pls rate.It's my first serious animation.
>>642409would low poly vulva have just 4 verts? like a diamond shape pussy with with 4 tries going inside with one vert in the middle with hand painted uterus? That could perfectly accommodate a square shafted penis ending with a square pyramid for the head.
>>642411>boolean the pussy>"your dick fits perfectly in my pussy!">"it's as if god made this hole for my dick!"
>>642457it's like puzzle pieces.
>>642398Why post your first? Why not wait and post your best?
Unnatural Hipmovement, weak pose + head snapShort cycles:Keep them simple, slow breathing, small weightshifts, no major actions or turns etc. If a cycle is short every repeated "big" action is swiftly noticed and the cycle is recognized as such.
I really like the model style but I would say this as well>>642527
Well the feedback on animation you got here >>642527so I just want to say that much low poly should use emissive shadeless materials
>>642468how the hell will he know what to improve if he doesnt receive any constructive criticism from people
the shadow is high quality for such a lowpoly character
>>642643At the stage he's at his eyes should be plenty enough
>>642398Methinks you should make the cranium larger. Enlarge it.
looks pretty slickyou should make longer animations
Not bad for a startIf its maya, try to find a thing called "hypergraph", its your best friend. Check your animation curves and try to get smoother movements, also try to make a smooth animation cycle, so the viewer cant see when it starts and when it stops. The feet are glued to the ground and the legs get longer and shorter, try to get some inverse kinematic thing going at the legs thereOverall it helps a lot if you act out a movement a couple of times while you animate it, youll find out some tiny details which make a huge differenceNow make another animation, ganbare!
>>642398I presume it is an idle animation, moves too much i think, try to moderate it, make it more gentle
It's shit. I don't even model or animate. You really fucked up the hip movement, looks like she's just sticking her ass out.
>>642398Make sure to avoid any unnatural patterns like the plague. Look at her hands and the gun, there's no rotation and they seem to move along a rail.Also, think about animating the center of mass first. If you want her to shift her weight from leg to leg, the COM should move appropriately - but in your case, it barely moves at all, let alone from side to side.
I can tell you watch too much hentai by how the hips cock back and it's really annoying to look at.
>>644340How would you know this?
>>644400It seems more like a dance rather than a idle standing animation, maybe it's just perspective, either way the hips have an irregular amount of movement compared to the rest of the body.
>>642398Learn about animation curves.
>>642398>>642398>>642398>>642398>>642398what her low poly>>642398 cunt look like
>>644868like your face
>>642398It's not bad. It looks alive for one unlike most CG.There's a nice book worth owning called 'Animator's Survival Kit'. It's the only book you really need in your life.
>>647610pretty much this