a plague suddenly drops everything to work on an aphrodisiac
>Succubus who has no idea what everyone else is on about and is living business as usual
I think he used clam chowder earlier too, or maybe that was someone else
If anyone is interested, I've uploaded the seventh chapter in the War and MGs story.
Imawabi no Dakini
I'm at that point as well.
I've come to the point where I care more about say.. the next War and MGs or anonymoosesaga chapter than I do EMG, and I'm not entirely sure why.
Speak of the devil...
They are great works. I wouldn't fault you for admiring them.
>Succubus who has no idea what everyone else is on about and is living business as usual
She'd be mad about everyone taking all of the semen. Damn whippersnappers.
It was me in both posts.
I like using that word.
And typing about Elves and Dark Elves being killed or beaten.
I was expecting a lot more when I looked this up
>Succubus who suddenly finds her great semen vaults are under siege from the rest of the community
It's hard to keep track of what's going on sometimes with cyoa, colorings, manga, general discussion, writefaggotry... etc All going on at once.
I can imagine the succubi being incredibly pissed off that they have a ton of competition now.
>following a man for the last month or so
>infiltrate his dreams and make him cum every night to make soft and pliable to your influence
>tonight is the night when you're going to finally use him physically and make him your sex toy
>you follow him from his job as he makes his way across town to his house.
>you already know his route so you just wait up ahead and set up a trap
>he's later than usual, you decide to check if he stopped somewhere
>he's completely gone, your desire for him and your rage are bursting
>finally you catch his scent coming from a sewer, you follow him ready to ravish him where he stands
>you jump in and immediately receive a kick to your chin as a vampire screams at you to leave her and her slave alone.
>fucking monsters always stealing your prey after you spent so much time.
they're basically hipsters of the monstergirl universe.
they're basically hipsters of the monstergirl universe.
They were fucking humans before it was cool.
what? you were expecting buxom lascivious horned beauties with beards?
>Tickle my beard-pussy with your dick, Onii-chan!
This would make an interesting story
would have been perfect if you posted that with a picture of Gimli
well if your intent is to make us laugh, you've succeeded
You wouldn't be falling for an old dwarf like me, would you?
>O-onii-chaan, don't stroke my beard pussy in public!
There's so much untapped potential regarding stories with monsters before and then during the change, Engaged in life or death combat with warriors and champions of renown.
Especially for typically brutal monsters like dragons or those bow wielding asshat minotaurs. Or almost any beastly or magical monster really.
Monster transforms smack in the middle a battle with a human they respect as a warrior.
Slowest writefag ever, but I'll deal with it for the sake of glorious wurm and future ryu.
I managed to make someone laugh?
>Back when I was a girl seduction meant something! We didn't have all of these rape pheromones and aphrodisiacs! If we wanted to stock up on semen we had to take two cocks in each hole AND WE LIKED IT!
I want to see a story about a bitter succubus just after the monster lord's big changes.
Now I can imagine a scenario where a human hunter who has been chasing after a monster for the past few decades and has had to see him kill and murder tons of people suddenly catches up to him during the transformation brought on by the demonlord.
the two of them battle sword and claw while the transformation is occuring, the monster doesn't even realize when it stops trying to kill him and begins trying to fuck him, the human hunter is fucking freaking out.
finally the monster gains the upperhand as the new her manages to slap the sword away and pin him down, ready and sweaty for a hard good fucking.
"kill me already foul beast" the hunter says while trying to reach for his dagger.
"kill? I have a much better idea than that!" she suddenly kisses him and tears off his pants.
Something along those lines in a semi serious setting sounds incredibly enjoyable in all honesty.
>those bow wielding asshat minotaurs
What the fuck? What minotaurs do you know of that wield bows? I've almost always seen them wielding axes or hammers.
Made me think the bookwurm writer came back ;_;
If I wanted to, I could post these faster than a loli catgirl on meth.
But I'm lazy.
>PIERCE ME! PIERCE ME WITH YOUR CROTCH-SWORD, NOBLE WARRIOR!
This would work way well with a lizardman.
which one, the one from yesterday?
>loli catgirl on meth
Why does this intrigue me?
W-Where is her other arm?!
I'M WRITING DAMN IT.
At the moment, her roommate (the ever-virgin Ushi Oni) has just walked in and told her that her book is upside-down. The book is "Reading for Dummies."
Would said Hijinks involve not wanting to fall for an enemy but also wanting bear said enemy's strong children?
Word choice is everything, anon.
Though I guess it matters if you intended to be humorous or not.
>W-Where is her other arm?!
Working the dragon dildo
Yes, the one with the babies
You know the more I think about it the more I realize I mixed up mythologies while creating a scenario in the woods with some friends... That being said isn't there a similar sort of half man half horse/bull that prances around the forest like an elf and lights up intruders with arrows? Because I'm pretty sure I saw that idea before I came up with it.
I-I am that writefag, the story technically ended since I thought it had already gone far enough but I can continue if you want to... b-baka
Maybe satyrs? Centaurs were pretty good bowmen too.
Y-yes please. I was really interested in the baby making part. Are you ever going to do a serious centaur story? I enjoyed it until you went bsdm
Probably. Hijinks begin as both agree to forestall their duel until they can figure out what the hell just happened.
Ah yes, Centaurs are what I was thinking of. A quick search also explains the difference in anatomy between them and minotaurs. (Horse/Bull)
Ahh. That ending.
Thanks for the chapter.
>>she'll never look up at you and say, "Look Papa, I'm a rattlesnake!!"
>both agree to forestall their duel until they can figure out what the hell just happened.
>You still wanna fight?
>Not really, my armor's chaffing in a weird spot. How about you?
>I think I'm bleeding somewhere I shouldn't be. Kill ya later?
>Kill ya later, monster.
Minotaurs are also bipedal
I kinda like EMG having its own thread. This one is almost serene.
I need to figure out how to do 'action' scenes. I feel like they're so weak.
I like bdsm, but you came on too strong with it. If it's gonna be a story where things are supposed to be consensual, even with MGs, then don't go full retard and have her become rape and pain dungeon mistress. More wurm please. She was so moe.
>I kinda like EMG having its own thread. This one is almost serene.
I think I like it this way. Taking up two threads is likely to get us in trouble long term though.
I dunno I read an explanation from KC of why he does what he does with the story and after reading that it seems to me that
to him the order and the chief god represents japanese society, or rather the expectations japanese society has of him (be a salary man who works overtime for no pay ect) he also gave off a forever alone vibe.
Oh dear god Eroico. DAmnit, I never was able to beat the final boss. It went from a slasher to a god damn Danmaku in that final boss fight.
Just channel the spirit of Rambo. Should work if you offer up enough bullets in a summoning ritual.
I really would like to try some day but I have no attraction to centaurs, I just can't get into horsepussy, I'm sure someday I'll find the willpower to understand the intricacies of horse pussy but for now I'll stick with lamia and cyclops and just generally scaly things.
also even though I'm a sub I just don't get the attraction toward bdsm, I just want to be tenderly held and cuddled lovingly.
in case you want to read the story I updated my paste bin here: http://pastebin.com/QyGeyQ1s
Not much of a writer so I'll just say go with this post.
Maybe keep the Rambo in check because you might not want to go full Michael Bay.
I'm not a fan of centaur either honestly, although like I said, I like bdsm well enough. Kinda hard to see a centaur as a dom like that though, personally. You could always write my proposed vampire and dhampir story. No centaur there! O-one day someone will write it.
Just curious but were you going to make the centaur yandere or crazy in any way? Her changes in emotions had me very hesitant after your lamilf
Your titles remind me of LN titles.
I kinda wish I could make my pastebins unlisted, but still have things viewable from my main page. I get all these hits that are probably from random people and it makes me nervous.
What's a Dhampir?
Dhampir is a half-human/vampire as far as I remember.
So it's a friendly vampire.
Why not write it yourself?
I made a choice where she recommended some ice-cream, the flavors I gave were
1. YANkee flag
2. DERElict station
whichever you chose was gonna be her type of love, but then someone suggested I get some.
and I thought it was too good to let it go to waste, so I chose that, I only realized halfway through that I'm not into dom and have no idea how to write it, and then someone suggested I dump the centaur and go into a wyrm story, which I really liked for some reason so I did that.
I just love how ridiculous and upfront LN titles are, and this gives me an excuse to be upfront about the stories as well.
It's not really a friendly vampire but a living undead creature that can best hunt out vampires. More man than vampire but best equipped for killing the living dead.
Curse that anon for ruining the only centaur story we ever got
I can't write fiction for shit, much less smut. I can't make a story flow, set up a setting, or really even make it interesting at all. And while I can fairly vividly imagine what I would consider an ideal sex scene in my mind, I couldn't put it into words well if you paid me. I have no creativity. Ask me to write you an APA lab report on it though, and you'll get an annotated masterpiece.
The Wurm stops moving her hips and places her hand on her belly.
"You came again? At least you lasted untill now, and you're still hard, so let's continue!" She continues to move her hips like before.
The Wurm continues to ride your dick throughout most of the day, the sounds and smells being made by the two of you could be noticed quite a distance away.
It wasn't until 4 in the morning that the Wurm was satified, and you were a few more cum shots away from being a chalk outline on the forest floor.
I'll be in my bunk.
I was heading to my car after a night at the hospital, ready to go home and rest after a long night of Doctor Vahlens terrible jokes and Meredith's teasing. As I reached for my keys a sudden gust of wind lifted some dust into my eyes. I quickly lifted my arms to my eyes when an even larger gust of wind started blowing. My lab coat flapping in the breeze I was soon surrounded by a shell created by the roaring wind. Then suddenly, a kaleidoscope of blinding light pierced through my eyes as white noise and screams filled my ears. I opened my mouth and began screaming but no noise came out as the wind forced itself down my body tearing my consciousness into pieces, then my mind fragmented like broken glass and I finally passed out.
Free from the suffocating pressure I finally opened my mouth I tasted the a cool fresh air you would never find in the inner city.
I quickly snapped opened my eyes and glanced around. I was lying down in a windy field of tall grass. The many strands of golden grass wavered around my body like the hair of a maiden creating the rustling noise of the ocean. I stared up and the beautiful flaxen moons and the constellations....
How odd, the constellations didn’t match any of the patterns from back home. Though I barely knew anything about stars I at least knew the basics like Ursa Major, Minor, and most importantly the North Star. But I couldn’t even find one them after staring out into the sky for about fifteen minutes. Well stars were never really my strong point so perhaps that knowledge was pushed out of my head in order to make room for organic chemistry.
“Well, well what do we have here?”
The dusky teasing voice of a woman sounded above my head abruptly ending my monologue. I quickly glanced up and saw a soot skinned woman with large bull horns leering at me with her dark crimson eyes. She had long tufts of spiky black hair that reached to her shoulders. Instead of hands, she had dark black hair covering her arms ending with sharp blood stained claws. Her torso flowed down smoothly from her ample bosom to her tight stomach. But instead of legs her lower body was comprised of six hairy appendages that, like her hands, ended with ivory white tusks.
“I knew I missed one of the ninjas. You guys really are tricky bastards, always flitting around and throwing your poisoned knives everywhere. But you scum will never beat an Ushi-Oni. After all we are resistant to your flying blades and immune to your various poisons.”
She leered menacingly at me.
“But first I'll have some fun with you before I claim Lord Akane’s prize for killing the very last ninja of the old Hideyoshi clan.”
With a quick thrust she stabbed one of her ivory legs at me.
“Nice reactions” she smirked as I agilely rolled out of the way.
I quickly flipped to an up right position then promptly dropped into an orthodox boxing stance.
“No blades. No bombs. No tricks. Just your fists. I have to admit boy, you’ve got guts”
She stared at me with an impish grin.
I glared back into her depraved smiling eyes.
“And the silent type too, you really are my type boy.”
I gulped down the lump that was forming in my throat. calm down, calm down. Just two hours ago you were just finishing your shift at the hospital. Dr Vahlen was talking about blood transfusion and her crappy joke about how vampires were great artists since they were good at drawing blood actually made you laugh! Then Meredith came up and spent the rest of the day making crappy blood related puns. You most likely collapsed due to over work while on the way to your car and this is just a dream. You are dreaming about giant spider ox women trying to murder you. Yes! This is just a drea-
Stress often builds up while in the cut throat medical world. Some people relieve that stress by fucking, others with drugs, anime, and various other things. But hey I don’t judge whatever scratches that itch. Personally I choose exercise, probably since I’ve pretty much seen enough of what drugs could do to people in that shithole city I lived back in my early years and women always seemed like too much of a hassle for me. I hiked, biked, boxed, and even did various other types of activities from free running to tai chi to keep myself in shape and prevent the madness of medical school from sinking in. But even all of that exercise couldn’t prepare me for a-
“I’M GOING TO RAPE YOU, THEN I’M GOING TO GUT YOU YOU FILTHY NINJA!”
Endless college research papers are probably the number one cause in the decline of creative writing ability.
Just keep trying, anon. I've been writing for a whopping two weeks and I seem to have done well enough to have a couple people tell me I'm not entirely shit.
Why not make a short story, say 3,000-5,000 words, and post it here?
Why are ushi-oni so worst girl?
The sharp pain of the Ushi-Oni’s claws slicing my cheek immediately brought me back to my senses.
“Oooh, nice you dodged that one too. But if you don’t put your head in the game I am going to gut you.”
crap this isn’t a dream
“Tell you what boy, I’ll give you one free strike and if you can hurt me I won’t kill you.”
I tentatively raised an eyebrow at her.
“I’ll just turn you into my personal cock slave instead”
Her smouldering lust-filled eyes locked into mine burning into mine as I scowled back into hers.
“One shot boy” she grinned in a sultry tone.
Then she closed her eyes are rose her two hairy claws up too her sides mirroring Christ. Not wasting this one chance I sunk down and lunged into her, slipped under her guard, and ran like hell.
Stress often builds up while in the cut throat medical world. Some people relieve that stress by fucking, others with drugs, anime, and various other things. But hey I don’t judge whatever scratches that itch. Personally I choose exercise, probably since I’ve pretty much seen enough of what drugs could do to people in that shithole city I lived back in my early years and women always seemed like too much of a hassle for me. I hiked, biked, boxed, and even did various other types of activities from free running to tai chi to keep myself in shape and prevent the madness of medical school from sinking in. But even all of that exercise couldn’t prepare me for a-
“I’M GOING TO RAPE YOU, THEN I’M GOING TO GUT YOU YOU FILTHY NINJA!”
Dashing like hell I heard the thunderous crashing of the Ushi-Oni’s six legs pulverizing the earth behind me.
This was bad, I had bolted into the forest hoping that the trees would hinder the advance of the large Ushi-Oni but instead the raging bull blitz towards me smashing the trees aside. Not only was she big, but she was fast. We had been running through the forest for what seemed like an eternity and she certainly wasn’t giving up. I ran further and further into the woods then suddenly I reached a clearing and tripped over somebody.
What I had tripped over was a corpse. I landed face flat into the mud, staining my starch white lab coat with the blood and guts of the woman in below me. The scent of blood flooded my senses as I looked into the carnage in front of me. Limbs and heads littered the open field like trash. Blood stained the ground with a sickly maroon while broken blades littered the ground marking the graves of the people who were massacred.
An ominous growl sounded behind me as the black beast pounded her way to me pulverizing the entrails lying on the ground. Her eyes were glowing bright red and potent steam spewed out of her mouth like a demented furnace. She then peered down into my face and snarled at me.
“You don’t have any where left to go boy, if you keep running then you are going to end up in the Kitsune village up ahead and I know they aren’t going to take kindly to a human, especially a ninja like you.”
take your chances with the Kitsune
pick up a weapon and fight
[x]take your chances with the Kitsune
>[X]take your chances with the Kitsune
Are you the guy who had a bunch of different kingdoms a while ago? If so do you have a pastebin or something else with them? I neglected to read them at the time.
Else take chances.
I was really hoping he would've insulted her and that was what he was gonna hurt her with.
[x]pick up a weapon and fight
Show these beasts the true power of humanity
[X] Take your chances with the Kitsune
Dammit Oni, we're a Doctor not a Ninja!
i'll make a pastebin eventually
The Oda clan is very tolerant of monsters and of Westeria the western continent though the clan leader doesn’t take shit from the church and allies himself with the non-church nations of Westeria. The leader of the Oda clan is married to a fox woman and has been granted extended life. The clan leader himself is a master of the sword and his wife is a master of the spells. Together they have had twenty-seven girls though oddly enough his thirteenth child was a boy. Many of his children have gone off to Westeria and are claiming land for themselves there. He is around 74 years old but looks and acts like a 30 year old man. Gentle to his friends and unrelenting to his enemies he holds the 3rd largest province among the human nations however he owns the best ports and is a ruler of trade.
The two of you ejoy some post-coital cuddling afterwards.
"That was nice, wasn't it?" The Wurm asks, rubbing her face into your chest.
"Y-yeah." You whimper, exhausted from the ordeal.
"By the way, I never asked your name. What is it?" The Wurm asks, still rubbing her head into your chest.
"My name? It's-"
What is your name?
[ ] Anon
[ ] Johnathon
[ ] Your own name idea
[ ] Dio
Foxy lady, also you have a few errors
Then she closed her eyes are rose her two hairy claws up too her sides mirroring
I'm not going to bs you as to why that is not going to happen. I hate writing. More than pretty much anything else. I have taken creative writing classes, taken part in small collaborative writing projects with colleagues, and several other things. It is just not for me. I simply can't do it well, and nothing is going to change that at this point. Unlike writing, I love to read anything from from Salvatore to Shakespeare to amateur /a/ monster porn. Which is why, every few threads, when someone asks for ideas for a story, I'll propose mine. And eventually, someone will do it. Then /a/ will lead us to a bad end and I'll kill myself. The end. Not really but I would be greatly saddened should that happen.
The Masamune clan belongs to a clan of very warrior like humans. Originally a collection of three smaller clans, their leaders bonded together under a pear tree with a lot of sake and became known as the three brothers. Masamune’s land is best known for its agriculture and has the most amount of farmers among the human lands.
Known by his giant battle axe and his kickass beard,the eldest of the brothers is a strong and powerful man who adhered to his 3 principles like they were religious dogma: have the guts to drink what your brothers pour for you, have the guts to lay the women you want, and have the guts to stay loyal no matter what. Juggernaut in the battlefield and on the bed the eldest brother fights and fucks for the challenge and fun.
The second brother on the other hand is a man better known for his sharpshooting and his healing magics. The second brother wields a bow made from the horns of a Westerian dragon empress. He made a name for himself for his sharp shooting after shooting the eye out of a mad phoenix under the curse of the 9-tailed fox lord that was terrorizing their land. The second brother later found the phoenix and took care of her until her wounds and broke her curse. The two were later wed but the fox had a second curse prepared incase the first was broken and the phoenix flew back into a rage and began killing again. This time the second brother was forced to kill the phoenix, he is currently raising the reincarnation of his wife as a daughter though she carries an obvious Electra-complex and the second brother is possibly a lolicon.
well looks like i've got brain problems
I don't know who Salvatore is and reading Shakespeare drives me insane. Then again, I loathe most of the 'classics.'
Also think you should move this backstory stuff to a paste bin, your sort of spamming the thread right now
The Third Brother is known for his schemes and his power on the battlefield. Powerful politician and trap lover, the third brother keeps the other two in line and takes care of all of the “boring political bullcrap” for the other brothers. He is rather more content to sleep all day in his room than do anything but duty and his brothers call so he is out to clean up the mess his brothers make on their conquest.
neets don't get pictures
Because when we fuck monstergirls, we rock ZE WARUDO.
Your name is David.
alright that is a lot easier for me
[x] Homeless Joe the Savior of Liberty and Monsterlolis
Salvatore writes the Legend of Drizzt fantasy novels. Quite popular, but that's pretty /tg/ so lets not get into that.
use your imagination for the pictures
I'll add more descriptions as my time frees up
Writing good action is hard, and it's even harder to find good guidance that doesn't include half-truths or heuristics that work but are more limiting than they need to be. I'd recommend reading as much combat fiction as you can, and just trying to emulate the style.
I'm trying to get a feel for the tech eras of the two sides in the MG and war setting. Would I be on the mark imagining humanity at a 1910-20s sort of level, and the MGs at something like the 1980-90s? This is going by the aircraft and TV comments, and the state of electrification of human forward bases, but the fact that the humans haven't been gobsmacked by the sight of computers all over the place.
Anon, so everyone can insert easier
Thanks for that.
Gotta say I found the second brother amusing.
play your cards right and you might end up as the fourth brother
You're correct on the human era, but the MGs are late mid to late 50s. I imagined the TV as one of those giant free-standing cabinets with a 8" tube in the middle.
Thus far there hasn't been a single computer that I recall describing. When I talk about the trucks and shit non-stop, I'm thinking of the classic GMC 6x6, for example.
and having read the backstory on the land now..
I'm deleting my post and changing my answer to picking up a weapon and fighting.
Or im being told by the bi-polar 4chan I can't delete the post after having no problem the last few days doing so...
Train has no breaks. Little offputting for most, myself included.
>ever-virgin Ushi Oni
though I think she's too self aware/deprecating to be a straight up Macha clone. Macha stayed a virgin because her hubris prevented her from ever making progress, wheras the Ushi Oni is just shy/wants to cuddle and hates how terrifying she is. She should make progress, just it should be incredibly slow and gawky progress while she overcomes both her own social ineptitude and her love interests natural blind terror.
Ehh Kitsunes may be assholes in this setting, but an ushi-oni is nigh impossible to kill, plus her blood corrupts you. They're also worst girl.
Write quickly, anon, I must know more.
Okay so my choices right now are either complete and utter annihilation at the claws of a mad ox, spider, whatever or a hoard of fluffy tailed women. Though I do know how to use
pretty well I know for a fact that my strength is useless against such a beast. Weighing my options I quickly sprang up and started headed towards the village.
“DAMN WHELP, THEN I’LL SHARE YOU WITH THE KITSUNE!”
This is not good, this is not good at all. And what the hell does she mean by share! I bolted through the forest until finally I came crashing through the forest and burst out into an open road with the Ushi-Oni trailing behind my toes.
Oh Jesus Christ of Nazareth.
pick a weapon proficiency
if they aren't enough for you pick your own
like Bowie knife or bow and arrow
Goddamnit I was thinking sort of cold war era, why did I say 80s, 90s. I've been watching old M*A*S*H episodes lately and that was part of my mental image for the base scenes.
Yeah, there haven't been any computers.
>Kitsune (oh god)
>pick a weapon proficiency
Magic. MUSCLE MAGIC!
Or spear. Spear is good too.
Well he's a doctor. So surely he is good with precision, and the extra reach is going to help in this situation.
Spear, we'll need the reach to keep the hordes at bay
Fists or spear.
>Dio is winning
>Johnathon has zero votes
I have never been this disappointed in a long time, /a/.
A spear. I should provide the best reach to kill any enemies.
Funny you mention that, I got a MASH vibe as well while writing everything.
I might be able to complete another tomorrow.
Right now I'm thinking about how to portray Emrald's powers. I'm not sure if I want her to be the hero or a supporting character for the troops.
Just kidding, use spear
Slice/stab/bash from a distance and use it to pole vault if necessary. And techniques usable with sticks/pipes you find.
We should train fist as a secondary proficiency. No one suspects a well-cast fist to the chin after disarming an opponent.
Dashing madly through the road I tore across the country side until I finally reached the village. Unfortunately the village was completely empty. The only illumination were from the stars and the moon and I was left standing in the middle of a god forsaken ghost town.
And here I thought I could finally receive some form of protection from some furry tailed women but instead I am left in a ghost town with a mad beast on my tail.
Then the house next to me exploded.
“Looks like the Kitsune abandoned this hick town, can’t say that I blame them”
Not listening to the Ushi-Oni I bent down and picked up a long bamboo pole on the ground and formed a stance.
I've been wondering for a bit and I'm not sure if I've just missed it, but how many tails does she have currently. Or is that a secret.
The sword would be the best choice.
Due to it being the easiest to use.
Go with David.
Polearms are generally safer because you have distance and poking ability as opposed to any sword play.
Or flail wildly
I haven't specified yet.
I imagine her having five or six though.
Basically I already have the core of how the current snafu ends up, I'm just thinking of what to do for the action bits.
Onward to page 10. I wonder if a new thread should be made?
But if you miss with the swing they can gap close and you're left on the defensive with no real counter attack maneuvers
Swords are actually difficult to use well.
Spears and polearms are probably the safest weapons.
Emrald is principally a medic, you don't want to overload her and make her the warrior hero as well, and that starts heading in sue-ish directions. She can be competent and skilled in combat, especially with her magic, but she should probably be too preoccupied with trying to recover/tend to Casey. Let some of the other characters have their moment in the spotlight.
Casey best be getting the monstergirl version of a purple heart for this shit
If you do, don't post one right away. Take five for a bit.
One that is already up is here:
Perhaps we should bridge the two.
I see. Well good luck on the action bits.
Also I say we just hi-jack the other thread. It's come to a crawl at this point.
you think i should move there?
Except for push with your long rod, or try and bash them. But yes, spears aren't good for cqc, hence their incredible lengths. Hm.
Oh, I agree. I was thinking of her using the 'natural' mind-fuckery magics Kitsune have to create a distraction/opportunity.
For example, use her will o' wisps on the enemy position to make them believe they're all actually on fire, they panic and run about, getting shot to shit in the process.
I wouldn't make it.
Ehh. It's shit-posting central in there along with everyone jacking off Hound.
I say we make a new one, instead off hijacking another.
fuck it i'm almost done for tonight
“wow you really got guts there mister” a sugary voice chirped up from above.
Quickly glancing up what captivated my eyes was a white haired little girl lying on top of the roof of the house next to me. She had alabaster hair and crimson eyes that gleamed like rubies in the night. Silky flowing white hair and two fluffy tails poured down from her body like rays of moonlight pooling onto the thatch roof. She wore a bright red mini-kimono with flowers painstakingly stitched into her dress. Though she was not fully developed an aura of a gentle princess emanated from her eyes.
“say would you like some help?”
Without breaking eye contact from the alluring child I nodded my head.
“BACK OFF CHILD THIS ONE’S MINE”
“I can either give you a better spear” the girl continued, obviously ignoring the Ushi-Oni “Or I can imbue you with my magic, either way you are going to win with my help.”
what’s the catch
My second time playing Pathfinder I played a Monk . The DM was sort of rustled, since he expected the party to be fucked if they didn't have weapons and couldn't refresh their spells. It was surprisingly effective. Literally no one expects you to punch them with Cold/Iron gauntlets.
It would be better than compounding threads together. Maybe a crossthread link to catch people up on the story is in order.
Most mg seem physically stronger than humans anyways not to mention faster so the advantages for polearm seem to become disadvantages very, plus since the writer put this in japan we lose out on the chance to use the japanese katana, the strongest weapon in fiction.
>[X]what’s the catch
Too good to be true.
What kind of magic are we talkin about here...
Long range or Enhance the body to the point of breaking if you push it too far.
[x]what’s the catch
Whats the catch, probably going to be her slave/play thing.
>Enhance the body to the point of breaking if you push it too far.
I am the shaft of my spear...
You nailed what I'm going after. Have a really short, greentextified sample:
> Just go say Hi Charlotte!
> No I can't just do that! He'll run away like all the others!
> Charlotte's been "hiding" behind a tree this entire time
> The guy she was watching notices her and waves
> Her back legs buckle, then she runs away
> A little silken heart remains behind
> She feels super proud of herself that evening when she's writing in her diary
>End up like all lancers
Why the hell did we pick spear
What's the catch.
Spear is probably referring to our penis and magic probably makes us her slave or some shit.
It seemed like a good idea at the time.
>shit posting central
I disagree. That's just kind of creepy.
What makes them great is the fluffy tails and whatnot.
We're also fated to die horribly.
I see; yes, that would make sense.
also I sure hope Emrald is big into gentle cuddling; while a serious flank wound is highly treatable it's going to hurt like hell for a long while, and that's going to really get in the way of the more energetic flavors of bed gymnastics
“I’m in need of a companion for my travels, a man with the skills and the guts to fight against even the strongest of monsters without the shadow of fear, what I need is a warrior.”
“A WARRIOR, HAH THIS MAN IS A NINJA. HE IS NAUGHT BUT A COWARD THAT HIDES IN THE DARK”
“I’m actually a doctor”
“mmmmm, and what delicious voice” the tiny fox girl squealed “but that works as well, ninja, doctor, spaceman, whatever you may be you carry yourself with the strength of a true warrior and that’s the qualification I really need.”
“Tell me about the spear”
“very well then cutie, the spear is a weapon that my family has held in possession for a very long time, one that sunders through even the toughest of flesh. It has many enchantments on it that will protect it from breaking and gives mild resistance to demonic energy. Far better than that measly bamboo pole of yours”
“And the magic”
“Quite simple really, I place a few spells on you binding you to me for a short while. My divine power will flow through your body giving you strength, speed, stamina, and even divinity. The contract is only temporary so you won’t end up as my mind slave or anything.”
one more question
>What's the cathc
>one more question
Why? You must be getting something out of this.
Also, has the Ushioni just been watching this whole time?
"By 'spear' do you mean penis?"
Why not fucking both?
I'm a sucker for enhancement magic.
>"By 'spear' do you mean penis?"
It'd be really, REALLY creepy if they had a penis passed down through their family.
Ushi-Oni love tough fights and this one just seems to be getting tougher
That's what makes it cool.
Can you guess how she got her name? I've been meaning to mention it in the story.
“Because sweetheart, you don’t have enough carrying capacity for all that magic. You would explode like an over inflated ball. Now choose your dance partner is getting restless.”
yes this is perfect
I take it the guy is currently at that weird point where after a few weeks he's realised there's something unusual about this ushi-oni he keeps seeing, and now only flees when she accidentally looms at him unexpectedly, or approaches him too quickly.
I think we would need the spear with magic enchantments to kill a ushi oni not physical power up. What exactly is divinity, is that immortality? OR do we become paladins empowered by the light?
Will allow us to harm the Oni.
Duh, magic. No matter how good the spear is, her ushi-oni blood would destroy our minds.
I wish there was a board for writefaggotry. /tg/ kind of comes close, but it's not the same.
I looked at some of their threads, and they usually play out more like actual games. At the start they have stat pages and stuff.
I assume it's how they get to sneak their shit through without getting deleted.
"You don't know what divinity is? Must not be a very religious boy then. Divinity gives a man and aura that allows you to channel energy into weapons like a staff or your fists that can burn a monster without hurting you. It also gives a man high regeneration powers. Though your contract with me at most will be able to heal only minor wounds"
sorry bout that
Weren't they described as malachite which are green like an Em(e)rald?
I'm inclined to go with the magic; to lose with the spear would imply being left to the oni osh.
She guaranteed a win either way. At least we might have a chance of keeping the spear later.
>Can you guess how she got her name?
Quite possibly I could, but it's stupid o'clock where I live and brain no worky right now so all I'm getting is it's for som shit like green eyes maybe
all right magic it is since we are at page ten, i'm going to go jack off or something until we get a new page
Basically, yeah. My idea was that when she was born, her mother wanted to use a human word for 'green,' but fucked up the spelling.
Kind of like when people try to use names from other languages because it 'sounds/looks cool.'
I'm such a faggot
pastebin for what we have so far for those who want it
rate hate masturbate
and for the love of god give me some feed back this is the first time I've written something in a year and the last thing I wrote was a Noir Film about a schizophrenic detective
>Kind of like when people try to use names from other languages because it 'sounds/looks cool.'
Fucking black people
I guess I pick magic then since it will hopefully ward off the blood's effect.
Haha. To be fair that seems entirely reasonable for some reason given her age compared to when the war started (given their long lifespans) and how far back the problem goes.
Get out, it's shit. Can't wait for next part.