I think it looks nice.
>>687561lighting is really flat, gun has no reflections whatsoever, the smoke plume is way too thin and wispy. the casing is moving retardedly, it would swing out and away from the barrel, not towards it.
>>687563Ye i agree. But i still think it looks decent, happy with how it turned out :)
>>687563I will be making a second version tho
>>687561Looks kind of low effort desuu~
>>687566>>687568That, and im just not very good
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>>687564>i still think it looks decentYou don't get to decide that. Other people do.Besides, there's the /wip/ thread for this, and a dedicated animation thread.
>>687563You are very negative, I think he did okay and can learn to do better through constructive criticism not insults.
>>687656he gave more useful advice than you did
>>687656Not a single one of those remarks from that anon was an insult.Every single one of those was constructive. Let me break it down for you since you lack reading comprehension.>Lighting is really flatChange it up to make it more interesting, throw in an hdri for reflections>No reflectionsTime to get in there and start playing with roughness, again, hdri for something to reflect>Thin and wispy smokeMake the smoke beefier, and denser>Retarded casing movementlern 2 physics, he even said exactly how it should move