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Anonymous

03/03/17(Fri)23:28:34 No.553891

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Anonymous 03/03/17(Fri)23:28:34 No.553891 Archived

work all night on it ! Comment ?

Anonymous
03/03/17(Fri)23:54:23 No.553892

Anonymous 03/03/17(Fri)23:54:23 No.553892

>>553891
Do a better job next time

Also lighting seems very shiny

Anonymous
03/04/17(Sat)00:43:39 No.553898

Anonymous 03/04/17(Sat)00:43:39 No.553898

Thanks ! I'll make it nice

Anonymous
03/04/17(Sat)01:03:12 No.553901

Anonymous 03/04/17(Sat)01:03:12 No.553901

>>553891
Too much noise.

Anonymous
03/04/17(Sat)05:56:10 No.553912

Anonymous 03/04/17(Sat)05:56:10 No.553912

>>553891
Plant normal map needs a smart blur filter or high pass or something. water needs flat normals and more reflection. land needs less reflection. Left and top asteroids are too spikey, lower one is too perfectly round. spaceship/satellite is too illuminated. planet looks like it is surrounded by 3 stars. The shadowed area should be completely black. Seems unlikely that it would be backlit by a second star also.
Also what is casting the shadow on the satellite?

Anonymous
03/04/17(Sat)12:45:09 No.553943

Anonymous 03/04/17(Sat)12:45:09 No.553943

>>553891

The land masses look like they are floating on the surface. You need some kind of atmosphere on the planet.

Anonymous
03/04/17(Sat)12:57:15 No.553945

Anonymous 03/04/17(Sat)12:57:15 No.553945

it looks like total shit

Anonymous
03/04/17(Sat)15:20:48 No.553965

Anonymous 03/04/17(Sat)15:20:48 No.553965

>>553901

This, especially on the ocean. You're not going to see wave sparkle highlights from that distance.