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So, I finally gave in and read this.

While it's without doubt super interesting and definitely one of the hottest ecchi manga out there, I feel the author could have done a bit more with the setting. It could deliver more than just ecchi content. Don't get me wrong - I wouldn't want to miss out on the ecchi, it's just that with a guy travelling back in time, becoming his old self, being given a chance to rectify all the bad decisions he made, there's a lot more to do than get involved in questionable situations with little girls.
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>>100059628
>being given a chance to rectify all the bad decisions he made, there's a lot more to do than get involved in questionable situations with little girls
And thats where you are mistaken Op.
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>>100059822
I don't doubt that it's part of it, but I feel the manga could also explore the personality of the MC a bit more.
There's this guy, mid 20s, NEET, messed up family, father never at home, lost contact with his sister, the only relative who seemed to give a crap about him after she got married, gets confronted with all of his former classmates being successful in life, having jobs, families, etc. - and due to MAGIC he gets a chance to relive his life, be a child again.
One would expect a fuckload of regret, bitterness, etc. in this guy, to make good use of that opportunity, yet all we see him do is pull a Yuki Rito on little girls.
That in itself is obviously nothing too bad, but I think given the messed up background of his, it gives the whole a bit of a bitter taste. One would expect him to also do something about the future he's going to experience. It's too light-hearted, given the gloomy background setting.
I wouldn't be surprised if it ends with the MC actually drowning in the pool and what he sees being his last thoughts.
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>>100059628
but mc is a retard. setting h situations aside, he's always shown to be less smart than all the elementary schoolers
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I want to read this, what is it?
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>>100060973
mujaki no rakuen
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>>100060953
Yeah, that has been a bit annoying too. The MC is extraordinarily retarded. One would expect him to be a bit smarter given that he's into programming, wanted to be a game developer, etc. He acts exactly like his physical age. He doesn't seem like an adult at all.
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>>100061220
>He doesn't seem like an adult at all
That's exactly the point of the story.
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>>100061266
How is that the point of the story?
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>>100059628
Wait. I tought he is just dreaming while others trying to save his life after his accident.
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>>100060424
>we see him do is pull a Yuki Rito on little girls

the author was clearly aiming for a to love-ru loli edition. the time travel is just a plot device to include H scenes.
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>>100061333
If he wouldn't be an unemployed manchild he shouldn't travel back in the time to fix his life in the first place.
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>>100061489
but there is only a chapter where he seriously think about fixing it, and he seems to give up after that and go back to his retarded self
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I think it's still good, and my penis thinks it's great.
Of course you shouldn't expect Haruka na Machi e.
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>>100061571
As he did it in his whole life.
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>>100061665
at least he shows some coherence with his behaviour
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>>100061434
I think so too. Just saying that the setting could also be used for a bit more serious storytelling additional to the ecchi.

>>100061489
There's a difference between being a child and a man-child. Even man-children should be more mature and knowledgeable in certain regards. The problem is he's not exhibiting anything of that sort. The way he acts is simply not believable for a 25 year old.
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>>100059628
What chapter is this from?
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It's a damn ecchi manga meant to pop your boner and have a laugh.

I will never understand people who wants to read so much into episodic series like this or TLR. Some people just can't have fun I guess.
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>>100061818
Knowledge come from experience. The only thing he experienced was the four wall of his room.

btw new chapter came out in this week.
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>>100061818
yea but why bother. yabuki is selling a shitload of copies with just mindless fanservice, so why risking to write himself in a corner by adding plot (and thus being forced to eventually end the series) if he can just do with these kind of chapters
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>>100061818
She's a free software.
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is her vagina cthulhu?
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>>100061944
the latest one
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>>100059628
I feel like the bigger problem is how all the girls act.

I could understand if they were 4 or 5

But it's simply bullshit to think that 10 year olds act like this, with absolutely no self-awareness and shame. Even the most sheltered kids have some idea of sexuality at that age, and they sure as hell don't go around comparing their privates with one another.

I guess since it's fap material it isn't supposed to be accurate in the least, but it's still bad that the author has absolutely no idea what the average 10 year old is like.
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This shit is hoter than his hentai work.
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I never expected anything from an mc who is a neet but still has money to pay for sex with prostitutes. I hope he ends up alone or dead and doesn't defile any of the lolis.
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>>100062046
But Yabuki's latest release actually has plot regarding the titular Yami, things are coming to a climax
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>>100061220
>One would expect him to be a bit smarter given that he's into programming, wanted to be a game developer
You serious?
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>>100059628
Picked up so hard.
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That guy clearly died on the pool.
Paradise of Innocence
PARADISE of Innocence.

The universe is conspiring to make him fuck the lolis.
This is either hell, heaven, limbo, or his own mind as he dies.
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>>100062042
>Knowledge come from experience. The only thing he experienced was the four wall of his room.
Experience isn't only made first-hand. Most of what one knows is something one hasn't experienced but something one was told about or what one has read about. Also, maturity isn't just tied to experience. Someone who has travelled the world and seen many places isn't necessarily more mature than someone who spent his whole life studying sciences without ever leaving his room.

As long as he's not mentally retarded, and he clearly isn't - or isn't supposed to be at least - in the actual medical sense, he would be more mature at age 25 than at age 12. If you think your average 25 year old, even unemployed losers, weren't more mature than 12 year old I'd have to question your own maturity.
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>>100062195
>I guess since it's fap material it isn't supposed to be accurate in the least, but it's still bad that the author has absolutely no idea what the average 10 year old is like.
Well thank god.
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>>100060424
>you will never feel the tender and warm labia of a 12 year old push against your neck
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>>100062294
Programming certainly requires you to have a bit of mathematical reasoning skills, otherwise you wouldn't understand how things work. It doesn't mean that you're super smart if you can program, but it's a good indicator that you're not retarded.
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>>100062415
Ok. That's a clever use of a censor. I'd give him points just for that.
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is there a link where I can download all 17 chapters?
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Where can I read past chapter 17? I know for a fact that anon has translated up to what, 34? There was a thread yesterday with the translations posted along with the chapter raws, but no source on where to read or download past 17.
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>>100062284
I hope you realize that both yami and mea have no fixed background at all so basically yabuki can pull any shit he wants from them. things will stabilize and the story will go on for many more chapter like nothing happened
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>>100062195
I don't think it's that bad. While I agree that they seem a bit eager to take their clothes off, I've seen much worse depictions. Overall, he did an okay job in that regard. To me, it's mostly the MC who feels a bit odd, since he seems less mature than the 12 year old girls around him.
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>>100062284
>things are coming to a climax
If you know what I mean.
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So should I pick this up?

I recall reading this back when it only had a few chapters translated but the discussion going on about the characters acting unlike their age is making me think twice.
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>>100062506
Go drown in a pool and you might experience it too.
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MC is just too retarded for manga to be enjoyable.
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>>100062555
>implying it hasn't been done 1000 times before
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>>100062786
This, he acts too much like a kid.
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My dick demands me to follow this, so I don't mind the inconsistencies that much.
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>>100062620
Anyone?
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>>100062752
Personally, I think the only character acting unlike his age is the MC, who's supposed to be a 25 year old in a 12 year old's body. Some of the girls (not all) are very eager to expose themselves, but otherwise they don't act that oddly.

I'd recommend picking it up if only for the art alone.
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>>100062951
He's having the time of his life being a kid again.
While most of us would have gotten at least 6 lolis pregnant, he's fucking with his bros, stealing panties, and being a kid in general. How is that bad?
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>>100061234
Oh fuck you, and all of you who think it's not okay to give names. Kill yoruself fags.
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>>100063218
>he's fucking with his bros

If he prefers D who are we to judge his choices.
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>>100063448
Its not hard to google anon.
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>>100063448
When the name could be found with a simple archive search then I think it's OK to mention that.
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>>100062773
maybe I will
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>>100063218
The problem is, he's doing a bit too naturally. While childish phases where he enjoys his life are okay, there's nothing else he does, which doesn't seem that believable. The chapters simply don't leave enough room for character development. Few panels in the ecchi starts, and then they're over with the MC complaining about his innocent life.

Don't get me wrong - the ecchi is glorious - but I can't help but feel that there's a missed opportunity with a setting like that.
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>>100063521
>not liking shota dick
are you faggot?
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>>100059628
>I'm flat as a board!
Picked the fuck up.
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Best chapters?

Loli kissing in the closet and Bath shota dick rubbing are the best.
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>>100064502
Best chapter is where his sister is fucking that one guy in a tent and the two lolis undress him in fear.
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>>100064502
When he gets an actual facial.
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>25 years old
>fails grade-school math test
How the flying fuck?
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>>100067027
The next page or two he says that in the real world, people would just use calculators anyways, implying that he's really bad at math.
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>>100067473
I think using a calculator to solve the second set of problems would be more difficult than doing it manually. Also, isn't what he put for the second > chain actually correct?
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>>100067027
Finally a MC I can symphatize with. Even when I studied my ass off to learn one part of math I still did shitty in it and forgot everything in one day.
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shouldn't this be illegal? both to write AND read?
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>>100067027

I understand somewhat. I was volunteering at an afterschool program last Spring and it was a bit difficult to do the English and some of the math that the 5th and 6th graders, even though I mainly write papers and do math for my college degree.
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>>100067473
>>100068330
>>100068471
It's just simple arithmetic though, how do you fail that when you're 25 years old? Supposedly he's a programmer so he should obviously know this stuff.
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>>100061818
i would give you MY D
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I actually did things like this when I was a kid.
I would swim underwater and lick the girl's butts when I was at the pool.
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>>100059628
Why doesn't he fuck her? Why doesn't he fuck ANY of the girls?
It would be so fucking easy.
GIVE THEM THE FUCKING D ALREADY.
They're practically fucking him instead at this point.
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>>100067027
More like:
>into programing
>fail at math
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>>100067027
How the fuck can even a human being fail a test like this?
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>>100068973
He's a lolicon in denial
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Yeah I've been reading this for awhile and its super interesting, so interesting I'm always excited for new raws
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>>100069707
give him a break he's been out of elementary for a while now.
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>>100059628
Thank you for showing me this, /a/ you're so good to me.
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>>100067027
the author is retarded too: Ex 2.2 is actually correct
>>100068471
>0.4 * 0.9 = 3.6
no 25 years old could make that mistake
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>>100072425
>no 25 years old could make that mistake
The problem is that we don't see how he calculated things, since all we get is the wrong result.

0.4 * 0.9 = 4/10 * 9/10 = 36/100 = 0.36

It's not that far from 0.36 to 3.6. It's definitely a mistake someone could have made by not paying attention.

However, 38/100 is a pretty poor result in any case. Definitely nothing someone age 25 should have gotten, so essentially I agree when it comes to the overall result.

>Ex 2.2 is actually correct
I'm not sure what the instruction says. Maybe he was supposed to express the terms differently.
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>>100073066
the exercise only asked to write the values from the highest to the lowest.
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>>100073066
It looks like he was supposed to write the numbers in descending order. 2.1 is wrong, but 2.2 is correct. Looks like the mangaka done fucked up.
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>>100072425
wait..I think he wrote some bullshit in the last square instead of 7/8 (the square half covered by his thumb)
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I don't like the MC's favouritism towards the soon-to-be-actress girl.
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hey don't we have a typesetter here?
Maybe some anon could do it.
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Why the fuck didn't anyone no one scan this guy's recent h manga? All his works on sadpanda were ages ago.
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>batoto won't host chapters
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>>100073863
As I recall no one wants to host it.
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>>100073863
Damn, I just found out too.

>>100073924
Why not. Because lolis?
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>>100067027
I don't even remember how to do those fraction shit,holy shit
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>>100073863
>Not downloading chapters
You're just cancer.
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>>100073652
We all know who best girl is.
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>>100073924
Found one place http://www.starkana.com/manga/M/Mujaki_no_Rakuen/chapter/1
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>>100073977
Too much loli fanservice and manga host sites are pussies.
Look at Kodomo no Jikan.
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Thank you based mod for keeping CP off of /a/.
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>>100074156
See what I just said?
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wow what the fuck?
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we something awful now
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Someone make a new thread.
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OP here.

I just got banned from all boards for "pornography".

moot should really hire some competent mods. Mujaki no Rakuen, while borderline hentai is most definitely NOT pornography. And all the content was censored.

This is the second time this year I got banned for something like this. Seriously, what the fuck?
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If you buy the 4chan pass you wont get banned ever again for a year. Unless you post something really ban-deserving.
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>>100074156,6
I got banned from all boards since a few days ago for calling someone a newfag when the person in question was seriously saying blogshit involving literal faggots talking about their real sex lives was on-topic and /a/ was always /lgbt/ + /soc/ + /r9k/ all rolled up into one.

Like instead of banning all those off-topic faggot blogshit threads on /a/ the past few fays, I was the only one who got banned in the thread.

Seriously, what the fuck. I seen essentially /lgbt/ and /r9k/ generals on /a/ made by said real faggots in question where they actually talk about their boyfriends or how they fuck fags in real life that go past bump limit and never get deleted by the mods and janitors while on-topic manga threads like OP get deleted and OP wrongfully banned.

And these faggots when told to fuck off with their faggot blogshit, always respond with variations of "what's wrong, just keeping the thread fun" and continue on with their sex life story that should belong in /r9k/ or /lgbt/.

I don't think it's just me. For the past month or should I say the past few months, there's been an increasing amount of people actually saying /a/ was always this "gay" which is why faggot /r9k/ generals can be spammed on /a/ since those faggots actually believe their faggot life sex story generals are anime and manga released.

Not only that, but more and more people are posting tumblr material on /a/ as if they were on /co/ and not getting called out for it.

I fear /a/ is gonna soon become a tumblr faggot landwhale cesspool like /co/ if this keeps up
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>>100074156,8
And this is because I believe the current mod on /a/ is a tumblr faggot sympathizer moot recruited from outside 4chan which is why yaoishit nor faggot blog crap on /a/ never gets deleted or banned. I seen a fag dump furry ban for half the thread and not even get banned yet a loli thread with no porn or anything NSFW get deleted.

And I seen biased janitors never clean up off-topic fag crap on /a/ yet delete anything with a nipple shown even if it is from an anime or manga that is not even hentai.

Seriously, what the fuck is with /a/'s moderation these days?

Don't even get me started on these new faggots and yaoi hambeasts acting like cancer on /a/ and flat out lie how fags and their 3DPD sex blogs were always accepted on /a/.

Fuck it. Fuck everything.

I wish moot just pulled the plug on 4chan already.

I just can't bare to see tumblr kill /a/ like it did /co/.
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>>100074156,9
Have you tried not posting in shitty threads? Report button is a thing for a reason. You're just contributing to that blogshit by responding to it.
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>>100074156,10
The report button is useless if it takes you several tries just to find a captcha you can get pass through.



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