[a / b / c / d / e / f / g / gif / h / hr / k / m / o / p / r / s / t / u / v / vg / vr / w / wg] [i / ic] [r9k / s4s / vip / qa] [cm / hm / lgbt / y] [3 / aco / adv / an / asp / bant / biz / cgl / ck / co / diy / fa / fit / gd / hc / his / int / jp / lit / mlp / mu / n / news / out / po / pol / qst / sci / soc / sp / tg / toy / trv / tv / vp / wsg / wsr / x] [Settings] [Search] [Mobile] [Home]
Board
Settings Home
/3/ - 3DCG


Thread archived.
You cannot reply anymore.



File: output_C9O6Rt.gif (291 KB, 384x216)
291 KB
291 KB GIF
I think it looks nice.
>>
>>687561
lighting is really flat, gun has no reflections whatsoever, the smoke plume is way too thin and wispy. the casing is moving retardedly, it would swing out and away from the barrel, not towards it.
>>
>>687563
Ye i agree. But i still think it looks decent, happy with how it turned out :)
>>
>>687563
I will be making a second version tho
>>
File: 1550548991223.gif (2.97 MB, 592x333)
2.97 MB
2.97 MB GIF
>>687561
Looks kind of low effort desuu~
>>
>>687566
It is
>>
>>687566
>>687568
That, and im just not very good
>>
A thread died for this?
>>
>>687564
>i still think it looks decent
You don't get to decide that. Other people do.
Besides, there's the /wip/ thread for this, and a dedicated animation thread.
>>
>>687563
You are very negative, I think he did okay and can learn to do better through constructive criticism not insults.
>>
>>687656
he gave more useful advice than you did
>>
>>687656
Not a single one of those remarks from that anon was an insult.
Every single one of those was constructive. Let me break it down for you since you lack reading comprehension.

>Lighting is really flat
Change it up to make it more interesting, throw in an hdri for reflections

>No reflections
Time to get in there and start playing with roughness, again, hdri for something to reflect

>Thin and wispy smoke
Make the smoke beefier, and denser

>Retarded casing movement
lern 2 physics, he even said exactly how it should move



Delete Post: [File Only] Style:
[Disable Mobile View / Use Desktop Site]

[Enable Mobile View / Use Mobile Site]

All trademarks and copyrights on this page are owned by their respective parties. Images uploaded are the responsibility of the Poster. Comments are owned by the Poster.