helloI am an amateru that decided to try creating proper topologyplease give me some criticism
>>647356I am asking for real criticism to get better, not insults.Tell me what exactly sucks in it and if there's something i am doing right, please tell me.I want to learn, i don't want to be shat at.
>>647357It's not goodIt's only half done
>>647359Give me feedback on the half that's done
>>647360There's no nose
>>647361I'll make the nose later, i am more worried about the eyes and mouth for now
>>647362There's no jawline or defining features for the skull around the eye
>>647366Do you know anything about modelling at all?I'm asking for criticism for my Topology, not my stylistic and unfinished art.I weant to know if i am taking the righpt path and i am not i want to know what i have toi fix.You literally only talk about facial features...
I'm still learning it myself but from what I've gathered:Edge flow should be smooth. You shouldn't be having weird kinks like in the second flow from the top. Faces should be of similar scale. No vertical stretching like in that band in the middle. If your edge flow is smooth, this shouldn't be an issue. I find it's way easier to manage topology by simply retopologising everything once you're done, rather than trying to manage your edge flow and everything while still getting your shape.
>>647367>Do you know anything about modelling at all?No not really, this board is the first thing I see when I open clover, your post was at the top of page one.Enjoy the bumps.
>>647368Valuable info, thanks
>>647357>I am asking for real criticism to get better, not insults.This is /3/, there´s only insults here.You would be insulted even if you had top notch skills.Which you clearly don´t.
>>647370neat, didnt know the sticky had infographics too, that's helpful
>>647357If you unironically want people to work for you for free, either show pussy first or go back to redd it
>>647402That's why you post in the /wip/ general! We're always happy to help in there.
>>647402>not willing to work for free>but willing to work for pussywew lad
>>647367why would you fucking care about your topo if your geo is fucked anyways? his advice was honest good, go eat shit.
>>647392>read the stickyIt's not hard
>>647424hmmmmmm it's almost like I used some type of program that's capable of showing me posts. hmmmmmmm.....